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DIL SAMBHALJA ZARAA, PHIR MOHABBAT KARNE CHALA (One Shot OS)

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DIL SAMBHALJA ZARA, PHIR MOHABBAT KARNE CHALA(One Shot OS)
Every relationship goes through a struggle, but only strong relationships get through it….
Hello guys……..long time……sorry for that……First of all, a big waala thanks to Dhruti, Amnaa, Dhruvi, Vrushti, Ashnita, Divya, Swetha, Alia, Ruwani, Priyanshi, Tumpamoni, Sanyu(Sanyukta), Mitali, Sanu, Aafiya, Niyaa, Niyati, Sana & last but not the least…Shabnam(Shabnampatel)…for commenting on my first os…but again a big sorry for my Kanchi family bcz, today I’ve posted an os on Sanveer…..actually this os is especially coz one of my frnds, Shabnam (Shabnampatel) had asked me to write an os on sanveer…..hope u would like this….& sorry my kanchi waalon for this, but don’t worry, very soon I would come up with my nxt episode of my ff……luv u loads…..
Enough of my chattering……so, without wasting any more time, let’s get started….
(Sanveer are married now….post marriage events……)
One evening, while Sanchi was about to keep Veer’s clothes in cupboard, suddenly a photo frame falls…She pics it up to find Veer’s pic wd a girl…she starts thinking who the girl is…suddenly Veer enters the room…he takes away the photo(rather snatches)from her hand & was glaring her…
Sanchi: Who’s she???
Veer: don’t u dare touch my things…
Sanchi: For Heaven’s sake, I’m ur wife Veer….I know u were compelled to marry me, but still don’t u think, I’ve this much right to know who that girl is in the pic???
Veer: It’s my life, stay away from it…..& he starts leaving from the room…
Sanchi: Just once Veer….(she holds Veer’s hand)….Do u love that girl???
Veer: Yes!!!…She’s Radhika….she’s the one whom I loved from the core of my heart, but in return, she just was wd me for my money…She never loved me for once…he became emotional while telling this & so was Sanchi….she never thought of this kind of past in Veer’s life….She wiped her tears & immediately left for Savitri’s room….There she found Savitri & dadi sitting on the bed…Sanchi went there & sat along wd them….
Savitri: What happened Sanchi beta??? U look a bit stressed….
Sanchi: No maa, I’m fine….(looking at dadi)…dadi, actually I want to know, about Veer’s past??
Dadi: He was a very fun loving, happy go lucky kind of guy…but don’t know, what happened all of a sudden, he turned into a grumpy person…he was really opposite of the one u r seeing him now…
Savitri: But beta, he’s a nice person….I hope u’ll understand him & will be able to get our old Veer from him….I can’t see him like this….Sanchi gives a fake smile & leaves the room…

She enters her room to find Veer working on his files…suddenly she went in front of him & stood there…Veer looked at her…
Veer: What happened???
Sanchi(taking a deep breath): I want divorce….
Veer(shocked): WHAT!!!…r u out of ur mind??? U know na I married u for my family’s sake…
Sanchi(already in tears): What do u think, it’s easy for me???no Veer, not at all…like every other girl, I also hv dreams….dreams of a loving family with whom I could live my life peacefully, a caring husband with whom I can share all my feelings…my likes & dislikes, my dreams, my aspirations, who would be like a friend of mine…..undoubtedly, I’m lucky to hv such a loving & caring family…but what abt my husband??? How can I live with u when I don’t see any future in our relation, when I know that u still love Radhika….saying this Sanchi broke down, she sat on the bed & started crying bitterly….Veer started thinking something & left the room ….
Timeskip…..It’s morning……Sanchi woke up & couldn’t find Veer anywhere…assuming that Veer had left, she entered in the washroom & was shocked to find Veer already present there,in his towel, shirtless, she immediately turned & came out of the washroom….
Veer(at the top of his voice): Can’t u knock before entering???
Sanchi(laughing out loudly): Can’t u lock the door???
Veer(realising the situation): Ok fine, it was my mistake….now will u stop laughing….after coming out of the washroom after some time, Veer saw Sanchi still laughing….Veer started glaring Sanchi…
Sanchi: Dr.Veer Malhotra, laughing doesn’t cost anything…it’s also good for health….even u can try, it’s not very difficult……..Veer passed a smile but an annoyed one…
Veer: I know laughing is the best medicine, but when u start laughing unnecessarily, u need medicine
Sanchi: Don’t worry…I’m not mad to laugh just like that…I’ve a reason for it…
Veer: Oh!!!…so may I know the reason of ur laugh Mrs.Sanchi Malhotra???
Sanchi: It’s you…A 28yrs old person doesn’t know that while he’s gone for a bath, he should lock it…& she starts laughing…& secondly, u r a sadu monkey….just look at ur face….she turns Veer towards the mirror….Sanchi suddenly stops laughing….
Sanchi: Forget everything Veer, if not me, find someone else to live ur life with happily…I don’t know, I’ll be a part of ur life or not, but for sure, I’m not gonna change myself…& she leaves….

Veer starts thinking about Sanchi’s words(a smile was there on his face) & he starts thinking that he really looks nice while smiling….
Veer arrives at the dining table wishing good mrng to everyone & starts having breakfast….
Dadi: Everyone after the breakfast, start packing ur bags….
Veer: Why dadi???
Savitri: Coz we’re going to Sanket’s farm house to celebrate Priya & Sanket’s 7th wedding anniversary….Samdhanjee had called me yesterday & informed about this to me & ur dadi…. we’re going to stay there for about a week & return after that….
Timeskip…Veer entered the room….He got mesmerised on looking Sanchi who was wearing a white long one piece dress with floral print on it…he felt that Sanchi is really very beautiful…Sanchi was in front of the mirror….she was trying to zip her dress but was unable to do it…Veer approached towards Sanchi(Sanchi became a bit nervous)…without even saying anything, he shifted Sanchi’s hair to one side of her shoulder & started to zip her dress…Sanchi could feel a current sensation running throughout her body coz for the first time, Veer touched her….Sanchi couldn’t be able to meet her eyes with Veer, so she looked somewhere else, here & there….after the zip work got over, Sanchi turned towards Veer & thanked him….
Sanchi: Thanku sadu…& she left while Veer was smiling…..
Timeskip….They reached Sanket’s farm house….They were greeted very well by Sanket, Priya & Sanket’s mother….
Sanchi(to Priya): Dii……where r my Aniket & Ahaan???(Aniket & Ahaan r Priya & Sanket’s 5yr old twins)…
Priya: Must be playing somewhere….they used to play with our neighbour’s daughter…but here (looking at Sanchi), I hope they’ll get someone to play with very soon….Sanchi gives a fake smile… Veer hears their convo & goes inside the room….
(Veer’s pov: I should forget my past & move-on…till how long I’ll be rude towards Sanchi, afterall, what’s her fault, why would she be punished for someone else’s mistake….)…

In the evening, Aniket &Ahaan come running & enters Sanveer’s room & hug Sanchi…& say, maami, we missed u a lot….
Sanchi bend down on her knees & hug both of them & said, “I missed u too”…..
Aniket: Nani gave us 4 cars….
Sanchi:Wow….so nice…
Ahaan: We both have new video game…we’ll play & see who wins….
Sanchi: Of course, we’ll play…& she pulls their cheeks…
Veer comes out of washroom & hears the trio’s convo…
Veer: Who’s gonna play video game champs????….On hearing Veer, Aniket & Ahaan run towards Veer & hug him….Veer bent down on his knees & hugs them…
Aniket: Mamu me, Ahaan & maami will play video games…..Veer smiles…
Veer: Maami will play???(he asks sarcastically)…
Ahaan: Don’t underestimate maami ….she always wins mamu…..
Veer(looking at Sanchi): We’ll see champs….Sanchi looked away…ok now u go to ur mamma & get ready….Aniket & Ahaan nod & leave….
Sanchi goes towards cupboard to keep all the things…Veer looked at her & thought, why’s she so quiet today???…he wanted to ask but couldn’t ask her….
Later everyone gathered in the garden….except Aniket & Ahaan who were already asleep…
Priya: Let’s play something…
Sanket: Haan, but what to play???
Priya: How abt passing the parcel???
Sanket: Not bad wifey…(Priya blushes)…
They start playing….finally only Sanveer r left…it stops on Sanchi….
Priya: So Sanchi, now tell us, What is Love???
Sanchi(looking at Veer): I don’t know actually what love is but I know that it isn’t any duty…It’s a feeling from the heart….It isn’t a tag given to someone, it’s something which should be perfect in everyone’s life……
Priya: Hmm….not bad….Sanchi gives a fake smile….Sanchi looks at Veer & leaves from there, taking everyone’s permission…Veer also leaves from there after Sanchi…
Veer enters the room to find Sanchi already in tears….He places his hand on Sanchi’s shoulder….she jerks off his hand & starts leaving the room….Veer stopped Sanchi by holding her hand….
Veer: What happened Sanchi???
Sanchi: Leave my hand Veer…Veer held her hand more tightly…
Veer: No I won’t…first tell me what happened to u???
Sanchi: As if u care…..& with what right u r holding my hand???…Veer was shocked by her question..
Veer: Bcoz u r my….Sanchi jerks his hand…
Veer: What happened??? Plz tell me Sanchi….I can’t see u like this…
Sanchi: But why r u bothered??? I’m just a duty for u, not ur wife….I’m like a burden to u…
Veer: U r not a burden for me Sanchi….U r my wife……Sanchi gives a fake smile….
Sanchi: WIFE!!!…like really…..(& she starts laughing sarcastically….then got tears in her eyes)..u have already made a fun of my life, what else do u want now???…U can’t imagine what pain I go through each day when people ask me regarding my married life…..what will I say them….that my husband doesn’t love me….he still loves his ex-girlfriend who left him long time ago but still he lives with her memories(Veer was in tears by now)….
Sanchi(holding Veer’s collar): Tell me Veer…Just tell me for once, what was my mistake in all this??? Why am I getting punishment for the mistake which I didn’t do??? Why did u marry me when u had someone else in ur heart??? Who gave u the right to spoil my life…. my life has turned out to be a joke….even though I have a lot of people around me, but still I’m alone….all alone….& Sanchi breaks down & sits on he floor….Veer immediately rushes to Sanchi & hugs her…initially Sanchi tried to resist, but at the end, she gave up…
Veer(in tears): Sorry Sanchi….I’m really sorry for all my mistakes…(he’s still tightly hugging Sanchi)…I know, sorry is a very small word in front of the injustice I did towards u….but believe me Sanchi, even I was hurt every moment I tried to hurt u…..& didn’t knew when ur kind, sweet & caring nature made a special place in my heart for u….(Sanchi breaking the hug, looks at Veer….)
Veer:Yes Mrs. Sanchi Malhotra, I LOVE YOU…..don’t know when but yes….I LOVE YOU……Sanchi became very very elated on hearing these words of Veer….she felt as if all her dreams, all her aspirations came true…..she felt as if she conquered the whole world it that particular moment…. Veer gave a peck on Sanchi’s forehead, then her cheeks, then finally, their lip-lock…..initially a soft one gradually turned into a passionate one….(oops….let’s give them some privacy yaar…haha)…
2 years leap….Sanveer were blessed with a baby girl, whom they named Shraddha…..

THE END

So friends, I just wrote down what my chotu sa dimaag said me to write…..hope u would like this effort of mine….The truth is, I’m a Kanchi fan, but at the same time, I don’t have any kind of issues with Sanveer….infact, it’s the show writers who r making the situation worse, nothing else…but anyways, just forget about them…I’m just happy in my TU world where my friends, bro & sis give amazing plots from their mind which is far more better than the actual plot…..enough of my bak bak,
So guys, I’m eagerly waiting for your comments…..Plz forgive me if I was unable to meet your expectations….. but somewhere I hope I’m able to meet it…fingers crossed….luv u all…
With lots of Love,
Priyanka

70 Comments
  1. Nyc os……u agn nailed it…..luv u loads
    A SILENT READER……now i broke my silence……..keep writting sch os dear

    1. Riyarocks

      thank u soooooooooo much for liking it ____ dear…(haha….I don’t know ur name na, that’s why)….I’m really glad ki I was somehow able to break ur silence(means I’m capable of doing something;)…haha…..)….thnx for commenting……luv u loads sweetieeeee…….

  2. nice story
    update kanchi ff asap
    waiting for it dear
    absolutely right and im also happy with TU writers

    1. Riyarocks

      hehe…….I’m really very very glad that u liked my os Swetha dear….actually I was a bit nervous coz being a kanchi fan, I was writing on Sanveer for the first time….& haan, I’ll surely try to post my nxt episode asap……thnx for commenting……..luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee……..

  3. Shabnam

    wow superb lovely mindblowing amaz ing sanveer fighte romance sooooo cute priya sanket bonding lovely love you Riya rocks really rock it dear I love sanveer thankuuuuu 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

    1. Riyarocks

      thank God, u liked it…….mujhe laga tha shayad tumhe pasand aaye ya na aaye……but I’m on cloud9 after reading ur lovely comments…….thnx a lot dear for liking & commenting on the plot…….luv u loads sweetieeeeeee……..

  4. Niyaaa

    Hey prinku u know what mujhe ek baar sadma sa laga..haha.. But its ok ab galti ki h to punishment bhi sun lo ab jaldi se ff or os post karo on kanchi…..hehe… But majak me mat lena isse… m bahut serious hun kanchi ke mamle me..haha.. Btw os is outstanding superb yaar.. Nd especially again ur lines mera dil chura le gaye”i don’t know what love is but I know that it isn’t any duty…It’s a feeling from the heart….It isn’t a tag given to someone, it’s something which should be perfect in everyone’s life……” totally loved it.. And show uske bare m kuch bachcha hi nahi kahne sunne ko meri life ka worst show hoga jo maine dekha ro ro kar sir patak kar nd ab bhi dekh rahi hun.. Warna m aisi hun show me story achchi lagi tab tak dekhti hun.. I don’t think maine aaj tak koi show complete dekha h…hahaha.. Sachchi… chahe ek boond ishq ho yaa qubool hai nd last most my fav rajat tokas show prithvi raj chauhan nd jodha akbar.. Enough of my bak bak post ur ff.. Lovvv u shona… Bye tc

    1. Riyarocks

      haye…….itna bada punishment!!!!!!! iss choti si bachhi par kuch toh rehem karo……..haha…….btw Niyaa, tu ek dum sahi boli…..kabhi kabhi mann karta hai ki TV ke ander ghuskar, inn SDCH waalon ki oh my mata kar doon, but phir baad mein sochke reh jaati hoon, ki shaayad………shaayad ek din, bhool se hi sahi, but ye log hamara request accept karlein & hamare kanchi ko unite karlein……haha…….jo ki ek dum nxt to impossible hai…….khair chalo jaane do….in logon se kuch umeed karna, hamari hi bewakoofi hai….ye log ek dum thaali ke baingan jaise hain, kabhi sanveer toh kabhi kanchi……..uff…….ok ok, bahut bak bak ho gayi……luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaa my sweetieeeeeee pie……..hehe……..

      1. Niyaaa

        Hey prinku abhi ek khuskhabri aai h m ab kahin nayi jane wale.. Kyunki maine job ka irada chod diya h mere praticals ki date aa gayi h so abhi job ka idea postponed kar diya.. H na achchi khabar per mere liye buri ab itne din ho gaye pdhaii se pichcha chude ab phir padna padega…mummaaa..hahaha.. So m kahin nahi jane wali.. Nd mummy papa ne bola h ki abhi padhai karo job baad me kar lena so unka hukum sir ankhon per boss..bye

      2. Riyarocks

        yippee……………yeh hui na baat……….ab kahaan jayegi tu????(ab tera kya hoga kaalia….hehe haha hehe haha……)….chahe jo karle, tu hamse peecha nahi chhooda sakti…..fevicol ka jod hai, itni aasani se nahi tootegi…..;P…..haha……..&&& thnx tujhe nahi, uncle aunty ko…..unhone hi ye sab possible karwaaya…….haha………luv u shona………gud nt……..sweet drms…….tc……..

  5. Niyaaa

    And prinku sorry in advance i don’t think so ab aage se m kisi ff per commnt kar paungi yaa padh tak payungi or post karna to durr tak ki baat h actually m part time job karne wali hun.. so tm nahi lagne wala especially first 15 days adjust hone me time lag hi jayega but puri kosish karungi ki time milte hi tum sabke wonderfull update padhun nd commnt karu… Lovv u tc

    1. Riyarocks

      hey Niyaa…….job ke liye, CONGRATULATIONS……….bohut badi waali…….ab bolo bolo, hamara treat kahaan hai?????……& haan, main zyaada kuch nahi boloongi kyunki mujhe pata hai, tu zyaada din hum sabse door reh hi nahi payegi…..& tujhe jab bhi waqt milegi, uss mein se, majority of ur time, tu hum sabko dene waali hai…..sahi boli naa main????….ab bas karti hoon…..zyaada boloongi toh kahin tu senti hoke rone na lagjaye…..ek badiiiiiiiii si jaadu ki jhappi…………luv u dherrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaa my jaan………..

    2. Riyarocks

      ye lo….main baat toh poochna bhool hi gayi….ff na sahi but pm ke through toh connected rahegi naa???

    3. Dhruti

      congratulation for your job niya…………….tell time and place for party me and our kanchi family members will definitely come…….and i know tu hamse door reh hi nahi payegi hena priyanka!!!!but me tumse kese connected rahungi????

      ok ok priyanka i’m coming to your os it was superb but pehle to bada vala shock hi laga………..tum or sanveer pe ff…………sorry sorry but i’m kanchi’s fan but i love varun kapoor’s acting, i’m fan of his acting especially from swaragini………………..but it ok prinku galti ki he to punishment to milegi hi……kyu ki tumne muje itna bada shock jo diya………..so your punishment issssssssssssssss………………let think me first…………….ok i got it sooooooooooooooooo your punishment is you have to write a biggggggg wala os/fs/ff on kanchi………………and and it’s very sooooooooon ok……….[and it’s my oder](sorry just kidding for that square bracket only) because i’m very serious when it’s about kanchi……………..so i hope you get your punishment…………..love you………….tc……..bye………………..

      1. Riyarocks

        hey bhagwaan…….Dhruti….tu apni dost ko punish karegi, wo bhi itni badiiiiiiiiii….not done…… haha……theek hai baba, galti maan li maine apni…..fikar not, tu apna bp mat badhaa, nxt waala obviously hamare kanchi ke upar hi hoga…….ye plot toh sirf mere ek sanveer fan waale dost ke liye likha tha, uske request par…..warna main & sanveer……no chance…….tum log jaante ho na mujhe……aur haan, agli baar kanchi…pakka…..lo kaan bhi pakad li hai….ab maaf bhi karde…ok, ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u…..ab hass bhi de…….haha…..ye hui na baat………luv u dherrrrrrrrr saara……….gud nt………tc………

      2. Niyaaa

        Hey dhruto abhi pary venue tumhe bhej rahi thi per kya karein humhari kismat me milna nahin.. Kyunki maine abhi job ka iorada chod diya h i mean postponed kar diya h mere practical ki wajah se ab bchke rehna m kahin nahi jane wali..hahaha.. Bye tc

  6. Hey dear I’m a sanveer fan but a silent reader of your kanchi ff too I love it writing skills nd your ff too thanks for this is on sanveer it was amazing

    1. It’s your writing skills nd os on sanveer
      Sorry typing mistake

    2. Riyarocks

      pehli baat Ishi, tu mujhe sorry kabhi mat kehna, afterall, kisi mahaan aadmi ne kaha hai,”dosti mein no sorry no thank u”…..samjhi naa…..& yaar, thanku thanku thanku so much mere iss plot pe apna moun vrat todne ke liye……..haha…….just kidding……….I’m really glad u liked this os…….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee & thnx for commenting…….bye….tc…..

      1. Rajnandini

        aacha friendship mai no sorry no thanku huh?! Aur abhi abhi jo tumne ittne sare thanku bole uska kya?!

      2. Riyarocks

        oops…….galti se mistake hogaya……aage se dyaan rakhoongi…..lo kaan bhi pakad li……ab toh maaf karde meri CVR……….haha………..luv u shona……..

  7. This os is very nice ………. actually I am a kanchi fan so I am feeling something bad but this os is very very superb……………….this os held on family os please riya kanchi ko lakar asa os likna family member ko lakar(savitri,anand,dadi, jaya,sunil,kusum,sunny,dadi,priya,sanket,aniket,ahann,veer,praga,isha or isha ka hero and most importantly our kanchi)

    1. Riyarocks

      hehe….Anu yaar, even I’m kanchi fan…..but kya karoon, dost ka farmaaish ko kaise thookra sakti hoon…..but tumhara hukum, sar ankhon par…..I’ll surely try to write something asap……..comment karne ke liye, shukriya shukriya shukriya…….luv u dherrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaaaa Anu dear……..

      1. I love u too dear…………..

  8. Negisanyukta

    Awesome as usual.I just loved it to the core😘😘😘😘😘Sanveer cute fighting,damn nice yaar.And ya ur chotu sa dimaag have fabulous concepts nd storylines😇😇😇😇
    So,keep writing dear nd eagerly waiting for next ff ……kaanchi ff.
    Ok bbye.🤗🤗🤗🤗

    1. Riyarocks

      Sanyu dear…….thnku soooooooooooo much for liking this plot of mine………actually, mere liye bhi thoda sa difficult tha, coz main kanchi family se hoon naa;)…..haha……but haan…surely I’ll try to post my nxt update asap(of course, Kanchi waala….hehe….)….btw dear, tum kab apna nxt update likhke post karogi??? can’t wait to read it……..getting appreciation from a writer like u, really, means a lot for me………luv u dherrrrrrrrr saara………….bye….tc…..

      1. Negisanyukta

        No need to say thanks…..u deserved it yaar.😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
        And i m not getting that much time to post next part but i’ll to posy next part asap.😊😊😊😊
        Hey i wanna know r u interested in reading hindi poetries or shayaris?????
        If u r then u can read shayaris on my post wall as i wrote this shayaris as my favourite tv character.😇😇😇😇😇😇
        And yes i m a ok ok author but not a fab author like u.

    2. Riyarocks

      u r an amazing writer sweety…..& of course, I luv reading poetries, even I write some in my spare time…..& undoubtedly, I’m gonna read ur poems on ur wall….thnx for letting me know…….a big waali jaadu ki jhappi for u……..luv u dherrrrrrr saara……..gud nt….tc……..:):)

  9. Anee

    oyeeee Mita ki bacchi finally tuney apne dill ki sun hi li na…..kar di na…meri bolti band…..tu yaaar…main soch bhi nahi sakti thi…itni aasani se sanveer pe os likhegi bachhu……abhi rukkk…tera kiya haal karti hun main……………….hhahahahaahah…maza aaya meri daant sun ke….hmmm…bol na…ab asise chup chap…wondered hoke mera comment kiya padh rahi hai….sacchi… bata rahi hun….dill ro raha hai mera……itna….beautifulll….in sanveer..wdout kabir os padh ke….heheheh……kammal kar diya Bosss…….ager tu chahe aur bhi boht sanveer pe Os likh…lekin ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna…sanveer ke Os kabir nahi aana chahiye warna main naaraz ho jaungoi tujh se samjhi????…..ya samjhaun..heheee……infact main bhi sanveer pe OS likhne ka soch rahi thi……sis ne ek dam mana kar diya…boli serial main kam pakarahin hain jo ab tu sanveer pe likh kar pakkayegi….logi yeh kiya baat hui…..but khair……tera…..Os……………Jussssssssssssssssssssssssssttttttttttttttttttttt mindblowing…keep it up…luv uuu so muchhhh…….oye dill pe nahi liya na????……..o koi nai le le heheeh….

    1. Riyarocks

      hey bhagwaan, bachaao bachaao, dekho….Anee mujhe maarne aa rahi hai….bachaao……..arey bacha nahi sakte, toh kamse kam, ek helmet toh de do….mera sirr, usmein mera ye chotoooo sa dimaag toh bach jaaye…..haha……kya hua???? tujhe kya laga, sirf tu hi dramebaazi kar sakti hai??? tu jaanti nahi hai meri Anee ko, usne mujhe bhi thoda bahut drama karna sikha diya hai;)……. haha……. anyways….. actually jab mere dost ne mujhe sanveer par likhne ke liye bola, mujhe toh jaise 440V ka jhatka lag gaya, but phir maine socha, hum kanchians ka dil bohut bada hai, writers ki galti ki sazaa, hum apne sanveer doston par kyun utaarein…….& agar kabir ka naam bhi ek baar aa jata mere plot mein, toh main distract hoke sanveer os ko kanchi main change kardeti;P…..so risk kyun lena….kabir ka naam bhi nahi layi iss os mein…..haha……& haan……..luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaa meri lady bheem….;P;):)

  10. Maha_Aijaz

    Hey Riya! It’s first time I’m reading some story on SDC&H, actually seeing the title I couldn’t resist myself.
    The OS was amazing, loved it a lot especially their conversation and short-cute scenes were worth reading. I totally enjoyed it and feeling fortunate enough to stopped myself from skipping it. Loads of love dear<3

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku thanku thanku sooooooooooooo much Maha dear……..omg, getting compliments from a writer like u, really means a lot for me….& I’m really really lucky that I could be able to make u read my plot & even, make u comment on it…….I’m on cloud9 already with ur lovely comments…..thnx sweety for reading this…..& eagerly waiting for ur nxt update of ur plot…..luv u loads……bye….tc….

      1. Maha_Aijaz

        Oh please yaar I’m just an ordinary writer in fact you guys are much better than me so stop praising me like that *angry face*. And no need to thanks at all<3 loads of love:*

    2. Riyarocks

      u deserve this appreciation dear……..luv u dherrrrrrrr saaraaaaaa……….gud nt……tc…..:):)

  11. Amazing outstanding mind blowing and u gave khadoos Wala character to veer instead of kabir so change in veer but story was superb continue ur witring and u always have a different entry on ur writings by ur beautiful lines

    1. Riyarocks

      Sanu dear, like always, ur comments bought a broad smile on my face…..I’m really glad ki u liked this plot…….actually, I was a bit confused abt what to write, coz being a kanchi fan, I was writing on sanveer for the first time……whether u all will like it or not…..but finally, now I’m relieved……my family(kanchi) isn’t angry with me & my sanveer frnds liked my plot……yippeee…..mission accomplished……hurray…….luv u sweetieeeeee………bye…….tc……..

  12. Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing episode

    1. Riyarocks

      hehe…..first of all, a big waala thnx to u dear for being a regular reader & commentor in all my writings dear….in fact, I’m lucky to have a reader like u……..I’m really glad u liked this plot of mine……..luv u dherrrrrrr saaraaaaaaa…….bye……tc……

  13. it was awsmm n maafi chahti hu late comment krne k liye pr ky kru schl start ho gye h…anyways tumne muje thanku kyu bola starting m, tum hi khti ho naa in frndship no sry no thanku…fir….anyways nyc plot n jldi se kanchi OS ya fir FF lao……in ur language…luv u dheeeerrrr saaaarrraaa

    1. Riyarocks

      ab jab tumne sorry boldia hai, toh ho gaya na hisaab barabar, mere thnx & tumhare sorry ka;)….haha….I’m really glad ki tumhe ye plot pasand aaya…….I’m really lucky to have a reader like u, who not only reads my all updates, but also boosts me with ur amazing & lovely comments……I’ll try to post my nxt update asap…& haan, luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaa…haha…..bye….tc…..

  14. Sajnana900

    Hey priyu dii hru???
    The os was fantastic fab best ever and many more….
    Even though i didnt read any sanveer os ff fs ts nothing but today i made my mind to read this as if it is sanveer or kanchi as its not titled with kanch or sanveer so when i read this i jzt luv it
    And again that was sprrrbbb…

    1. Riyarocks

      thank God…..bach gayi tumhare daant se……haha……I know, ki being a kanchi fan, its really difficult to imagine sanveer together, but what to do????….its only the show writers who r making it more & more complicated, else we kanchians don’t have any issues with sanveer fans…..& Sanju…when r u going to post ur nxt ff/fs??? its almost been a month already……I really want u to start writing another plot….anyways, thnx for liking it…..luv u dherrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaa……….bye…. tc…….

    2. Sajnana900

      Plsr is all mine dear first time i luv sanveer part and bcz of u wrote the best ever part
      Dont know yar i planed a plot regard this and story ll b plan by episodes but i didnt get tym i got tym for reading the ff hardly amd i think in winter vacation i ll post my new ff twice in a day so i can complete it during vacation only as the studies r very strict as in the middle nov there ll b inspection an all so preparing 4 that only

      1. Riyarocks

        hmm, I can understand sweety….anyways, luv u yaar:):)

    3. Sajnana900

      Luvv u too dear…😗😗😗😗😗

      1. Riyarocks

        luv u even more…..haha……gud nt…..tc………:):)

  15. Sanveer

    I loved it!!!!!❤️💕

    1. Riyarocks

      Sanveer liked my Sanveer os!!!!!….haha…..I know, its sounding cheezy….anyways, thnk u so much for liking it…….luv u loads……bye..tc….keep smiling…..:)

  16. Neha7873

    Seriously Yaar ! I don’t know ki main kya bolu ??? Seriously you nailed it … speechless now … Keep writing …keep rocking

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku sooooooooooo much Neha dear……..ur comments bought a broad smile on my face…………thnx for commenting dear……….luv u dherrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaaaaaa……..bye……..tc……..

  17. amazing

    1. Riyarocks

      thnku so so much Amnaa dear for liking it….& thnx also for being a regular reader & commenter of my writings……..luv u loads dear………bye…….tc………

  18. Rajnandini

    kya baat hai yaar! Bohat khub bohat khub!! Masha allha! Subhan allha!! Kya kayamat os likha hai!! Laajwab !! Bemisal!!! Marhaba!!! Bohat bohat khushamati hue ye os padh ke!!

    1. Riyarocks

      haye!!!!!!!!! meri CVR……….kya likha yaar tune…….matlab, ek dum bolti band ho gayi tere iss comment ko padhkar……..hey bhagwaan…..plz kuch dimaag mere mein bhi daaldo taaki mein iss jhakaas, shandaar comment ke reply mein kuch likh sakoon………haha………..luv u dherrrrrrrrrrrr saara meri CVR……….

  19. Priyanshipp

    Wow wow wow siso. ….kya bolu tumne to kuch kehne layak hi nhi choda. …pehle mai skip kar rhi thi ki ye sanveer os h phir maine socha tumne itni mehnat ki h ek baar padhna cahiye. ….or tumne to kamal kr diya. Kaanchi fan hone ke baad bhi ye os padh ke mujhe maza aa gya.waise tumne sahi kaha agar rs kaanchi ko ek nhi kregi to kya hua hm apne tu world me hi mast h . Waise ek baat pta h sdch ki trp badh gyi h 0.9 ho gyi h . I just hope kaanchi ek ho jaye. Fingers crossed for kaanchi. 😁😁
    Luv u so much dear nd bye Take. Nd ya return asap with new ff or Os but not with sad ending. .pls pichli baar tumne mujhe rula diya tha. Ab sad ending wali os fs ya ff likha to mai tujhe pakad ke bohot pitungi. 😂😂😂😂just kidding yaar but yaa return asap with happy ending kaanchi os fs or ff. Eagerly waiting for next post. Bye. Takecare again. 😍😍

    1. Riyarocks

      pehle se hi helmet pehenke baithi hui hoon….kya pata, kahin tu aakar meri pitaai karne lage toh kuch toh safety measures rakh loon…….ab mere iss chotoo sa dimaag ka hifazat toh karna padega na aage ke liye;P……..haha………pata hai na ki main kanchi fan hoon, toh phir tu ye bhi soch sakti hai ki mujhe kitni difficulty ho rahi hogi sanveer ko ek karne mein…..but reason maine pehle hi bol diya tha iss plot mein……ab kya karoon………..bas, yehi bol sakti hoon………luv u dherrrrrrrrrrrrrr saaraaaa & a badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u my sweety…………….

      1. Priyanshipp

        Nhi mai bhala meri sis ko kyu pitungi. Mai to tujhe bas itna keh rhi hoon agli baar happy ending wali story ke saath aana pls pls pls. Mai jaanti hoon teri difficulty kyuki mujhe sanveer story padne me kitni difficulty hoti h to tune to dil pe patthar rakh kar try to kiya. Mai to sapne me v sanveer pe likhne ki nhi soch skti. Hats off to u sis. Acha bohot hua mera bakbak. Gn nd take care nd return asap with dhamakedar kaanchi plot.😍😍😍Luv u loads

    2. Riyarocks

      abeo, main mazaak kar rahi thi….tu itna bhi nahi samajh paayi……paagal……mazaak ko bhi tune itne seriously le liya!!!!….achha baba…..kaan pakad rahi hoon…..ab toh maaf karde…….plz……hass de…..meri chona bas ek baar hass de………….haan….ye hui na baat…..ab bohut bakwaas ho gayi….bye…tc…..luv u dherrrrrrrrrrrr saaraaaaaa……..

  20. Ziyarasheed

    Just like your name, you rocked it👍. It was simple but beautiful👌. Basically I’m not a sanveer fan 😒and also I don’t read much of sanveer ffs. But I don’t know why I read this one. Now am happy I didn’t miss this one. Love you dear and keep giving loving shots😘😘😘

    1. Riyarocks

      aww….so sweet of u Ziya dear……actually, even I’m kanchi fan……it was really difficult even on my part in uniting sanveer……& even I couldn’t see our kabir in any sort of pain, so I came up with a plot where there won’t be any part of kabir, coz agar kabir ka naam ek baar bhi aa jata iss plot mein, then this sanveer os would have turned in the end into kanchi os……….;P…..haha………luv u a lot dear & thnx a lot for commenting……….

  21. Sayali

    Loved it Riya..the story was really heart touching..keep it up yaarr…

    1. Riyarocks

      thnku sooooooooo much Sayali dear for commenting……..I’m really glad, u liked my plot…….actually being a kanchi fan, this was my first attempt for writing something on sanveer, for which I was a bit nervous initially….but after reading such sweet comments, I’m relieved…….thnx dear for liking it……..luv u loads sweetieeeeeeeee………

  22. Riru

    AWESOME POST DI WELL I WONT SAY MUCH FACING SHORTAGE OF TIME MY HEART SPEAKS MORE THAN WORDS SO BADA WALA FAB AMAZING FANTASTIC KHIDKI TOR GAJAB ETC ETC. BYE TC LUV

    1. Riyarocks

      awww Reni…..tujhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi….tu agar ek word bhi likh degi comment section mein, wo bhi mere liye bohut badi baat hogi……sweetu, mujhe pata hai, pehle padhaai ka pressure, uspar TU pe likhne ka pressure & sabse upar, chup chup kar apne parents se chupkar, likhne ka pressure;P…(haha…..ye waala mere liye sabse zyada difficult hai…haha)…..I’m glad, tujhe ye pasand aaya……..luv u sweetuuuuuu……….gud nt……tc……..

  23. Khamoshi

    Sorry dear..due y lack of time..i was not abled to read ur article..and sorry 4 late comment..now i got some time..so read it and it was amazing… agar sabir love side main rakhu..to yaar sanveer main bhi apna hi maza hai.. hehe but still i am a kanchi fan. But tumahara article inn sab se alag hai.. i loved it. Lots of love dost

    1. Riyarocks

      thnk God….tumne comment kiya….mujhe toh aisa laga ki sanveer os ke kaaran tune shayad gusse mein isse padha nahi…now, I’m relieved…….& ye kya baat hui…..SORRY!!!!!…….not done…..& yaar, ek baat bolun, maine jaan boochke kabir ka naam hi nahi uthaya iss plot main, warna main distract ho jaati…apne aadat se majboor hoke kanchi ko unite kardeti & at the end, sanveer os mein kanchi ke milan ka locha ho jaata…….haha………but anyways, I’m really glad ki tujhe ye pasand aaya……..luv u dherrrrrrrrr saara & a badi waali jaadu ki jhappi, tere liye………gud nt……..sweet drms…….

  24. Anonymousaa

    Despite being a Sanveer OS.I loved this OS a lottttttttttt!!!(Behind the scenes I imagined Kabir in place of Veer!!Lol) This was awesome superb and mindblowing.Loved how u arranged the scenes to prove their perfect love.Now what more shall I say it was a khidki thod ravishing OS.But plz plz plz next time come up with Kanchi OS.Love uh a lot Ri!!!

    1. Riyarocks

      thank God, Bibu ki tune padha toh sahi, mujhe laga tha ki sanveer os ke kaaran tu isse nahi padhne waali, but meri khushnaseebi hai ki u read this…….& haan, bohut zyaada difficult tha sanveer par os likhna, but ab kisiko promise kiya tha toh apne words rakhne ke liye likhna pada……& haan, jaldise kanchi ke upar likhne ki koshish kar rahi hoon, asap………luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara……….& a big teddy hug for u……bye…….tc………

  25. Di, just a amazing OS …. U make me speechless,…..I loved it though it’s a sanveer OS ….par hum kanchi fans bhi bhot khurafati hai….veer ki jagah kabir km imagine Kar liya😂😂 ….lots of love to u & keep writing 😊😊

    1. Riyarocks

      haha………sahi bola tune……& I’m glad ki tujhe ye pasand aaya….aur ek secret bataaon….agar iss os mein, ek baar bhi kabir ka naam, kisi ek scene mein bhi aa jata, toh apne aadat se majboor, mein sanveer os ko kanchi os mein change kar deti….haha……….isisliye maine kabir ka naam include karne ka risk nahi liya…..& achha laga tune isse padha aur comment kiya…….luv u dherrrrr saara choti……..

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