Dream scenes of Kriyam 2 part 17

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Hi..It’s Fidato….with yet another dream scenes… thank you for all the lovely comments…and support…. It’s really inspiring… so sad to hear yesterday(11th May) was the last day of shoot for Ssel..hmmm… now some more days..Then there won’t be Sayyam and Krishna…Ssel.. really going to miss Kriyam.. let’s continue our story.. Through our ffs there won’t be an end to Kriyam…I’m sure…

Dream scenes of Kriyam 2 part 17

Scene 1

Krishna lying on floor..Lifeless.. everyone try their best to wake up…
Sayyam is looking at Krishna with a doubt .. is she acting.. he thinks..When I was there..she was ok..Then how did this happen…
Suhani : Sayyam…dekh kya rahi ho…udao..
Yuvraj…gaadi nikalo jaldi..
Sayyam came out his thoughts..He move forwards..and lift Krishna in his arms.. he look straight to her eyes… it is closed..Not even a move….
They take her into the car… Yuvani also going to sit…But Suhani stops her..
Suhani : Yuvani…Tum bheeg chuki ho.. jaa.. kapde badlo..Or Yuvaan me saath aao..teek hai..
Yuvani : lekin mumma… Krishna
Suhani : hum hai na..Beta.. you don’t worry..
Sayyam hold Krishna..make her lay down on his chest.. Suhani hold her legs…and rub her legs…Make her warm her.. they reached hospital..in record time…
Suhani : Yuvraj…Doctors..
Yuvraj : don’t worry… I talked with the resort manager… everything ready …
As they reached…Medical team is waiting for them… they quickly shifted Krishna to ICU… Yuvani and Yuvaan also reached…
Everyone waiting for doctor outside…

After a while.. Doctor come out… Everyone rushed to him…
Suhani : Dr. Meri beti..kaisi hai …?
Doctor : she is out danger…But still we have to kept her in observation.. please how this happened..? Wo ithne time water mein thi or aap logom ko patha tak nahi..
Suhani : but… she knew swimming..I’m also..In a confusion..yeh huwa kaise..?
Doctor : hmm..Then we should check her blood..shayad kuch patha chale.. Nurse get her blood test done..Ok
Nurse : ok doctor..
Suhani : Dr can we meet her…
Doctor : yes but let her come to conscious..

Time skips..
Krishna open her eyes…Light make her shut her eyes…She squeezed her eyes again opens…to see Suhani and Yuvraj right in front her eyes…
Krishna tries to speak..but Suhani…Stops her..
Suhani : hum subko dara diya Tum ne Krishna.. kya zaroorat thi ithne raat ko pool ke pass gayi..
Yuvraj : Suhani….please let her breath..
Krishna : I’m sorry aunty.. Daidu…Mein ne yeh holiday trip kharab ki hai na…
Suhani : Krishna…Tum trip ki padi ho..

Sayyam was leaning on the wall…Looking at Krishna quizzically… Krishna searching for Sayyam… Suhani understood..Her.. she eyed Sayyam to come forward… Sayyam smiles faintly… Suhani eyed everyone else to come out…and leave them alone..

Sayyam came near Krishna… she weakly tried to smile.. Sayyam smiles in a sarcastic way…
Sayyam : wow… Brilliant acting… I must say you should take this as your profession.I’m sure a bright future ahead of you…
Krishna looked at him in confusion…
Sayyam : tumhe kya laga…Yeh sub karke mujhe guilty feel karaoge… you can’t fool me Krishna…
Krishna frowns with disbelief…Tears started to flow from her eyes…
Sayyam : Tum buri ho bahut buri ho Krishna… and selfish…you never think about others feelings…How they feel… you just want satisfy your wishes… isiliye tho… Yuvaan bhi..Tumhe chodkar chale gaya…Wo bhi end moment mein…..
Krishna feels like someone crushing her head.. again and again…
‘Sayyam……’
Sayyam shocked to see Yuvani..Behind the screens…Then give her ‘never mind ‘ expression…
Yuvani come to them… Glare Sayyam angrily…
Sayyam : Yuvani…Please…
Yuvani : yeh sub chal raha tha ..Tum donom ke beech…Tumhe kuch pathaya kyun nahi..
Sayyam : wo mein…
Yuvani : mein Tumse nahi.. Krishna se baat kar rahi hum..
Krishna didn’t move…She was in a trauma… Yuvani turns to Sayyam…
Yuvani : or Tum….ithne achi se samajh gayi..hai na Krishna ko…
Sayyam : Tum yahan…?
Yuvani : Krishna selfish hai.. na… kyun selfish hone ka haq sirf tumhara hai…?
Sayyam wonders…
Yuvani : bina kuch Jane,soche samjhe…Sare gussa uspe nikalne ke alawa tumhe kuch aatha hai kya..? If you doing all this coz of that pool wala incident then that was my plan…You should punish me… wo mana kar diya tha..Par mein use force kiya tha..
Sayyam looks down…With guilt…
Yuvani : Tumne ne kya kaha…haan… Krishna selfish hai.. na… Isiliye tho wo do din se tumhara peeche bhag rahi thi..Sirf tumhara maafi keliye…
Sayyam felt a pricking pain inside..
Yuvani : wo bahut buri or selfish hai.. isiliye kisi ki baat dalna or kisi se na kehna use aatha hi nahi…
Sayyam thinks…Am I overreacting….
Yuvani : ithni selfish hai ki …Wo Tum jaise insan se pyar karne laga…
Sayyam looks at her incredulously…

Krishna couldn’t hear anything they say.. she is in trauma.. Sayyam’s words..’ buri or selfish’ was ringing on her ears…repeatedly Krishna felt her heart beats getting faster..She able to hear.. her own heart beats.. she felt like someone choking her…She gulps to get a relief…but her throat was totally dry… she opens her mouth to call Yuvani…but air come out..She tries to inhale some air…but couldn’t…She struggled to get some air…

Yuvani : mein ne use kaha tha..That you deserve a better gal…But.. ab mein kahthi hum.. ki Tum uski pyar ki layak nahi hai Sayyam….
Tears flows through her cheeks.. suddenly there is ‘beep‘ sound from the equipments..Lead them to look towards Krishna…. They shocked to see Krishna is struggling for breath… her chest is moving up…She produces some sound due to the suffocation… Yuvani runs to call Doctor…

Sayyam stood there for a moment.. he couldn’t understand what to do… Krishna is shaken up… shivering in an uncontrollable manner…She is getting fits… Sayyam runs to her..tries to calm her but in vain..

Doctor came..To check her..Make everyone out of the room.. Sayyam still holding Krishna.. Didn’t move…
Doctor : please…Let us do our work… you are wasting her precious time… we can only save her if you move out…
Yuvani comes to him..Freed Krishna’s hand from his grip and dragged him out… Sayyam moving like a machine..When they close the door…He stood there keeping his hands on door looking Krishna through the glass… Tears fall down…from his eyes…

Precap :
Doctor : patient ki condition ithni bigad kaise huyi…
Sayyam felt like someone stabbing him repeatedly after hearing from doctor..

Hi…Guys…hope you like this part…I know it’s little short…please give me your suggestions critics.. anything through comments…. Forgive my typo errors.. keep reading and do supporting me… love you all…

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37 Comments
  1. Mayesha

    hi..fidato..nice epi..I read ur epi from the first part.but never commented before..but I will try to do that from now..I love ur ff..keep it up

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Mayesha…. Glad you like it… Thank you for the appreciation…

  2. Hi i am a silent reader of u r ff from 1st epi its amazing
    Btw when r u going to update next part?
    Pls update today if u can pls

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Pinky.. I will try… Asap..

  3. Shaani

    Every nice episode yaar… The way u described every scene.. Every emotions… All r perfect… I really loved it… U r an amazing writer… I have never commented a long one… But I always loved ur story… U r a fabulous writer… Ur writing skill … Everything is soo perfect.. Keep writing don’t stop… Keep smiling…
    God bless u…

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Shaani…. Thank you so much for your appreciation…

  4. i am in love with this episode?yuvani was superb??

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Zani…

  5. Mithila Farzana

    Awesome episode yaar…you rocks in all part.plz update sooner…

    1. Fidato

      Thank you dear…I will try… asap…

  6. Once again a brilliant episode! Can’t wait for the next one! Please upload fast ! ASAP

    1. Fidato

      Thank you dear…I will try… asap…

  7. Mithila Farzana

    Awesome episode yaar….you rocks in all parts.plz update sooner….

  8. Wowww.. Speechless!! Every scene every dialogue was so emotional I could visualize everything!! You are a great writer I must say!! Loving your ff to the core!! Please update soon!!

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Aveesha… For your appreciation…..I will try… asap…

  9. I really loved this episode.plz next update soon plz

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Sree…

  10. AnahitaAnnie

    Ur writing is killing.. OMG the scene was so real and Yuvani was great..and Saiyyam asked if he is over reacting.. I will answer for him.. Yah Saiyyam u are way to sensitive and over reacting ??..and Fidato ur writing skills are bound to be appreciated.. Ur scenes were dialogues is awesome.. I can’t describe how good u write.. Loved it..and can’t wait for the next one..

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Annie….. Really glad you like it dear….

  11. It’s Amazing.and now I think saiyyam come to know krishna’s importance in his life.and he admitted that he loves her. I m just eagerly waiting for next epi

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Kriyam fan… Yeah you…Are right… Let’s see…

  12. Today epi good next epi fast uplod plz something new twist story mai lao Krishna sayyam she naraz rahe Krishna out of the bm leap leap ke bad Krishna s life change Krishna ke life mai koi aye etc

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Richa…

  13. Minerva

    Intensely emotional and greatly unconventional. The storyline is surely one of a kind and highly praise-worthy. It was indeed a greatly touching and lovely episode. Yuvaani’s words are sure to make sayyam contemplate on his statements and can make him feel guilty to the extent that he may want to take his words back. The way in which yuvaani put forward her views and cleared sayyam’s doubts and rectified his assumptions is highly endearing. She is surely one of the best persons in the birla household.
    Substantially, this episode was a true emptional roller-coaster ride with numerous highs and lows of life. A great work of art..

    1. Fidato

      Wow… Minerva.. thank you so much for comments…Such a beauty of vocabulary..And nice analysis… Yuvani is a wonderful character but Ssel writers never understand her important in the show..

  14. wat a twist…really awesome epi..
    n ya yestrday was d last shoot..n evn im feeling sad. .but a little bit only…coz bcoz of u n d other ff writer..i can still read n imagine kriyam…so thank u sooooooo muchhhhhhh

    1. Fidato

      Thank you saniyaa… Thank you for the appreciation…

  15. Hey fidato m a silent reader of ua amazing ff must say ua fabulous writer eagerly waiting for next part pls pls update d next one asap ☺️☺️

    1. Fidato

      Thank you sweety….I will try asap…

  16. Oh my god wat a episode. Loved it to the core. Plx update soon. Waiting for the next

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Anshu…

  17. Awesome

    1. Fidato

      Thanks sinni…

  18. Awesome episode

    1. Fidato

      Thanks dwidha….

  19. Make Krishna pregnant

  20. Update the next part sooner plzzzzzzz
    I loved it ???

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