DIL SE DIL KA RISHTA JOODA (One Shot OS)

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DIL SE DIL KA RISHTA JOODA

Life is like an Ocean….It can be calm or still, & rough or rigid, but in the end, it’s always Beautiful….& Love is like water….It always finds a way to heart, healing the wounds and filling the gaps. Sooner or later, all the colours of different personalities get mixed in water, just like all the colours get mixed in water…..

First of all, a biiiiiiiig waala thanks & jaadu ki jhappi to Swetha, Kanchi fan(sorry I don’t know your name), Shabnam, Niyaa, Dhruti, Ishi, Vrushti, Anu, Sanyu, Anee, Maha, Sanu, Divya, Dhruvi, Sanjana, Sanveer, Neha, Amnaa, Priyanshi, Ziya, Sayali, Riru, Mitali, Bibechna, Niyati…. for commenting on my previous OS….So, since Niyaa, Dhruti, Vrushti, Anu, Sanyu, Dhruvi, Priyanshi, Bibechna gave me order;P…to write an OS on Kanchi as my punishment;)..hehe…..so here I’m….back with another OS….I just hope that you all will like this plot….Enough of my chattering….So, let’s get started….

Kabir & Sanchi are happily married to each other for 2yrs….But as per saying, nothing in this world is permanent, nothing lasts forever……& this was true…. a storm came into their life & took away everything with it, their love, their happiness & most importantly, the Trust, which was the base of their relationship…..Sanchi’s true identity was revealed…& all thanks to Anand Malhotra who made the situation even worse…he had been looking for a chance all this while to get Sanchi out of SDCH & out of kabir’s life….He made Kabir believe that Sunil Mishra did illegal work in the hospital, while he was trying to stop him…..Inorder to save himself from defamation, Sunil did suicide & from that time Jaya & Sanchi are after Anand inorder to take revenge….

Sanchi tried to explain Kabir, but all her attempts went in vain…..”Just leave!!!!”, said Kabir in a loud tone…..(Sanchi was shocked…..even Kusum tried to stop Kabir, but all in vain)…..”Didn’t you hear….I said, just leave my house right now”…..Sanchi leaves Kapoor Mansion sobbing….Kabir went back to his room….He broke everything around him….His knees gave up & he fell on the floor…crying…he felt as if a shard of glass had got into him & it was hurting him, every passing second…

Kabir: Why did you do this to me? Is this the result of loving you? Why did you break my heart, my trust? I didn’t believe in love but then you entered my life and cultivated the trust in my heart….for you….for love…..You were selfish…all you cared about was your revenge….you did not care about me and my feelings…you played with my feelings….it was all a game for you, you were different or so I thought. No!!! I was wrong…I had never been so wrong in my life….you pretended to love me, care for me but it was all fake…to once I loved you, now I wish to hate you…Alas! I can’t even hate you Sanchi….he leaned on the wall and something pricked into his hand, blood oozing out of his hand but he didn’t care…. “It’s nothing compared to the pain you gave me”…said Kabir…

Time skip…
Suddenly, there was a sound of the door opening…Kabir turned back to find Kusum…she was looking all around the room in horror…then he noticed, his room was messed up….
Kabir: Look maa, what Sanchi has made me….& this room clearly depicts how messed up my life has turned out into right now…& he hugs Kusum….Kusum consoles Kabir….she made him sit with his head on her lap & Kusum caressing his hair….

Kusum: Kabir, do you trust me???…”of course maa…what kind of question was that”,said Kabir….
Kusum: Then for my sake, plz try to find out the truth yourself for once…

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Kabir: But maa, why would Anand Sir lie to us??? What profit he’ll get by insulting & defaming Sanchi??? & Sanchi…you know naa how much I loved her…If she was not at fault, she could have revealed about herself, her secret atleast in front of me..2 long yrs…its not a short span of time….But she didn’t do anything….After all this, how can I still believe her???
Kusum: But Kabir, my heart is not ready to accept the fact that Sanchi could do anything wrong…..So, for my sake, plz Kabir…try to find all the truth behind this….

Kabir: Ok maa….I’ll do as you say….But it’s just for you….ok….Kusum nodded happily…
So the next day, Kabir called for Ishgya to find out the entire truth….They revealed all the things to Kabir, right from Sanchi getting selected as intern in SDCH….Anand knowingly removing her name from intern list….Sunil’s murder mystery…& all….Initially Kabir didn’t believe, but on investigating everything, he found out that the real culprit was none other than Anand…..

He made plans inorder to expose Anand with the help of Ishgya & Veer & finally succeeded in sending Anand to jail…..yippee!!!!!!….they gave a hi-five to each other….(guys, since it’s an os so, can’t write this elaborately….sorry for that…)…..Now Kabir rushed to Sanchi….off course, apne roothi hui biwi ko manana bhi toh hai naa;)….& after a lot of efforts, finally Kanchi were together, Once Again…:)

Next day
Sanchi: Kabir…(her voice snapped him out of his thoughts) We need to untie the knots in our relations. It is impossible to move on until we make peace with our past. I don’t know why but you are behaving weirdly these days. You have been shutting me out. Please tell me, what is it? she took his hands in hers and looked into his eyes
Kabir: I know Sanchi, I’ve been shutting you out from past few days…It’s just….I…..can’t…..(he paused for a moment)…I want us to move ahead, but my guilt, it holds me back….

Sanchi(cups his face): Kabir, those things are past….We all make mistakes, even I did mistake, I should have revealed my identity to you before, agar bata deti toh baat itna zyaada nahi badhta…
Kabir: But Sanchi, my mistakes are unforgivable…

Sanchi: When I can forgive you, then why can’t you??Sins are not forgivable but mistakes are & you didn’t commit any sin….& now it’s enough….You stop your sorry waala drama or else…..
Kabir: Or else what Mrs.Sanchi Kabir Kapoor???(Kabir smiling naughtily)….
Sanchi: Nothing……& immediately hugged Kabir….& Kabir reciprocated & he engulfed her in a bone crushing hug & kissed her hairs lovingly….. (This moment was eternity…)…
Sanchi’s love for Kabir was like river, calm and quiet. His live for her was like an ocean. There were strong waves of emotions. That may create differences but that’s what it’s all about, learning to face it together…..She was calm but he was fierce and tough. She was thoughtful and cautious, he was impulsive….. They were opposites yet madly in love…..

THE END

So guys….how was it??? I hope that you would have liked this….fingers crossed…plz plz plz share ur views regarding this through your comments, & yes, feel free to point out the mistakes even.
With lots of Love,
Priyanka

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40 Comments
  1. Its just awesome! Superb fantastic😄😙

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku sooooooooo much Rishu dear for liking this OS, & special thanks, pehli baar mere writings par comment karne ke liye…….luv u a lot dear……

  2. Priyanshipp

    Yes ab hui na baat. .sanveer pe os or upar se dono to mila diya. …..huh mujhe bada gussa aa rha tha. …Par tumne apni mistake sudhar like. Coming to the os. ….it was superb…..mindblowing. ……phadu. I hope future me aise hi kaanchi os or article likhti rahogi. Luv u loads sisi. Take care. ☺ ☺

    1. Riyarocks

      arey baapre baap……ab dekho, pehle hi kaan pakad ke maafi maang li thi….ab ye kanchi waala os bhi likh diya…..ab toh tera gussa thanda ho gaya naa???ab…..shanti….shanti….shanti………haha……kisika naam nahi hai yaar!!!……tere raudra roop ko thanda thanda cool cool karne ke liye bol rahi hoon;P;P;);)……..haha……..luv u dherrrrrrrrr saara Shona…..& a badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u…….

  3. Its so sweet and cute…. Loved it

    1. Riyarocks

      awww Amnaa dear……thank u so so so much for liking it……..& also a big teddy hug for my this sweet regular reader & commentor frnd cum sis………luv u a lot sweetieeeee…….

  4. Amazing asusual
    💗💗💗💗💗

    1. And the quotes really made my day dear
      Love you loadsssss

    2. Riyarocks

      so sweeeeeeeeeeet of u Swetha dear……..& dear, ur sweet & cute comments bought a broad smile on my face……I’m really glad that u liked this………thnx for commenting & luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee……..

  5. Miss-Golgappa

    Sagar gehri Hai aur Teri Os pyari Hai… sweetie I was just dumbfounded by reading this….just speechless…..kese ?kese likhlete ho?kasam se yar mei to fan hogayi Teri…..kaan pakkad ke sorry ab maan bhi jaao naaa…..tu chahe mujhse bath kare ya Na kare par mei tho tujhse Baath karoongi……sochlo mei agar apni Bak Bak shuru karoongi na to khud bhi ROK nehi paongi….Jese bina brake ke railghadi……

    1. Riyarocks

      hmm….jab tak tu aise boore khayal(writing quit karne waali) apne dimaag mein lati rahogi, tab tab mera prachand waale gusse ka saamna karna padega tujhe…..so aage se ye khayal apne dimaag se flush out kardena, tabhi main maanoongi………soch le, tujhe mere gusse ka saamna karna hai ya phir mujhse batti karni hai???…….ab chal….zyaada senti mat ho, teri pehli galti thi…isiliye maaf kar rahi hoon….zyaada khush hone ki zaroorat nehi…..aage se dhyaan rakhna….ok…….& haan, mujhe tere bak bak bohut pyaari lagti hai……& mujhe bohut achha laga ki ye OS tujhe pasand aaya….& tu kya meri fan hai….ulta main teri writings ki jabra fan hoon……..luv u dherrrrrrr saara & badi si jaadu ki jhappi for u…

  6. Neha7873

    The best Os ever ! Writ emore … and update soon

    1. Riyarocks

      awww……..Neha dear, ab rulaogi kya mujhe??? tere writings ke saamne meri waali toh ek dum feeki hai………but, yaar, I’m on cloud 9 after reading ur comments & appreciations………luv u a lot Shona…….gud nt…….tc……….

  7. Hmm….so aakhir tumne kanchi pe OS likh diya…yrr it this OS also gives us msg tht not 2 trust anyone wid blindfolded eyes…..thanku 4 writing dis😘😘😘

    1. Riyarocks

      haan yaar sahi boli tum…..& yaar, kanchi ke upar os toh likhna hi tha…..tumne apni farmaaish jo sunaai thi mujhe……haha….I’m really really glad that u liked this OS……..luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee & a big waala teddy hug for u…….gud nt……tc……..

  8. Khamoshi

    Priyanka devi..tussi kamal kar ditta.. ek vmbaar koi romantic OS bhi likha..order nahi request hai behna.. mazaaaaaa aa gaya 😊😁

    1. Riyarocks

      oye…Mitu….agar mujhe behen samajhti hai toh aage se request nahi, balki order karna….main zyaada khush hoongi……..samjhi meri bholi buddhu;);)….haha…..& yaar…..tujhse tareef milna, aisa laga jaise mujhe koi award mil gaya………..a badi si jaadu ki jhappi tere liye & luv u dherrrrr saara………gud nt………tc…….

  9. Anonymousaa

    This was awesomeeeeeeee……Aur kya kahoon…..itni achchhe OS ke baareme kuch likhungi toh bhut kum padega…so mein iski insult nahi karungi….I can’t say thank u coz no sorry and thank u between frenz.But I would like to say that I loved this OS to the core.Finally a Kanchi OS!!! I was thinking none of we Kanchi fans should experiment Sanveer OS coz it hurts a lot.Our hisaab barabar about Sanveer.Enough of my bakbak.
    Waiting for the next article of urs.💝💝💝

    1. Riyarocks

      haha…….bibu dear……sahi boli….ab sanveer ke upar kuch likne ki galti, bhagwaan jee, plz mujhse ye galti se bhi mistake na hojaye…….waise, tune kaha tha toh mujhe toh likhna hi tha & yaar, mein tere iss cute waali comment padhkar jaise hawaaon mein udd rahi hoon……….mera dil khush kar ditta tune…….ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi & luv u dherrrrrrrrr saara………gud nt….tc………

  10. Arrey wah prinku hamne punishment di or tumne usse aise pura kiya bas yahi dekhna baki tha kya??? ………

    Hahahaha… Just kidding kya hua m abhi tumhare samne hoti to tera chehra dekhne layak hota…. Hehehe…sorry kaan pakad ke
    tumne socha aise kahungi kabhi nahi…..haha..
    Btw os is totally ahdhjdyejhy endyejskayejsuyesjd….

    Jyada soch mat ye kya likha h ye niyaa ki new invented language h jab tum sab itne amaz ideas lekar aati ho ki tarf mein words kam pad jate h socha aisi research karu ki m bhi samajh jau or samne wala khud apne hisab se samajh jaye… Haha….bakwas idea naa.. Yaar agar aisi saja dene se hamein aise os padhne ko mile to m to tumhe roj aisi saja de dun… Kya shandaar return gift diya tumne..Waah waah waah….Haan haan ab ye mat kahna tumhara dimag thode kharach hota h…kah lena kya farq padta h Kyunki hoga tabhi to kharach hoga… Okay bye baba ab bas karti hun warna isse padhte padhte tum so jaogi… Lovvvv u shona shone se bhi jyada..haha.. Gud ni8 tc

    1. Riyarocks

      Arey Niyaa…..tune punishment diya jo tha, toh mujhe toh likhna hi tha & SORRY!!!….ye kya baat hui bhala???…& I’m very very very happy ki tujhe ye pasand aaya……aur ek baat…..show mein jaise kal kabir ko dikhaya tha, kaash uska role waise hi continue kare….& aaj ka precap…..waah……veer questioning sanchi abt agarwal or mishra……..dil khush ho gaya……..ab dil se duaa kar sakte hain ki sanveer mein misunderstandings ho jaye…….haha….achi baat toh nahi hai, but iss se kamse kam kanchi ek toh ho payenge….& hame toh wo hi chahiye naa…ab bas karti hoon….warna tu meri watt laga degi……haha……..badi waali jaadu ki jhappi & luv u a lot Shona………gud nt…….sweet drms………

  11. Rajnandini

    Oye MRP ki bacchi! Ek toh hamara kabir show mai dard se tadap raha hai aur tumne yaha bhi usse dard de diya aur woh bhi kadwa wala! Aacha hai ke usse sanchi ne jaldi maaf kar diya varna mai tumhe maaf nahi karti!!…hahaha! Just kidding mujhe pata hai ke tumhe bhi usse dard dena aacha nahi lagata par agar dard nahi deti toh ittna beautiful os kese likhti?! Mai toh tere os ki fan ho gai…loved it a lot aur khas kar ke introduction aur ending mai diya hua explaination…..bohat superb aur dhamakadar os tha! Par mai aab bhi kehna chahungi ki mujhe tumhra sanveer os hi jyada pasand aaya woh romantic tha bohat iss liye!!! Eagerly waiting for ur ff……love u dheeeeerrrr sara tumse bhi jyada meri MRP…good niģht dear…

    1. Riyarocks

      bhagwaan jee, dekho naa…meri CVR mujhe daraa rahi hai……haha……..just kidding…..& yaar tera mujhe tareef karna, aise tha jaise ki sooraj ne chand ki roshni ki tareef ki ho……kuch samjhi buddhu, ki main kya kehna chaht hoon???….yaar tu khud itni kamaal hai jiske writings ki main deewani hoon & tu mujhe keh rahi hai ki tu meri os ki fan hai!!!……kya kahoon ab tujhe……bas yehi ki teri har baat mere liye power booster ka kaam karti hai……….luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saara………..gud nt……….sweet drms meri CVR……..:):)

  12. Sorry yaar for late commenting………… awesome and amazing story yaar……..kabir ka attitude superb yaar……..or biwiko mana nae bala scene or vi superb tha……..thanks a lot for such a beautiful story ke liae…I love you lots yaar……

    1. Riyarocks

      Anu……ye kya baat hui??? ek hi comment main Sorry & Thank u….dosti ke rules todne waali baat……..achi nahi hai haan……..& yaar, tune comment kiya, wo mayne rakhta hai……..I’m really glad ki tujhe ye OS pasand aaya………luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saara & have a rocking day sweetieeeeee……..;)

      1. So so cute yaar……dosti ki rules torne ke liae🙉🙉🙉🙉…….tuj logo ka story par kar muje vi story likne ki mon karte hae yaar

  13. Sayali

    Awesome..u left no words..loved it yaar..love you sweetie..

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku sooooooooo much dear……I’m really really glad that u liked this OS…..a big teddy hug for u & luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeeeee………

  14. Sajnana900

    Yar priyu ye kya baat hui essa kaise likh sakty ho tum i did’nt liked it at all
    Itna b bharosa mat kia karo kisi p k that he/she ll like ur os bharosa toote to shheshe dil main ja k chubhte hain
    I didnt liked it…
    Arreyy arrey chill yar…relax kro thoda sa
    I was jzt pulling ur leg…
    I jzt luved it sprr dprr hit yar jzt amazing mindblowing best ever fantastic fabulous amd many more….
    And yar plz dont get angry at me for this kind of joke 😜😜😜..
    And in ur language dheeeeerrrr saaaarrrraaaa luuuvvv 4444 uuuuu and a bbbiiigggg waalaaa teeddddyyy hhhuuuggg dear…
    And soorrryyy again

    1. Riyarocks

      Sanju ki bachhi………tu ruk abhi….koi aise darata hai kisiko……jaan nikaal di thi tune meri…….tu naa……matlab……kya kahoon tujhe……ek dum nautanki ki dukaan hai……..paagal……

      1. Sajnana900

        Yar kya kren tum se hi to seekhey hain ye sab

  15. Sajnana900

    And now im ordering u that u have to post ur ff soon if not then…..😭😭😭😭😭i ll cry that much loud that ur ear durm cant bear that samajh gai na phir mat kehna k maine warning nhn di
    ( jzt kidding yar have a pill chill yar dont get scard of my dhamky as i know only how to do dhamky but dont know how to action on that 😜😜😜)

    1. Riyarocks

      & haan…..tu bata….pehle ff ki nxt episode chahiye ya phir ek aur os…..jo chahegi, wohi likhke haazir hojaoongi…….but haan…..jaldi batana……mujhe likhna bhi toh hai…..kuch time toh jayega naa likhne mein….&&&….achha laga ye jaankar ki tujhe ye os pasand aayi….ab itna hi bolti hoon, warna ek essay banjayega yahaan…….ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi & luv u dherrrrrrrr saara Shona……..

      1. Sajnana900

        First i want ff’s epi then os

      2. Sajnana900

        Or han tumhara insta account konsa hai
        Mine is @karan_hemnani

    2. Riyarocks

      ok…….aapka hukum, sar ankhon par……..hehe………

      1. Riyarocks

        waise koi fayda toh nahi coz most of my time I’m not on insta….doston se daant bhi padti hai iss wajah se…..btw, its priya_rocks477

  16. Maisarah

    Riya big hugggiieeee❤❤❤❤
    It was an amazing uppie dear … Loved it to the core … Actually we KaNchians need such lovely write ups to console ourselves😥
    Love you😍

    1. Riyarocks

      Sarah dear………thnku soooooooooo much for commenting……& I’m really really glad u liked this…….& u r right….we’ve least or rather no hope from the show that they would make it kanchi……but atleast we can get them paired up in our TU world..;)…& khush ho sake……RS se toh umeed karna hi bekaar hai…….anyways….a big waala teddy hug for u & luv u a lot sweetieeeeee…….have a gud day:)

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