Dil ki Kahaani Twinj os


Thank you guys for your love for my first os, Destiny chooses its own way. If u want to read it here’s the link http://www.tellyupdates.com/destiny-chooses-way-os/

Guys, here’s my next os.
Let’s start,
A girl is shown sitting on a sofa and making herself comfortable, but crying. She is Twinkle Taneja. Twinkle is a famous writer, she penned many novels. A man is sitting beside Twinkle (not going to reveal him now).
I started speaking “India, our nation has faced many problems and the biggest problem poverty”……………………………………………………………………………………………..then ended by saying “the people should help in developing India.” My speech was the last. All the hearts were beating, everyone’s blood pressure went up, when the judges were about to tell the result.
The judge Mr. Call said – Kunj Sarna is the winner. I dropped my face, became upset.
Mr. Call said – Twinkle u also very close, but u had accent no words. I nodded. Kunj looked at me. everyone stepped out and Kunj moved towards me.
He said – Twinkle I’m Kunj sarna.
I said – Twinkle Taneja.
Kunj – I know. Twinkle u gave me a very good fight.
I said – Thanks, but u know I really wanted to be the best.
Kunj – you can be the best if u put your full strength.
I said – what can I do more?
Kunj – you can work on your words.
I said – how?
Kunj – I don’t know how? U have to sort out yourself.
He was about to leave but then I spoke that can he help me work on my words. i really wanted him to help me because I wanted to be the best.
Kunj – i would really like to help u.
I said – when should we meet. The expression which came on his face totally showed that he was digging his mind.
The he said – 4 to 5pm every day. I nodded.
Next day, I met him and he started teaching me how to use words in sentences. He appreciated me for my accent. My first session was completed.
Days passed like monsoon winds and I turned out to be good debater. I thanked Kunj for his help. The college principal announced a debate competition. I gave my name for the competition. I asked Kunj to take part, but he said no. I was really disappointed, his decision made me weak. I too wanted my name to get cut. But, wait a minute, why am I so concern for him, why is he so dear to me, why am I thinking to get my name cut of the competition. Many sorts of questions flashed and were roaming in my mind. They had no answers.
I walked to Kunj and asked him the real reason which made him back off.
He answered – I don’t want u to lose because of me.
I said – r u mad, or crazy. U know that I am not going to take part if u will not because in this college u r the best debater and I would like to debate with u.
Kunj – okay if u say then, I will take part.
I said – go. He noted his name in the competition. I was happy.
The day came when the competition took place. Everyone spoke their speech. The result was out. I was completely shivering, my heart was pumping fast, and I was sweating. The result were announced. I heard it and my heart stopped pumping (not totally:-P) but it started dancing. The winner was me, Twinkle Taneja.
Kunj was smiling, as he knew it. I was tear eyed, had nothing to speak. The judge this time said – u were fabulous Twinkle, u had both accent and words. this time Kunj lacked. I looked at Kunj who was also tear eyed. I knew that he too wanted to win. Kunj looked at me and then I realized that I loved him, he became the most important of my life who made my realized my mistake, where I lacked the most. I loved him a lot.
The competition completed its last stage. It was over. Kunj had left the place. Twinkle’s eyes were searching him. She went out and saw Kunj leaving. She shouted. He looked back. She went running towards him and hugged him. He hugged her back.
Twinkle – I dedicate this to u as u were the one who helped me to get this.
Kunj – Twinkle I want to say some ting to u.
Twinkle – say what u want to.
Kunj – Twinkle I love u. Twinkle broke the hug and looked at him sadly.
Kunj – Twinkle I don’t know how I fell in love with u. I started teaching u and then after some days I realized my feelings. I really love u Twinkle. Twinkle I know u did not expect……..but before he could complete, he felt something soft on his lips, yes u guess it right, Twinkle kissed him. It was long one. Then, after some time she broke it and said idiot couldn’t u confess earlier. I love too Kunj. Kunj was happy. They hugged each other.
They told their parents who were very happy with the alliance.
But, then Twinkle had a wish to become writer. Kunj helped her on her way to become writer. She was a famous writer and Kunj was a literature professor. Both got married after settling their career.

But It is said that no happiness lives longer, it is killed by some sadness. Kunj was admitted to hospital as he had faced an accident. Twinkle meets Kunj in hospital and tells him that her novel, give me life has been praised a lot. Kunj gives no response; she bursts out and keeps her head on his. She checks his breath and realizes that his is not breathing and has left her alone. She breaks down. A year later Twinkle started to write one more novel and started her life a fresh, Vivek notes this point and ended the novel.
Present, Twinkle is sitting on a sofa. She is crying and telling her story to the person sitting beside her who is Vivek Verma, writer who wants his career to start by writing Twinkle’s biography.
The day comes when Twinkle’s biography has to be published. Vivek tells Twinkle to speak something. Twinkle goes to speak and remembers how she and Kunj used to debate and how he helped her to improve herself.
Twinkle starts “My Life has being revolving around my family members, my in-laws and my Kunj, the person who left me alone, but is still there in my heart. Here I’m going to dedicate this book to my late husband Kunj Sarna. Even, if he is not in between us, he will always remain in my heart.”
Just, she imagines Kunj sitting in the audience and has tears in her eyes.

Guys i know boring concept. But please bare it. Comment below.

Credit to: Mitali

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  1. I loved this concept..

    1. thanks crazy. u made me crazy

  2. Very nice and heart touching story.

    1. thank you zuha fatima for your comment

  3. Waaaw amzing wat a concept u hav wriiten i loved it

    1. thanks for commenting cutie pie

  4. Very nice I loved it

    1. thanks

  5. Awwww such an heart touching OS dear loved it so so sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much do write such more concepts like dis luv u

    1. thanks zayb_zikra. i luv u

  6. wwwoooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it……..really heart touching………………………

    1. thanks Jerly

  7. I am a silent reader.but this fanfic forced me to comment.can you please tell me how can I post a fanfiction,PLEASEE?

    1. Twinju(Bhavika)

      hello nishi dear posting a ff is really simple here are the steps..but make sure you have an email id
      1)can you see the topmost part of the page there written”submit your article”just click on it (a new page opens)
      2)here write your name,email id,your article’s name,the main article,select category,put a picture for the ff and click on “submit article for review”
      3)i highly recommend you to write in ms word or wordpad and paste it there and also put the article in english exept some lines because hindi articles are not published
      4)and nishi dear please read my ff too”dilon ki dastaan”and comment..i am always there for your help if u have any more question you can always ask me on my ff page..and after writing the ff don’t forget me ..please tell me after starting it on my ff page lots of love and best of luck to u
      then to this OS dear mitali u are an awesome writer please try to write a fan fiction too this episode was fabulous

      1. hey Twinju(Bhavika) i used to write a ff but i was bored by my ff. thanks a lot for your comment.

    2. thanks and yes u have to go on the top of this page and then u will see Submit your article. click there and u will get your answer and u can post your fan fiction luv u nishi

  8. super loved it

    1. thanks

  9. U concept is lovely.

    1. thanks asmita

  10. Twinju(Bhavika)

    mitali i re your other ff it was amazing as this on while this one made me cry

    1. thanks Twinju(Bhavika) i love u.

  11. A very cute one but emotional too

    1. thanks

  12. Omg u are awesome love you

    1. thanks sam

  13. nice concept..too good

    1. thanks

  14. love it… really nice.. do continue.. best luck

    1. thanks tannu

  15. wowww mitali u r amazing…. bt i must u r emotional writer… or can say a true emotion queen….. i mean it positively…

    1. thanks for the comment. i’m glad that u liked it. and yes i will write a happy ending story.

  16. awww!!!! it was really a sweet one dear.. loved the concept… u r jst awesome, grt, mindblowing…. i dnt have more words …

    1. thank you i’m very glad that u liked it.

  17. Nice Concept…
    Cute story…
    keep writing…

    1. thanks a lot ruchi luv u

  18. twinjfan-(tamanna)

    amazing . .

    1. thanks a lot

  19. awesome..super duper hit!!

    1. Thanks Tara. I m really on cloud nine after reading your comment. Thanks a lot.

  20. Awesome …..

    1. Thanks a lot

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