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Don’t stay away it kills me-RagLak ff by darshu and folly part 5

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Don’t stay away it kills me 5
Hi my dear lovely friends…how are you all??I know you all are angry on me…am really sorry…i will update this ff on every Friday if possible I will update on alternative days…hope you will forgive me..ok ok let’s move to the plot…
Happy reading…

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“Ragini!!”swara screams…
“aaah…disturbance again…Ragini you are surrounded with full of disturbances…see now what this swara gonna do I don’t know…”laksh gets upset…
Ragini glares her…
Ragini:don’t dare call my sister as disturbance…got it Mr.Laksh Maheshwari(pointing her forefinger across his face)…
Laksh entangled his finger with her’s and played by twisting it…hehe!!
“laksh…leave it…”Ragini tries to free her finger…
Laksh:no way Mrs.Laksh…i won’t!!what will you do…

“Ragini…where is she!!”swara was approaching upstairs…
“swara!!one minute…come here na”sanskar tried to distract her towards him…
Swara:wait sanskar…i will come but before I wanna meet Ragu…
Swara steps on oil on the stairs and slipped..sanskar runs and holds her…
Ragini:laksh…leave me swara is coming here only…please(puppy face)…

Laksh:don’t worry she won’t come…
“your ear drums got weak I think…she is approaching upstairs only…haven’t you heard…”Ragini rubs his ears…
Laksh:now there is no sound know…see…

Laksh laughs…
Ragini:what you have done to my sister(holding his collars)…
Laksh:areyy…chill na…i will tell you but before that stop crushing my shirt…
Ragini leaves his collars…

Laksh:actually I poured oil on the floor…i know swara will come to disturb us..so I did it desperately…haha!!
Ragini slapped him…

Laksh:nothing happened to her…go and see sanskar is with her only I know that he will save her from all the troubles…i just wanna create some moments for them…so that I did like this…
Ragini:if anything happened to her means…what will you do…
Laksh:nothing will happen because I believe my brother…
Ragini:why you’re behaving like a kid laksh!!

Laksh:Ragini!!please let’s keep our quarrel aside…am crushing my brain to get a chance to meet you…but it always gets flopped by swara…please understand me too…i can’t live without you Ragu!!
Ragini:laksh…why can’t you understand me…yes laksh…i don’t want to risk swara’s life because of our relationship…let’s come to one solution…promise me…you shouldn’t try to meet me alone until swara gets well…

Her words ached his heart…and she is also saying those things with heavy heart…
Laksh leaves without uttering anything…
“Laksh!!”Ragini calls out his name…
Laksh(lost in her thoughts)
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You are concerned about everyone but not me!!you don’t know Ragini how much I love you…
I know you love me more than I do…but still my heart is following you alone…
It’s not accepting these distances…I may say even we are far our heart is one…
Yes but am missing you badly…i love you Ragini…
I realized the great truth of my life “when the person is far away from you then only you will realise their place in your heart…”

It’s true…i got it…i can’t live without you…you’re my saans…without you am nothing…
Ragini!!come back to me…
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Laksh closed his eyes and a tear drop escapes…
Swara:laksh!!
Laksh leaves without saying anything…
Sanskar whose heart was experiencing the same pain that laksh was undergoing…
Now both are in same state…but the fact is that sanskar knows very well about laksh…he won’t harm swara but in case of Ragini…sanskar fears something gonna happen bad because of parth’s arrival…
Sanskar feels guilty for Raglak condition…
Sanskar(cries inside):am sorry lucky!!it’s all because of me…am sorry…

Swara runs behind laksh and holds his wrist…
“where are you going!!”asked swara…
Laksh blinks and says”aah”he didn’t realise what she said…
Laksh:what did you said!!
Swara:you’re in this world only na…
“wo…laksh got bothered about us…i mean about me and Ragini…”parth gave shock to laksh who stands numb…

Swara(to parth):Wo…everything ok between you two na…
Parth smiles and nods…
Swara gets happy and drags laksh inside…
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They all gathered for lunch…laksh was staring Ragini with painful eyes…
Swara was about to sit beside laksh…before that Laksh makes dadi sit beside him…
Swara gets sad and she sits with sanky…Ragini sighs laksh to stop staring…
Parth intentionally irritates laksh by feeding Ragu her favourite sweet…Ragini denies but parth stuffs in her mouth …

Laksh eyes turned red…Ragini took the knife and cuts fruits…
Dadi:kya Hua laadoo…why you’re cutting fruits…
“Woh…dadi maa…i will take fruits those dishes I don’t like…that’s why…”Ragini tried to hide something…

Dadi:teek hai laadoo…
“laksh…Ragini is fasting for you…today is auspicious day na so only she is hiding before all…”dadi whispers in laksh’s ears…
Swara:what secret is going on…

“kuch nahi…”said laksh…
Ragini was simply cutting the fruits but she didn’t ate anything…
Laksh notices that ragini’s gaze fall on him…he lifts his head little upwards and stares her without letting anyone know about it…
After hearing that Ragini is fasting for him…he didn’t ate anything…
Laksh then saw the sweet that parth stuffs in her mouth under the table…Ragini splitted on the floor…he smiles stupidly…
“aah…”Ragini screams…
The next moment laksh jerks and takes her to wash basin and rubs her wound in water …
Laksh(shouts):if you want to have fruits…you can ask me na…please Ragini try to learn to care about yourself too…

Ragini blinks simply…
“lucky calm down…”sanky consoles him and take him aside…
Swara gets shocked seeing laksh’s behaviour…

Parth:he is concerned towards Ragini…that’s it don’t get confused swara…
Swara intentionally stamps her foot on the table and winces in pain…sanky goes to her and rubs her ankle…
Swara sees laksh concern for Ragini…
“why he didn’t rushed towards me when i got hurt…”swara said under her breath and jealousy starts occupying her mind…
Ragini:laksh…stop it…
She sighs something…laksh without saying anything goes to the hall…
Ragini in her room praying to god’s idol…
“please make everything perfect as like before…this time don’t play with our lives…”Ragini Said under her breath…

Knock…knock…
Ragini turned and found parth…
Parth:may I…
Ragini nods…
“everything changed within a day na Ragini…we didn’t expected that it would turn out like this…”parth said by sitting on the couch…

Ragini:don’t worry…everything will fall into right place at right time..
“haan Ragu I wish the same…”parth said under his breath…
Wind blown and some dust got struck in ragini’s eyes…
Parth tried to utilize this chance and neared her…
Parth:wait Ragu…i will blow it…

Ragini:it’s ok…i will manage…
“no problem…i will help you…”parth proceeds near her…
Laksh comes that time to ask about the wound…he found parth’s gaze was wrong and neared them fastly…
He then pulled her and kissed her…Ragini gets shocked…
Parth moves away…

“she is mine…don’t dare try to near her…”laksh warns him…
Parth leaves the very next moment can’t able to face his anger…
“can’t you see his intentions Ragini…this is your character forgiving others so easily…”laksh bursts out in anger…

Ragini stands numb…
Laksh:am sorry…
Ragini hugged him and says “am sorry laksh…”
Ragini cries bitterly…
“morning only I played with it…see it gets hurted…see it’s all because of you only..”said laksh by rubbing her wound…
Ragini:laksh!!
Laksh:hmm…
“I love you…”said Ragini..
Laksh:I knew it already mera bacha…

To be continued •••

How about today’s chappy??do you liked it??
Suggestions are welcomed…
Aim dear as per your wish swara’s jealousy starts and folly sweetie your suggestion I fulfilled I think…
Since I won’t be available for two days my advance wishes to my sweet sister mintu for your exam…all the best dear👍

~Darshu

50 Comments
  1. Sindhura

    Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear Sindhu 😊 glad that you liked it…

  2. Sreevijayan

    Awesome update dear…lovvng it

    1. Darshini

      Aww that’s so sweet of you shree..am hpy that you liked it…

  3. Follybraverl

    Nice akka awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq da sweetie 😊 glad that you liked it…

  4. Shrilatha

    U don’t stay away….I want this ff daily…come soon

    1. Darshini

      Haha!!shri will try to updte regularly dear…tc da…and thnks for liking it…

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear ammy 😊 glad that you liked it…

  5. Sooooo sweetttttttt .

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear ragya😊 glad that you liked it…

  6. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear aleeza 😊 glad that you liked it….

  7. IQRA222

    darshu di as usual i dont need to say that the episode is khidki tod and awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq da iqu😊 hehe!! My dear sweetie pie u mde my day spcl as always…tc da…

      1. IQRA222

        aww didu that is my pleasure that i made your day special <3 <3

  8. Mintu

    Awesome sisy….!!!wow…loved this chappy..!!! Aiyoo.. Sema ponga.. 😍😍 laksh pov avan place la correct ah irundhuchu da.. dinning table scene superb…!! Indha parth Yen ipidi pandran.. Nala vanga poran laksh kita..!!! Laksh jealousy is amazing…raglak moments r cute.. Innimay dhn story semaya iruka podhu..!!!! Sisy.. Thnq for the lovely wishes da..😘😘 its so sweet of u pasamalare..!!!
    Waiting for next chappy.. Take care dear 😊😊

    1. Darshini

      Aww sissy that’s so sweet of you da…am hpy dat u loved it..
      Tq so much my dear…
      Cnfrm parth nalla vaanga daan poran laksh ta…
      Appa irukku kacheri…
      Will post soon da..tc too

  9. Superb akka..Weekly once na romba long time akka…pls post next part soon sis…

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much bro…na try panren 2 days Ku once…tc…

  10. Asra

    awesome darshu dear….omg laksh oda possessiveness ku oru aalavey illama pochu….oil la steps la uthidu vandhaya laksh bad na…ragu u fasting…Parth ku pinati ulla fb yeana dear…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…
    and mintu All the best for ur exam….u also tkcr dear…

    1. Darshini

      Haha!!asra u knw na in this ff laksh is too possessive with Ragini..
      Oil lam oru matter illa avanukku…he will anything for Ragu…
      Hehe!!
      Will clear everything soon dear…tc too da…

      1. Mintu

        Yeah sisy..Ungala dhn asra wishes kidaichadhu 😍😍😘😘

    2. Mintu

      Awww.. Thnq for the lovely wishes asra…choo happy dear unata irundhu wishes vandhadhu da.. U too take care dear

      1. Darshini

        All credit goes to me😉 hehe!!

  11. Akshata

    awesome, update soon

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear akshi😊 will post soon dear…

  12. Asw

    Nice is party is -ve character? Keep going

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear asw😊 yes parth is negative da…
      Glad that you liked it…

  13. Berdilla

    Super Friend

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear friend 😊 am hpy that you liked it…

  14. Lovely7

    Amazing

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear lovely 😊 glad that you liked it…

  15. Amazing

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear ashnoor 😊 glad that you liked it…

  16. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear sinni 😊 glad that you liked it…

  17. Dharani

    awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq da dharu😊 am hpy that you liked it…

  18. Amazing

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear rehna 😊 glad that you liked it…

  19. Super,I like your ff very much

    1. Darshini

      Aww tq so much athira dear 😊 am glad that you liked it..

  20. Astra

    awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq da asthu😊 am hpy that you liked it…

  21. Awesome episode and loved Raglak scenes

  22. A.xx

    fab and loved his jealousy xx

  23. Amazing….

  24. Super mind blowing no words to describe….it was too awesome.update next soon

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