MY DISASTER DAUGHTER #KANCHI OS PART 3 LAST PART

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Hello guys..
So in first part-kanchi at home
2nd part-kanchi at her school
And now thirt part- kanchi at sdch. And lots of drama…
Sanchi was working in kitchen .kanchi came running toward her and stare her lovingly..
“Stop staring her kanchi,its my job ” kabir came from behind and lift her up in his arms and start playing with her…she giggled in response.

“So what about ur acting career kanchu?” Sanchi asked her baby doll and kabir gulped his saliva remembering about yesterdays scenario at princi’s cabin..
“Ummm,mumma i think acting is not my cup of tea..now i m thinking to be doctor n and will work in SDCH in future” kanchi said looking at kabir..

“Lag gayi sdch ki total vaat!!!!” Kabir said to himself but his badluck! His baby doll listened him And start punching his chest with her small fist…
“Ok ok sorry ,pls forgive me” he said holding his ear with one hand.
“No u need punishment for this.two days record room duty and no staring my mumma” she said innocently
Sanchi chuckled at her demands

” bilkul apne baap pe gayi he” she thought..
“No no my kanchi,pls give me options” said kabir making puppy face.

Kanchi acted like deeply thinking for sometime and then shoot out
” ok ,then take me to sdch today.i want to see my future destination..”
“Ok.done” kabir said in a second but then fear ran down his spine…
“Kabir ,i think first option was better” said sanchi signing him good luck with thumb and making face expressions like she is now having pity on her poor husband..
Scene : kabir and kanchi in hospital

Time: super dangerous for kabir..
Kabir entered in sdch .kanchi was holding his hand with her little hand and she was very happy seeing sdch..
Peoples were watching them and some of them told kabir that he has very cute daughter…
Ria sees this and fumed with anger.she wanted to insult sanchi anyhow and failed everytime .
Now she decided to make kanchi feel bad somehow.
Kabir makes kanchi sit in his office and instruct her.

Kabir: kanchu, mere aane tak kahi mat jana .jaoge??
Kanchi- bilkul nai papa.
Kabir- kisiko pareshan karoge?
Kanchi- bilkul nai papa.aapke aalava kisiko nai.
Kabir- masti karoge??
Kanchi-bilkul nai papa.
Kabir- mere saare instructions follow karoge??
Kanchi- bilkul nai papa

Kabir- what??
Kanchi- i mean yes yes .yes papa.. par kisine mujhe pareshaan kia to usko nahi chorungi.
“Pata nahi aaj kiska band bajega.” Kabir thought leaving the room.
“Bye papa.come back soon” she waved him as he left for long surgery..
He again come back and gives his phone to kanchi and ask her to call her mumma whenever she miss her.

Kanchi was alone in the office and obviously she was getting bored ,so she decided to outside.
She walked to the cafeteria where veer was sitting with isha and pragya.
Praveer were dating each other and there were no less than tom and jerry..
“Abe o,chup kar warna tera muh tod dungi” pragya gave veer tashan look.
” dekhlo isha,kya haalat bana di meri tumhari dabangg frnd ne” veer complained isha..
“Ishu anty……….” kanchi ran toward isha and hugged her tightly.
They did their girly talks for sometime and then kanchi asked isha about praveer fight.
” jinke beech jyada pyaar hota hai ,wo to fight karte rehte hai” veer provided kanchi with some knowledge.

“Ohhhh…sacchi kya???” She asked innocently.
And start thinking something deeply
“My mumma papa never fights each other ,atleast in front of me! That means they dont love each other.. πŸ™ .but phir main kaisi aayi world me?? And now if i want a brother then mumma papa should fight ” She thought seriously…
“Are, shonu ! Wanna eat something?” Pragya asked

” yes,but i dont want to eat something,i will have coffee” she said and ran toward the counter..
Pragya also ran behind her and they ordered their things..
Here,ria was also coming to counter and kanchi drop her cofee on ria by mistake..
” u idiot cant u see! Oh i m not surprised at all.u r nonsense and fool like ur mother” ria yelled on her purposely…and left smirking
Kanchi felt very bad at her statement and started crying rubbing her eyes..
Pragya somehow controlled her and take her to their table..

After sometime,
Kanchi was roaming in the hospital and listened dr.madhu and bala talking to each other.
Dr.madhu: where is ria.
dr bala: abhi abhi upar(upstair) gayi hai. She has some work for 2-3 hours..
Kanchi listened to them and run toward kabirs cabin.she grabbed his mobile and typed something in his mobile.. she smiled ..
“U shoulnd say bad things about my mumma , ria ki bacchi bhootni .now pay for this ”

After sometime,

Kabir was done with surgery and he left toward his office in hurry.
“I shouldnt left her alone there.” He thought .
Now he was really worried .for kanchi??? Wrong,for other peoples in hospital πŸ˜€
He was heading toward his office but suddenly hear some random voice..

There was crowd gathered and everyone was crying ..A
He saw Ria’s photo in the center of crowd and big garland hanged on it!!!
Veer: see kabir sir what happened! Meri pyari behna! Pls come back to us..if u didnr come back ,then ‘Gareebon ki super model award kisko milega?’ Pls come back..
Kabeer: shut up veer! And whatbis this drama.
He saw kanchi was also shading tears and then come forward

” i want to say something papa” she said.
“Ok” kabir.
Kanchi started in loud with loud voice.
“I m really sad that ria aunty left us.. becoz of her sudden exit,we are very sad. Wo kitni acchi thi.bina makeup k senior citizen lagti thi,but phir bhi hum unko bohot miss karenge.so pls close ur ey….” before she could say anything more kabir kept his palm on her mouth..
Dr.ria reaches the spot
and
And

And
Fainted…….
“Veer ,what is this drama?? And everyone go back to ur duties!!” Kabir yelled at top of his voice.
All peoples disappeared…
“Kya kabir sir?? U posted it on ur twitter account and now blasting on me?? ” veer said in surprise..

He showed him the twitter post which reads
“””#RIP Dr.ria
SDCH lost a sincere and beautiful doctor today.pls pray for her soul”””””
Kabir was shocked seeing the post and soon nurse told him that Dr.malhotra called him in his cabin.
He looked at kanchi helplessly and she gave him “I Dont Know Anything” Look….

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Next morning
Kanchi woke up due to some sounds.she get down from the bed slowly and walked toward the door..
She peeped outside and was happy to see sanchi fighting with kabir for calling ria beautiful ..
Kanchi smiled ….
Finally sanchi was done with her arguments and left on anger…
Kanchi run toward kabir and hugged kabir tightly.
“Oh my disaster ,see what u did!!” Kabir said tickling her..
‘Sholly sholly papa,aaj se no panga with anyone.promise!” She replied giggling hard..
“See ,mumma angry ho gaye na” said kabir.

” hmmm,but papa aap ye aatankwadi kaha se laaye ho?!!!” She asked him and they both burst out into laughter..
‘Kanchi,keep ur promise pls” he said..
She just smiled at him..

And remembered herself making a love letter for kabir with ria’s name and keeping it in his pocket 5 minutes ago ,when she hugged him.
And thus inviting new ‘Musibat’ for him..
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2 years latter
5 month old sabir was crying for some reason..
Kabir and sanchi were not at home and kusum was busy somewhere..
Kanchi came running toward him and tried her best to stop his cry but no use.
Finally she was at peak of irritation

“Oye ,chup ho jaa.u came to this world only becoz of me. Agar tu chup nai hoyega to main mom dad ka fight end kar dungi aur tu disappear ho jayega” she said faking anger.
Sabir quickly stopped crying and thought

” hey bhagwan,mujhe kis disaster ka bhai bana dia!!!!!!”

END—-

EPILOUGE
“HIII SWEET DI’s ,

Mujhe nai pehchana???
Mai hu kanchi… i want to thank all of u for loving me so much . And riya di,u pulled my cheeks last time.now they r hurting sho much.But i luv u…
Thanx to all di and auntys( hee hee)
Abhilasha di,trisha di,niyaa di,khamoshi di asnitai,anee di,alia di,neha di, amna di,palak di anuradha di and all others .sholly if i forgot someone .i m too small to remember all the names..
Last but not least,i luv u all guys and i will miss u alot.
Pls keep loving my mumma and papa.and yes in serial my papa is going to propose my mumma tomorrow,so wish him gud luck.

To main chalati hu,dua me yaad rakhna…
Bye bye …

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38 Comments
  1. Ooo so cute

    1. Yaashi23

      Thank u dear….

  2. OMG OMG wat was this sweetie it’s mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod ravishing outstanding marvelous fabulous and beyond beyond beyond everything. Love you loads sweetie

    1. Yaashi23

      Ohh ,thank u ashu for such beautiful comment dear.luv u tooo

  3. So so beautiful episode

    1. Yaashi23

      Thanx for comment dear…

  4. Anonymousaa

    Oh my god ye kya thaa yaar.Completely hilarious.Now I am not going to mention my favourite lines coz coz is se toh tumhari in saare cutie cutie funny lafzon ki insult hogi na kyun ki mai saare shot to copy paste karwa nahi sakti.I loved each and every scenes.Riyaki kya vaat lagadi Kanchi ne and the last scene was extremely supppperb.
    Keep going dear.Hoping to see u soon with more posts like this.

    1. Yaashi23

      Omg. Lots of thanks dear. Very very happy that u loved it.. ur comment made my day yaar. But can i know ur real name? It will be easy then. I mean we are members of kanchi family now and not strangers so, hope u dont mind .

      1. Anonymousaa

        Of course I would not mind.
        My name is Bibechana.I am from Pokhara,Nepal. I am a 11th standard Science student.
        I do feel we r no more strangers now after all itni gehri dosti jo hogayi hai.

  5. Amazing episode…. I couldn’t stop laughing…. And the last part was just amazing……. Loved it very much

    1. Yaashi23

      Thank u amnaa .. happy that u liked it.. thanx for supporting dear.

  6. Niyaaa

    Ooo my cute disaster kaash tum jaldi se show me aa jau m tumhara beshabri se intzaar kar rahi hun ye tumhari didu ki ankhein tarash gayi h tumhe dekhne k liye nd all the best for ur mumma and papa kaash sach ho jayein koi jadu chal jayein nd kanchi(kabir sanchi pair up ) ek ho jayein nd my sweety i lovv ur papa a lots per sweety ria ki tarah mera poster mat chipka dena abhi meri umar kya hui h abhi to tumhare chote se bhai ko bhi dekhna h… Hehehe… Sorry yashi kafi bakwas kar li ab point pe i mean os pe aati hun kya kahun seriously kuch nahi bachcha kehne k liye beyond the word dear awsome spellbound jhakkas nd etc etc kash cvs faltu k triangle se bettter ye kanchi track chala de wo bhi super duper hit ho jayega…lovvv u dear nd plzzz mujhe or pdhna h so don’t end it post nxt part of it m isse kabhi nahi chodna chahti … Sorry again for a long boring commnt gud bye tc stay safe lovvv u dher sara

    1. Yaashi23

      Omg!!! Yaar niyaa tumne to rula hi dia (just kidding).. itni khushi mujhe aaj tak kabhi nahi hui and it is not bakwas at all. Tumhara comment padh k to dil garden garden ho gaya .. and also hope kabir sanchi saath ho jayye. Luv u loads…β™‘β™‘β™‘β™‘

  7. Riyarocks

    omg omg omg……….yaashi………..tum toh chha gayi………..kya plot tha!!!!!!!! speechless…………. kya kahoon yaar…….tune toh meri bolti band kardi…….”kitna pyaara writer tujhe rab ne banaya…jee kare tere updates padhti rahoon”………haha………luv u loads sweetie………&&& meri kanchi ke liye, ek teddy hug & lots of kisses……..haha…….

    1. Yaashi23

      Thank u priyanka dear.. thanks again for ur support … third thanx for the song ,its lovely ..amazing. aur tumhare hugs and kisses kanchi tak pohocha dungi. Luv u tooooooooo

  8. Dhruti

    yashu…. so cute dear i really love you for this ff ………….and a teddy hug for you and thanks for laughing me …………dear what i say about your ff it was so cute and innocent ff specially kanchi and kabir bonding i love their bonding ……….i am not mentioning my favourite lines because your whole ff is my favourite ff forever in my life………i love each and every scene specially last wala scene kanchu ne bola or uska bhai ek dam chup(this last pera was my favourite one) and ria ki kya band bajai he kanchu ne!!! maja aa gaya……keep writing….come back with the next one like this type ff…..love you……….bye………….tc……

    1. Yaashi23

      Thank u Soooooo much for bringing wide smile on my face with such a heartwarming comment dear…luv u toooo. Ur comments are so nice dear ,why dont u start ur own writings. Just a suggestion πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ :). I would love to read something from u

      1. Dhruti

        writing is not my cup of tea and my entrance will starts soon so i’ll busy till jan 29,2018 so can’t writing i just focus on studies……………. i just refresh myself while reading your ffs……….thats all…………..but thanks for suggestion……..i think in future……………love you …….good morning……….i’m sharing vm on kanchi just listen it was so nice here the link :https://youtu.be/gcctTfDxoag……………………you love it………….this vm made by Iqra Gauher….just hear once when you free………

  9. Khamoshi

    Yaashi dear it was so cute yaar.m all 3 episodes were amazing and hilarious.. kash unki sachme aisi disaster cum entertaining beti hoti…TRP majn no.1 hote.
    Amazingggg and mind blowing idea..it was out of the box idea. Amazing no words are left to appreciate ur writing dear..

    1. Yaashi23

      Thanx mitali .. ur words really means alot to me..i feel very special to get compliment from such a talented writer like you… love ur ff and u tooo

      1. Khamoshi

        You like my ff is a honour for me..bcoz i m too ur fan.. u r such a gr8 writer.. tum jaise sabko hasa sakhti ho..vaise har koi nahi kar paata.. lots of love and respect to u dear.

  10. Moonlight25

    Dear…i just loved the OS…soory for for not commenting on the previous part…but all were really cute and awesome…i just loved it….love you loads…😘😘❀❀ and come up with another OS dear…i am waiting

    1. Yaashi23

      Pehli baat to ye hai ki msin tumhari gan nahi AC hoo,dusri baat i love ur os. Tisri baar thanx for commenting and last baat its ok dea. Even i m silent reader of many stories and cant comment on them becoz of my busy schedule,so no need of sorry .. luv u

  11. Trisha139

    Hey hey no aunties pls
    I am just a little sweet girl hehe πŸ˜‚ sorry for disturbance but aunties was seriously tooo much πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Nd sweetie r episode was rocking jhakkaass I mean Kha se lati ho aesw ideas ! Just too good

    1. Yaashi23

      Thanx trishu… glad u liked it…luv uu

  12. Wowwwwww yr….its toooooo gd…I enjoyed a lot to read…keep writing such amazing OS…

    1. Yaashi23

      Thank u sanju….

  13. Ohhhhhh God its amazing. Samir diliogue was amazing

    1. Yaashi23

      Thank u alia dear

  14. wow wow wow amazing dear….keep posting such stories

    1. Yaashi23

      Thank u dear

  15. nice one

  16. Yaashi,,dear it was most fntstic,,mindblwing,,outstngding epsd.. I am totally speechless.. Like,,dhamakadr epsd.. Plz plz plz,,dn’t stop it.. Just supeeeeeeer epsd.. Lv u dear.. :-]

  17. Fantastic epsd.. Please,,dn’t stop it…ur silent readr..

  18. Neha7873

    OMG ! I can’t figure out what to say ! You have made me speechless .It’s amazing.please keep posting and update something new soon. Love you ..

  19. Awww sooo cutee πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜

  20. Abhilasha

    Can’t stop smiling whole time……its one of the top most best story I have ever read and my top most favourite too….loved it solo much …speechless……aide hi stories likhte rhna dear ….best thing my headacge flew on reading this!! Love uh lots!!

  21. Jessicca

    Awww… This was super cute… Kaanchi and her masti❀❀❀… Can’t stop smiling… Loved it

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