Dil ka rishta ~ a twinj os

Hii guy’s…. I’m here with an #OS on TwiNj…I hope u all like it…

#Dil_Ka_Rishta [twinj OS]

Characters:- #Twinkle_Taneja [a girl suffering frm mental illness cuz her boy frnd ditch her]
#Kunj_Sarna [only Siddhant Gupta] famous physco.Dr
#Leela_Taneja[twinkle’s mother]
#Yuvraj_Luthra[kunj’s frnd & Mahi would be hubby]
#Mahi_Taneja [tw elder sis & Uv would be wife]

So, here story begins…….
#Yuhi enagement cermony
Everyone blessing yuhi….Then a girl cms there in hall & starts begging to her mother
Maa plz give me ice-cream
L:- no, Twinkle tmhari tabiyat thik nai h n
Tw:-mujhe bhook lagi h Maa
Then she goes near to Yuhi
Tw ~ Dii, Jiju maa ko bolo na ice-cream dilvane k liye….Pls dii plz jiju
She was behaving like a kid cuz she was not in her sense…. Some ladies were gossiping about her Lday1~pta nai kaise jhelte h log ise,agr meri beti hoti to main to kisi pagalkhane me chhor deti..
Lady2~ vahi to ajib log h itne khass function main is pagal ko le aaye h

Uv ~ok tw main tmhe ice-cream dilvaunga….Chlo
Tw smiles like a child &; says ty jiju , u r best
Mahi~ maa, aisa kb tk chle ga ,hme tw k baare me jld hi kuch sochna padega
L~ha,beta pr kya kru kitne doctor k pass pr koi bhi Tw ka case handle hi nai krta
She starts crying
Uv cms and says ~aap uski tension maat lo,mera ek frnd h jo ki ek physco ka best Dr h main usse baat krke dekhta hu,vo meri baat jarur smjhega
******
Uv calls someone &he picks call
Boy~hello, who’s this
Uv~hello #Kunj, its me Uv,yaad aaya
K~are tujhe kaise bhul skta hu, tu to mera bf tha ,aur bta kaise yaad kiya
Uv~yaar meri shaadi h next week so tujhe invite krne k liye call kiya hu….Tujh se ek bahut important krni h to pls jldi se aaja
K~ok main kal hi aata hu ,ok bye
Uv~hmm… bye
*****
Kunj & Uv meet at Yuhi hldi
K~are bta na tujhe kya imp baat krna tha
Uv ~mujhe meri sis-in-law k bare me baat krna h jo ki ek sadme se gujr rai h,6 saal pehle uske saath jo hua uske baad uski life hi change ho gai

#kunj ~kya hua tha UV bol na
Uv- she loved a boy so much..V all know that he was womanizer,but she have faith on him…They both were in same clg,he behave like a honest lover,but after that he allways flirt vid girls…

one day he ask her to a dinner date in a hotel… she was very happy on cloud 9,she didn’t know that ni8 will be the horrible ni8 of her life,

she goes there but he started to misbehaving with her,she slaps him and says what r u doing?Pls stay in ur limits..But he didn’t listen,he tored her dress&he ra**d her….And left her in that condition…

We all r were in tension for her,then someone calls on Mahi’s no that they found her in very critical condition,she was in hospital,v all go there

Doctor says her condition is very critical cuz she attemp to sucide from 8th floor of the hotel.. after some weeks that she recover but she changed she was behaving like a child.

Uv starts crying ;hugs Kunj and says pls save her kunj,v can’t see her like that
Kunj says kya..

Uv~ha,ruko use bulata hu
Then he calls Twinkle
Uv~Twinkle cm hear,
Tw~cmng jiju
Kunj mesmerized by seeing her,she was cmng toward them with cute childish smile
Kunj[in his mind] wow! maine aaj tk itni cute ladki nai dekhi ,koi bevcuf hi hoga jisne ise ditch kiya hoga,she’s just awsm

Uv~ kya soch rahe ho Kunj,ye lo tw aagai
Tw~y u called me jiju,i was playing na
,
Uv~ok, i’m sry, ye dekho kon aaya h tmse milne,my frnd Kunj ,chlo hii bolo

Tw-ur frnd that means he is also Mahi dii frnd and if he is Mahi dii frnd then he will be my frnd cuz her all frnd r also my frnd, I’m ri8 na jiju

Uv; Kunj smiles
Kunj-y not Twinkle i will be ur frnd
Tw smiles Leela call her
Tw~bye jiju, bye frnd
They also says bye
After that they decide to start Tw treatment,Kunj cms daily at her home,he always try to get back her normal.

Kunj’s feeling develop for her but he didn’t told her, cuz she is not in state to handle these.
One day Kunj bring her in same hotel room were she cm 6 years ago

Next scene….

Kunj says Open ur eyes Twinkle….

Tw was smiling but when she open her eyes…..her was face gone to pale……tears cms in her eyes…… all past scenes cms in front of her eyes…… thinking all that….. she fall unconscious in Kunj arm……

Kunj – Tw….. kya hua utho….. dekho I’m really sry ….mujhe yaha nai aana chahiye tha….. tmhe lekr….. I’m really sry…. plzz forgive….. My intension were not wrong….I want to remove ur fear ……bs ek baar ankhe khol do Tw…..bs ek baar…..

Kunj was also crying……suddenly his tears drop falls on Tw eyes she wake up……her memory gets back
Kunj get happy……

Tw – Excuse me Kunj what r doing with me….u blo*dy cheaper…… Mujhe pta tha ki tm sb ladke ek jaise hi hote ho…..aaj se kuch saal pehle meri zindgi yahi pr barbaad hogai….. aur aaj phir ek baar tm yahi krne ja rahe ho…….u bring me here to R**e me…….. u dare U Kunj arm…..
Kunj was smiling cuz…..Tw was behaving normal….. he didn’t say any words…… he was so happy….
Tw notice that Kunj was smiling…..she bcm angry…. she slaps him…..and goes frm there……

She reached at her home…..where Yuhi & Leela were waiting for her…..

Tw was in angry she didn’t talk to anyone…… she goes in her room….and close the door……and thinking about Kunj…… happy time which she spend with him…..

Leela- Uv beta ye Tw ko kya hogya….. mujhe kuch thik nai lg raha h…..

Uv- Main dekhta hu……
He knocks Door
Tw opens
Tw – Kya hua Jiju…..

#cont part of OS

Tw opens door……she talks nicely or normally….. Uv gets happy….he called everyone….

Uv – Maa Mahi jldi yaha aaye Tw bilcul thik ho gai h

Leela Mahi goes there…..

L- what happen Beta….
Tw – pta nai Maa jiju ko kya hogya……achank

Leela shocked….she smiled and kissed Tw

U r fine Tw ….says Mahi
Tw – guys ….bahut hua…..

Uv – Ye sb #Kunj k vajh se hua….agr vo nai hota to tm thik nai hoti…..

Tw – bs Jiju uska naam bhi maat Lena….mujhe uski shakl bhi nai dekhna…. aaj agr meri yaadast vaps nai to…pta nai aaj kya hota….

L- nai beta tu glt…. smjh rai h…..agr vo nai hota to….tu muhje vaps nai milti….

Mahi- Ha Tw ….usi ne tera treatment kiya tha …aur aaj. hm sb se. puchh kr k hi le gya tha….

Uv – main #Kunj ko achhe se janta hu….vo koi bhi glt kaam kr hi nai kr skta h…

Tw :- mujhe uske baare kuch nai sunna…main ja rahi hu…..

Twinkle goes in her room & close door…..

At ni8 all were sleeping except Tw ….she was Kunj and what her family say about Kunj…..

Tw – Maine ek baar pehle bhi glti kiya tha ….kis par yakin kr k….ab dubara vo glti nai kr skti hu…..

after sometimes She sleeps ….then #Kunj cms there from window….. and go near to her …..She open her eyes…..shocked and she scream……

Tw – Tm yaha…. tmhari himmat kaise hui….Dii… Maa…..
Kunj cover her mouth….

K- Dekho Tw tm mere baare me kya sochti ho vo main nai janta hu…..ki tm mere baare me Jo image bnya vo glt h….kyoki main vaisa nai hu….Mujhe pta h kuch saalo pehle tmhare saath kya hua thaa….. agar mujhe tmhare saath kuch krna hi hota… to main pehle bhi kr skta tha……
He removes his hand frm her mouth……

K- U know what maine pehli baar tmhare baare me suna to pta nai mere aankho se kyo aanshu behne lge….jaise tmhara dard mera bhi ho…..jb tmhe pehli baar dekha….to. lga ki ….tmhare jaisi ladki maine kbhi dekhi hi na ho…..usi waqt tmse pehli nazr ka pyaar hua …..ha Twinkle…..sach yahi h ki…. #I_Luv_U …..agr tm abhi bhi yakin nai krti ho ….to ye tmhari marzi…..main tmhe koi force nai krne vala…..agr tm kaho to main tmse hmesa k liye durr…. phir kbhi vaps nai aaunga ……byee #Twinkle ……

He was going frm there ….but he turns back… his eyes were full of tears…..
and he goes frm there……

Now Twinkle eyes were bcm red….fill with tears…..Kunj’s words were echoes in her mind…… she was crying and thinking about Kunj……

At Mrng….

Tw wake up late cuz….whole ni8 she was crying…..she sees Uv was sitting sad….

Tw- Kya hua Jiju….aap itne sad kyo h…..

Uv-kuch nai vo #Kunj….

Tw- Kunj ….kya hua kunj ko…..vo thik to h n..

Uv- Vo vaps Aboard ja raha…… Maine bahut rokne ki kosis ki but….vo nai mana….ab to uski flight bhi aa chuki ho gi. ….

Tw – kitne baje h flight _

Uv – 11baje lekin kyo ….kya hua ….tm kyo puch rahi ho…..

Tw- 11 baje….abhi 10:35 ho rahe ….abhi waqt h…
Uv – batao bhi

Tw-Kuch nai jiju baad me batati hu…..

She rans frm there to Airport……..

At Airport

Kunj was sitting very sad …then he hears His flight has been cm….he goes their sadly …thinking about Twinkle….

He enters in Flight…..

Twinkle was searching Kunj in whole Airport ……she was Crying…. But she didn’t find him…..
then she get an idea

She goes to announcers…. who were announcing for flight ….she says them to give her mike…. they were not giving her….but she plead….. then they agree….

Tw was crying she holds the mike and says ” #Kunj kaha ho tm….. plzz vapas aajao…..plzz Kunj….. mujhse bahut badi glti hogai… maine tmhe glt smjha…… plz forgive me…..

Kunj was in flight… which was about to departure….. but when he hears….. He cm back frm there…..

Twinkle was continue her pleading……

Agar tm nai aaye to main vaps usi hotel me ja kr phir se suicide attempt krungi….

Kunj screams #Twinkle I’m here….

They both ran to each other…. and hugs……
Tw – I’m so sorry Kunj….

Ku- It’s okk Twinkle…..

Tw-Nai Kunj ….mujhe bolne do….. tm sache the tmhara pyaar bhi sachha tha….. mujhe promise kro ki tm mujhe chhor k kbhi nai jaoge ….kyoki main tmhare bina nai reh skti…. cuz #I_Luv_U. ……

Kunj kiss her on forehead….. says Luv u 2 Twinkle……
K- But tmne mujhe wait krvaya. iski saza milegi….. bolo mnjur h…

Tw- Ha…Manzur h….kyoki Twinkle Taneja kbhi kisi saza se nai darti….

Kunj – Then would u like to be called as Mrs. Twinkle Kunj Sarna….. will u marry me…..

Tw smiles…. and says Yes,I will marry u….and I will very happy if I will called as Mrs Twinkle Kunj Sarna…..

They hugs each other………

#Happy_Ending

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I hope u all like it….
plz make cmnts….

Byee guys…
Love u…
Urs….

A secret……Hii guy’s…. I’m here with an #OS on TwiNj…I hope u all like it…

#Dil_Ka_Rishta [twinj OS]

Characters:- #Twinkle_Taneja [a girl suffering frm mental illness cuz her boy frnd ditch her]
#Kunj_Sarna [only Siddhant Gupta] famous physco.Dr
#Leela_Taneja[twinkle’s mother]
#Yuvraj_Luthra[kunj’s frnd & Mahi would be hubby]
#Mahi_Taneja [tw elder sis & Uv would be wife]

So, here story begins…….
#Yuhi enagement cermony
Everyone blessing yuhi….Then a girl cms there in hall & starts begging to her mother
Maa plz give me ice-cream
L:- no, Twinkle tmhari tabiyat thik nai h n
Tw:-mujhe bhook lagi h Maa
Then she goes near to Yuhi
Tw ~ Dii, Jiju maa ko bolo na ice-cream dilvane k liye….Pls dii plz jiju
She was behaving like a kid cuz she was not in her sense…. Some ladies were gossiping about her Lday1~pta nai kaise jhelte h log ise,agr meri beti hoti to main to kisi pagalkhane me chhor deti..
Lady2~ vahi to ajib log h itne khass function main is pagal ko le aaye h

Uv ~ok tw main tmhe ice-cream dilvaunga….Chlo
Tw smiles like a child &; says ty jiju , u r best
Mahi~ maa, aisa kb tk chle ga ,hme tw k baare me jld hi kuch sochna padega
L~ha,beta pr kya kru kitne doctor k pass pr koi bhi Tw ka case handle hi nai krta
She starts crying
Uv cms and says ~aap uski tension maat lo,mera ek frnd h jo ki ek physco ka best Dr h main usse baat krke dekhta hu,vo meri baat jarur smjhega
******
Uv calls someone &he picks call
Boy~hello, who’s this
Uv~hello #Kunj, its me Uv,yaad aaya
K~are tujhe kaise bhul skta hu, tu to mera bf tha ,aur bta kaise yaad kiya
Uv~yaar meri shaadi h next week so tujhe invite krne k liye call kiya hu….Tujh se ek bahut important krni h to pls jldi se aaja
K~ok main kal hi aata hu ,ok bye
Uv~hmm… bye
*****
Kunj & Uv meet at Yuhi hldi
K~are bta na tujhe kya imp baat krna tha
Uv ~mujhe meri sis-in-law k bare me baat krna h jo ki ek sadme se gujr rai h,6 saal pehle uske saath jo hua uske baad uski life hi change ho gai

#kunj ~kya hua tha UV bol na
Uv- she loved a boy so much..V all know that he was womanizer,but she have faith on him…They both were in same clg,he behave like a honest lover,but after that he allways flirt vid girls…

one day he ask her to a dinner date in a hotel… she was very happy on cloud 9,she didn’t know that ni8 will be the horrible ni8 of her life,

she goes there but he started to misbehaving with her,she slaps him and says what r u doing?Pls stay in ur limits..But he didn’t listen,he tored her dress&he ra**d her….And left her in that condition…

We all r were in tension for her,then someone calls on Mahi’s no that they found her in very critical condition,she was in hospital,v all go there

Doctor says her condition is very critical cuz she attemp to sucide from 8th floor of the hotel.. after some weeks that she recover but she changed she was behaving like a child.

Uv starts crying ;hugs Kunj and says pls save her kunj,v can’t see her like that
Kunj says kya..

Uv~ha,ruko use bulata hu
Then he calls Twinkle
Uv~Twinkle cm hear,
Tw~cmng jiju
Kunj mesmerized by seeing her,she was cmng toward them with cute childish smile
Kunj[in his mind] wow! maine aaj tk itni cute ladki nai dekhi ,koi bevcuf hi hoga jisne ise ditch kiya hoga,she’s just awsm

Uv~ kya soch rahe ho Kunj,ye lo tw aagai
Tw~y u called me jiju,i was playing na
,
Uv~ok, i’m sry, ye dekho kon aaya h tmse milne,my frnd Kunj ,chlo hii bolo

Tw-ur frnd that means he is also Mahi dii frnd and if he is Mahi dii frnd then he will be my frnd cuz her all frnd r also my frnd, I’m ri8 na jiju

Uv; Kunj smiles
Kunj-y not Twinkle i will be ur frnd
Tw smiles Leela call her
Tw~bye jiju, bye frnd
They also says bye
After that they decide to start Tw treatment,Kunj cms daily at her home,he always try to get back her normal.

Kunj’s feeling develop for her but he didn’t told her, cuz she is not in state to handle these.
One day Kunj bring her in same hotel room were she cm 6 years ago

Next scene….

Kunj says Open ur eyes Twinkle….

Tw was smiling but when she open her eyes…..her was face gone to pale……tears cms in her eyes…… all past scenes cms in front of her eyes…… thinking all that….. she fall unconscious in Kunj arm……

Kunj – Tw….. kya hua utho….. dekho I’m really sry ….mujhe yaha nai aana chahiye tha….. tmhe lekr….. I’m really sry…. plzz forgive….. My intension were not wrong….I want to remove ur fear ……bs ek baar ankhe khol do Tw…..bs ek baar…..

Kunj was also crying……suddenly his tears drop falls on Tw eyes she wake up……her memory gets back
Kunj get happy……

Tw – Excuse me Kunj what r doing with me….u blo*dy cheaper…… Mujhe pta tha ki tm sb ladke ek jaise hi hote ho…..aaj se kuch saal pehle meri zindgi yahi pr barbaad hogai….. aur aaj phir ek baar tm yahi krne ja rahe ho…….u bring me here to R**e me…….. u dare U Kunj arm…..
Kunj was smiling cuz…..Tw was behaving normal….. he didn’t say any words…… he was so happy….
Tw notice that Kunj was smiling…..she bcm angry…. she slaps him…..and goes frm there……

She reached at her home…..where Yuhi & Leela were waiting for her…..

Tw was in angry she didn’t talk to anyone…… she goes in her room….and close the door……and thinking about Kunj…… happy time which she spend with him…..

Leela- Uv beta ye Tw ko kya hogya….. mujhe kuch thik nai lg raha h…..

Uv- Main dekhta hu……
He knocks Door
Tw opens
Tw – Kya hua Jiju…..

Tw opens door……she talks nicely or normally….. Uv gets happy….he called everyone….

Uv – Maa Mahi jldi yaha aaye Tw bilcul thik ho gai h

Leela Mahi goes there…..

L- what happen Beta….
Tw – pta nai Maa jiju ko kya hogya……achank

Leela shocked….she smiled and kissed Tw

U r fine Tw ….says Mahi
Tw – guys ….bahut hua…..

Uv – Ye sb #Kunj k vajh se hua….agr vo nai hota to tm thik nai hoti…..

Tw – bs Jiju uska naam bhi maat Lena….mujhe uski shakl bhi nai dekhna…. aaj agr meri yaadast vaps nai to…pta nai aaj kya hota….

L- nai beta tu glt…. smjh rai h…..agr vo nai hota to….tu muhje vaps nai milti….

Mahi- Ha Tw ….usi ne tera treatment kiya tha …aur aaj. hm sb se. puchh kr k hi le gya tha….

Uv – main #Kunj ko achhe se janta hu….vo koi bhi glt kaam kr hi nai kr skta h…

Tw :- mujhe uske baare kuch nai sunna…main ja rahi hu…..

Twinkle goes in her room & close door…..

At ni8 all were sleeping except Tw ….she was Kunj and what her family say about Kunj…..

Tw – Maine ek baar pehle bhi glti kiya tha ….kis par yakin kr k….ab dubara vo glti nai kr skti hu…..

after sometimes She sleeps ….then #Kunj cms there from window….. and go near to her …..She open her eyes…..shocked and she scream……

Tw – Tm yaha…. tmhari himmat kaise hui….Dii… Maa…..
Kunj cover her mouth….

K- Dekho Tw tm mere baare me kya sochti ho vo main nai janta hu…..ki tm mere baare me Jo image bnya vo glt h….kyoki main vaisa nai hu….Mujhe pta h kuch saalo pehle tmhare saath kya hua thaa….. agar mujhe tmhare saath kuch krna hi hota… to main pehle bhi kr skta tha……
He removes his hand frm her mouth……

K- U know what maine pehli baar tmhare baare me suna to pta nai mere aankho se kyo aanshu behne lge….jaise tmhara dard mera bhi ho…..jb tmhe pehli baar dekha….to. lga ki ….tmhare jaisi ladki maine kbhi dekhi hi na ho…..usi waqt tmse pehli nazr ka pyaar hua …..ha Twinkle…..sach yahi h ki…. #I_Luv_U …..agr tm abhi bhi yakin nai krti ho ….to ye tmhari marzi…..main tmhe koi force nai krne vala…..agr tm kaho to main tmse hmesa k liye durr…. phir kbhi vaps nai aaunga ……byee #Twinkle ……

He was going frm there ….but he turns back… his eyes were full of tears…..
and he goes frm there……

Now Twinkle eyes were bcm red….fill with tears…..Kunj’s words were echoes in her mind…… she was crying and thinking about Kunj……

At Mrng….

Tw wake up late cuz….whole ni8 she was crying…..she sees Uv was sitting sad….

Tw- Kya hua Jiju….aap itne sad kyo h…..

Uv-kuch nai vo #Kunj….

Tw- Kunj ….kya hua kunj ko…..vo thik to h n..

Uv- Vo vaps Aboard ja raha…… Maine bahut rokne ki kosis ki but….vo nai mana….ab to uski flight bhi aa chuki ho gi. ….

Tw – kitne baje h flight _

Uv – 11baje lekin kyo ….kya hua ….tm kyo puch rahi ho…..

Tw- 11 baje….abhi 10:35 ho rahe ….abhi waqt h…
Uv – batao bhi

Tw-Kuch nai jiju baad me batati hu…..

She rans frm there to Airport……..

At Airport

Kunj was sitting very sad …then he hears His flight has been cm….he goes their sadly …thinking about Twinkle….

He enters in Flight…..

Twinkle was searching Kunj in whole Airport ……she was Crying…. But she didn’t find him…..
then she get an idea

She goes to announcers…. who were announcing for flight ….she says them to give her mike…. they were not giving her….but she plead….. then they agree….

Tw was crying she holds the mike and says ” #Kunj kaha ho tm….. plzz vapas aajao…..plzz Kunj….. mujhse bahut badi glti hogai… maine tmhe glt smjha…… plz forgive me…..

Kunj was in flight… which was about to departure….. but when he hears….. He cm back frm there…..

Twinkle was continue her pleading……

Agar tm nai aaye to main vaps usi hotel me ja kr phir se suicide attempt krungi….

Kunj screams #Twinkle I’m here….

They both ran to each other…. and hugs……
Tw – I’m so sorry Kunj….

Ku- It’s okk Twinkle…..

Tw-Nai Kunj ….mujhe bolne do….. tm sache the tmhara pyaar bhi sachha tha….. mujhe promise kro ki tm mujhe chhor k kbhi nai jaoge ….kyoki main tmhare bina nai reh skti…. cuz #I_Luv_U. ……

Kunj kiss her on forehead….. says Luv u 2 Twinkle……
K- But tmne mujhe wait krvaya. iski saza milegi….. bolo mnjur h…

Tw- Ha…Manzur h….kyoki Twinkle Taneja kbhi kisi saza se nai darti….

Kunj – Then would u like to be called as Mrs. Twinkle Kunj Sarna….. will u marry me…..

Tw smiles…. and says Yes,I will marry u….and I will very happy if I will called as Mrs Twinkle Kunj Sarna…..

They hugs each other………

#Happy_Ending

****************

I hope u all like it….
plz make cmnts….

Byee guys…
Love u…
Urs….

A secret……

24 comments

  1. Sameera

    Sameera

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  2. Kiya

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  3. Virat ki wifey(adeeba)

    Hey I can’t able to guess u yrr
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    But I didn’t like the story sorry for hurting u..

  4. Zoya9

    Zoya9

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    Keep writing like this
    Post soon”Mending of broken heart”
    Love u
    Keep smiling

  5. Ramya

    Ramya

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    Presha
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  6. Baby

    Baby

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