Dream scenes of Kriyam 2 part 16

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Hi…Guys… It’s Fidato…With another dream scenes… I’m really sorry guys for the late updates… Actually I always write all episodes in one go almost… except last one… that part I took 3-4 days to complete..So lost ma continuity.. sorry I will try ma best to update it asap… anyway let’s continue…

Scene 1

Krishna hugging Yuvani crying…. She cried her heart out… Yuvani tries to console her..
Yuvani : Krishna… please chup ho jao.. don’t worry… I will tell Sayyam it was ma plan…Not your fault…
Krishna wipes her tears..and sighs….
Krishna : nahi.. Yuvani…Wo bahut gussets mein hai..Mein dekhthi hum…
Yuvani : are you sure…??
Krishna nods.. stood up and hurried to their room… she entered the room saw Sayyam drying his hair… changed his clothes.. he sneezed.. Krishna move towards him… extended her hand for towel…
Krishna : lao…Mein kar…
Sayyam jerked her hands… Krishna shocked to see him angry..Tears running down through her cheeks..
Sayyam : I don’t need your help…
Krishna : Sayyam..Meri baat tho suno..
Sayyam : I don’t want hear anything..Just leave me alone..
Krishna : Sayyam…Tum galat samajh rahi ho…
Sayyam hold her hands by elbow.. look straight to her..
Sayyam : nahi…Mein Ab sahi samajh rahi hum…
Krishna : Sayyam please… You are hurting me…
Sayyam freed her hand …And turns to hide his tears…
Krishna : Sayyam… Please mujhe maaf kardo… hum bas..mazzak..
Sayyam : yeah…Right.. mazzak… tum subko yeh sub mazzak hoga.. Krishna..But not for me…
Krishna looked at him..How much pain in his eyes…How much hurt he was… she slapped herself in her mind…
Sayyam turns to her… Wiped away his tears..
Sayyam : you know what…I don’t believe in this human emotions…Yeh pyar ,pasand humdardi, apnapan..Yeh sub jhoot hai.. didn’t exist… and you proved it again..
Krishna : Nahi… Sayyam…Nahi… Please Meri baat tho suno…
Sayyam : mujhe bharosa nahi tha Krishna…Ki mein kisi ki pyar ki layak haiol or bharosa ki layak hai…Lekin tumne…Mujhe..

Sayyam stops looked at her with wrenching pain …
Sayyam : tumne mera bharosa thoda hai Krishna…Tumne..thod diya..Sub..

Sayyam headed out…Leaving Krishna behind… Krishna couldn’t believe her ears..She felt weak and falls down on the floor…
Krishna remember Yuvraj’s words.. Daidu yeh mein kya..Kiya… Mein ne uska bharosa badana chahthi thi par mein ne hi wo thod diya… she cried…

Time skips…

Everyone back from mandir..and ready to have dinner.. everyone else Krishna gathered for dinner.
Suhani : Krishna kahan hai..?
She asked Sayyam… he looked at Yuvani…
Yuvani : mumma..Wo Krishna ko sir dard hai.. Isiliye jaldi so gayi..
Suhani : kya… Kaise… Teek hai na wo..
Yuvani : mumma..Relax.. she is not a kid.. tablets de diya mein ne.. she will be fine..By morning..
Sayyam and Yuvani share a glare…Then had their dinner..

Sayyam getting ready to bed after his work on laptop…Drinks some water..And turns to see Krishna at the door.. he ignored her and sit on the bed..
Krishna comes to him..and about to open her mouth..But Sayyam stops her without looking at her..
Sayyam : Krishna…I’m feeling very sleepy.. please..I don’t want to talk..
He lay down on the bed… Krishna guiltily looks at him… Tears running down through her cheeks.. uncontrollably… she stood there… crying..

Scene 2

It’s morning… sunrays….falls on Sayyam..Make him wake up from his sleep… he stretched his body…Suddenly get up as his legs touches something so soft… his sleepy eyes get widens.. to see Krishna.. lying… down her head and hands on bed and in a sitting posture… he can clearly see her dry cheeks has precipitation of salt as she was crying whole night.. he melts for a second..Move towards her about to touch her but taken aback… he stood up and looked at her one more time then headed to washroom..
After a while Krishna woke up..To see Sayyam nowhere… she checked in the washroom..Then come out of the room..being tensed…bumps into someone… Krishna smiled to hold the person and whispers ‘Sayyam’ opens her eyes to see it’s Yuvaan..
Krishna composed herself suddenly…
Yuvaan : dhyan kahan hai tumhara..?
Krishna looked down then raised her head to see Sayyam watching all this from a distance.. as she didn’t respond to Yuvaan he headed to the hall…Seeing Sayyam..He greet him and went downstairs…

Krishna become nervous.. but Sayyam passed her without asking anything.. Krishna feels really hurt coz of his cold behavior…

Time skips

At breakfast table.. everyone.. seated.. Krishna is serving… Bhavana is surprised to see kheer…
Bhavana : yeh kya…..Kheer..?? Par yeh tho menu mein nahi tha..
Everyone looked at Sayyam…Smiling… Sayyam felt embarrassed… Krishna is also nervous… kahi…Wo sabki samne chillaya tho… But he silently eat breakfast…Just looks at Krishna through his corner of eyes.. Krishna sighs..and sit near him.. Sayyam stood up being raged…as a result the chair move backwards and falls down.. everyone shocked to see his behaviour… Sayyam controlled his anger..
Sayyam : I’m sorry…I was waiting for this call..So in excitement..I was..
Suhani : huh…ithni si baat..tumne subko dara diya… Sayyam…
Sayyam : I’m so sorry…I should take this call…
He rushes to the room.. Krishna was sit there like a statue… she couldn’t believe what was just happened… Suhani noticed Krishna being lost..
Suhani : Krishna…Tum kuch khaya nahi..
Krishna come out from her thoughts…
Krishna : huh… I’m… Sayyam forgot to take kheer..I will just give him..
Suhani : acha…Teek hai..
Krishna take a bowl of kheer…and headed to their room…

Sayyam walks back and forth…then stops seeing Krishna… Krishna entered into the room.. Sayyam crushed his teeth in anger..
Krishna : Wo …Mein..Kheer..
Sayyam comes to her..slips his hands in pocket..
Sayyam : really…Yeh dene aayi hai..?
Krishna gulps..and extends kheer to him.. shivering.. Sayyam snatched it from her hand and throw it on the floor… he pulls her by her elbow…
Sayyam : (shouts) Do I look like a kid to you..Huh…?? Do I…??
Krishna startled in fear..squeezed her eyes..
Sayyam : tumhe kya laga.. yeh sub karke tum..mujhe mana sake… then for your kind information…I don’t need your sympathy..I can handle myself…Do you get it…
Sayyam came back to bed..opens his laptop…
Krishna still shivering…tears falls down.. she sit to pick up the glass pieces… she hold the glass piece without noticing it’s sharp edges..cuts her finger.. ‘aah…’she screams… Sayyam..turns to see… Krishna winces in pain…He tends to her…But stop himself… He close the lid of laptop..and headed out…

Time skips

Sayyam came into room looking for a file… something falls from files.. Sayyam take it turns… it was a sorry card… written by Krishna… he tore it into pieces..Put it in dustbin.. Krishna watched it by the window… wrenched in pain…

One more day is passed like this.. Sayyam ignoring Krishna… it was night.. Krishna sits beside pool putting her legs in water… she remembers the moments she spend with Sayyam..and smiled..Then the flashes of yesterday’s incidents…come up… she turns as she heard some footsteps.. she stood up sudden and slipped but Sayyam hold her..by hand..
Krishna looks at him with hope..But he smirks…Released his hand making Krishna falls into pool… Krishna come up remove her hair from face…
Sayyam come near her.. sit on his knee…
Sayyam : tum isi ki layak ho…
Krishna tries to come up holding the rail.. her vision got blurry.. she saw Sayyam is going far away from her in blurred..vision.. she felt dizzy…

After a while Yuvani came across the pool.. she saw Krishna’s sandals..Then shocked to see Krishna in the pool… Yuvani shout..
“Maa… Papa…. Sayyam… Dadi…”
Everyone shocked to see Krishna in the pool.. Yuvani jumps into pool and pull Krishna up.. everyone else help her.. Krishna lies on floor…lifeless..
Yuvani check her pulse…
Yuvani : mumma…She is not breathing..
Suhani : kya….?
Everyone shocked… Sayyam stood there in confusion.. how did she drawn..She knew swimming…Then how… is this possible …? Is she acting…?? His eyes narrowed…

Precap : Sayyam raged at Krishna…In hospital…
Krishna struggling for breath….

Hi…Guys..Give me your valuable opinion , suggestions and critics..Through comments.Feel free to express…
I know this episode is little dragging…But lot more to happen.. Please be patient… forgive my mistakes…
Love you all..

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32 Comments
  1. Nyc episode..
    Plz post asap.. ?

    1. Fidato

      Thanks Ishika… I will try…

  2. Today epi good story mai new entry honi chahiye mins Krishna s leleted sayyam jelasy and next update uplod fast

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Richa… I will think about it new entry…

  3. Hayeee❤❤fidato?sayyam’s attitude is on fire?and the episode was also on fire?

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Zani….

  4. Dragging no fidato the episode was outstanding. You explained the dream sequence very well. Each and every dialogue explained the emotions between kriyam. I am really inspired by your writing. Superb. Plz continue writing with ur amazing ideas. Can’t wait for next one. Nowadays Missing kriyam dose. It’s getting fulfilled by your ff

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Yura…. Thank you for your support…And appreciation…

  5. Ohh wow fidato.. I absolutely love your ff!! I could visualize everything!! How realistic!! Loved the dialogue!! Waiting for the next part!! ??

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Aveesha…. Glad you like it..

  6. no..no itz just awesome…i loved it…but the precap is really interesting…waiting for nxt update

    1. Fidato

      Thank you saniya..

  7. Awesome episode dear
    Waiting for next…

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Dwidha..

  8. It’s really a great fan fic!! Love reading it! I agree that there should be a new entry that would make sayyam jealous! It would fit perfectly into the story line!!

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Jano… Thank you for your suggestions… I will think about it..

  9. Wow today’s episode was awesome

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Sinni…

  10. Loved it❤❤❤❤update soon!!!!

    1. Fidato

      Thanks Aman..

  11. Nice episode. Next part update soon plz.

  12. Fidato

    Thanks Sree…

  13. Awesome update ???. Just loved it. Waiting for next part??. Pls update soon,???

    1. Fidato

      Thanks you muskan….

  14. AnahitaAnnie

    Dragging? Don’t joke.. The scenes were awesome.. I guess confession might be near..and outstanding epi
    . can’t wait for the next..

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Annie… Hmm.. Confession…Yeah…Might be..

  15. Oh my god… wow ?? wat a episode❤ loved it. And that precap ? plx update soon. Eagerly waiting for the next part ❤❤

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Anshu….

  16. Minerva

    Intensely emotional. My heart was breaking with every word I read and visualised. The pieces are pricking my soul right now and I just cant describe the immense amounts of pain it is causing.
    This was a great piece of prose with amazing wordplay and a high emotional quotient. Its seriously extraordinary and heart-touching..

    1. Fidato

      Thank you for such a lovely comment… Minerva.. thank you for the appreciation…. Keep reading..

  17. Fidato you are writing the story well and at i used to ignore the ff but when I started reading i can’t able to control myself from reading the ff.i loved the story and i think it needs patience to think and to make emotional and writing and 100000000000 times thank you☺☺????

    1. Fidato

      Thank you Harini… It’s really happy to hear that my ff can entertain you…. Really thank you for lovely comment…

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