DOTS…(retold) Ikrs&Tei Version (episode 1)

The episode starts with viplav playing with a toy gun and he says this is such a horrible gun it is a bit twisted and the shots are not that proper. His friend ces in and says if u treat it like a gun it will break. Just chill kunj, a lady screams thief thief. Viplav borrows the gun and when the theif comes in front of them they shoot resulting the thief to loose balance.

Kunj returns the belongings to the owner. Viplav aids the thief and calls the police and sends him off and asks him not to steel.
The theif is taken to the emergecy ward of care&cure hospital. A doctor comes in and adminsters him and she asks for the chart and sees something wriiten on his hand.
It says: Fractured ankle and rib
A group blood
Theif personality

She smiles and asks him who wrote it he says the one who did this to me and she asks her team to take an X-ray scan and continues working.

In a cafè the boys are sitting with two stuffed doles beside them. Viplav sarcasticly “ur girlfriend is quiet cute”.
K: thanks, I think I met my ideal type and ur dole looks quiet good.
V: Thanks its my fellow soldier and gives a nasty look and whispers, Why the hell would yoy accept this. Are u craaaazy
K: How could I when the shopkeeper sincerly gave us this and told us not to come back.
V: How come u become soo stern when it comes to war and looks away.
Viplav gets a call and it is twinkle’s call. He shows it to kunj and he says shall I pick it up and call he here and gives a evil smile.
K: No I will treat u with chicken and a grand meal.

V: My salary is enough to give me a GOOD meal. (still holding the phone)
K: Fine! Wine which is 17yr old…(trying to grab the phone)
V: Hmmm…. 17yr old then it is still a minor.
K: Blind date with my cousin who is a air hostess…
V: giving kunj the phone why were u hiding such relationship from me.Give me ur phone now I need to check it.
Kunj starts searching his phone and realizes he was pickpocketed by the same thief they helped and tells I am going to kill him. Saying so they go to meet him.

Outside the cure&care hospital and kunj swears to kill him and viplav tells I found a funeral home close by and smirks.

Dhaani is treating the thief and she keeps getting calls. Kunj and viplav are behind her and her back is facing them and she takes the phona and says which idiot big boss is calling u from soo long. Viplav hears this and taps on her soldier and says I am big boss and she stares at him and looks down.

Credit to: nancy

23 comments

  1. ahanaa

    AS U GUYS CAN SEE I AM THE ONE WRITING IT. NANCY IS MY FRIEND I WRITE IT AND SHE PRACTICALLY STOLE IT FROM MY LAPTOP. ….. I KNOW U GUYS MAY NOT BELIVE ME BUT THIS IS THE TRUTH……. NANCY GET UR OWN IDEAS YOU WIMP……..

    • Nancy

      Excuse me but who r actually I dont know any ahana’s…. I live in mumbai cuz of my dad’s transfer and who r u? First of all I made it clear this is inspired by a k-drama so it cant be ur story so if anybody does not belive me go and see first episode of descendants of the sun… With eng subtitles, you will see the plot almost similar

  2. Viplav

    good one dear actually who is this writing nancy or ahana?
    and good to see u back ahana we missed u so much dear…….are u ok?

    • Nancy

      Dear Viplav,
      It is written by me “NANCY”. Not any ahana so plz belive me. And thanks for liking it

  3. Ishqoholics❤

    Must say very good writing! ?? I read it thrice!! Literally!! Don’t know why! ?

  4. Fatarajo (KRPKAB, EDKV n Dehleez fan)

    Wow Ahana ur ff is very interesting Twinj and Vidhaani wow 🙂 and btw lol it was funny when ur friend stole your ff 😛 this shows how good ur ff is actually only my best friend knows the story of the FFs i write, my other friends know but they are Chinese so they don’t have much idea about hindi serials and my mom knows I write articles if she gets to know I write FFs she may get a shock when she read it 😛

    • Nancy

      I am sorry but u really hurt my feelings today. I am not a theif as I have something called pride and values which do not allow me to do so. So called Ahana came into this ff and took the credit and all of u belibed her. So sorry if I guys hurt u but I cant give my ff credit to anyone as I typed it on my phone and posted it.

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