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DIL KE RISHTEY (Episode-4)

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DIL KE RISHTEY(Episode – 4)
She made broken look beautiful & strong look invincible, she walked with the universe on her shoulders & made it look like a pair of wings……Any guesses, abt whom I’m talking?…..of course…a Mother……The purest & truest meaning of the word unconditional can only be found in a mother’s love……….A mother sees all, says little…sacrifices all, complains little…gives all, expects little…all she wants is her child to be happy…anytime & everytime…..
First of all, a big big thanks to Dhruti, Anu, Ruwani, Niyaa, Priyanshi, Reni(Riru), Swetha, Divya, Tania, Moni(Tumpamoni), Amnaa for liking my previous episode of this plot & also to my frnds who liked it…. badi waali jaadu ki jhappi to u all…….ur comments act as a power booster for me….luv u all….now, I stop my blabbering, this chattering session will continue in the end of this episode…haha….so, let’s get started….

Link for the prev.episode: Episode 3

Recap: Kritika’s death, Mission Kanchi Love confession

Place: Rishikesh
Veer & Prasha were planning the venue of Kabir’s proposal
Pragya: I think, we can use our school premises & kids in this…
Veer: Nice idea…we’ll go by this…
Isha: No yaar…I think restaurant will be a better place for his proposal…what do u think abt this?
Veer: Ur idea is also perfect…we’ll go by this plan…
Pragya: Abeo…r u insane? How can both plans be nice? U have to select one naa…
Veer(keeping his arms around Prasha): & if I say, we gonna use both, then?…..Prasha giving a confused look to Veer…
Veer: Don’t give such looks…I’ve a plan, listen…..(Plan muted)…..Bas ye idea, iss paagal Priyanka & uske pyaare readers ko pasand aa jaye…just hope that the plan works well…The trio smile & give a hi-five…….. scene shifted…

Place: Delhi
It’s almost been two weeks since Kritika’s demise, but still……silence prevails in the Singhania mansion…as if along with Kritika, the soul, the happiness, children’s laughter…all went away with her…Vikram tried his best to make children come out of grief, but all in vain…not only Vikram & children got affected, but the effect of Kritika’s death could also be seen with Juno…he started skipping his meals…It was like Kritika took away a part of their very being along with her…
One day while Vikram was sitting in the garden & reading news paper, Robin came to him…
Robin: Bhaiyya, if u won’t mind, can I say something?
Vikram: Of course Robin, tell me…
Robin: Bhaiyya, u can clearly see what our house has turned out after Bhabhi maa left us…wo ghar jahaan har pal ek raunak sa laga rehta tha, now silence prevails there… She alwz wanted & tried to keep everyone around happy…even if I’m a care taker, she always treated me like a family member…she was an angel…apne pyar ke moh ke dhaage mein sab ko ek saath jode rakhti thi…she never thought abt herself, everytime, she just lived for others…she just wanted to see happiness on everyone’s face…now, don’t u feel bhabhi maa would be hurt seeing u all like this? mostly, the children…
Vikram: I can understand Robin…But what can we do? Nothing can fill the emptiness of our life which Kritika’s death has bought for us…
Robin: Bhaiyya, if u don’t mind,I was thinking what if we keep a nanny for looking after the kids…but only if u feel this is right…
Vikram: I think u r right…I’ll talk with Mr. Ahuja(his manager….random name guys)…on this…he’ll look into this…The children heard him talking, they decided that they won’t allow anyone to come to their house as their nanny….(plan muted)…Raj takes out his hand…Vishal & Ruhi keeps their hand on his….& yeah, even Juno…..haha…….& they smile looking at each other…

Timeskip
First day, a man came for interview(as children’s care taker)…he couldn’t even manage to enter Singhania mansion coz Juno didn’t allowed him to enter…The children come out laughing & hug Juno….
Second day, a lady came…she was waiting for Vikram to come when suddenly, a toy snake fell on her, she was scared & left the place immediately….the children gave a hi-five to each other…Vikram came out to find no one there, he undestood that all this was done by children, but he didn’t say them anything…
Next day, a lady came…she was having a grumpy look on her face…she looked a bit scary to the children…she was finally selected by Vikram, after interview…The lady just made one thing sure that nobody would interfere in her way of handling them, to which Vikram agreed, but with one condition that his children won’t be physically assaulted else the woman would see the worst of him to which she agreed… …(guys, sorry, but I won’t explain this elaborately….plz bear with this….)
The lady was very strict, if the children did anything wrong, she would scold them badly…the children complained abt this to Vikram, but since Vikram knew their intentions of not keeping nanny, he thought the children were lying, until that day…

One day, while returning from his work, Vikram saw that the lady was raising her hand on Ruhi, suddenly Vikram stopped her by holding her hand…
Vikram: How dare u?(Ruhi went to the back of Vikram in fear & hugged him)…I warned u not to touch my children…
Lady: Sorry sir…but it was ur children’s fault….they…she was stopped by Vikram…
Vikram: Not a word against my children…now u gonna see what I’m going to do with u…he called his security & instructed them to get the lady arrested, & made sure that she would get the worst punishment….The guards did as they were instructed….
Vikram(hugging his children): Sorry my children…U had already said me but I didn’t pay any heed to ur words…Sorry bachchon…(he was in tears…& he was holding his ears & saying sorry)…”no papa”…Ruhi said putting his hands down
Raj: Yes papa, it was not ur fault…U don’t need to feel sorry…plz papa…
Vishal: Now that evil aunty is gone…we’re free…hurray!!….Everyone smiled & the children gave a tight hug to Vikram…

Two days passed…Vikram was sitting in the garden & thinking abt who can take care of his children…afterall, he can luv them as a father, but as a mother…a motherly affection, he can never give that….Suddenly he reminisced about Sanchi’s words, she said in the function…that she would help them in any possible way…”Yeah…Sanchi…The way she handles kids…just osm…how can I forget abt her? But will she agree to take care of my kids? What if she doesn’t agree? But what if she agrees? I need to talk to her in this matter & get to know her opinion…Yes, this will be right”…thought Vikram…

Scene shifts
Place: Rishikesh
Kabir in his room thinking about his and Sanchi’s moments…suddenly Sanchi comes there, she’s looking very beautiful…without giving any thoughts, he cups her face & gives a peck on her cheeks…Veer shouts in a shock…Kabir at once realizes he was daydreaming.
Kabir: Sorry I thought it was Sanchi…
Veer: sorry bhai, u were in a Romeo mode, I mean romantic mood, I disturbed u.
Kabir: Chote…nothing like that…Kabir hides his face without knowing how to face him…
Screen freezes with smiling face of Kabir & Veer…

Time skip
Sanchi came to school. Some girls came and gave her balloons. She received it while smiling, but before she could ask anything, they left. Just then, another girl came and gave her a letter & immediately left, leaving her confused, yet again. She opened it and saw a message,”Come to the library”. She went to the library. Prasha came and gave her a letter. They left smiling, leaving Sanchi confused…Sanchi opened it and saw a message,” see ‘Timeline’ book”. She saw that book. She saw a letter in that book. She opened it and saw a message, “Come to ‘Starbucks cafe’ at 1.30”…
Sanchi(in thoughts, while smiling): I know Kabir,it’s you who is torturing me like this, but I’m enjoying this.

At 1.30 pm
Sanchi came to that restaurant. She is eagerly waiting for Kabir’s message
One waiter came from inside towards her.
Waiter: Ma’m you are Sanchi right?
Sanchi: Yes
Waiter: Ma’m plz come with me.
That waiter and Sanchi went to terrace. The waiter left.
(Guys u can see the place, the terrace & it’s decorations on my wall)

She saw the arrangements & was surprised. She went towards the table & saw a letter there. She took it and opened it & saw a message,”Please wait”.
After 10 minutes,
She heard a song ”Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta(from movie Agent Vinod)”. She immediately recognized the voice was of Kabir, she turned to see but no one was there. She was searching for him. Suddenly, someone closed her eyes from back. She was a bit shocked. She removed the hand & turned to find Kabir standing there.
Sanchi: What is all this Kabir…why…
Kabir(putting finger on her lips): Shhh……let me say first….
Kabir kneeled down and took out a red rose from his pocket & stared speaking
Kabir: Sanchi, I don’t know when I started loving you. But my love for you is very true. I don’t know how much I love you but I love you always and forever. You are my everything. You are my life. You are my love. And you are the reason for my heart beats. Sanchi, I had no one in my life except Veer. I didn’t want to get into any relationship because of the fear of losing someone. I was not accepting my love for you bcz I thought that I was unlucky. But now, I don’t want to lose you. Sanchi, will you be my friend who makes me strong? Will you be my life partner who shares her happiness and sorrow? Will you be my love who loves me unconditionally? Will you be with me always and forever?
Sanchi had tears in her eyes. She smiles and takes the rose. Petals shower on her. Kabir wipes her tears & they hug each other.

Kabir(forwarding his hand): May I have the pleasure of dancing with you?…Sanchi nods & keeps her hand on his…
Kabir
Hue bechain pehli baar, humne raaz ye jaana
Mohabbat mein koi aashiq, kyun ban jaata hai deewana…
Agar iqraar ho jaye, kisi se pyar ho jaaye
Bada mushkil hota hai dil ko samjhaana…
(he kisses Sanchi’s hand)
Hue bechain pehli baar, humne raaz ye jaana
Mohabbat mein koi aashiq, kyun ban jaata hai deewana…
(he twirled Sanchi)
Sanchi
Tassavur ke haseen lamhe, tera ehsaas karte hain
Tera jab zikra aata hai, toh milne ko tadapte hai
Hamara haal na poocho, ki duniya bhool baithe hain
Chale aao tumhare bin, na marte hain na jeete hain
(Sanchi hugs Kabir while resting her head on his chest)
Suno accha nehi hota, kisiko aise tadpana
Mohabbat mein koi aashiq kyun ban jaata hai deewana…
Agar ye pyar ho jaye, kisi pe dil jo aa jaaye
Bada mushkil hota hai dil ko samjhaana
Hue bechain pehli baar, humne raaz ye jaana…
Kabir
Tu hi hai tu hai, tu hi hai
Falak se poochlo chahe, gawaah ye chand tare hain
Na samjho ajnabi sadiyon se, hum toh bas tumhare hain
Mohabbat se nehi waaqif, bohut anjaan lagti ho
Hame milna zaroori hai, haqeeqat naa samajhti ho
Koi kaise samajh paaye, kisi ke dil ka afsaana
(he kisses Sanchi’s forehead)
Mohabbat mein koi aashiq, kyun ban jaata hai deewana…
Agar iqraar ho jaye, kisi se pyar ho jaaye
Bada mushkil hota hai dil ko samjhaana…
Hue bechain pehli baar, humne raaz ye jaana
Mohabbat mein koi aashiq, kyun ban jaata hai deewana…

They danced very romantically. They were lost in each other. They wanted to stop that moment.
Uff…finally, our love birds are in love. They confessed their love. But will they marry? Just wait and watch what has destiny planned for them.

Guys, I end this episode here itself…coz I wanted to end this on a happy note……..Hope u all would have liked reading this……but anyways, if u didn’t like, sorry for that in advance, u can freely tell me ur views regarding where I need my improvement…& plz guys, need ur support in this, plz guys, plz drop a comment so that I can know how the episode is proceeding…& I hope, I could meet the expectations of my frnds who wanted me to write something, like a romantic os…fingers crossed…actually I’m very bad when it comes to romantic scenes…but anyways, thanks a lot for bearing all my blabbering…
With lots of LOVE,
Priyanka

42 Comments
  1. Dhruti

    prinku hi dear……..how are you?
    back to ff it was superband funny because of children vo log kuch esa kar rahe the ki sari nanny bhag jaye ye pad kar muje bahot hasi aa rahi thi
    and wow the way kabir propose sanchi it was like…….yuppie……………… sorry i have no words for that scene………i love it…………..(if this was happen in serial…….)
    don’t break kanchi please please at the end you said will they marry so i doubt you that you doing something when sanchi go to vikram house as nanny(tere dimag me kuch khichdi pak rahi he)………..sach bol rahi hu na bolo…………..
    love you derrrrr saraaaaaaaaaaa………….
    tc………………bye…………………..a lot of hugs and kisses to you…………….

    1. Riyarocks

      haha……..Dhruti…….aise kaise bata doon……..kuch toh suspense rehne de na……..yaar, tere comments ne toh mere chehre par 100W ka glow le aaya……..tune socha kya mere uss baat ke baare mein……..yaar, main tere articles padhna chahti hoon……ek baar try kar, tu zaroor kar payegi……..ff na sahi, but os toh likh hi sakti hai na?…….anyways, ek baat poochna chahoongi, jab ki ye baat mein apni agli episode mein sabse poochne waali hoon, but phir bhi….tu kya chahti hai?….isse humorous waala banaoon ya phir thoda emotional waala, kuch action sequence ke saath……..batana zaroor………luv u Shona……….bye………tc…………

      1. Dhruti

        messages padhe mere me sab bataya he vaha pe dekhna ek baar…………….

        thoda emotional rakh……..action sequence bhi rakh per bahot emotional mat banana ki rona hi aa jaye me abhi bilkul rone ke mood me nahi hu……………….isse humorous waala banana to bhi achcha nahi lagega abhi ki situation me because KS bhi death abhi hue 2 week hi hue he……abhi to thoda emotional rakna baad me tu isse humorous waala bana sakti he………….per kanchi ko alag mat karna please unke bich to humorous waale scenes hi acchhe lagenge………………..
        sorry again ii oper my chatterbox……………i close it here…………….
        i hope i’m able to gave your ans as per your expectation……………..
        love you………………..bye…………….tc……………….

    2. Riyarocks

      ek baat bataoon, abhi ek aur hai jo jaane waala hai(I mean swarg), but kaun……ye tujhe baad mein pata chalegi………& haan, isse karna zaroori hai, coz iske bina, plot aage nehi badh sakegi……kyunki, yehi hone waala hai, iss plot ka twist ya phir turning point, jo apne saath kai aur characters add karnewaala hai……hope tujhe ye track aage bhi pasand aaye…….luv u Shona…….

  2. Hyyy priyanka!!!…..epi was amazing n it took my heart away from me (i mean dis ff took my heart)……

    1. Riyarocks

      & ur comments seedhe mere dil ko choo gayi……..awww…..such cute comments…….yaar Dhruvi, thnx for being a regular reader & commentor……..I’m really glad ki tujhe ye pasand aaya………luv u a lot sweetieeeeee……..bye……..have a nice day………

  3. Priyanshipp

    Yaara ekdum mast mind blowing h. Interesting h . Abhi late ho rha h zyada nhi bol paungi kyuki neend aa rhi h. Jldi se next wala post kariyo. Bas kaanchi ki shaadi kara diyo. Us vikram se nhi. Luv u shona mona. Take care. 😙😙good ninny.

    1. Riyarocks

      achha ji……aise kaise itne asaani se inko mila doon? thoda toh twist banta hai na boss, warna mazaa nehi aayega……..& rahi baat Vichi(Vikram & Sanchi) ke baare mein, woh mein tujhe abhi nehi batane waali hoon…….aakhir tune apne ff ke dauraan hum sabko itna tadpaaya hai, lead pair ke liye, ab toh teri baari hai, itni aasaani se tujhe kaise chod doon bina tang kie……haha………ab chal, zyaada nehi bol sakti, bas itna keh sakti hoon, apni wohi ghisi piti pooraani andaaz mein, luv u dherrrrrrrr saara & ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi……..tere liye…….haha………bye……..tc………

  4. Riru

    Amazing di bye i hv to go school . Tc luv u

    1. Riyarocks

      haha……sweetu, tune comment kiya…….thnx for that……..ek cheez hai tere baare mein, chahe koi kare ya na kare, but tu kabhi nehi bhoolti mere har writings par comments karne ko…..it means a lot for me & I luv u a lot for that……..I’m really glad ki tujhe ye pasand aaya…….luv u a lot sweetu…….have a nice day………bye……….tc……..

  5. So so beautiful episode

    1. Riyarocks

      shukriya shukriya shukriya……Anu dear, I’m really glad that u liked this episode & moreover being a regular reader & commentor……….luv u a lot sweetieeeeee…….have a nice day………bye……….tc……..

  6. Awesome riya dear! Itne mind-blowing ideas tujhe aate kaha se hai yaar? Aaj toh bata hi de tu khati Kya hai yaar? Very nice story… Jitni tarif karu kam hai…waise bhi serial mein toh kuch bacha nahi ab sirf doston ki ff padhti hu toh dil ko sukun milta hai..

    1. Riyarocks

      Shuprobhat Anu dear……..tumi kene assa?……….waise, main golgappa ke siva sab kuch khaati hoon & milk toh bilkul nehi, I just hate it……..haha……..& yaar tere iss pyaari si comment….seedhe jaake mere dil ko choo gayi……..mujhe bohut acha laga ye jaankar ki tujhe ye pasand aaya……….ab chal, zyaada kuch nehi bol sakti, bas itna keh sakti hoon, apni wohi pooraani ghisi piti andaaz mein, luv u dherrrrrrrr saara & ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi……..tere liye…….haha………bye……..tc………

  7. Its so amazing….. Loved it

    1. Riyarocks

      thnku sooooooo much Amnaa dear for being a regular reader & commentor………..I’m really glad that u liked this episode………luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee………bye………tc………

  8. awesome dear

    1. Riyarocks

      thnku so so much Swetha dear for commenting………I’m really happy that u liked this episode………..luv u a lot dear……….have a nice day………bye……..tc……….

  9. Wow,,dear wndrful epsd,,espicially proposing part just lvd it soo much.. Nd one more thing wher is my kanchi romantic os dear??? Plz write it soon.. Lv u..

    1. Riyarocks

      awww…….Moni dear, ur comments made my day…….thnx a lot for commenting sweety……actually I’m a big zero, when it comes to romantic scenes……..just made an attempt here to make u all happy…….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeee………have a nice day………bye……..tc……….

  10. Niyaaa

    Wowwwwww priyu kya proposal tha… maza aagaya😊😊😊 nd ye vikram se sanchi ki shadi mat karwaiye wrna mera til💘khanjar chubh jayega😀😀 or aga shadi vikram se krwani h to krwa skti h per vikram singhania nahi vikram sakhalkar s😀😀😀 nd last kisi ko bhi marna veer ko nahi kabir ka eklota family member h samjhi… bye or baatein inata pe krenge… Lovvv u shona … tc nd haan nanny bhagao part ravishing… bye bye

  11. Riyarocks

    hehe……..thnk God tujhe pasand aaya…….& Vichi ki shaadi!!!!……..haha……..main abhi kuch nehi bolne waali…….dekh, bata dia toh saara mazaa kharab hojayega……..& upar se, iss Priyanshi ki bachchi se badla bhi toh lena hai…….aakhir kitna tadpaya usne hamein, lead pair batane ke liye…..sahi boli naa………

    1. Riyarocks

      ab chal…iska nxt waala, I mean, this time I’ll go for os…….woh bhi teri waali………haha……bas tujhe pasand aa jaye…….luv u Shona……….wo bhi truck bhar bhar ke, dherrrrrrrr saara………haha………

      1. Niyaaa

        Arrey prinku priyanshi usko to or tadpana bade maze le rahi thi naaa… or haan tera likha os m guranty k sath khti hun mujhe20000000% pasand aane wala h isme koi shaq nhi.. bye tm mile to insta pe aa jana.. bye

      2. Riyarocks

        oye…….itna bhi sure mat ho, main itni bhi achhi writer nehi hoon, jo tere rocking ideas ko likh paoon, bas ek koshish karoongi…..tujhe agar theek thak bhi lagjaye, wo mere liye badi baat hogi………luv u Shona……..bye……..

  12. Rajnandini

    Omg!!! Mi….ooooppsss…! Sorry ! MRP episode was mindblowing dear….aur kabir ka propose karne ka style pe mai mar jawaa….hahaha!!! Loved it a lotttttt yaar…..superb….having no words! Sorry again for not commenting on previous episode but I read it and it was too spellbound…. (Aaj mai tere haatoo se Marne wali hoon ….hahaha!!) Pata hai naa kyu?! Waise mai bhi os ka intazar kar rahi hook air who bhi super romantic wala….bol kab post kar rahi hai? Chal baad mai baat karte hai….love u loads….

  13. Riyarocks

    maregi toh zaroor…..itna late comment koi karta hai bhala, teri toh!!!!!!!!….dusron ko toh khair kuch keh nehi sakti, but tere se kuch bhi bol sakti hoon….meri CVR jo hai tu….waise, dara dia tha haan tune, mujhe lag raha tha ki tujhe shayad pasand nehi aaya…..but chal bachchi…..tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi……maine tujhe maaf kiya…..but haan, goi galatfaimi mat paalna, iss baar choda hai, agli baar, tu nehi bachne waali…….baaki baatein, pm mein…..acha laga jaankar, ki mujhe thodi bohut romantic waale scenes bhi aa sakte hain….ab tu ff/fs na sahi but kanchi os toh likh hi sakti hai naa?…..ab chal, baad mein baat karenge…..luv u meri CVR………dherrrrrrrr saara………..

    1. Rajnandini

      Hahahaha!!!! Hehehehe!!!! MRP ko pata nahi chala ki Maine kya galti kar diya comment likhte Wakt! Bogambo khush hua!

  14. RuCh23

    Sorry for commenting this much late sweetie 🙏🙏🙏 and the epi was fab!!! 😍😍😍 you made me totally wordless!!! It was emotional, humorous & romantic, all at once!!! What a combination yaar 😍😍😍 I’m in love with your writings 😘😘😘 and love you too!!!

    1. Riyarocks

      no problem dear……..& yaar, tujhe ye pasand aaya, bohut badi baat hai…..getting appreciation from an amazing writer like u, this means a lot to me.luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee………..bye……..tc……..

  15. Khamoshi

    Oyee meri nautanki ki dukaan….kya proposal likha hai…dil khush kar ditta tune.. i love the rain part yaar.. so romantic… aaj kal badi picture sichture dekhne lagi hai naa tu 😉😄😄 hehe loved it yaar.. and itna suspense mat rakha kar.. precap diya kar.. 😙😙😙 and main ab bhi romantic OS ka intezar kar rahi hu..KANCHI ..or kuch mat kar dena 😂😂

    1. Riyarocks

      haye…..meri jawaani janeman, shukr hai tujhe ye pasand aa gaya……….& waise, yahaan rehkar, thodi bohut suspense rakhna seekh gayi hoon…….isliye, ab se, koi twist aana ho nxt episode mein, toh, NO PRECAP…….haha………..chehra toh dekh apni, ek dum tamatar ki tarah laal ho gayi na;P;P………haha…….& haan, koi picture wikture nehi dekh rahi hoon, free time par either maa ke saath & agar baba aas paas nehi hue toh, tum sab ke saath gappe shappe karti hoon…….sab iss psycho dimaag ka khel hai, aur kuch nehi……….luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara & ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u………….

  16. Rain romance di….I love it….sorry for being late….awesome as always….loved it …..do update soon….lots of love to u & Good night.No precap today….maar kar hi chodoge suspense se😂😂…

    1. Riyarocks

      Choti…..sorry mat bola kar, warna thappad padjayega teri dii se…….haha………I know, teri padhai ke zanjeeron mein tu phasi hui hai……..koi nehi, tune padha & comment kia, wo mere liye badi baat hai……..ur comments like alwz bought a big smile on my face……….luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara & ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u………….have a bindaas weekend ;);):):)

  17. Abhilasha

    Oye hoye …meri sweetipie…..proposal to bht changa ta……do u also want this kind of proposal…he he……….but sachchi yr…….it was mind blowing…..lovely….wonderful….. Superbbbb…..etc safe words tareef k dictionary k for u darling…….I loved it Sher Sara!!!!💞💞💞💞💞💞😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍luv uh!!

    1. Riyarocks

      Sat sri akaal ji………tussi kiwen ho ji?…….ab chal, apni bhasha mein bolti hoon……..ek dum paagal hai tu………sachchii……….agar koi aise aakar mere saamne bolega, toh haath pair na tod doon uske main……..single rehne mein jo mazaa hai, wo kisi aur mein nehi….jab,jo,jahaan,jis se bhi chahe kuch bhi bol sakte ho, koi rok tok nehi………poori azaadi……..haha………& yaar, tere iss cute se, pyaare se comment….seedhe mere dil ko choo gayi……….luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara & ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u………….have an ek dum jhakaas weekend ;);):):)

  18. Anee

    Mita…..yaaarrrrr………kiya cheezzzz hai tu…..Hey RAM….meri Mita romantic nahi hai phir bhi itna accha proposal likha hai….kaise??? kuch toh gadbad hai Boss….hehe…majak kar rahi thi….samjh gayi na?? Mita kamaal kar diya ….matlab kammaal dhaaamal kar diya….nahi kamaal dhamaal be mismissaaal kar diya…..yaarrr….jzt supperbbbb….apna next kab post karne wali hai…and finally main apne ghar aagayi hun so…Now wants to read more more and more…luv uh so much Mita.

    1. Riyarocks

      Anee…….yaar, tu ACP Pradyuman mode mein mat jaa, arey yaar, koi gadbad nehi hai……..actual mein mere dimaag mein thoda chemical locha hogaya hai, isiliye aisa likh daala…….tu nehi thi naa, tujhse baat nehi ho paa rahi thi, isiliye………ab tu aa gayi, ab sab theek hojayega……….ab main wapas apne original andaaz mein lout jaoongi……hehe………luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara & ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u………….have a khidkitod weekend……arey exams bhi toh khatam ho gaye hai naa……haha ;);):):)

  19. Sayali

    Amazing dear..read your previous episode too..loved it..as I was busy I don’t got time to reado and comment..

    1. Riyarocks

      no problem dear, its absolutely fine, I can understand sweety….studies & all, these r most imp…….but yaar, I’m really glad to know that u read my prev updates……….luv u a lot sweetieeeee & a big teddy hug for u……….have a rocking weekend……..:):)

  20. Urvi_shah

    Riya di u write amazing ff…

    1. Riyarocks

      Thanku soooooooo much Urvi……I’m really glad that u liked it & dear, welcome to our TU family……….eagerly waiting for ur plot to unfold……..luv u a lot sweetieeeeee…….have a fun filled Sunday………:):)

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