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Do Dil Jo Kabhi Na Honge Judaa ( PART-1)

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hiiii everyone yashu here after reading soo many ffs i hav decided to write my own bt i really dnt know wether u guyzz vl like it or not so pleazzz tell me through ur comments and if u vl like it i vl be able to post 2nd part aft few fays as my xams r starting from monday.. soo lets start-

a beautiful girl is shown that is practicing fr a dance performance on her friends mehendi. she is dancing on drama queen and that is none other than our twinkle.
scene shifts. there is a big hall and boys r practicing on tu meri and the main lead is our dashing kunj
a boy comes and that is uv and he is the grom.
kunj- bhai tu yha kesse
uv- kyo meri mehndi k liye dance kr rhe ho aur me dekh bhi nhi sakta
kunj- dekh dekh tu toh dulhe raja he
uv- btw tujhe pta he n ki girlz toh jab kr practise kr rhi hogi. tum log ldko ki naak mat kwa dena
kunj- are bhai tu toh bekkar me teshion le rha he jeetege toh hum hi. lekin fir bhi risk nhi lena chahiye
uv- ek kaam krte he me vha chup kr dekh kr aata h unka dance
kunj- tu vha dance dekhne jata he ya chinki ko ( the bride is chinki) i mean humari bhabhi ko
(uv starts blushng) ohooo someone is blushing ha
uv- are nhi yrrr tujhe mujh pr bharoosa nhi he
kunj- noops..

uv- achaa theek he tu hi challa ja… aur ha chinki ko bolna ki call me when she is free
kunj-ok ok hal bye.. me jta hu pyaar ka sendesh dene and starts laughing
uv- tu bhi na and runs behind him.

scene shifts
kunj reaches there where girlz r practising and starts seeing there dance. bt he ws seeing from back..and didnt saw twinkle… bt as she ws in main he ws jst seeing her dance moves and admiring her from back
kunj in mind ( yrrr kya dance kr rhi he pechee se itni sundar lg rhi he toh aage se kitni lgegi.. hai isse toh milna pdega .. are kunj tu yha apni setting nhi unka dance dekhne aaya he.. yeh uv toh sach keh rha tha ladkiyon ne toh humari band bjana ki full tyari kr rkhi he.. pr when kunj is hear why to fear)

To b continued if u liked it..

Credit to: yashu

15 Comments
  1. Loved it…. Eagerly waiting for the next episode….

  2. It was tooooo good.

  3. Plz continue Yashu it’s really gud n I think there shld be face off btw twinj in the ceremony it’s just an suggestions plz don’t feel bad if u don’t lyk it ….waiting fr next epi update asap ☺

  4. loved it

  5. It’s nice

  6. Plz plzzzzz plzzzzzzzzz cont dear it amazing……

  7. thank uuuuu sooo much sadaf, ria, mitali, purnima and cutiepie. , zayb_zikra.. and pleazzzzz cutiepie its nothing like that… and u all r free to giv me any kind of suggestion….

  8. and sooo sry fr gramatical errors as i wrote it vvv fast….. soooooooooooooooooo sssssssssssrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

  9. Verrrrry nic

  10. thanqqq soo much mannat…. and guyzzz i vl update the nxt part on sat or sun as my lst xam is on sat…. sooooo ssssrrrryyyyyyy… hope u all vl remember till than

  11. it was very nice

  12. thxxxx fiona and sam

  13. omgggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yashu cant believe it …u have written so well….aakhir bff kiski hai….mindblowing ff sweetheart….just amazing….pleazzzzz continue it and bring lot of tashan and twists in it……and u have written it awesomeeeee……just loved it…luv uuuuuuu

  14. ohhhhhhh i am sooooo glad that u commented darling….. thank uuuuuu soooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luv u too bff

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