“”A DREAM”” (Few shotes by Kakali) part 8

Hello ev1,, here m with d next part of my story..hope u all like it.thnk u soo much for ur overwhelming response on previous parts..thnk too silent readers alsoo..
.again sorry for grammatical mistakes n spelling errors..
Before starting i wanna wish u all..”HAPPY SUBH DIWALI” in advance..

Soo let’s go inside d dream,,

Recap-SWASAN sweet talk n Swa-Lak mad friendship masti..

Here we go::

Lucky is soo busy dreaming in his own deeamland after talikg to Bee,he is blushing soo hard n waking hiding his face in his palm.. he is not able to see anyone n as a result a beautiful girl dashed with him,,she was about to fall but our Lucky catches her at d nick of time n saves from falling..

She tightly closes her eyes n Lucky is mesmerized to see her preety face..

Words r automatically coming from his throat,,
“Teri aankhon ki namkeen mastiyan,,teri hasi ki beparwah gustakhiyan,, teri zulfon ki lehrati angdriya,,,,, nehi bhoolunga mai,, Jab tak hai jaan,,Jab tak hai jaan.
[[☆your eyes,,mischievous n saline,,your laughter, an airy insolence,,your hair,, it waves undone….i will not forget as long as i live,,,,,As long as i live☆]] .
(he is still holding d girl by her waist forgoting about d surrounding)..

(D girl is not getting anything..Actually she is a new comer n don’t know Hindi much. So she thinks dat he is welcoming her in his own style soo she also sings something like him)”

The girl also starts to say ..

“Twinkle twinkle little star,,
How i wonder what u r,,
Up above d world so high,,
Like a diamond in d sky,,
N i feel myself a lucky girl to get u as my BHAI..

Hearing d word “BHAI” his eyes popes out from socket…

N “Ahhhhhhh !!” Suddenly he feels pain n current through his body specially in his bum..
Lucky realises it was just a Dream,, n d pain is bcz of Swara..she give him a tight kick on bum..for d kick he comes out of a horrible Dream ..

“Arrey mar gaya kya? Yar phir canteen mai bhi sapne dekh raha hai”Swara asks pulling his hairs..(Arrey!! R u died?or getting dreams in canteen also)

“Haa !! Haa !! Dream!! Dream!! Bhaii!! Noooo,,,bhai..”he is continuously blabbering,,soo Swara stamp her foot on his leg..huhh!!

“Ahhhh!!Koalaa!! Not again,,”finally he comes out of dream fully n glare Swara angrily..

“Don’t stare me like this Hippo,,”

“Bhai did u get hurt¿” asks Simin cutely..

“Urgghhh!!! Bhai bhai bhai,, i just hate this word..this word is haunting me in my dream even?why all this is happening with me?? says weeping his tears..

“Huahahah haahaa!!” All 4 laughs loudly..

“BDW what about Diwali planing?i mean anything special?”asks Swara taking a big bite of burger..

Lucky-Naah!!mom dad is out of town..so this year no Diwali at home..

Swara-hmmm !! Same kickk..(pinch)
“Waise what about Sanskuu¿”

Before Sanskar can answer Nia interruptes”Sanky doesn’t like to celebrate Diwali,,so we both r going to pub for refreshment(*wahh re wahh today’s generation,,Diwali at pub?huhhh!! It’s better to eat bhang n allu paratha at home)

“Haaah!! Is it true Sanskuu¿”

“Haa!!Shona actually i don’t like all this attashbazi dhamaka n all”

“Huhh!!but this time u have to celebrate with us!!n that’s my Hukum(order)”

“Areey no yar Shona,, i don’t have mood”

“Ohhoo!! U just try once na,, m sure u’ll feel better..u know Sanskar life is so unpredictable,,we don’t know what happens next,,soo we should enjoy it to d fullest..”Swara says all this in a very calm voice..

Simin notices something weird in her words..n Swara also feels her gaze..soo again dimag ki baatii jalli..

“Sanskuuu plzz,, lets celebrate this year Diwali together na..paaleezzz!! Atleast for our new friendship..(with puppy dog eyes)

How is this possible to anyone to ignore our princess’s this beautiful mini coconut eyes?soo d reply is”Okkk !!! Just for our new friendship!!”

“Yeeiii !!!(Swara jumps in happiness n hugs him).. waawoo!! Thnk u sooo much(pulls his cheekS,,*her fav work),,

Lucky-haa!! Diwali celebration bhi hoo jayegii,,party bhi karenge,, par KAHA??

“ohhh yeahh Hippo!! In excitement i totally forget about this?”

“Guyzz!! Why fear when Simin is here,,”

“Matlab?”Lucky asks rising one eyebrow..

“I mean i live here in guest house with my aunt..so we all can party there..what’s say?”

“Waaa!!! Simmu!! Love u,, uhhh!! U solved our main problem”..(Swara kissed her cheeks)

“Awww!!love u 2″(rubbing her cheeks)

“Sooo we have only 1 day for preparation..
Let’s move”says Swara excitedly(*over excitement ki dukan)

“What preparation¿we don’t need to do anything,,just enjoy n party hard..coz aunt will do everything..toh take a chillpill ..”

Swara-Reeooaallyy!!waaah!! Soo atleast we can go for shopping n parlour naa..

Lucky-Haa haa!!! Challo parlour chalte hai..(yeah!yeah!let’s go to parlour)

Sanskar-Omgg!!Lucky what will u do in parlour?

Lucky-ohh!! I need manicure pedicure every month.. u dunno na..

SanNiaMin’s jaw touch ground…

Swara is not at al shock as she is already aware of his addat..

Common guyzzz get up fast we need to move..
n all 4 go to shopping,parlour n do lots of masti.

.where SWASAN is becoming more close…but one thing we need to mark n that is Nia is behaving soo odd today.. she is not liking Swara to be with Sanskar all d time..actually she is jealous..

Nia-(monologue-Why m feeling so bad seeing Swara with Sanskar,, why their friendship is affecting me so much?
One sec “Do i love Sanky”,,
“Ohh yeah, i love him,,i love my Sanky(*my Sanky!!! My lett)..

She is soo happy with her own realisation…but not at all happy with SWASAN closeness though plaster a smile n try as much as can be with Sanskar..

Nia-Sanky let’s goo..it’s too late..

Sanskar-o haa!! Just a minute
(To Swara) “Shona meet u tomorrow at 4:30 in Simin’s house”.

Swara-Hmmm!! But why soo early living? Matlab it’s just 6:45pm.(checking her wrist watch)…but realises what she said n{Pralay shuru(destruction start)}
“Omg omggg!!! It’s 6:45 what will a do now?”(started to bite her nails in tension)

Sanskar-What happen Shona why r u soo tense?

Swara-Sanskuuu!!(waahhaaa!!!started to cry n jumping)(*God knows her n her antics)

Sanskar has become so tensed now..he continuously asking her what happen but no response but at last he takes her in his embrace(*this is his sudden action ,i dunno anything about it).

“ssshhh!! Shona don’t cry!!what happen..tell me..”(soo worried)(*feel d warm of his hug)

SwaNia is shock with his sudden action..

Nia is burning(*we all can smell it,even perfume smell is not gonna work..)

N Swara is out of d world…actually she is about to sleep into coma..
“Shona r u okk now?”(Sanskar breaks d hug)

“Now tell me what happen?”

Swara weeping her tears “San..s..kuu !! Saa..nsskuu !! I missed todays spec..ial epis.ode. of Pok.emon(cries loudly),,(*my pikachu will miss me)

Sanskar is looking at her without blinking..”u was crying for this reason?”

“Haaa!! Kyuuu”(says innocently)

Simin is also amazed at her behaviour..n Nia turned into ashhhh…(*phuuuu!!)

Swara-Sanskuu !! Lets leave na!! I still have 1n half hour..plzzz!!! Otherwise i’ll not get sleep today..

Sanskar is still can’t digest d fact that she was crying for that silly reason..

“Sanskuu chaloo naa”(shaking him)

“Haa haa choloo meri maa..”(Swara chuckles)

She is about to get up,,but slips n n n (*like always not) Sanskar catches her,but he also couldn’t hold her tightly n as a result both fall down on floor..

Sanskar is niche n Swara is uppar(*waaa!!Hindi English nice mixture)

Swara is laughing n Sanskar is lovingly staring her..(monologue-God!!what a girl she is!! Just a few minutes ago she was crying for a animation show,, n now haah!!laughing like Doraemon..she is really too cute..)

Nia is become so tempting now(*ufff!! M feeling suffocation)..she holds Swara’s hand so tightly n help her to get up..

Then Sanskar also gets up. finally they bid byee n left for home..

Next day afternoon (*Today is Diwali)

Swara is getting ready,,she is sooo excited..(*guyzz i dunno what she is wearing,,just messaged me that she is wearing a baby pink n white colour combination Lehenga with matching bangles,jhumkas n a small bindi,,..
light mineral make up..light orange colour lip gloss,, n yeah also applied Kajal in her big almond eyes for more glow..that’s it..rest all u can imagine)

SimNia is also wearing Lehenga,,both r looking beautiful..Simin is in yellow colour lehenga n Nia is in blue colour lehenga..(*actually i dunno anything about their get up,,as i don’t have their number)

SanLak is wearing sherwani.(*both r looking smocking hot,,infect we can make omelet in that heat) Sanskar is wearing grey colour Sherwani,, n Laksh is wearing light green colour sheewani..

SanNia n Lakmin is waiting for Swara..

Meantime she reaches there n after seeing Swara,,Sanskar forget to take breath..he is just just just urghhh i can’t explain d feeling..(forgive me ev1,,this kinda feeling only Sanskar can define)

She is taking baby steps maintaining d high hill with lehenga..she is quite uncomfortable as usually she is not use of this kinda outfit..she is continuously blabbering something “huhh!!Maasi maa ko bhi yehi pehna na tha mujhe,,,didn’t she get any other dress,,?”

She slowly moves towards all n hugs ev1..

Swara-waa Hippo today u r looking hot..

“Soo toh i m” says lucky n wink..

Simin my God,,Apsara lag rahi hai tuu(u r looking like angel)

“N u r looking like a princess,,hmmm no no noo u r looking like a queen(queen of our heart)”says Simin giving her a hug..

Nia u r looking also hot(monologue-hot meri juttii,,chipkuu rattle snake kahi ki,,)as she is holding Sanskar’s shoulder..

“Thnk u Swara u r also looking preety”says Nia with a fake smile..

N Sanskuuu u r looking sooo cuteee(pulling his cheeks),,

Sanskar without blinking eyes “beautiful” just a word he says.. n this is enough for making our princess blush n cheery red..

Simin-toh andar challey…(shall we go inside?)

All 4 – challo(yoo let’s go),,

Simin-waise everything is ready,,we just need to light d diyas..

Swara-all rit,,we all do it together..waise Where u make Rangoli?

Simin-oppppsss!! I forget about that..

Swara-challo,koy nahii,, i will make it..it’s one of my fav work..

Sanskar-hmmm!! N i’ll help u..bollo how can i help u?(soo curious)

Swara-Reoallyy!! U’ll help me ..so sweet of u Sanskuuuu !!!

This time Sanskar is waiting for her to pull his cheeks…but Nia pours water on it by “Haaa!! My Sankyy is soo cutee (pulls his cheeks)..

Swara is like “God ji today u save her,, or save her…coz now she is getting into my nerves…if she does something more then this naa i’ll surely burn her hair or i”ll bite her…”

Sanskar-Shona u said something..

Swara-Nohhooo..did u hear something..

Sanskar-Nhhooo..(*same pinch)

Swara-Toh lets go n make d Rangoli!!

Both go to d main door n settle themselves..

Sanskar-waise Shona what will u make?

Swara-i’ll make a GAMUSA n a SORAI(khorai) in between “OM”..where i’ll write Happy Dipawali…what’s say??

Sanskar-awesome … so let’s start..


Screen freezes on their exciting face..

Precap- Shonaa!!! Get upp!! What happen!! Shooonnnaaaa!!!..tear roll down from Sanskar’s eyes..

I need suggestion…
1.Guyzz shall i make Nia negative..or this kinda behaviour is ok okk…

2.Guyz m thinking about A new entry(male).. whom u would love to see Parth Samthan(Manik) or Shantanu Maheswsri(Swayam)..plzz do let me know..m soo confuse…

Thnk u guyzz for reading.. i wrote it in tuition centre as today sir was absent… sooo
No proof reading..
If i did any mistake then plzz forgive me..hope i didn’t bore u all..
Again sorry for my SS’s cover pic..m unable to remove it or set a new one..

Keep smiling always..
Stay bless…

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  1. Rabia

    awesome kakali plus too funnyy… and don’t make her negativee this behavior is okay and about new entry ummmmmmmm i don’t know much about them 😉

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soooo much Rabia diiii !!!!
      waaa !!! u found it funny…huuahh it’s sooo funny…
      all rit no negativity..i’ll just only burn her in jealousy..hmmm !!!
      Take care ;-*

  2. Hemanshi

    Aww my Teddy bear I loved it……
    ….amazing sissy………….no words……..well I think don’t make her negative as all ff writers make these kind of people negative nd we shud try something different and shantanu is better

    1. Hemanshi

      I seriously want I ti make bua a good character and not that sanju lover ad it’s common and u r kakali…..u shud do something different

      1. Hemanshi

        It by mistake typed bua but I wanted to type nia*

      2. Kakali

        Sureee Diii !!! she will b only positive only.. but jealousy toh banta hai.. coz i love to see people jealous…
        n thnk u sooo much for opening my beautiful mini coconut eyes… otherwise i should have lost my track… huhuhuhu… ;-*

    2. Kakali

      Waaa !!! Thnk u sooo much Diiii !!! ur words mean a lot tooo mee..
      well ur wish is my command soo no negativity…hmmm !!!
      take care.. huhhh !!! seee whom m saying to take care.. maati mari gayi hai meri… *mad me.. ;-*

  3. Shreeyu

    Awesome as usual kakali Di …. U really r8 so cutely (yaya I know how can some 1 write cutely but u do) …. But I have a question or shud I say confusion that what is GAMUSA n SORAI ?.. And abt the suggestion to b true I don’t know abt the first one and in second one I would like Shantanu if he is positive …. Waise again m asking Swara ko koi disease hai kya ? I don’t know but m feeling so

    1. Kakali

      Uhhhh !!! A cuteee n heart warming comment from my cuteee !!!
      Thnk u sooo much dear ..ur curee words mean a lot to mee…
      Hmmm !! i have cleared ur confusion..read my comment below of urss.. u’ll find. sorry for making u confuse..
      n yeah thanks for ur suggestion..
      well about disease ummm!! lemme think..huhuhuhu !!! i’ll answer u in 3-4 chappies..
      Take care..

  4. Mirna

    wowwww kaks asusual u rocked still ur planning to burn her hair 😛 shantanu would be my preference dear 🙂

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Mirnaa darlzz… yooo !!! m still thinking to burn her hair… huhhh !!!!
      Aww thnkkk for sharing ur preference…

  5. Awwww kakali dr…..!!!
    Thanks 4 updating im waiting 4 it 4m sooo long bz u said dat u uplode it,,..
    I cdnt gt sleep also..
    bt nw I cn sleep peacefully.
    bt dis tu naaa..

    Lv 2sy epi as always.
    Heee heee
    laksh is awesome.. awww he is soo cute while blushing. And in dat dream?? Who is dat grl?? Is it mica??!!
    bz f dat bhai wrd sweet dream bcm a horror 1 .
    lols.. and laksh go 2 parlour?? 😮 my jaw also hit da ground.

    Awww my swaraa.. lv her soo much..
    bt bt u knw wt im sceard abt her wrds???
    dnt even thnk abt hurting my swasan!! Is she sick??? 😮 ohh nooooo…
    Rly she cry bz she missed pokemn?? Dats my bros fav 1.. soo im watching it..
    And she knw 2 make rangoli?? Soo sweet!

    Nia??? Urrrgg… wt??? She lv my sanky?? Hw cn he lv my sanky?? She ddnt hv dat right.
    Plz dnt turn her as negative.
    Cz I dnt want any negativity here. 🙂 🙂

    Simin dr lv u..

    1. U write it in ur clz?? 😮
      gd job..
      bt ill surly tell ur teacher abt dat..
      I knw he ws nt in clz bt u hv 2 study in dat tym…
      😉 😉
      & im going 2 tell ur mom also..
      if dnt want 2 tell abt dat 2 ur mom..
      I want chocooooo….
      all my fav once.. dnt wry all da chocos r my fav..

      Keep writing dr
      happy always
      lv ya

      1. Kakali

        Waaaaa !!!! Chanuuu all of a sudden what happen to u?? haaaah !!!! blackmailing rit…
        omgggg !!! teacher se sidha mommm… Goddd… why r u trying to kill me…
        Huhhh !!!! u need Choco… Goshh!!! u r more nautanki then my Swara… all rit all rit.. take all my chocos..huuahh!!!
        now happy??!!!

        hahahha!!!Thnk u soo much dear…again…
        u 2 be happy always..
        Take care.. ;-*

    2. Kakali

      Awwwww !!! Chanuu dear !!! Thnk u soo much for ur lovely words…
      can i ask u a question?? hmmm !!! kya kha kar paida kya tha tumhe tumhari maa ne??
      coz u r suchhh a sweety sweet heart… i guess u have some magic that u use through ur words n make my day in every chappy… bataw bataw raaj kya hai??

      All rit dear,, as u wish no negativity here my lordd…
      huaah i dunno about d girl,, he didn’t tell me…hahaha
      Yooo Chanu m also scared about her words…dunno what she meant but definitely there is something which u will get to know soon.. just a little patient dear…

      ohhh Haaaa !!! pokemon is my fav cartoon .. i love pikachu d most…
      Huhhh!!! Nia .. u don’t think about her.. let her go to Dustin…
      me2 love Simin.. hahahah…
      love u dear.. have a great day ahead…

      1. Heee heee kaku drl..
        😉 😉
        Im nt like dis b4. Im sooo shy and reserved type. (Oh rly chanu even ur mom also dnt knw abt dat). bt bt after reading dis ff na ill bcm jst like swara.. 😉 😉
        wt 2 do dr!!?? I gt 2 knw dat u hv lots f chocos… sooo I hv 2 plan smthng 2 gt my lv..
        And see im gt success. 😉 ýipeeeeeeeee…
        thank you 4 chòcos..

        U knw wt i ws waiting 4 ur rply.. 🙂 🙂

      2. Heee hee u r soooo cute kau drl..

        And abt my mom!!! Ummmm I think she eat chocos when I im in her tummy. 😉 🙂
        Hee heee…
        oh I made u happy. ???? Awwwww after reading dat I bcm soooooo hpy drl… :-* :-*
        Thank you
        and hey tell me smthng new cz I knw dat im sweet!! 😉 😉 😛 lols..

        heee heee and abt my magic!!!!!
        Ummm let me think..
        hee heee I dunno….
        and also if I knw it..I wdnt tell u… 😛
        cz if I tell u wt is da magic in it!!???
        Lols… 😉 😉 😛 😀

        oyee drama queen. ?. Dnt overact… tell me u dnt wnt 2 revel it soon… 😉 😉 lols…

        k have a nice day drl..
        byeee byeee
        lv you..
        HAPPY DIWALI!!!!!
        all ur dreams cm true dr..
        bt bt dnt ask 4m god dat u want all da chocos in da wrld and my sanku drl!!
        Is dat clear!!
        😉 😉 🙂 😀

      3. Kakali

        Chanuuu !!! u n reserve girl… god i almosr slept into coma after reading this..
        Yoooo !!! Chanu i totally agree that ur mom ate chocos when u was in her womb… that’s why u r a sweety sweet heart which words can bring a smile on anyone’s face…
        Thnk u sooo much dear…
        n sorry for making u wait for my reply.. u know i was not getting a single minute…
        mrng tuition,, then 8:30-3:30 clz.. then agin tuition.. huhhh !!! that’s why dear…
        n whenever i replied i was in common room or may be in canteen … huhuhuhu !!!

        haa haaa !!! i won’t ask all chocos n Sanskar bcz they r already mine…
        i have kept him in my heart for forever…

        hmmm!! i have posted a teaser .. doo read that… i know u’ll kill me for that… hahahhah…
        keep smiling always dear…
        God bless u…

      4. Heee heee kaku drl…
        u knw wt ur evry rply make me soo hpy..
        nt nly hpy I ws laughing and laughing nly..hee hee my whole fmly asked y r u laughing!!?? Then I said nothing much my frnd send me a joke..hee hee lols.. 😉 😉
        Bt after dat I go 2 one by one and tell them abt u.. 😉
        Thn evy1s expression is jst like” 😮 looks like she is nt nly 1 who is crazy in dis wrldcz nw she hs kakali” 😉 😉

        heee heeee wt 2 dooo???!!
        U rly dnt knw I act like vry reserved grl in 4nt f strangers and sm ppl… cz im nt closed 2 them.. bt when thy gt frndly with me na… sooo ill bcm a headache 4 them..
        hee heee just like wt hpn 2 u nw.. 😉 😉 poor u.. bt im nt gonna leave u.. 😉 😉 😛

        And abt my mom eating chocos…. urrrrggggg…… nw im angry!!???!!
        U knw wt!!?? My evry frnds mom dad or sm other in their hm dnt like 2 eat chocolates.
        Bt poor me my whole family is chocolate lovers. I gt a present 4m my uncle. A bigg box f chocos.. I show it 2 them. I think nly 1 min go to them 2 eat my whole chocos… hw mean they r… urrrggg… ànd u knw da best thing!!?? I gt 2 knw it sm tyms b4 even my bro also gt da same size f chocos.. bt he ddnt share it… hwwwww Im gonna kill him nw…
        and u dnt think my bro is a small kid.. he is my big bro and he is 20…. urrrrggggg….. dnt he wnt 2 act like a elder ha…. 🙁

        and abt clz.. yaaa I knw hw its feel..
        im also dis like b4.. bt u knw I gt 2 month f leave 4 my cousin sisos mrg.. sooo dis days noo clz… im sooo hpy..

        noo worries abt late rply dr..

        yaaa yaa I read it… urrrggg
        yaaa im angry with u… hwwwwww..
        bt I gt a heart attack by reading it. Soo kdnt kill u.. cz im weak… 😛

        Hey hey dnt say like dat….Hu.
        Dnt u knw sharing is a bst thing…
        soo 4m nw nwrds tel sanku and whole chocos r our..
        gt dat.. 😉 😉

        Be hpy always dr..lv ya!!!l

      5. Omg!!!
        I nly nw gt 2 see my msg…
        its rly big na!!??
        Ooops sry dr….

        u knw na I always blabbering.
        I rly dnt knw I write dis much..
        nw u study.

        hpy diwali..

    3. Simin

      Thank u

      1. Simin

        Thank u chanu

      2. Hi simin dr…..!!
        Did u read my cmnt?? 😮
        dnt do dat again.. cz u ll also gt2 knw dat im crazy.
        Hee hee
        dnt think abt my wrds soo much ok!!!
        lv ya..

      3. Simin

        Dont worry chanu we all are crazy
        I dont mind
        I just read my name so thought to reply

      4. Hee hee yaaa I knw dat…
        I lv simin na…
        sooo 4m 2dy nwrds we r friends!!!
        😉 😉 🙂 🙂 😀
        happy diwali dr..!!

  6. Simin

    Waah kaku what a chappy
    Swara just burn nia’s hair she deserves it
    Plz dont make her negative this much is good
    About new entry swayam will be nice he is sooooo cute but not more than our sanskar

    1. Simin

      Awwwww pikachu my baby

      1. Kakali

        Huhhh !!! badi ayyi,, my pikachu ko uski baby kehne wali… don’t say it again otherwise i’ll burn ur hair.. huaah..

    2. Kakali

      Woohoo !!! Thnk u my Simmuuu…
      yooo!! u r rit.. Nia deserves this..hmmm!!!
      All rit ur wish is my command soo no negativity…
      Yoo yooo !!! Swayam is cutee..but obviously not more then my Sanskar…
      infect no one is cute then our Sanskar..huhuhu..
      have a beautiful day ahead dear…. ;-*

  7. Mica

    uugggghhhh my dramebazz,, she always has reason for hugging Sanskar! pokemon ? yesterday ? huh! oh gooosshhhh.. even i missed My crazy Ex-Girlfriend season 2 episode 1 yesterday *i can’t hug anyone.
    poor my lucky, this Simin word’ bhai’ haunted him to the core.
    Kakuuu… don’t let Nia negative, we are should spread positive vibes, rite ?
    please send me the pic of new entry, let me select, *who knows may i can keep it for myself :3

    1. Kakali

      Micaaaaa !!! yooo i actually missed that part for my tests… huhhh !!!
      Ohhhoo !!! i hug my Doraemon side pillow… u know pillow is d best way to celebrate happiness n sadness…
      in happiness just hug that n give a kiss..
      in sadness just take it in ur embrace n it will swipe away all ur tears.. hmmm !!!
      yeahhh !!no negativity.. thnk for opening my mini coconut eyes…

      ohhh haaa !!! that’s why i was fearing to make a new entry…*horrible dream come true.. huhhh !!

      Thnk u soo much dear…

  8. Kakali

    M extremely Sorry ev1… in hurry i forgot to mention about GAMOSA N XORAI(khorai)..so let me tell u here..

    XORAI is a traditional symbol of Assam..it’s an offering tray with a stand at d bottom..these r traditionally made of bell matel..

    The GAMOSA is also a traditional symbolic wear of Assamese people.. it is generally a white rectangular piece of cloth with primary red border on three sides nd red woven motifs on d fourth…
    n we people here love to use them together…


    have a look this pic .. then u all can guess…
    sorry for inconvenience…
    have a good day to all..

    1. Kakali

      Good Good Kakali … waaah !!! u forgot that u r d author… *blush…

  9. SNY

    Epi was fantastic of swasan moment……..
    Nxt one soos sis…..

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much my dear Siss…
      n yeahhh next us on d wayyy… ;-*

  10. Amazing
    What is GAMUSA n SORAI ????
    Swara is shooooo cutttieepie.

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soooo much Ashnoor… yooo Swara is a cutiiiee piee… one only piece made by God.. huhuhu…
      n sorry dear for making u confuse… i have written what is Gamosa n Xorai above ur comment… plzz doo read it dear..Thnk u ;-*

  11. Mahavir

    diiiiii !!!!!!wait wait i need to search some words u know what di now i m also going like u because i have my exams frm 7 nov still i didnt start to read the portion but reading ur stry…..offffff ok coming to the epi it was awesome di and dont make nia negative varna i ll kill her and about new entry make it as shanthu i loveeeee him so much he is such a cute guy and lucky he is too funny and my swara she is really beautiful in pink lehanga wowwwwww love u di…..

    1. Kakali

      Awwww!!! Maha thnk u sooooo very much Maha for ur wonderful comment..
      yoooo!! as u wish..i will not make Nia negative.. i dun want my sis in jail for murdering a girlll… hahahahah…
      waaaa !!! i too love Shantanuuu but not more then my Sanskar…
      Love u tooo dear… ;-*
      n again best of luck for ur exams.. give ur best.. 😉

  12. Deeksha

    Loved it dear… Continue soon…!!!!

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soooo much Deekshuuu !!!! n yooo gonna continue soon…;-*

  13. awsm one

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u soooo much Heena… really happy to see a new reader of my story..

  14. Arey meri Miss. Murderer Kasi ho…forgot me…v. Bad( just kidding)….so how are you N how was your day..
    After the episode it was Awesome N I want parth as the new entry…
    N Atif aslam ka song kahan hain…plz add them in your story…he N his songs are always my lucky charm maybe this time they become yours….
    Yar have you heard about the terrorist Attack in Quetta.::I live in Quetta…N the attack was on police Training centre…all of Pakistan is in Pain…I am feeling v. Bad about them..

    1. Kakali

      Ohhhh Lady Gabbar feeling soo good after hearing my nice name from ur mouth, thnkxx for coming back yar ….
      huhhh !!! don’t ask that question ever? otherwise i’ll not hesitate to kill u..u know who i m…
      about my day it was not at all good..but hope today everything goes well..how about u??
      hmmm!! Maryam is it Attif Aslam’s new song.. actually i haven’t hear it till now.. Neye gaane toh choroo i didn’t even see d face of tv since 2 weeks.. soo i have noo any idea…
      plzz tell me dear from which film this song is..!!!

      N yeahhh !!! i have herad that shaking newss… it’s beyond d brutality yaar… lot people r spot dead n many r badly injured…i just hate all this…
      u take care dear…
      sorry for late reply haaa!!!
      Again thnk u for ur beautiful comment..
      have a sweet day dear…
      God bless u…

  15. Scooby

    Poor meee typing second time :'( :O
    1.kakali the drama queen…
    2.did u block me frm reading this chapie?? Frm strday nite i ws trying to open and alas read it.
    3.nia not negative bt jealousy.. hw cn she pull sans cheek?? Huhu burn ur hair..
    4. Swara hifi i will too bite evry1 ie close.
    5. Ahhhh drama company owner crying bcz she missed pokeman bt i hate pokeman.
    6. Sans is slowly falling for our swara and his reactions awww….
    7. Bhai pity luckky hehehehgegw
    8. Poor me i thought of adding twinkle twinkle lil star now wt will i do kakali :'( :'(
    9. Paryh nd shantanu all tym livies u cn add any one
    10. La..lala..la..la..lalala..la..bah bah bahhh bahbahhh… luke miniins style..
    awesome chapie…..

    1. Kakali

      Waaaa !!!
      1.me n drama queen … huhhh !!! * paralysed..
      2.Nohhoo!! i didn’t do that.. it’s out of coverage…
      3.Ur wish is my command.no negativity… haaa!! i’ll surely burn her hair…pinky promise..
      4.Same pinch…awwww !!!
      5.Huhhh !!! if u would have been here na!! i shall surely give u thunder storm n electric shock by my Pikachuu..
      6.Haaa !! he is falling from cliff…or hill.. 😉
      7.Not pitty Nive,, he is shy Lucky with hole in fate..huhuu !!!
      8.Waahh!! Add Rain Rain go away…hahahha !!! 🙂
      9.Ohhokkk! my governor…
      10.Tutututu tatatatta dhen dhen dhen…
      Thnk u sooo much Dear…
      11. Sorry for late reply..
      Happy Diwali once again.. ;-*

  16. Arshaanya

    Loved it…
    Dun make nia negative n u can choise any1 of ur choice coz m only intrstd in sanskar ?

    1. Kakali

      Waaaa !!! Arshaaa same pinch dear… i also have only interest on Sanskar only… but someone was demanding for new entry… soooo…
      N as u wishh no negativity…
      Thnk u sooo much .. ;-*

  17. Vyshu10

    aww….cute. swara ko dekhkar laddu phoot rahe the sanky ke mann mein. Precap…did swara’s clothes catch fire? Abt choices…i m fine wid anything

    1. Kakali

      Yoooo Vyshuuu !!! Swara ko dekh ke laadu phut rake hai … aftetall she shared Dairy milk shotes with Sanskar naaa… remember¿¿.. soo usi ka assar haiii…
      Hmmm!!! u r almost rit but not completely…
      Thnk u soooo much dear.

  18. Don’t make nia negative..this is okay…n I dont think much about any other entry,but since u r asking I would say parth…

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Taniii … n as u wishh no negativity… n thnkk about ur suggestion… ;-*

  19. Radhika..

    di di di…………. we u did before writting it. its so good and the cute chat loved it di. nia jealously will surely make swasan more close. laksh dreams also about bhai oh bechara laksh and his blusing and all even girls don’t do so he is a single piece made by god. limited stock ?. and ur bracket writtings i just loved them. i remember my di while reading. the rangoli di did u make rangoli?? on diwali day?? i generally do that on diwali. and i don’t get the word koalaa what itt mean?? and the episode is super vala cute and swara craziness for pokemon doo u see cartoons di??

    about the sugesstion
    1. no nia should be like this only no negativity.
    2. i think shantanu he is cute.

    else on u what u wanna do.
    loved the part love u di. ????

    1. Kakali

      Awwww !!! My Radhikaaaaa…. !!!
      i ate Jaebis before writing…hahaha..
      Haaa Lucky is single piece made by God.. he is impossible…
      Waaa!! u have ur own diii,,, soo sweet … m soo happy dat i could make remember ur Dii.. it means a lot to me…
      Yoo i make Rangoli on Diwali..it’s my Fav work…oooww Same pinch…

      Haaa !! Koala is a kind of monky looks soo cute…huhuhuhu…

      Omggg Radhika without cartoon m incomplete… i love to watch themm… Doraemon, pokemon,bheem, tom n jerry, power rangers, ben10,ninja hattori, All d Disney Princess’s cartoons,, Barbie’s episodes… i love them alll….huhuhuhu*mad me..
      Thnkxxx for ur suggestion dear.. yeahh no negativity my lordd…
      Love u tooooo…
      Happy Diwali once again..
      Thnk u soooo muchhhh… ;-*

  20. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Super se upar wala chappy… Loved it…Diwali at pub,hmmm, you are right,it’s our generation but tu puchegi nehi ki yeh generation kinse inspire huyi hein…no problem,I will tell you(after all, friends toh iss koi kehte hein jo harr sawal ki answer de??)So, that person is…..
    .YOU(from your ff.. Our kakuuuu??)
    About suggestion
    1.No need??..
    2.Parth… He is H3*dreaming?
    Keep it up dear.. Waiting for nxt…
    Take care
    Keep smiling?

    1. Kakali

      U Umm Ummmm Ummaaaa !!!! Waahoow thnk u sooo much dear…
      Haaaaa !!! They r inspired from me… ommmgggg!!! seee m sooo inspiarable… learn something from mee..huhhh !!!
      M blessed to have a friend like u…!!!
      All rit no negativity..promise…
      Yeahhh !!! he is sooo hottt…haaa!!!
      U 2 take care dear,,, keep smiling…
      have a Happy n safe Diwali…. ;-*

  21. Khushiii

    Superbbbb loved it. And can I also get swara’s number pls??

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Khushiii !!!
      Yooo!! i’ll send u her number through private msg..but u don’t give it to anyone..okk !!!
      have a lovely day dear.. ;-*

  22. Mahjabeen

    Hahaha ny dramaqueen always want a chnace to hug sansku..i ws rlly amzed how c ws crying fr pokemon show¿¿?? how cute c is.. Nd bechara sansku falling fr her yeahhh.. Nd bechara lucky dng menicure nd pedicure i ws totally shock?? Nd mk nia like dis only no negativity nd i want manik fr new male lead..Amazing part kaku darls..it ws sooo lovelyyy
    Love u??
    Stay blessed

    1. Kakali

      Waaaaa !!!! Mahuuu !!! Thnk u sooo much dear for ur sweet comment…
      Ohh haaa !!! Swara is one n only cute piece u know.. actually i also missed a special episode for my tests u know…
      hugging n pulling his cheeks is her fav work…
      okkk dear as u wish no negativity…..
      Love u tooo.. u2 stay blessed…n have a happy n safe Diwali..

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