DON’T NEED YOU – A LOVE STORY ( NAAMKARAN FAN FICTION) EPISODE 59

  DON’T NEED YOU 

       EPISODE 59

59

Pari : Wow breakfast is good over here .

Veer : Yah , So when are we leaving for London eye .

Pari : It opens at 11 , So till then we can do a little shopping okay .

Veer : Did you brought your Credit or debit card .

Pari : Nope I didn’t , I know you might have bought yours .

Veer : Okay then , Instead of shopping , Let’s go and do sight seeing .

Pari : How mean are you !!

Veer : You know I just read a joke . A person was asking someone to give him 20 rs/- for coffee .

Pari : okay then .

Veer : The person told him that coffee is of rs- 10, Why you need double  , He replied that his girlfriend was also with him . The man shouted you are so poor and you had a girlfriend. The begged replied , No sir , My girlfriend has made me Poor .

Pari : I was just joking , You took it so seriously , Go I don’t want to buy anything with you , I’ll go alone . Bye .

She stood up and goes out .

Veer : Pari , Pari , Wait , Was just breaking a joke . Pari !!!!

She sat inside the Taxi , With her Veer comes and sits .

Veer : Pari , Listen , It was just a prank .
Pari : You men know pranks only on women , Girlfriend and wives .

The driver was driving the car .

Driver : Sir my Wife also disturbs a lot , What should I do .

Veer : Please drive the car silently .

Pari : see every man is the same .

She was angry .They reached the shopping complex .

Veer : Paru , sweetu .

She goes and sits inside a ice cream parlour .

Veer bought her 20 flavors of ice cream .

He picked up and and she nod her head in NO . Then he sings a song (
Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaoon,, Ke Aarzoo Jagaoon ,,Agar Tum Kaho Main Koi,, Aisa Geet Gaoon Ke Aarzoo Jagaoon,, Agar Tum Kaho Tum Kaho
..)

Then he picks the last flavor , Peach , It was her favorite . She smiles and takes it .

Veer : Thank God , Now you smiled

Pari : So let’s go for shopping .

Veer : And what about the bill of these ice creams .

Pari : I don’t know .

They laughs and moves to shopping area .

Pari : Wow so many cute dresses here .

Veer : Look at shirts , I’ll look so dashing .

They were buying stuff .

Pari : Veer your choice of shirt is good , What about this dress .

Veer : Not that good . Try this one .

After a lot of shopping . They took a cab to London eye . They reached there and submitted their bags in lockers .

Pari : Oh my my see the biiiggg Ferris wheel .

Veer : You know it’s 443 feet tall .

Stay tuned , like & comment. coming soon crazy , romantic , thrilling episodes .

Hi friends I’m not getting a good response these days so I may may may close this Ff and start with new after a few weeks , I think so . But that’s just a prediction , I may or I may not . Soo byee….

 

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  1. Priyu

    This one is great! They are in London eye!! Great! And veer doesn’t like shopping ??? men are such. But it’s fun na. Yet it costs a lot of money of boys ? I accept. And veer was so lovely when he tried to be friend with pari again. And veer sang a song! Wow! Really lovely one .
    And what!!!!! You are going to close this ff ??????????????????????????????????????????? don’t.
    If you feel you aren’t getting a good response, it’s ok ? even I don’t like to continue my ffs without good response. Your choice. I will always remember your FF no matter what. I enjoyed every bit of your FF. ☺☺☺ you are a good talented writer and super genious in writing. ?????? good luck. Love you ???????

    1. Kira

      Actually what is !!! That I want to continue , But whenever I see dislikes and few likes then I get demotivated . But later I tell my heart that no don’t get demotivated , Keep on trying , never give up , I. Trying my best all the time . And now I think I should change my mindset I’m going to end story even if there is few likes and many dislikes . I know I have friends like you , Who encourage me . So I am not going to give up .

      Well thanks Pari and all my gr8 dosto …

      1. Kira

        Will end when its completed

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