The distance to confession…..An IB and DBO ff….. (Part 7)

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hii frndzz….i am sreenandana back with my ff…..its my last week in telly updates.…..express ur views with ur comments…..actually i decided 2 end this ff soon……i will post next update asap…..lets start with d recap and d link 2 previous episode…..and also there z a note….plz read it…

Link 2 previous episode:
Part 6

Recap:gauri becomes chulbul….anika and saumya came 2 know about gaukara marriage……

NOTE:PLZ….I KINDLY REQUEST U 2 READ THIS….SHIVRU CAME 2 KNOW ABOUT GAUKARA MARRIAGE….OM TOLD THEM ABOUT THEIR MARRIAGE TOO…..FRNDZZ….I AM ADDING ISHANA CHARACTER….SHE Z OM’S BESTIE….SHE Z A PRIVATE DETACTIVE….HOPE U ALL LIKE IT…

So d present episode:

In Oberoi mansion:

Om was waiting 4 d arrival of gauri as a guy…he was eager 2 see how gauri looks….while thinking about gauri he sees svetlana comming out of her room shouting @ some1….so he hides 2 listen their talks….he understands that se was scolding some1…

Svetlana-how dare u????how will it happen???u know how important d file zz….how could u say that d files r lost???

Os-……………………

Svetlana-okay…..wait i am comming….

Saying this she goes…..om feels something fishy so he decides 2 hire a private detective 2 follow her….so he call ishana…..

On call:

Om-hello ishana…

Ishana-how r u om???

Om-ishu….i need ur help…

Ishana-om u just say it….

Om-ishu….svetlana z going 2 meet some1….so plz follow her….u should get all d information about d person whom she z going 2 meet and their relation…

Ishana-okay om…i will do it…bye..

Om-bye….

He cuts d call….Rudr comes 2 him…

Rudr-o….plz dont beat me…..we both accidently told bhabhi and saumya about ur marriage with gauri bhabhi….

Om-what….but….what was their reaction???

Rudr-both scolded 3 of us but later became calm….

Om-its okay…

but suddenly they both sees dadi, shakti and pinky going somewhere…. they both ets confused as it seems they r going out 4 some days….they stops seeing them

Rudr-guyz….r u going out??

Dadi-Rudr….2morrowmy friend’s grand daughter’s mariiage and day after tomorrow z her reception….so she requested me 2 come along with my familt atleast a day before…..

Rudr-okay dadi…when will u all come back??

Dadi-maybe day after tomorrow or its next day…

Om-okay dadi….but where z maa???

Dadi-oh!!!!i forgot…

Pinky-jethaniji went 2 her mum’s house…

Shakty-and bhai saab has some business tour so he will come back after 3 or 4 days…

Dadi-so no elder’s r here….

Pinky-so don’t do any mischief….okay???

Om-okay choti maa….

3 all them gets into d car and goes…..suddenly rudr gets a call and goes…now our chulbul came there in an auto….seeing his lady love om gets extremely happy….he goes and hugs her….she was about 2 enter d house but she stops sudddenly….

Om-what happened???

Gauri-om….i am first time in my sasural and how can i enter without doing d rituals???

Om-so thats d problem….wait and watch…

Saying this he goes inside d house….and he comes back with a plate with vermilion mixed with water and kalsh…..he brings a white cloth and places it on d floor and keeps d kumkum plate near it….he keeps d kalash near d door….she slowly hits d kalash and steps inside d kumkum plate and next steps on d white cloth….she hugs om and thanks him….he kisses on her cheeks….gauri blushes….

But 4 people were shocked 2 see it…they were non other than rudr, saumya, anika and prinku….they screams….hearing d scream ahivvay comes down along with ranveer…..they all r shocked 2 see om and chulbul……they starts 2 question them…

Om-guyzz….i….i mean we….

Shivaay-om….what is this???i mean kumkum plate and kalash….and this boy….

Ranveer-om who z he???

Rudr(naughtily)-o…i never thought u r so cheap….how can u romance with a guy when u have a wife???poor gauri bhabhi….she will never think that her husband will romance with some1 else that too a guy…..(acts 2 cry and makes a cry baby face…)

Priveer-wife???means om/bhaiyya z married already???

Om stares rudr in a way that i will kill u rudr….rudr gets scared and hides behind shivaay….ranveer starts 2 ask him about gauri….and at last he says them about their marriage and request that none must know about it than they 8…..

Anika-cheapde…..now say who z this????

Om-bhabhi…..i am not cheap….i am supposed 2 romance with my wife….isn’t it???

Saumya-haam but….he z not ur wife….i think he z d person hired by svetlana….

Om-guys….first we will go to my room….then i will say everything…..now plz come…..

They all goes 2 om’s room….i mean gaukara’s room…..om closes d door…

Om-guys….this z not a guy…..she z a girl…

All-what???

Om-she z gauri….

Saying this he removes her wig and specs….shivru r shockedc 2 see her..

Shivru-u???

Saumya-u know her???

Rudr-haan….she z d girl who scolded bhaiyya after anika bhabhi….

Om explains everything 2 d youngsters….

Precap-party time….svetlana exposed….

So guyzzz…..enough 4 2 day…

by sreenandana…..

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34 Comments
  1. Fantastic awesome

    1. Shubham maheshwari

      Om ko pta chal gya h ky chulbul he gauri h.. or usse gussa ni aata h ky fir…

      1. Sreenandana.suresh

        actually om asked gauri 2 become a guy…

  2. Very nice

  3. Is it true?

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      sorry….i didn’t understand ur question….thank u 4 reading….

  4. AWESOME EXCELENT SUPERB?????

  5. Shreyanvi

    Amazzinggg.. .post next one soon..

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      thank u so much….

  6. Ahsana98

    Hai sree it was an long and fantastic episode my dear sister. Nee episode kalaki ??? .i like the concept of introducing ishana as om’s bestie and an private investigator . I miss ishkara ‘s Jody in IB But still I like rikara very much. so I’m happy that you introduced ishana as a positive character not a con girl. I think you ending this ff very soon.
    Idu ninde TU vile last week ennalle paranjadu. Eni nee terichu varille? Njan nala yum kodiye TU vil kanolu adinu shesham June last agumbozhe terichu varikayullu. Njan ninneyum ninde ff neyum oru padu Miss cheyum.Ninaku pattumenkil nee ninde ff post cheyumbol eniku adinde link send cheydu tarane .Njan TU yil terichu vannittu Vatican. pinne njan ninde mesge kandayirunnu. njan adinu reply cheydittund. Ninde chechi yude Peru enta sreelakshmi suresh ennano? njan chumma chodichada.

    1. Ahsana98

      *vayikam
      pinne innate episode eniku orupadu ishttapettu. om gaury ude grahapravesh cheyunna scene ee episode ile best part ayirunnu. Avsanam shivru tericharunju avar ravile kandu muttiya penkutti gaury ayirunnu. ankane ella younger ‘sum tericharinju omndeyum gaury ude yum marriage. Eni elders ariyunna scene enkane yayirikum. ninaku pattumenkil innu tanne next part update cheyane.

      1. Sreenandana.suresh

        i am not so sure…..but i will try…inn enthayaalum swabhiman ff post cheyyum….hope u like it….and thanks chechi…

    2. Sreenandana.suresh

      thanks chechi….enikkum ishkara yaayirunnu ishtam…i am also missing saumya….rumya z soo sweet…enikk class thudangunnathinu munp ith theerkum…..i will miss u chechi…ente chechiyude peru sandra eena…cek/ college of engineering kallopara yil padikkuvaa….

  7. Arthi

    I love this version of Omkara and chulbuls grahpravesh was superb and awesome dr couldn’t control my laughter was superb….

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      thanku so much didi….i just wrote it as a fun….i am so happy that u liked it…

  8. Verna

    Wow.. Om and Gauri romance.. awesome fantastic.. I loved the episode today

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      thanku so much didi….i am a silent reader of ur ff….i love it….

  9. Trolls.Nets

    I hope u don’t mind me calling u sis. Nd don’t worry and ignore this stupid jealous people we are always there to support u ?

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      thank u so much….i like 2 become a sis…..so hloo didi….tnq so much 4 supporting me and my ff….

    2. Trolls.Nets

      Dosti ka pehla rule, no thank u nd no sry nd I am not elder than u. I am just 13 so call me Neeti, Neetu, Nets, Neeto or anything u want to call me.?

      1. Sreenandana.suresh

        yaa….hloo neetu….

  10. Rasika

    Nice

  11. Niriha

    Awesome

  12. hey ..sweet update rudra wala scene was sooo cute liked it keep going waiting for the next part …today I read all part of ur ff…end comentig on this one part…Cary on dear

    1. Sreenandana.suresh

      thank u so much dear….

  13. Alekhika20

    Fab updt

  14. Anu16

    Awesome n funny….post soon

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