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Diwali ne mera diwala hi nikal diya (kaanchi ts)

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Hello guys. I think most of u must be busy in diwali preparation. I’m too busy, ☺.
So I thought to write this as diwali preparations are going on. I hope u all will enjoy while reading. This will be a two shot story.
Pls do ignore grammatical mistakes. ☺

Are bhai sab diwali ki tyarriya kar rhe h to kya humare saanchi or kabir nhi karenge kya. So let’s see How’s their preparation going on.

Kabir is sleeping peacefully in his room.
Suddenly he heard saanchi’s screaming.

S – kabir pls wake up. My labor pain has started 😭😭 , otherwise I will die right now with pain.

(saanchi is pregnant nd her labor pain can start anytime.)

K – saanchi kuch to naya karo, from last 4 days u r using this trick only to wake me.
Just give me 5 minutes more, after that I will wake up pakka.
S – ok u r not going to get up, fyn I’m going to do the work, u just sleep like kumbhkaran.
Kabir woke up immediately.
K – no saanchi u r not going to do anything. I’m coming my jaan.
S – ok come soon I’m waiting
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Kabir comes down and saw saanchi sitting on a sofa caressing her big tummy.
Kabir came to her ,gave kiss on her forehead.
K – I’m sorry darling, mai tumhe bohot pareshan krta hoon na.
S – darling ke golu, chalo fatafat kaam pe lag jao.
K – ab kaisa kaam, saari saaf safai to nokaro ne kar diya.
S – to phir chite hue samano ko kon sajayega.
K – saanchi mai phir kabhi kar doonga na.
S – tum kar rhe ho ya mai karu.
K – no no I will do anything for u .

( He helped saanchi to get up nd they headed towards their room.)

Kabir started arranging the things nd saanchi was seeing new offers on flipcart.

S – kabir kabir .
K – what happened saanchi, he got frightened.
S – come here fast, see this teddy bear nd these toys, so cute. Our baby will surely like her mama’s choice.
K – oh god, saanchi first of all don’t scream like this nd secondly how many toys u will buy, u have already decorated one big room with toys.
S – I’m not going to listen, I will buy it.
K – ya ya ofcorse , till now have u ever listened to me, then how will u today do so.
S – what do mean. She got angry. 😡
K – nothing dear u continue ur shopping nd I will continue my work.

Both were busy in their work. Then kabir got some old photos of their’s.

K – hey saanchi, see our photos. We were so cute na in college days.
S – so what I’m cute today also unlike u.
K – ok see this, our first date photos.
S – huh that was so horrible. My first nd last date.
K – Acha see this, when u accepted my love proposal .
S – ya that was the biggest mistake of my life.
Kabir makes a puppy face 😲
K – ok see our wedding day photos.
S – that was the worst day of my life.
Finally kabir was irritated with her continous taunts.😠😠
K – what is this saanchi, why r u scolding me.
S – to or kya bolu, humari is pagli writer ne readers ko kaha h ki inhe padhne me maza aayega. Ab mai tumhe sunaungi nhi to phir ye readers comments dena to door ki baat h bich me hi padhna chod denge.
K – milne do kabhi us priyanshi ki to band baza doonga.
S – ab tum apna kaam jldi se karo wrna mai tmhara pakka band baza doongi.
Kabir continues his work.
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It was evening.
Saanchi room kitna ganda ho gya h na.
Why don’t u clean it. Go bring the broom nd start cleaning.
K – saanchi abhi adhe ghante bhi nhi hue h mujhe baithe or tum phir kaam bol rhi ho.😟😟
S – u r doing or shall I do myself.
K – no no I’m doing.
He brought the broom, bucket filled with water nd a mop nd started doing cleaning.
(Imagine kabir doing all these things😂😂)

When the work was done he went to saanchi nd said ho gya ab or kaam mujhse to naa ho payega.
S – chill, ab or kaam nhi bolungi. Kya karu diwali aa rhi h na. Mujhse gandgi bilkul bardaast nhi hoti.
K – iss diwali ki to . Is diwali ne to mera diwala hi nikal diya.
S – mai tumhe bohot pareshan krti hoon na.
K – nhi meri maa , bhala kabhi tum mujhe kaise pareshaan kar skti ho.
Saanchi glared him.
K – mera mtlb mere hone wale bachche ki maa.
Saanchi started laughing.😂
Kabir got a sign of relief.

S – tum mujhse itna darte ho. Chalo ab fatafat dinner karte h mujhe badi bhook lag rhi h.

Nd they both went down for their dinner.

So guys kaisa laga. PLS DO LEAVE COMMENTS. Thank u all for ur continous love and support. Ab iska agla or last shot diwali ke ek din pehle yani 18th ko post hoga.
Till then u also continue with ur preparations.
A big hug to all my friends.
🎆” HAPPY AND SAFE DIWALI “🎇 in advance
Bye nd take care.☺

32 Comments
  1. Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u dear☺☺

  2. So so beautiful story…….sanchi is rocked and kabir is shocked…….so do nice and awesome and amazing story yaar

    1. Priyanshipp

      Yaa saanchi rocked nd kabir shocked 😂😂😂 Thank u dear.

  3. I just loved it priyu……i m eagerly waiting 4 next one…….

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thanks dear. Yup u have to wait only till 17. 😊😊

  4. Riyarocks

    Priyanshi……….I really really feel pity on kabir….awwwww…………….sanchi ne uska kya haal banadia;P……..soooooooo hilarious yaar…………..just enjoyed this a lot………diwali ka iss se achha gift aur kya ho sakta hai(ek writer se)……..too good dear……ek badi si jaadu ki jhappi for u…….& luv u dherrrrr saara………..

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u dear. Pehle mujhe aaskat aa rhi thi phir maine socha ki late ho jaungi to fatafat tum log ke liye likh diya. Afterall tumlog ne hume bohot entertain kiya h ab humari baari 😂😂tumhe bhi ek badi sis jaadu ki jhappi or luv u loads 😙😙😙

  5. Niyaaa

    U know what priyanshi sanchi ne to sach me kabir ki band baja di nd jab usne usse maa bola nd then change the statement matlab mere hone wale bchche ki maa us time mujhe bhi laga kabir beta bach gaya nhi to deshera to gaya per abhi tujhe ravan banakar phunk degi..hehe… Hilarious nd sanchi kya emotional attyachar kar rahi h bechare kabir per sara kaam uper se farmaish ki dukaan.. Mujhse to kabir ko mop lagate time imagine karne k naam per hi hasi aa rahi thi.. Per haan show me jab kabir ne khana banaya us se imagine karne me aasani mili.. Super duper hilarious os yaar.. I know u post nxt on 17 so till than tc lovv u bye nd gud ni8 and last happy diwali to u too be safe

    1. Priyanshipp

      Hahaha thank u dear. Agar saare sdch actors humare ff padhne lag jaye to i think wo shooting chod ke din bhar humare ffs padhenge.😂😂 dear 17 nhi 18th ko yani ki choti diwali ke din. I will give you all a big surprise nd reveal a secret of mine. Till then wait and continue ur preparations. Good night and take care😙😙😙

  6. Khamoshi

    Happy diwali in advamce dear… it was hilarious article dear.. mazaaa aa gaya kabir ki band bajte dekh.. Sanchi kitni aalsi hai..bichare ko emotional black mail karti hai.. FLIPKART zindabdad..
    Lots of love Priyanshi..and a teddy hug to u (By Flipkart for a free promotion😉😂)

    1. Priyanshipp

      Hahaha bichari saanchi bhi kya kare, full tym h uska 😂😂😂 or kabir ki to band bazane me mujhe bada maza aata h😂😂 lot of love back dear😙😙😙

  7. Niyaaa

    Nd ek or baat ek to title se hi mujhe samajh aa gay tha uper se kabir ki pic dekhte hi meri hasi shuru ho gayi ki haan kabir ka diwala nikalne wala h,,… Haha..bye warna m yun hi chalu rahungi apni bakbak k sath

    1. Priyanshipp

      Hahaha dear jab mai ise type kar rhi tbhi soch liya tha ki cover pic me ise hi daalungi. M very happy u liked it . Or haan agli baar apni bak bak zaari rakhna kyuki mujhe bhi bak bak karna pasand h.
      Bye Take care 😙😙

  8. Yaashi23

    Superb priyanshi,maza aa gaya!! Ekdum chik chik boom performance!!!!

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u so much dear. 😙😙

  9. Dhruti

    superb and comedy also……..i can’t imagine kabir like this……he he he……..koi dava de do pet me has has ke dard ho raha he!!! but it was so comedy that i started laugh loudly and mumma-bhai stare me like…….and both gave me a dead glare till i was not stop…………he he he !!! but it was so amazing i love it……………….love you………happy diwali in advance……..tc………..

    1. Priyanshipp

      Hahaha 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂mujhe to tumlog ke comments padne ke baad has has kar pet me dard ho rha h😂😂 Thank u so much. Tc😙😙

  10. Priyu….main kabir ki band na baja dungi wo bi dobara se agar usne meri cute sis ko kuch kaha….Sanchi is hillarious…..Poor Kabir…awww, how much caring…hahaa…..i laughed a lot…..lots of love & a very big hug to u sweetie.

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thanks dear nd thank u again koi h mujhe us khadoos kk se bachche ke liye😂😂😂 lol to u too , take care. 😙😙

  11. Abhilasha

    Poor kabir sach me diwala nikal dia uska 😂😂😂😂😂😂…but u bring very big wali smile to us …loved it and yupp diwali preparations are on height!!!!

    1. Priyanshipp

      Hahaha thank u dear M so so so happy after reading ur comments. Keep laughing.😂 coz laughter is the best medicine. 😙😙

  12. RuCh23

    😂😂😂 ha ha ha…!!! Priyu (is it ok if I call you that?) totally awesome dear. I truly imagined Kabir doing all these stuff 😂😂😂 if VS got to know what TU writers make him do, he’ll definitely do suicide 😂😂😂

    1. Priyanshipp

      Ya u can call me priyu or pagli whatever u like. Thanku dear.
      I hope wo humare articles padhe or suicide kar le or phir hum tu writers honge sdch ke new writers nd directors 😂😂😂.

  13. Ruhanika188

    Aww this was so cute. I loved this.

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u dear. ☺☺take care.

  14. It was tooooo funny…I was laughing hard whole…Bechara Kabir,,thoda rahem karo uspar koi…hehe
    update soon…

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thanks dear. I’m happy ki meri mehnat bekar nhi gyi. Mai tumlog ko hasane me kaamyab rhi😂😂😂take care.

  15. Amazing…. Very funny

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u so much dear. ☺☺

  16. Jessicca

    Priyoooo it was mind blowing… Loved it to the core.. And the cover pic and title… Hhahah amazing .. Truly fantastic

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u dear. M glad u liked it ☺, 😙😙lol

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