DON’T NEED YOU – A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) EPISODE 67

DON’T NEED YOU

EPISODE 67

 

Amma opens the door and it was police .

Amma : Inspector !!!

Veer : Police .

Police comes in . Veer saws that Pari is terrified .

Veer : Pari go to your room .

Pari : But Veer .

Veer : Go I’ll handle .

Inspector : Are you Mr. Veer Mehta .

Veer : Yes I am .

Inspector : We’ve a arrest warrant for you .

Veer : Arrest warrant ??? why

Inspector : we’ve got to know that you have married Pari .

Veer : Yes I did .

Inspector : Didn’t you know that Pari is already married , And you saw that she is alone now , So forcefully you dragged her to wedding spot .

Veer : what’s it’s a rubbish man . I didn’t did anything against her wishes .

Inspector : Don’t try to be smart we’ve your pictures . See them .

He hands over him , Pictures from London , When The fake veer slapped Her , And how he picked her up for marriage .

Veer : Sir these are fraud photographs .

Inspector : That we’ll see in Jail . Call Pari we want to take her .

Veer : Aunt please call Her .

She goes .

Inspector : You molested her , And Propelled her , And don’t you know she isn’t divorced from first marriage yet .

Suddenly Amma shouts.

Inspector’s phone ringed .

Inspector : Okay Mr.Veer we’re giving you last chance , Just leave her , We’ve to go now . Bye .

Amma : Pari ( sharp and loud cry )

Veer rushed upstairs .

Veer : Aunt , What happened , Where’s Pari .

She pointed out .

Veer looks there .

And his heart stopped beating , Then .

Sorry friends for short episode , I’m bringing a new twist , Maybe leap , So I need some time for that . 

Waiting eagerly for comments , Please ???

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  1. Please don’t bring leap ,,,,,, already there’s a leap of 10 years in NAAMKARAN and the both are separate and now I don’t one way them to be separated . Your stories are awesome … Plz don’t bring leap …

  2. Please don’t show any kind of leap because there’s already I live in NAAMKARAN . We the fans don’t want to see any leap here or Pair Veer separated . I read this for first time yesterday and became it’s fan and honesty completed reading all episode es in a day ..
    Plz don’t bring leap.

  3. Please don’t show any kind of leap because there’s already I leap in NAAMKARAN . We the fans don’t want to see any leap here or Pair Veer separated . I read this for first time yesterday and became it’s fan and honestly completed reading all episodes in a day ..
    Plz don’t bring leap.

    1. Kira

      Thanks for your devotion to my ff
      I thought a lot , but ended up thinking about leap . There wouldn’t be long leap just 1 or 2 years after , A little cool episodes , They will meet again .

      Please please please don’t get upset and disappointed . Please . I’ll try to make it more good .

      Please reply if you are okay before I submit next episode .
      Thanks dear

      1. Plz don’t end up showing Veer and Pari separated for long time( just as it is showing in NAAMKARAN ){ They should be together } or Pari to have surrendered ?.
        Waiting for episode 68 .??
        But can you tell the release time of episode 68.??

      2. I hope whatever you are thinking will please us .
        But don’t show Tom and Jerry version as of its showing in NAAMKARAN Neel and Avni are unaware of their presence and so , we don’t want Pari and Veer to be unaware of their presence .
        They should be together , ….
        Best of luck for your next episode ??
        Making it amazing and lovable ??
        Thank you ??

  4. What! She isn’t divorced!!! Omggggg waiting for the next part. Post asap.

    1. Kira

      Thanks for your review .
      Bye
      Hope you have an amazing day

  5. It was amazing. I think that inspector is also corrupt like that of state government officer. I am very curious to know what happened to pari that veer heart stopped beating. He twist will be so nice that everyone heart will stop beating. One day u will give us heart attack through ur ff. Keep your efforts the same.

    1. Kira

      Thanks for your review .
      Keep reading your all support required .

  6. It’s a request don’t show Tom & Jerry version like NAAMKARAN .Neel and Avni are unaware of their presence so, we don’t Pari and Veer to be unaware of them ……?
    Best of luck for your next episode .??
    Make it damm interesting and loving ..
    Post asap .

    1. Kira

      Thanks very much , please don’t stop keep reading , commenting and ????
      Bye
      Good night

      1. Hey , Kira the story was amazing , but post asap by tomorrow morning and a long episode ……..
        Love your ff . And don’t give us heart attack with your episodes.
        I am addicted to it ..?
        ????????????????

    2. Kira

      Check next episode tomorrow maybe around 9 am or after 5 pm .

      1. Thanx Kira for time ..?

  7. Post asap it’s already 9 am.

    1. Kira

      Sorry I’ve to go out of town , Will cone back at 5 , So will post then .
      Very sorry , May be I could post around 1 .
      Bye

      1. Plz post by today .
        I can’t wait for the suspense .

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