Dream scenes of Kriyam 2 part 18

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Hi it’s Fidato….with another dream scenes..
Thank you so much…for the lovely comments…. I’m really so happy that some of the silent readers also started to comment.. thank you once again to all who comments and to all the silent readers too.. but now I’m little scared too…The expectations are too high…may be if I couldn’t meet up with your expectations please do forgive me…. Please support me… let’s start now..

Dream scenes of Kriyam 2 part 18

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Sayyam looking at Krishna with tearful eyes.. through the glass… Yuvraj patted on his shoulders…make him turn…and hugged him tight…. Sayyam thinks…No..I’m the reason behind her condition getting worse….mein yeh pyar ki layak nahi hai papa…aap ki..maa ki..Kisi ki bhi nahi… he weeps like a baby….hugging Yuvraj.. then he breaks apart and wipes his tears..

Doctor came out after a while… Sayyam looked through the glass… Krishna is lying calm and quiet..taking her normal breaths.. Everyone came to doctor..with lots if questions..
Doctor : I don’t understand what’s went wrong.. yeh patient ki condition ithni bigad kaise huyi…Jab hosh mein aaya tab wo bilkul teek tha… yeh achanak bp shoot up kaise ho gaya..
Sayyam feels a trembling…and about to say..What happened..? But Suhani….interrupts..
Suhani : wo mein ne.. gusse mein kuch bol diya tha..
Doctor : apko common sense hai bhi ya nahi… you know what…If you late for another 5mins to reach here..We couldn’t save her..

Everyone shocked to hear that from doctor..
Doctor : Ok…I want to ask you something… did she having fast…Or something..??
Suhani : nahi… aisa kuch nahi tha.. but why doctor…?
Doctor : see.. While going through her results..I can say…She was starving for last two days..I mean she was not in her proper diet for the last two days…
Sayyam : what..??
Doctor : you were saying she knew swimming right… i think she someway slipped into pool..and due to weakness she couldn’t help herself and drawn.. it’s just an assumption.. reasons may be vary..

Sayyam felt like someone stabbing him again and again.. after hearing from doctor.. flashes of yesterday incident pop up in his mind…Meri..wachah se wo pool mein gir gayi thi..Or mein ne use wahan chodkar chala gaya.. he hardly stops his tears from falling down.. he looked at Yuvani…She is also staring him with a disgust look..

Doctor : anyway..I gave her injection …She will be fine by morning… Please make sure she won’t take tension or stress…
Yuvani : (give Sayyam a stern glare) I will make sure she won’t take any tension…
Sayyam gulps a mouthful of guilt…
Suhani : maa chaliye..bohut raat hi gayi..aap log resort mein jaake aaram kijiye..Hum or Yuvraj hai yahaan…pe
Yuvani comes to them..
Yuvani : mumma..Aap log bhi chaliye unke saath… mein hum uski saath..
Suhani :(smiles) Pakka…

Yuvani : haan pakka…
Suhani : tho teek hai…Hum chalthe hai.. tum or Sayyam yahi ruko…
Yuvani glares…at Sayyam..
Yuvani : uska koi zaroorat nahi hai… yahaan..
Suhani : yeh kya baat huyi… Yuvani..?
Sayyam pleads with his eyes to Yuvani…
Yuvani : I mean…aapko muhjpar bharosa nahi hai..
Suhani : nahi Yuvani…Aisa nahi…Hai.. par fir bhi… Sayyam yahaan rukega..isme koi behse nahi chahiye..

Yuvani : hmm…OK..
She said hesitantly.. Sayyam sighs a little.. as they move out.. Yuvani turns to Sayyam..
Yuvani : tum jaao yahaan se tumhara..Koi zaroorat nahi hai yahaan pe..
Sayyam moves towards Yuvani… He don’t understand how to convince Yuvani… Yuvani seems to be careless…
Sayyam : please Yuvani…I beg you.. Please ek bar milne do.. Krishna..Ko..
Yuvani : use milkar kya karogi tum..?

Sayyam : Yuvani…I’m…I’m.. Sorry…..really sorry….i just want see..
Yuvani : sorry…You feeling Sorry…for her… wow… do din se wo tumhe kitne sorry bola..tumne suna…Ek bar bhi nahi Na… varna wo yeh halath mein nahi hoga…
Sayyam felt her every words are piercing him…In guilt…
Sayyam : please Yuvani…Ek bar.. hosh aane tak mujhe yahaan rukne do…

Nurses come out…They said only one bystander is allowed…
Sayyam runs to the room…He saw Krishna is lying on bed… Oxygen mask on her face..surrounded by pipes and equipments… tears from fall down through his cheeks… Yuvani hold him by wrist..And dragged him out..
Yuvani : just get out…

Sayyam and Yuvani shocked to see Suhani and Yuvraj at the door…keenly observing both… Sayyam and Yuvani share a glare…then looks away…
Suhani : what’s all this huh…?
Yuvani : aap log yahaan…
Suhani : haan..Mera phone bhool gayi thi.. yeh sub kya hai…
Sayyam stood there silent…

Suhani : do din se dekh rahi Hum main..kuch tho chal raha hai tum theenom ke beech…
Yuvani : kuch nahi.. Mumma… We’re just..
Suhani : teek hai..kehna nahi hai..Mat kaho… tum theenom bade ho gaya hai.. apneliye decision le sakthe hai..
Yuvani : nothing Mumma…aisa kuch nahi hai…
Yuvraj : Hum tum sabki maa baap hai… I knew..something going..Wrong between you three.. Whatever it may…Sort this out right now…Clear… let’s go Suhani…

They went back to resort.. Sayyam was outside…Looking at Krishna.. repeatedly.. he just want to tell her…How much guilt he is feeling right now…And now he can understood she was also in the same situation like he is…. Sayyam looks at Yuvani who is slipping into a nap…in the chair… he peep into the room… slowly locked the door…Went near to Krishna…

Krishna sleeping under the effect of sedatives…given to her… he sit near her on the bed…Hold her arms…weeps silently.. Krishna…. I’m sorry Krishna…i didn’t know that..Tum ithne sub kuch kar raha tha mereliye…Mein ne tumhe pyar ki ek boond bhi nahi diya…phir bhi.. please hosh mein aao Krishna… Please… I promise you.. today onwards…I won’t hurt you.. I won’t scold you… I will give all the happiness in your life.. I won’t let anything to you… I will be your shield every obstacles or problems had to cross me before to reach you….. I will be with you.. always….
Yuvani turns in sleep.. smiling… Sayyam tries to hide..But seeing her asleep..he sighs… Yuvani thinks… this dosage is working perfectly for you bro… It’s really needed to blurt out whatever you kept it in your mind by yourself…

Suddenly a nurse came into the room…
Nurse : yeh…Kya… Mein ne pehle keh diya tha..Ek bystander allowed…Hai..
Sayyam : (clears his throat) I’m sorry…Mein jaa raha tha…
Yuvani is also stood up… Sayyam about to go..but stops…and turns..to see Krishna holding his hand… he helplessly looks at Yuvani.. Yuvani rolls her eyes..and blows…out some air…
Yuvani : you stay..(while going out)
Nurse looking at both confusing..Then started to check Krishna… pulse and all…
Sayyam : everything alright…
Nurse : haan…Teek hai.. apka biwi hai..

Sayyam smiles..and nods..
Nurse : bohut himmat wali hai..Ya phir apka pyar ne inko ithne himmat de diya..Hoga..
Sayyam frowns quizzically…
Sayyam : but why did you say that..
Nurse : wo actually..Do mahine pehle..aisi hi situation mein ek patient thi yahaan.. but didn’t survive… sighs..
Sayyam is dumbstruck to hear that… he looked at Krishna…She moves her head..a little.. he moves towards her.. caressed her face..

It’s morning.. Sayyam felt a grip on his hand..wake up to see Krishna is awakening.
Sayyam goes out..To call Yuvani…

Precap : Krishna came back to BM…In Kriyam room..
Sayyam : yeh baathein..Hum baad mein kar sakthe hai na..
Krishna : aaj mujhe Mat ruko Sayyam..

Hi.. guys…Really sorry..For late update… please do comment..and do support me… please forgive my mistakes… please give suggestions and critics in the comment section…Feel free to comment… love you all…

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33 Comments
  1. Oh my god it’s amazing yaar u r such a fabulous writer I m just waiting for next epi now I think Krishna is going to confess her feelings . Any plz don’t say sorry if we get such an amazing episodes then later updates didn’t bother to us at least not me.

    1. Fidato

      Thank you dear…For the appreciation and support… Let’s see..Is she going to confess…?

  2. Ahhh fidato❤❤this episode was love?????plz update asap?

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Zani….

  3. Agddiya

    awww….this ..was so heart touching…you described saiyyams pain and helplessness…very welll….pls pls..update soon….keep writing…

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Diya… For the appreciation… Glad you like it…And started to comment…
      By the way what’s agd before your name.. Sorry if don’t wana tell it’s OK…

      1. Agddiya

        its my mom ganga -g dinesh-d father and sister ananya

      2. Fidato

        Oh…Wow… That’s really cute…. Diya…????

  4. Nice episode. Next part update soon plz

    1. Fidato

      Thank you sree…Will try…Max…

  5. Awesome

    1. Fidato

      Thanks sinni…

  6. Mithila Farzana

    Amazing episode dear….nothing to say.u r always good….

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Mithila….Glad you like it…

  7. Dinu

    Wow wht a mind blowing epi.u described sayyam’s feelings perfectly. We can feel his pain. Loved dis epi 2 d core. Hope he realize his love 4 Krishna soon. Plz post d nxt epi soon dr.plz don’t make us wait so long. I’m curious about d precap.wht is Krishna saying about. Plz post soon
    Byee tc

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Dinu…For this fabulous comment… I will try max to upload soon.. hmm..Keep reading to know what Krishna going to say…

  8. wow….awesome epi…loved it…was waiting for ur update…n ya u nailed it…the emotions…n pain u showed evry thg so nicely n dat to with ease..

    1. Fidato

      Thank you saniyaa…For your lovely…Comment…

  9. didi..!!
    how r u my cutii ,swtii, preety di..??
    di I miss u sososoooo much…
    sorry di..
    didi otek btak wala kaan paker k sorry very very…. Very heartfl sorry…
    I’m really really sorry di.. for not cmting…
    di actually it’s exam time..
    I hope u understand..
    I’m very happy for no. Of cmts nd I know that this will happen bcoz u r Fablous writer..
    di I’m always wating for ur update..
    nd this time also eagrly wating for next..
    so try to post soon…
    or di please don’t feel sorry, I don’t like this..
    I’m…
    we r also students nd understood ur situation very well… So now don’t be sorry ok…!!
    di I love u love u love u love u love u love you so much…
    mmmuuuuaaaaahhhh….

    keep loving me..

    1. Fidato

      Hi… It’s a very long time… kudrat.. hmm… Chalo maaf kiya…. Was missing your cute and long comment…. I hope did your best in exams…All the very best with results…

  10. Wat a episode yaar. Loved it. Plx update soon

    1. Fidato

      Thank you anshu…Will try ma max…

  11. Bind blowing episode dear you touched my heart ❤️ sayyam guilt is so perfectly written ?

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Maria..

  12. Nice one fidato..try to upload soon

    1. Fidato

      Thanks jenita…

  13. Thank u di..
    Yee…a!!! Maaf kar dia…
    love u di..
    love u so much..

  14. AnahitaAnnie

    Thats a really adorable episode.. I loved the way u upheld Saiyyam’s worries in the episode. His guilt, apology and worry are perfectly visible throughout the part.. I loved Saiyyam’s dialogues and cheers for the nurse for helping them…?.. And the precap.. I am now so interested.. What’s going to happen?.. I can’t wait for the next one.. Keep posting..and stay happy..

    1. Fidato

      Thank you so much Annie….For this wonderful comment… I must say..You are also becoming a good analyst…Day by day… Thank you for episode analysis…and For understand the small things I included in the part…

  15. Indeed emotional and magical. The episode was wonderfully composed and presented. All the dialogues reflected the immense amounts of guilt enveloping this story right now. The pangs of guilt faced by the birla family is exceptionally portrayed.
    Sayyam’s expressions, acts and words showcase the immense amounts of care and concern he nurtures for krishna right now. Krishna’s supposed actions were brilliantly described and the assumption by the doctors did shake up sayyam for sure. Yuvani’s acts are worth glorifying for sure. The way in which she brings the estranged couple together with her amazing wordflow and deeds is truly commendable. Krishna’s condition is surely aiding her in some ways presently. The karma that she couldnt do while she was conscious is stepping towards completion while she lays semi-conscious.
    Awesome storyline and great compilation of words..

    1. Fidato

      Thank you so much Minerva….For the tremendous analysis… As usual I have no words to express ma gratitude… This is means a lot to me… Detailed every bits..Into depth of vocabulary.. so great to have you.. I’m requesting you … Please write a ff..Of Kriyam…

  16. Hi fidato… sorry couldn’t comment on last update. It was fabulous. Loved it. This is also good. Loved the way u explained saiyyam’s emotions. Superbbbbbbb…… yuvani did good. Cofession is near I think. Can’t wait for next one

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Yura….For the lovely comment.. don’t be sorry… I can understand… Confession…Hmm…Stay tuned for that…

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