Dil Meri Na Sune….FF (Epi 10) [Last Part]

So guys here is the last part of my ff……..i hope you will like this….happy reading……

It will be a lenthy one……

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Ragini breaks down…….

Everyone feels sad seeing her condition ….everyone consoles her……….

Mehak- rags don’t cry……..we will find him………you both are made for each other…….sanskar love u a lot…..

Ragini sobs………mehak pats her back………

Ragini- its all my fault……..in this 1 year everyday he confessed his feelings to me…………but I ………..i was blinded in my singing…….i ignored his feelings……….i left him…..i betrayed him…………now………I came back….i realized so he left…..he left me forevever……

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Mehak- rags….

Ragini cries…….shaurya manik nandini laksh jigyasha……consoles her………

Anupriya and shekar feels bad seeing her daughter state……

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Leap of 1 year…………

A huge hall is shown………it looks like some event was going to take place there……….

A poster is shown……with ragini’s pic…………

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Yes now ragini mishra is a big popular renowned singer…………………mehrya,jiglak ,manan and swara helped her..to get over her past

Today its her special concerts where other celbreties will also be coming……..

Otherside in London

In hospital

Otherside a doctor is shown……playing with kids happily………the kids pulls his cheeks…..he plays with them happily….

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The concert begins……….

Ragini sings many songs…………audience hoots for her……….she has now big fan followers……….

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After concert ragini was going to her green room……….but she starts feeling dizzy………she falls down unconscious…………

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Later ragini is seen in hospital…………

Meharya ,jiglak , manan and swara are waiting outside………….

Doctor comes………

Shaurya- doctor…….what happened………

Doctor- she has no time………she may die anytime………her heart has became very weak…………she need immediate heart transplant……but the problem is…….our hospital don’t have any heart and infact her condition is very critical…..here in this hospital you will not get such a good doctor who can take her case….

Shaurya- doctor their will be some way to save her………..

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Doctor- not sure……but you should take her to London……..bricanica hospital………it’s a famous hospital………may be they can save her………….but there is very little hope……because its very complicated situation….

Yes ragini was having heart problem……….her heart became weak she was going through cardiac desease since 6 months………..still she worked hard and became singer……..now it was last stage………..

Laksh-shaurya lets’s take her to London……………

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All reaches London………they take ragini to bricanica hospital………….

Ragini was in icu………

Jigyasha being a doctor meets other doctor and talk about ragini’s condition

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The same doctor who was playing with kids……..was informed about the case………….

He comes to see the patient and shocked to see ragini……….

The doctor is revealed to be sanskar……..’yes sanskr went to London………..and completed his further studies and became a best doctor……..and a head doctor of cardiac department….

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Sanskar gets teary eyed seeing ragini’s condition……….he caresses her face……..

Sanskar goes out………….

He spots laksh hugging jigyasha………..he misunderstands…..the situation……….and pulls laksh by his shoulder and slaps him hard………

Jigyasha and laksh are shocked but happy to see sanskar

Laksh- sanskar you here………we tried to find you everywhere……….

Sanskar- stop it………..how dare you to betray ragini………here your wife ragini is in critical condition……….and you are consoling other girl…….you are such a cheap man…….

Laksh was about to say something………but sanskar holds his collar……..jigyasha tries to separate them………….but cant…

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Meharya and manan reaches their and shocked to see sanskar…………

Shaurya and manik stops sanskar…………

Jigyasha narrated what happened…………

Mehak- sanskar calm down you thinking wrong………

Mehak tells him everything what happened at the wedding day…………sanskat gets teary eyed……..

Swara- sorry sanskar…….i m sorry……..

Mehak comes to sanskar……and passes him her phone….

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Mehak- sanskar see this……..ragini asked us to give it to you whenever we will find you…..

It was a vedio….

ragini was sitting on a stool, a guitar on her hand….

Ragini-“hi sanskar….I have a surprise for you!! Don’t close the vedio ok….” I know you are angry on me…but still…….you know na I m selfish so…..plzz watch till end…

She smiled to him and started to play the guitar. ❤

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Tenu itna main pyaar karaan

Ek pal vich sau baar karaan

Tu jaave je mainu chhad me

Maut da intezaar karaan…

(She looked directly in to the camera looking in to his eyes……)

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chaahati hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chaahati hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Sanskar remembers moments spend with ragini……he smiles through his tears…

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan

Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi

(Her hair dances with the wind……)

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan

Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi

Ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan

Ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri

(A tear drop fall from her eyes, making him also teary eyes..……)

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Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin

Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley

Main tujhko kitna chaahati hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chaahati hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake…..

(Her tears have increased now…….)

She was crying…..seeing her sanskar ‘s tears also esapes from his eyes……..others present there also became teary eyes…

She finished her song and kept her guitar aside.

“ sanki….I wanted to sing this song to you when you return..But destiny seems to have other plans for me,….

I know I betrayed you………I left you……….but then I realized…..and came back to you……..by by that time you left……..

And I have strong feeling that you will return someday for sure……….

But the destiny betrayed me……….now I will never return sanskar……….

When you will see this vedio…………..by that time………I will be no more……..i will be seeing you from sky…..being a star ……..

Sanskar ………..i……….i realy love you…….i love you sanki…….i love you a lot……..

Saying this she starts crying……..

The vedio ends…

Sanskar sits on the chair…..fully heart broken……others consoles him……

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Sanskar goes to ragini’s ward and sees her through window……….

He entered without knocking. There, lying on the bed was ragini… looking like an angel fallen from the sky.

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She was sleeping peacefully. He stepped in to the room without taking his eyes off her. Each step he took forward, made him remember every moment he spent…with her. …

Seeing her there with wires…. machines…. it broke his heart to see her like this…. Tears ran down freely from his eyes. He fell to his knees near her bed….

Holding her hand, he too fell asleep after thinking of her. ….

At morning….ragini wakes up and sees sanskar lying near her…she smiles…

Ragini-“sanskar holding my hand and he’s sleeping beside me? What a nice dream I don’t want to wake up!!”

She thought out loud smiling. She slowly caressed his head with her free hand.

Sanskar started to wake. He opened his sleepy eyes and looked at her….

His expression was so sad, he slowly touched her cheek. Her eyes widened.

“I’m not dreaming!! You’re real!! You’re really here!! Sanskar

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He hugged her so tight. He too was crying silently…..

She looked puzzled at first but soon realized…seeing the gang standing at door and nodding…

Ragini- “I’m sorry sanskar..”

Sanskar-“Chup!! Main na… tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga… got that? You have to get better. I won’t let anything happen to you… tumhe kahi nahi jaane dunga…”

He kissed her forehead… She closed her eyes feeling his emotions…..

The gang also became teary eyes…….seeing their love for each other…..

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Sanskar was in shock so he could not do the surgery………he requested dr sanchi to do ragini’s surgery…….dr sanchi was also a well trained and experienced doctor…

Sanskar before surgery went to icu to see ragini…………..

Sanksar entered icu…where ragini was lying unconscious………

Sanskar became teary eyes seeing her condition….

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Sanskar – dr sanchi… please save my sanchi……please..

Sanskar meharya.manan….swara and jiglak were waiting outside…

The light of the operation theatre went off after 3 hours……

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Dr sanchi,dr isha and dr pragya cames out…..

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shaurya sat beside mehak., holding her………….who was crying and silently praying to god……

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sanskar sees sanchi….and goes to her….

Sanskar- dr sanchi…….ragini…

Sanchi- dr sanskar…….ragini…

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sanskar heart was racing with fear of what might’ve happen to ragini…

Seeing his fearful expression

Sanchi said everything in one breath.

Sanchi-“Now you have a whole life to handle a drama queen dr sanskar…!!! Operation went successful…!!!”

Everyone was finally relieved ……

Sanskar- dr sanchi thank you very much…

Swara informed ragini’s parents in India…..they were also finally relieved………….knowing their daughter is fine now….

sanskar thanked god. **Thank you bhagwan ji for listening to my prayers!! I’m in debt to you forever!! Thank you so much for giving me my ragini back!!**

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After few days ………..all returned to India……….

It was ragini’s 23 birthday….

At evening party was arranged in ragini’s house…

Ragini was looking like an angel….

Ragini..

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Mehak

jkbkhg

Nandini

sdfghj

Swara

dfghjk

Jigyasha

ghj

Laksh

jkjh

Shaurya

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Sanskar

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Manik

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Everyone enjoyed the party……..ragini cuts the cake and feed everyone……..she looks for sanskar but doesn’t find him…

Suddenly lights went out leaving everything in complete darkness…. Then a spot light pointed to a direction….

They saw an outline of a man, sitting on a bench, holding a guitar with his head bent down…..

ragini’s heart suddenly started to race . She knew who it was. She could recognize him anywhere.

Strumming the guitar, he played a familiar music…

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He began to sing his head still bent….

Tenu itna main pyaar karaan

Ek pal vich sau baar karaan

Tu jaave je mainu chhad ke

Maut da intezaar karaan…

(He lifted his head and looked at one person directly……)

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake Ke

tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake….

(Everyone was admiring his song but he was lost in her eyes……)

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan

Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi

(Lost in her eyes, he was singing automatically like music was flowing through them……)

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan

Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi

Ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan

Ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri

(With each word he was trying to tell her something. Something that connected them together……)

Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin

Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley

Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

(He remembered how devastated he was when he got to know about her sickness. How he

died every second begging for god to give her life……)

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke.

Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Aankhon ke hai yeh khwahishein

Ki chehre se teri na hatein

Neendon mein meri bas tere

Khwabon ne li hai karwatein

(A tear drop fall from her eyes remembering all their time together……)

Ki teri ore mujhko leke chalein

Ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste

Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai

Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke

Main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon

Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

All were clapping as his song was finished.

His eyes still locked with hers, never looking away from her for even a second….

Guests moved away and let him pass without disturbing….

They saw him stop right in front of the birthday girl. Standing in front of her, he took both of her hands in his.

Sanskar- “You, Miss. ragini Mishra,…From the very first day I saw you,….you very well know I fell for you…….i confeesed you infront of everyone….i confeesed every day…..and your beautiful response……was your preety smile…which I wanted to see everyday…..every morning……..every night…

You invaded my mind, my thoughts everything!!

Admitting this in front of this whole crowd isn’t easy. Because there’s your father listening to me and he’s probably going to kill me for trying to take his princess

Although I had once confessed in front of everyone……but in front of a father is special you know…

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ragini…. I love you….. I love you so much….!!

Ragini-I love you sanskar…I love you very much….i love you infinity….!!”

She was crying

Sanskar-“ragini…… will you marry me….?”

He asked her, with so much love holding out a ring ….

His sincere passionate gaze went through her soul….

A unstoppable smile that said millions of words, made its way to her face. ..

Ragini looked at her father and mother……they smiles and nods…ragini smiles back…and then looks at sanskar waiting for her answer…

Ragini-“Yes…!!”

The hall erupted in to a loud noise with clapping and yelling in happiness as sanskar slipped the ring to ragini’s ring finger….

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Hugging her, he lifted her twirling her around…..

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Ragsan marriage…..

Ragini….

Sanskar….

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Ragsan competed their marriage with all rituals and blessing if everyone…

Sanskar ties mangalsutra around ragini’s neck………and then fills her hairline with sindoor……..

They are now husband and wife……..

Everyone blesses them……

After that everyone lived happily…

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After 2 years…

Ragini is seen sitting on a bench in garden………

A girl and a boy comes to her running……..

Girl- ragini maasi……when will our cousin come…..we want to play with him…

Boy- yes maasi….tell na….

Sanskar comes their and sees the kids…

Sanskar- meharya and anurag…you both here where are you mum and dad….

Voice comes from back

Voice- we are here….

Ragini and sanskar sees meharya, manan,jiglak and swara with his husband vardhan coming there…

Meharya is daughter of mehak and shaurya and anurag is son of jigyasha and laksh………

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Manik and nandini are also married now….

And our ragini is 6 months pregnant……..

My ff ends withs everyone’s happy faces…

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So finally I completed this ff…….literally……..I am very happy to complete it……..I first time worked so hard for writing ff……

Thank you all of you for giving so much support…………and keep smiling……..and again sorry to once whom I had hurt……….

And for sure share your views in my ff in comment section………..

Love you all

Bye

With lots of love

Priyanka

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  1. Ragsan together 😍😍Yay🎉🎉 Sweet story Yaar😘😘

  2. Jasminerahul

    nice to see ragininas a popular singer.shocking that ragini is a heart patient.surprised to see sanskar as a doctor.ragsan meeting in the hospital was so emotional n lovely.surprised to see dr.sanchi here.good to see sanchi doing ragini’s operation n ragini fine.but it’s strange that ragini’s parents didn’t accompany ragini when she is undergoing a major operation.grand party.party look of the characters was nice.ragsan confession. ..proposal scene….ring scene were romantic. happy to see ragsan married.wow now meher shaurya n laksh jigyasa have a kid.happy to see ragini pregnant n manan married.happy that swara also got married.nice kid as mehriya.but the kids look older than 2 years.only 2 years leap.right?nice ending.beautiful pics

    1. Priyankashaurya

      Hmm sorry after uploading I realised Tht kids are looking older…..
      And yes ragini parent wanted but their frnds convinced them to not come… They will take care of her…. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
      Nd thanks a lot

      1. Jasminerahul

        its ok,seeing the kids i am assuming it to be 6 yrs leap.waiting 4 ur next ss

  3. Jasminerahul

    i have become your fan through this ss.please write more cute short stories .I am waiting

  4. Jasminerahul

    ragini singing n confessing her love for sanskar in the phone was emotional. sanskar singing the same song for ragini at the party was lovely

  5. Superb dear

  6. Awesome cute one. Come back with Ragsan story again

  7. Emotional ending but cute

  8. Anuva

    Very emotional dear… i cried when you desctibe about Ragini’s cardiac disease n Ragini’s video… heart touching love story…

  9. Palchin

    It’s superb dear. I like every part. Ragini’s video part I liked most. It was really heart touching.

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