DON’T NEED YOU – A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) EPISODE 71

DON’T NEED YOU

–    EPISODE 71 – 

Angel: Mr.Khan I’ve done my work , Shall I go now .

Khan : Oh yes , From tomorrow , You may have to work till 10 .

Angel : Okay , I’ll see , Bye .

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Good morning . It was 8: Am .

His train reached BANGALURU . Veer comes out of the train .

He sees his surroundings.

Veer : I don’t know why , But There’s something Magnetic about this city , I am having something crazy in my body .

He saws his driver .

Veer : Hi

Driver: Hello Sir , I received your call , Let’s go to Hostel.

Veer : Ya , I’m pretty new here , How’s the hostel.

Driver : It’s good , The landlady is little strict but good .

Veer : Okay .

Driver : You know , That a girl is living with her as a P.G , She’s horrible , Very audacious. Just like a ‘Lady Singham’

Veer smiles ” Lady Singham ha!!!”

Veer : For how much time you are working for them .

Driver : I know about the Landlady a lot , I’m her personal driver since 2 years .

Talking ,Talking , Their time passed , They reached .
‘ Rachel’s Hostel ‘ .

Driver : Oh we are here , I’ll drop you , I’ve to go , Refuelling the car .

The car leaves him .

Veer : Wow the hostel looks pretty good , Come let’s go in .

He goes to the door and knocked it . Veer ” Hello , Miss.Rachel ”

Angel was sleeping , Due to disturbance she woke up .

Angel : Oh my lord , Who’s there , It’s just 8.

She goes down , Brings a Big Silver Vessel .

Angel : I think it’s The milk man , Aunt Rachael would be out for walk .

Angel shouts ” Coming Bhaiya ( brother) ”

She hasn’t woke up nicely , Walking as if Still sleeping , She was rubbing her eyes .

She opened the door and moves the Vessel outside towards the man .

Veer was wearing a cap, Cap covered this eyes , He was in opposite direction , Talking on phone .

He twists back and The Vessel dropped on his Feet .

Veer : Oh !!! Ouchhh.

Angel now came into life ,

Angel : Oh sorry , Sorry .

And finally they both saw each other .

Veer and Angel were staring .

Veer saws the girl, Her eyes were bluish ,Hair covering forehead , She looks like Pari , His heart beats fast , He knows that Pari is not dead .

He hugged her .

(((Background music song –
Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein
Ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake )))

For a moment she also became silent , Tears came out of her eyes .

Angel in her mind – Sorry , But I’ve to accomplish my goal , So I’m doing it , I love you , I can’t be your Pari now .

She dragged him back .

Angel ( Speaking in a British accent ) – Hey , Hey Hey , Whosoever you are , How dare you hug me ?

Veer : Pari , Pari I knew you had not died .

Angel : Who Pari , I’m Angel okay . Why are you here ???

Aunt Rachael comes .

Aunt : who are you ?

Veer : I’m your new P.G

Aunt : But it was a girl , Named Vameer , From Mumbai .

Veer : I think its some confusion , Actually my Receptionist called you to book , So it might have happen . Im Veer Mehta

Aunt : Oh sorry , Come in . Well you know each other .

Veer : Yes , She’s ( She interrupts)

Angel : No I don’t know him , I’m seeing him for the first time .

Veer : But aren’t you My Pari .

Aunt : No she’s My P.G ‘Angel’ She’s living with me past three years .

Angel : Okay just leave this topic here , Let’s go in .

Aunt : See , I don’t have a big home , So you both have to share , A living room , Bathroom and fortunately we’ve two bedrooms .

Angel : what !!! No I can’t , Sorry .

Veer : It’s fine with me .

Aunt : I don’t know , You have to .

And finally the dispute settled .

It was now 4 , Angel’s job time , Veer also left for his work .

Angel reached Khan’s house .

Kahn : Ha , You are here , I was missing you .

Angel : Really sir …

Khan goes from there , Angel tracks  ,where was he going .

She was hiding behind A wall

She saws Khan opening a door , Going in and Coming after couple of minutes .

Angel : what is there , I’ve to check , But how .

It was now 10 Pm .

Khan was in his room , He was drinking .

Angel got a brilliant chance to go to that room . She goes there , But The room door needs a password .

She goes back to Him , Finds out that He’s completely Drunk .

She goes to him .

Khan : Hey , Sweetheart , Come , Come to me .

Angel : Hi Boss .
She puts her hands on his face . And smoothly asks .

Angel : Sir , You are very handsome , Would you like to spend a night with me .

Khan stood up , He grasped her and pushed her to the wall.

Khan : If you , Yourself is asking , How can I say No .

Angel : But for that , You need to tell me something .

Khan : Ask me anything , I’ll tell you .

He pressed her to the wall and was over her .

Angel : What is the password of the secret room .

Khan : Secret room ????

Angel : No that door , How many passwords you have .

Khan : I just have one password , ‘Black Gang’ .

He was trying to kiss her in neck , She gave her a tight slap .
He falls down on bed .

She runs there , The door opened . She entered in .
And saws around 10 girls , Their mouths were sealed , They were brutally beaten , Maybe molested .

Angel started crying , Her heart filled with Pain .

Angel : How cruel this Minister is , I don’t know how many girls are suffering because of him .

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It was now 12 pm .

Aunt : Veer, Angel hasn’t come back till now .

Veer : Where has she gone ?

Aunt : She goes for Her part time job .

Veer : Job , where ?

Aunt : To Minister Khan’s house but till 10.

Veer : Don’t worry aunt , Call her .

Aunt : She isn’t answering .

Veer : Relax , I go out and look for her . Give me the address .

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Angel recognises that Khan is coming here , She hurriedly Took all girls .

Angel : See girls , This is a address , All of you go from here and reach here , Okay fast run . I’m just coming .

They all ran away .
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Veer reached there .
He saws that many girls were running out from his home .

Veer : Hey , who are you all , Why are you in this Pathetic condition .

A girl : This Minister is fraud , He has kidnapped us .

Veer : what ? But how’d you came out .

Angel : A very brave girl saved us , She told us to reach this address .

Veer : Come let me take you there .

Girl : But who are you .

Veer : I run a NGo , Come , Don’t worry .

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Angel again Locked the door , Did everything as it was . And leaves from there .

Veer dropped the girls there , It was welfare society . Angel reached Hostel .

Veer comes back .

Aunt was sleeping . Angel was in her room .She was crying .

veer : Who were those girls?

Angel : Which girls

Veer : Those were kidnapped in the ministers house .

Angel : How did you know , I didn’t knew .

Veer : I know everything , .

Angel : Get out of my room (shouts)

He goes .

It was around 2 pm .

Veer was sleeping .

Angel goes and Puts her hands on his face

Angel says ” Sorry Veer , For this world Pari had died and now this Angel has to kill all the evil , I can’t put  life in risk , But my heart will always love you , Now I will live as Angel ” .

PLEASE COMMENT & ??

Love u all

Kira

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  1. Thanx for reuniting them .
    Awesome story .
    Surely you are big writer .
    Waiting for episode 72 .

    1. Kira

      Thnx Zain

  2. No one can write such a brilliant story except u . The writings , the correct timing of pics , and correct background music are just awesome . I just think about it whenever I get any free time .????
    You are just awesome ?
    BEST OF LUCK ??

    1. Kira

      Thanks for your comments .
      Have a nice day

  3. It seems that you are confused with AM and PM
    .Story was awesome .

    1. Kira

      Thanks for telling , I’ll improve .
      Keep ?? my story .
      Bye
      Have a blissful day

  4. Kira

    Friends I edited the pic of avni / Angel / Pari to male her look different from original , How’s that

    1. It was amazing .
      Episode 72 ??

  5. Very nice episode dear….
    Your imagination skills are fabulous…….
    Keep up the good work….
    And the new pic of Pari is really nice…….actually suites her
    GOOD JOB

  6. Hii Kira,
    very nice episode…..
    Hats off to your imagination skills…….
    Keep up the good work….eagerly waiting for the next episode..
    BTW, the edited pic of Pari is very nice…..it is actually suiting her

    1. Kira

      Loved your views always , Thanks for motivation
      Bye
      Have a superb
      Day

  7. Aryan Bhattacharya

    Hi!! Kira di…. I like your story very much… From the 1st episode I am reading this… It’s awesome.. ?

  8. Aryan Bhattacharya

    And today’s was very nice ?

    1. Kira

      Thanks thanks thanks ,,,,
      Hope I could never make you upset
      Bye bye

  9. Firstly Happy Marathi Language Day to all Maharastrian and Marathas. The episode was amazing. The new pic of pari is also good. Now pari got prove against that minister I.e. those kidnapped girls. Now veer and pari can make minister arrest. you know what I wish to comment all ur episodes but I am very busy through out the day and at night I get too tried. So sorry for that. Dont get sad when u get few less comments but yet I am unable to motivate u.

    1. Kira

      No worries girl , Just follow your heart , And thanks for wishing me , You r my friend always …
      Bye shruti
      Y r also having ur exams right ???

  10. Sorry to disturb you .

    I just wanted to know when will we get our 72 episode.
    Waiting eagerly
    ☺☺

    1. Kira

      Thanks zain
      But sorry from my side , I’m framing next episode now , Will post it by tomorrow around 10 .
      Bye

  11. No my exams are not going. In fact my parents meeting was on 25.2.2018 only. But u know how school life is. …………….. school till 3.00 p.m. and then tutions, classes and home works. But it has that much fun and enjoyment also. And its are schools project week so little more busy . I am not good at explaining but yet I hope you understood my feelings.
    Bye
    Keep writing so that we can keep liking it.
    See u in next episode

    1. Kira

      Ya I understand , just keep smiling and find fun every moment . Best of luck for PTM

  12. Aryan Bhattacharya

    Thanks di for telling the time… I will wait for your fabulous story … ?

  13. LOVED it keep posting❤️❤️❤️

    1. Kira

      Thanks ???

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