“”A DREAM””:::SWASAN SS by Kakali part 12

Hii ev1,, here m with d 12th part..
Thnk u all for ur amazing response on previous parts.. thnk u to all silent readers also..sorry for grammatical mistakes n spelling errors.. :0 ๐Ÿ˜€

So Let’s go inside d DREAM,,,

Link of previous chappies :::
All Parts Here

Link of d teaser ::
Teaser

Link of my 1st OS ::

One Shot

Here we gooo,,

After 1 Day at college:::

Sanksar is waiting for Swara from more then 2 hours but our princess is no where to be seen..

He is continuously trying her phone,but it’s showing out of coverage…he tightens his fist in anger “Damn this girl!!what’s wrong with her,, can’t she pick my call,,
It’s been one day i haven’t seen her,, don’t know how her health is ?is she taking her meds at time or not!! Man,, pick up d phone Shona!!” (Damn angry)

He again dials her number,,& “the number u have dialed is not responding plz try again later”..

He gets frustrated n leaves for class…

In classroom:::

Sanskar-Lucky !! Where is Swara? Didn’t she come today? I mean she was absent yesterday also na? She is fine na? Asks in concern..

Before Lucky could answer Swayam interrupts ”

Swayam-Sanskar Swara is all rit yarr,, i myself talk to her yesterday,, she was sounding perfect….

Sanskar with shock expression- what!! U talk to her? But how? I mean m trying her number since yesterday but she is not picking my calls or sometime it shows out if coverage..(:) :Oo0

Swayam- Woo toh i don’t know,, but haa i talk with her… n she said she will come to college from tomorrow…

Sanskar-Ohh!! Thnkx for informing me..(with blank expression)…

Lucky sees him n smirks “Kyu Sanskar !! Do u have any important work with Swara?,, i mean why r u sooo desperate to meet her,,? Anything serious?(with a wide smirk)

Sanskar himself don’t know what to say,,, “Nothing Serious Lucky…it’s just i didn’t meet her after accident naa soo….”

Lucky-ohh that’s d reason…anyway i have some work in canteen(*peet puja)…catch u later… (to Swayam)Come buddy…

Swayam-yeah coming… byee Sanskar…
N both moves from there leaving a confuse n frustrated Sanskar…

In classroom:::::

Sanskar n his friends talking about random stuffs… all r busy with talks but Sanskar is busy in trying Swara’s number…

one of his friends Avi looks him restless n asks ” Sanskar u look tense yaaar,, what’s wrong?”

Sanskar comes to sence n says”Noo yar,, actually m trying Swara’s number but she is not picking my calls n now showing it busy..”(Frustrated)

Avi-Soo what,,!! she may b busy… or u can say busy with someone special…saying this he winks..

Sanskar becomes angry hearing someone d word “someone speciall” n asks in angerfull voice ” What do u mean by someone special?”

Avi-Arrey yaar Sanskar look,, Swara is beautiful,cute as well as smart girl… rit…

Sanskar nods yes…

Avi-Soo it’s obvious that she may has boyfriend also… who is really special for her… isn’t it?

Sanskar boils in anger n shouts holding Avi’s collar “Shut ur bl**dy mouth up,, don’t dare to utter a single word about her,, Swara is not like other girls.. understand…
Saying he left his collar…

One of his other friends Nick interrupts their conversation”Haa yaar Swara is not like that girl,, actually how can she has a boyfriend when she herself acts as ur girlfriend….

Sanskar is like”what the hell r saying ,, r u in sense or not?”

Nick- yaar m saying d truth only… didn’t u notice she always acts as ur girlfriend,, it’s like she has only rights on u… har waqt bas Sanskuuu Sanskuuu Sanskuuu…(says mockingly). N here u also acting as a possessive boyfriend…who doesn’t want to hear anything about his Juliet..

N for ur kind info the whole college thinks u both as couple….n dekh lena from tomorrow she will again start her Sanskuuu purann…

Waise tell me one thing “Do u love her?”

Sanskar is speechless,, having no answers for his friend’s baseless questions,, he just murmurs “She is just a friend of mine,, nothing else”…n left ….

After 4 days at college ::::

Swara n Swayam enter college together laughing n giggling… in these days both becomes good friends… n this thing irritate Sanskar a lot…but he himself don’t know whyยฟ

Sanskar(monologue)-I guess my friends were rit,, Swara is actually behaving like my girlfriend… m observing her from 3 days..she doesn’t like me to talk with any other girl,,any time only Sanskuu Sanskuu…pulling my cheeks in front of ev1…
This is not done yar… I also heard some students to say that we r couple.. but it’s wrong… I DON’T LOVE SWARA,, SHE IS JUST A FRIEND OF MINE…

Sanskar sees them coming together n burnes in jealousy… now he is like a volcano that can brust any moment when saw Swayam side hugging Swara…though he composes n again involves in talking with his friends…but he is disturbed..seems something is bothering him…

Meanwhile ,,,,

Simin-Guyzz,, today i didn’t take my breakfast n my tummy is doing gutur gutur(:)… soo can we go to canteen 1st…

Swayam-Yeah sure,, actually i also missed my BF in hurry…

Swara-U guyz carry on i’ll come with Sanskuu…

Lucky-But where is he…?

Swara-(pointing towards him)there he is…

Trio-Okkk,,but come fast..we have lactures also…

Swara-Haa haa!! I know..

Swara moves to Sanskar….

Swara-Sanskuu what r u doing??
waaa today u shaved.. looking soo cuteeee(asks in a very bubbly mood n pulls his cheek)

Avi to Sanskar-Now see her actions…if i was wrong then i’ll bear ur punch…huhhh!!!

Sanskar-Nothing Shona,,just talking with friends…(Rubbing his cheeks n with a fake smile)

Swara-Ohhh!! Come na,, let’s go to canteen, ev1 is waiting for us…

Sanskar-I have no mood,, u guyz carry on…

Swara-Arrey Sanskuuu come na,,,

she is continuously trying to convince him..but our Sanskar is least interested… only his soo called friends words are echoing in his ear…

Swara-Sanskuu i said na come,,,

Sanskar- Swara,, what i said!! I don’t wanna come naa,, that means i don’t want to come….(in little bit anger)

But our princess is also stubborn so “Huh!! I m ordering to come..n u have to come with me(says in a dramatic manner n n drag him but stops hearing his words)…

Avi-Look,,i told u…

Sanskar is damn angey now, he harshly jerks her hand n says “BEHAVE SWARA BEHAVE,, U R NOT MY GIRLFRIEND WHO CAN ORDER ME,, U R JUST MY FRIEND,, JUUST A FRIENDDDD,,, NOTHING ELSE,, SOO STAY IN UR LIMITS”….

Swara has no idea what is happening around her,, she is just listening his words that”She is his just a friend nothing else”..

But plastering a tight smile she says”I know Sanskuu,, m just ur friend,, but at least friends has,, i mean i have that right to say na!! That’s why?”(Sanskar cuts her)

Sanskar- No u don’t,, u don’t have any right on me.. understood…saying this he left d place …

Swara’s eyes r filled with tears but wipes it n goes to canteen…(*guyz i dun wanna drag this scene so ending it here)

3rd Person POV::::

It’s been 5 days Swara is trying to talk with Sanskar,, but Sanskar is just avoiding her… wherever she goes to him,,he gives a lame excuse n moves from her…
Swara is not getting what’s wrong him… Did she do any mistake for that he is punishing her..?
. she always says herself that her DREAM BOY is angry with her n she has to convince him to talk anyhow…!!!!

Her daily routine is to come college & try to talk with him n d end of day she gets only failure….

POV ends::::

One fine day,,,

Swara is going to her class… but she overhears something which brokes her heart into 999 pieces…shatter her to d core…

Sanskar punchs a boy who is saying he(Sanskar) loves Swara…. n he shouts “R u going nuts ??How many times i have said that i don’t love Swara,, I DON’T LOVE Swara,,, she is none to me,, got it,, SHE IS NONE TO ME… “… i only like Nia… ”

N this was enough for breaking our Princess..it’s feel like stabbing her with blades,,
.but u know all she is best self composer so wipes her tears n goes to room where Sanskar n d boy is talking….

“Nikhil(The boy),,”
Sanskar is shocked to she her.. his heart says he is saying wrong n mind says he is correct…

“Swara listen i want to say something”(Swara cuts him)

“Sanskar i can understand ur point of view…u don’t need to explain me “…

n Nikhil(to Nikhil) Sanskar doesn’t love me.. u r totally wrong about us… we are just friends..opps sorry we WERE just friends…n m none to him now…(gives him an ointment to apply on punch area)

Turns around (to Sanskar)-Arrey Sanskar,, u were tensed regarding this matter that people r thinking wrong about our friendship….
But u could have atleast shared with me naaa,,…huhh !!!

See na just bcz to avoiding me u missed ur lectures many time… don’t do this okk it will effect ur study…
Haaa !! From now take a chill pill !! I’ll try to maintain distance … just for our old friendship…(says all this in a chocking voice n with a emotionless face)..

Aur haa !!! U n Nia will look perfect..m happy for u both….. saying she left d room…

Here Sanskar is standing with blank expression… having no idea what to do n what he had done…

(*u know guyzz Sanskar is confuse about his feeling… he himself dun know why is he behaving like this… moreover he is angry with SwaSwa’s friendship,,or we can say jealous… n u all know he is short tampered …in anger he looses his thinking stability. . . . .n as a result he hurts Swara . . . . . :P. N moreover his friends were also adding fuel on his sooooo…. ;0)

Precap-Freshers party….

Phewwww done with d 12th part….
How was it? Not good rit?
Waa!!i knew it… coz i don’t know what i have written….
…just bear me for more 15 days n this SS for 4 more episodes…haaa !!!

Then no disturbance from my side till ummmm !! End of d March…huhuhuu!!!.

Thnk u sooo much for reading…

Have a Beautiful day ahead. <3<3… :-*

80 comments

  1. Simin

    |Registered Member

    Awww sanskar thats not fair
    How can u do this to shona ha
    U will realise her importance when she will go away from u

  2. Ashnoor

    Amazing di
    Sanskar always shout’s on her . And today’s incident is just baseless . Coz he is jealous๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ he shouted on our
    ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š”babydoll”๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š.

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Awww !!! My Ashnoor is angry on Sanskar.. hawww !!! Fun worry je is soon going to realize his miastake… n u know our BABYDOLL is too strong to handle his Dream boy’s anger…huhuhu…
      Thnk u soooo much dear.. ;-*

  3. Rabia

    |Registered Member

    Awesomee epii kakalii and thiss dumboo sanky have to regret huhhh dumboo uselesss ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Diii,,, Haa he is soon gonna regret…dun worry… but i love this useless fellow…huahh haa haaa !!! ;-*

  4. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Superrrr chappy dear…loved it..Sankyyyy, you monkey,donkey, stupid๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก.You hurted my doll*beating you with hammer…keep it up dear…Awww, I gonna miss you badly๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ…BTW, you know Bengali language??
    Take care
    Keep smiling๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooooo much my Umaaaa…. !!!! omgggg !!! beating with hammer…*bang ur head in drum…
      me2 will misss u dear…
      Noo dear i dun know Bengali.. but haa olop olop janu(lil lil know).. huhuhuyu !!!!
      u2 take care dear…
      God bless u… ;-*

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much my dear Sis.. m glad u loved it…… haa me2 feeling bad for Swara..Next is on d way SNY… u2 take care.. ;-*

  5. chanu

    Whaaaaaaat???!!!!
    Kaku…..
    Firstly let me tell u it my reaction 4 ur last epi rply.

    omg!!!! U ddnt available 4m nov 21 and that too 5 months…!!??
    R u serious!???

    Nw I think chandu is better than u.. chandu u r gd.. dis kaku is bad!!!
    Rly!!??
    Nw im sooo soo soo soo soooo sad!!
    All my fav writers r nt in tu…
    sm f them stop writing , sm f them finished their ff and sm f them taking leaves and nw u also leaving me alone.
    Awww poor me..
    wt will I do without u guys…
    I ll die bz f boredom
    hwwwwwhwww

    Bt its ok dr..
    exams r mkre important.. u hv 2 wrk heard dr…
    Do best in ur exams.. and im sure u gonna gt great marks in it..

    • chanu

      Huhhh!!!! Sad epi…
      ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™
      Bt I lv it..
      u write it nicely dr..

      Sanku drl.. I also dnt like dis swaswa frndship..
      and ur frnds.. urrrgg.. ill kill them..
      huuhhuh u hurt ur swara again….
      dis snky is same in sr also…
      he is hurting his swara and confused.
      Bt wt 2 do I already fall in lv with him.. sooo no option. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜›
      waiting 4 nxt epj drl..

      huh?? Nlyy 4 epis…
      oh nooo..plz…
      Ok ok I knw its ss.. bt still… hawww.. u knw na im rly greedy prsn.. soo I dnt like dat.. plz continue yaar..
      and I also hv 2 say smthng 2 u..
      u said dat ull cm in march!!?? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
      when dat tym.. my exams also will be sooo near. I cdnt msg u then. Bt after my exams ill surely read it.. pinky promise. ๐Ÿ™‚

      Keep writing
      be happy always
      lv ya
      โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Awwww !!! Thnk u soooo much My Chanuuuuu !!!
        waise may i know what r u doing in study?
        Hawww !!! I also can’t do anything to Sanskar as my half heart beat s with him…haaa !!! Saachiii !!

        No worry dear.. i can understand ur problem… when u will get time u read okk.. or ask me d links…
        Chanuuuuu i having a very less time soo have end it in 4-5 chappies… otherwise i would love to write more… but i have no any other way…
        once again thnk u sooooo very much dear…lovee u … always be happy… ;0:):) :-*

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Waaa !!!! All d best dear…. m sure u’ll surely achieve ur dream…
        haaa m studying in 12 … haaa !!! i wanna achieve everything which God kept only for me being a business women…
        sure dear after exam l’ll come to watpad for sure …

        Huhuhu Thnk u sooo much for ur love Chanuuuu !!! i’ll also miss u…*gimme hifi…

        good idea we’ll change oyr home… hahahah !!!

        forgot n u ยฟยฟยฟยฟ my God…. *bang my head with coconut… huhhhh !!!
        if i loose my memory naa,, than also it will never ever happen… okkkk !!! so dun worry…
        take care okkkk !!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Don’t be sad Chanuuu !! Haaa !!!
      There r lot’s of people in TU,, n lot’s of beautiful writers dear… but m blessed that u think me as ur fav writer…
      Hawww !!! Chanduuuu is better than me… waaaa !!! I agree with it…
      u won’t b bore dear… coz lot’s of interesting n amezing stories r here…huahh haa haaa !!!!
      Yoooo dear i have to do my best in exams by hook or by crook…
      huhuhuhu !!!! otherwise mom will throw me out of house… ;0:0:0

      • chanu

        Sry 4 late cmnt !!
        Im studying biology! ๐Ÿ™‚ im doing my a/l next year.. and I want 2 be a doc.. ๐Ÿ™‚
        Wt is ur ambition ?? And wt r u studying???
        Hee hee yaaa yaaa sanky is our heart beat.. u dnt want 2 say it cz I inw it!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
        Awwwww thank u cutei… thank u 4 understanding me sweetu…. :-* :-*
        After ur exams cm 2 tu.. if u cn cm 2 wattpad also… then I cn msg u.. ๐Ÿ™‚
        thank you ill ask ur link..

        yaaa I cn understand dr.. exams r more important…so no worries!!!
        Bt still im sad bz u gonna end dis!! ๐Ÿ™ ๐Ÿ™

        U r right.I knw dat their r mny ppl in tu.. bt no1 is like kaku na!! ๐Ÿ™ im gonna miss u.. ๐Ÿ™ :'( cz kaku is 1 piece. ๐Ÿ˜‰ lols…
        I said chandu is gd bz chandu nly gt 1 mnth f leave bt u ๐Ÿ˜ฎ 5 mnths..?? Dats y! ๐Ÿ˜‰

        Yaaa….. u r right… u hv 2 pass ur exam anyhw!! Bt bt dnt try 2 copy in exam.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜›
        hee hee poor you!! U cn cm 2 my home.. bt I also dnt knw after my exams result.. wt will hpn 2 me… ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ then ill cm 2 ur house.. ๐Ÿ˜‰

        Hwy dis is a warning!!!! Dnt try 2 4gt me!!! After August ill cm back 2 tu.. then dnt tell me u ddnt remember me..
        If u tell that na!!! Im gonna kill u!! Gt dat!!?? ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰

        Lv ya
        โ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅโ™ฅ

  6. Shreeyu

    |Registered Member

    Kakali Di m angry with u… So no comments from my sides…. What u said han that hear u for few more days Han? Jao aap se baat Nhi krni

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Cutieeee don’t be angry with me dear !!!! n talk to me ,,, talk to meee *Twisting ur nose…
      okkkiii !!! T
      Yoooo dear m here for only 14 Days more… then will meet u all in April or at d end of March… isn’t it a great news for u all?? huhuhuhu !!!!
      Thnk u soooo much dear… :0 :0 :0 :0…
      Rock with ur study as well as FF…

      • Shreeyu

        |Registered Member

        Di to b true m not angry but really is it a gr8 news ….? It’s the worst news …. Wat will I do without ur cute comments…? Well coming to the chapter it was awesome …. But I want to c swara’s pain more …. Mujhko emotional Episode mein make aate hain actually

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Well then my Cutieee’s wish granted….. u’ll witness her more pain… i swear u’ll cry..*ready with hanky..huhuhuhu !!!

  7. Deeksha

    |Registered Member

    End of March…..?????? Matlab?????? Are you planning to leave us???????? If you think like that then don’t dare to do it…..!!!!!!!!! I will kill you…..!!!!!!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Omggggg Deekshuuu !!! open warning !!!! Waaaa u r a lady Gaga… haaaa !!!
      Yoooo dear m leaving this site in 14 days… n will b back in April or March … huhuhu !!!
      Thnk u soooo much dear for ur cute Dhamkiii.. ;0 ;-*

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Huhuhuhu !!! Deekshuuu !!! actually my exams r gonna start some days… actually from 12 November…

        n again my High Secondary Exams will start in February n end it in March or April… then i’ll be back.. haaa !!!!

        waaaa but i love y naaaa… !!! *hug..

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooo much Mariyaaa !!!
      Yooo u r rit Sanskar is an idiot… but i love this Idiot… huhuhuhuuuu !!!!
      actually he is lil confuse about his feelings sooo behaving like that…but soon everything will b perfect… ;-*

  8. Radhika..

    |Registered Member

    Awesome part di sanky hurting swara in a way that he too don’t know that how much he is hurting her and why he is hurting her? In this all he is hurting himself also but what to do the influence “influence”the word only sounds so powerful na so its impact also have to be powerful. The same is happening with him. The influence of his friend make him to do so. People try how much to not come in others word but atlast when everyone say that people also start thinking so like:if someone say I am not beautiful I say no I am than 2-3 more people say I am not beautiful I started believing the fact inspire the truth ……… Like that sanskar is influenced……. Who have control on this they can achieve anything but it is difficult to control…………

    And someone special ignoring us hurt very much I experience that in my 6th class my best friend ignore me and I ask for sorry also for several days at least 1 week and ask the reason why she is hurt but she not say anything…….. More than her ignorance it is hitting me that what I do that she got hurt the reason behind this I curse myself for that all and the 1week I don’t forgot till now………
    . and when after weekend we meet she start talking and I ask the reason and she say its just a prank I was very happy that time that the thing is just a prank nothing more than that …………. Because the thing of hurting someone hurt us……….nownow when we both talk about our school time she didn’t remember the incidents thatthat happen that time even this too but when I tell her in detail she remembered and many more like this………..
    I never forgot anything that happen from small to bigger don’t know why my friend say hear from one and put it out. From other but the things I hear just get fit in my heart and mind as I took decision with the mixture of both of them but mostly from heart as heart tell us the most…
    From where where I went ……….ok now stopping it.
    Hope sanskar soon got to know his mistake and everything got sorted and his friends stop adding fuel in fire……
    Love the part and the teaser part also started many things happen good as with this sanskar will got to know that he love swara and he will able to understand swara and their bond will hot more stronger.
    Loved the part love u di๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u soooooo much My Radhikaaaa…. u know i always say u r small but mature enough to understand everything n every emotion very truly…
      yes dear sometime it happens…. we get influenced by people…. soo starts to believe their words…. but in this process we don’t get that we r hurting our self as well as our love ones…
      Same is happening with Sanskar… he is not able to think properly… haaaa but don’t worry soon everything will be on rit path… just wait for 3-4 episodes….

      Hawww !!! ur friend was sooo naughty.. huhhh i just wanna beat her with pimpom ball… haaaa how dare she upset my lil sis?? huhhh !!!
      m cursing her to have a bright future like u… okiiii !!!
      Love u toooo dear…
      once again Thnk u soooo very much… ;-* :0:0 :* ๐Ÿ˜›

  9. Hemanshi

    |Registered Member

    Awesome kakuuuu๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    Will miss u a lot yarrrrr๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    First Rabia and now you…….I will be in touch with rabia as I have her WhatsApp no. But what about you……huhhh……..
    Come back soon…..๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
    I wanted to celebrate my bday with u but u won’t be there๐Ÿ˜ฅ๐Ÿ˜ซ

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooooo much My Hemanshi Diiii,,,,,
      Yooooo i’ll miss u tooooo …
      haaa dii actually m not connected with any social media naa.. sooo can’t contact anyone…*poor me..
      Dun worry naaa i’ll try my best to be with in ur b’day… okkk!!!!
      huhuhu i’ll b back soon just 5 5 months..haaa !!!

  10. Navi

    |Registered Member

    Aeesome lovely chapie. Sanskar babe now u suffer.. my love swara os already broken nw u hv stabbed her wounds again… im crying….
    kakali ur too gonna vanish :'( :O :O
    Its k studies are important… all d bst for board examz….
    may i knw to which group u belong to like bio-comp or bio-maths??? Commerce??

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Uuuuu Maaaaa !!! My Naviiii is crying…. Godddd save this world from land sliding….
      Nooo Naviii,,,*pleading u…
      don’t do tjis with me… huahh haa haa …
      Thnk u soooo much Naviii,,,
      haaa my stream is Arts… okk !!!!
      Hawww m not a temporary stain who will vanish due to washing… huhuhuyu will b back soon…*sprit me..

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        since ur telling i stopped my tears to save u all my friends…
        oh kkk.. ur arts al the bst…
        yup i wil b waiting for u…..
        ur stain like tea which will never vanish….
        post nxt part soon…

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Waaah waah waaah my Naviii…
        huhhh u’ll be waiting for me to bite haaa !!! *wild rat…

        once again thnks a lottt for ur good wishes… huahh haa haaa tea stain…*hug

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        Yup i wil bite u always… so make it a habit of getting bites from me… miss u kakali
        btwn wts ur nane true name??

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Waaaaa Naviii,,, Kakali is my real name only… Kakali Das….
      but why?
      isn’t Navii ur real name?*with narrow eyed…

      willl miss u 2…. haaa !!! i have become use of it… *applying baby cream.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ™‚ :0

      • Navi

        |Registered Member

        Narrowed eyes.. huuhhhh im so scared… hahaha yup apply babe cream but its for small babe not for u.. rofl.. thn my name is naveena shrt form navi ๐Ÿ˜€

  11. Arshaanya

    |Registered Member

    Loved it kakali…
    N i agree wid ur each n evry word swara loves him from start n sanskar is still confused wid his feelings towards swara… n hez jls wid swaswa z frnshp n his frnz n evrybdyz wrds r hurting him… so hez not at fault according to me…
    Bt feeling sad for swara also bt dun worry swara kakali is going to give ur dream boy to u soon๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Haaaaa !!! Arshaaa !!! u r soooo correct…. u hit d point which i wanted to show through d last paragraph…
      i actually wrote it for not to hate Sanskar coz he is unware about his own feeling…. n behaving in this way…
      but m glad u note it…
      Thnk u soooo much for understanding….huhuhuhuh !!!!

  12. Maryam

    Hey Sweetie….how are you Dude…
    Fantastic episode dear…loved it..Feeling bad for Swara…Yar words are ending to describe it…Love you…
    So how’s your Health now….Are you okay now..take care dear..

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Heyyy !!! My Ladu Gabbar… M totally fine dear… just lil unwell…
      Awwww !!! Thnk u soooo much !!! Ur comment means a lot to me….
      love u tooooo…
      how is ur study going on BDW?
      Take care of my best friend okkk !!!!
      Once again thnk u… ;-* ;0

      • Maryam

        I am all good Dude what about you….my studies are also going pretty well…but facing lil problem bcz of lack of time…N what about yours…you too take care

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Now m totally fine… before 2 days i was not good… actually lil unwell… but after taking medicines i became fine…
        n about Study… it’s also going good..
        but don’t know what will b my results… coz as a clz topper ,,, my parents n clz authority has lot’s of hope from me…

        sooo lil tense also thinking about them.. but also trying my best…
        hope my hard works n sleepless nights gives them pleasure… hmmm !!!

  13. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Wohooooooo!!!!zabardast episode….awww!!!sanky u hurted ur swara yaaar!!!! ๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘ ahh!!!plz stop being sooo short tempered….bt i thnk he”ll sooon realise her importance๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ waitng for love to blosssom btweeen swasan๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ update ws mindblowng sweety…keeep rockng n stay blesssed meri pyaari patar patar๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Awwwww My sweety Fairyyyy !!! u gave me new name waaa Pyaari Patar Patar …. haaa !!! Thnk u for this name….

      N thanksss a lottt for ur cutee sa comment… huhuhuu !!! Sanskar will hurt Swara more n more n more… infect he will realise her importance when she will go away from his life forever … i guess soooo….*confuse me…

      I have loose hope that love will ever blossm between them.. huuahh hha haaa !!!
      Thnk u soooooo much dear…
      God bless u…. ;-*
      Update ur FF soon before i leave
      … :0:0:0:0

      • Fairy

        |Registered Member

        Hehehe i love to call u dat๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„ !!! Aww!! More pain !!!hmmm!!! L๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘๐Ÿ˜‘ …ahhhhhh!!!love wl surely blosssom yaaar,,,,i hve full faith in u๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ waitng for nxt part!!!!
        Dr i”ll surely try to update my ff sooon,,,๐Ÿ˜Š n wen r u going??? N for how mny days???? It is bcoz u r hvng ur xamzzz r8!!???..!!!! Tc dr๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜„

      • Kakali

        |Author

        Waaaaa !!! Thnk u Fairy for ur faith…
        i have faith in ur faith…

        yoooo it’s only bcz of my Exams…
        i m going on 21st November n will come in at d end of March or April
        …. huhuhuhuhu that’s why !!!!
        Gd Mrng !!! ;*

  14. chandu

    Kaaakaali….!!!What yaar???!! Swara hurt yaar…!! In serial also sanskar is hurting her…and here in your ff too…!!! Make him enlighten..that swara is for him..and not nia..!! Episode is soo painful…!!

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Chanduuuu !!!! don’t be angry dear !!!! haaa !!! everything will b all rit… just gimme some time…
      Swara is hurt but in future she will b broken…
      i dun know how will i face ur cute angry face… huhuhuhu !!!
      one more thing i wanna clear that SWASAN r made for each other… they can never separate… specially i can’t do that…
      huahh haa haaa Thnk u soooo much dear… *m ready with helmet for further episodes… ;-*

  15. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    I just felt like someone punched my heart 5-6 times while readingbut u know….u gave ek aur jhatka when u said u won’t be there until march…u can’t be serious….first Rabia and now u…..i don’t wanna speak

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Vyshuuuuu !!!! Thnk u soooo much dear… waaa !!! 5-6 punch… ufff !!! i need to work hard… haaa !!!
      hawww !! in my life 1st time saying something being serious n u r saying i can’t be serious… huhhh !!!
      Anyway talk to me .. huhuhuhu i have few more days..
      :0:-*

      • Vyshu10

        |Registered Member

        don’t go….ok no need of writing but atleast u can still come on TU for commenting and from march u can resume writing

    • Kakali

      |Author

      I wishhh Vyshuuu !!! i wishh i could say yes…
      but u know my exams r ready to glup me… haaa !!!
      ,n without full concentration i’ll fail… huhuhu !! Soo have to gooo… feeling bad for myself…
      Will miss u … ;0

  16. Mahjabeen

    |Registered Member

    Ooops kaku m soo sryy fr cmmtng so late….finally da teaser part started loved it dear…but huhh how dare sanskar to hurt my swara so badly..huhh i hate him{jkngly๐Ÿ˜‰) but rlly flt bad fr swara c loves him frm begining abt her dream boy but always getting hurt by him only..nd dis dumbo sanskuu nt undrstndng his feeling…huhhh nd his friends CNT thy mind there own buisness y poking there nose in between my swasan..will surelyy kill dem..da epi WS amaizng kaku…loved it soo mch๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Thnk u sooooo much Mahuuuu !!! don’t b sorry dear… u can never late… okkkk !!! hahahha me2 hate him in ur way… but don’t worry everything will b all rit.. he is just lil confuse about his feelings but soon gonna realise… huhuhuuu….
      i will help u tooo kill them..*99 punch from my side..
      yooo goo girl… *all r lying on ICU bed…

  17. Mahjabeen

    |Registered Member

    Nd one more thing kaku i won’t b in TU fr few days coz my exams gng to start so uld nt b able to rd nd cmmnt..i will b vry mch busy in my selections..well if i got time will surely cmmnt nd rd nd if nt gv me links wen i WL b bck…so till den bye
    Love u๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    keep smiling always๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    • Kakali

      |Author

      Haaa !!! Same pinch Maahuu !!! my exams r also gonna start … sooo m here for few more days only…
      n yeah best of luck for ur exams…. m sure u gonna rock it… okkk !!!
      n when will u come i will bot be here to give u links as i will return in April only.. sooo u can go n read it from my account’s post…
      okkkk !!!
      Love u tooo dear..
      God bless u… ;-*

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  19. Mirna

    |Registered Member

    Awwwwwwwwww sanky dnt worry u will surely run behind herrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. ๐Ÿ™‚
    Dnt u dare to hurt my swara no one to u huhhhhhhhh

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