DIL DOSTI DUNIYADAARI ( episode 1)

Hi friends….. Thanks for your comments…. I guess many of you know DIL DOSTI DUNIYADAARI ….

So here is the match…….

Abhi – kaivalya

Raman – sujay

Asad – Kabir

Kunj -Ashu

Subbu- Rakesh

Zoya- meenal

Khushi- Ana

Ishita -Reshma

Twinkle – kinjal

Shagun- Nisha

Arnav and pragya are new entries introduced by me….. But their part is after some episodes…….

Now enough of my bakbak……. U guys enjoy the episode

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She was standing on the platform alone. Slight fear…. Some what anxiousness……. Some shyness…… Eagerness for next coming life….. All things were being reflected on her face.

” I wish he would have come to take me……. ” thought ishu….. ” I am his wife na… Just calm down ishu. Ur thinking too much. U know he has his job. He can’t just leave it to take u home……. He has called u na then he will definitely come to pick you on station”

Ishu was married to subbu. He had called her yesterday and asked her to come to Mumbai. She was surely looking for it…….

” Uff….. Can’t this train be on right time?…… I should have brought papa with me. At least I would have got some company” Ishu was now being restless. She was used to late trains but everyone doesn’t go to her husband every day………

At the moment she heard the train’s whistleblower….. She excitedly looked at it. At last it was her train. She got in and started to find her seat……. When she reached to her reserved seats she was shocked……

On the seat some one had arranged his clothes….. Just to make them dry…… The window was being used as hangers…… She closed her face with her hands……

Ishu : Excuse me….. Whose clothes are this?

Kunj: Shit yaar…… I thought it would be a nice idea. Now I will have to shift them again…… Mam is this ur seat?

Ishu nodded in yes. Abhi and Raman started to laugh at him.

Abhi: Come on Kunj…… Can’t u behave urself?…… U r acting weird…..

Raman: U mean to say that he is being normal?

Abhi: Yah…. I would have thought about that. Please Kunj at least think about twinkle?……. What will she say after hearing this?

Kunj: But it feels like we are in home. I was just trying to create atmosphere…..
In mean time Kunj gathered all his clothes and gestured ishu to take her seat…….

Ishu sat there but she was not comfortable. She was never used of such talks…… After some time Tc came to check the tickets…

Ishu showed her….. Here Abhi, Raman and Kunj were looking at each other.

Abhi: Give him tickets Raman…… For whom r u waiting?

Raman: Hey I gave money to Kunj…… He said that he was going to buy them…… Kunj give the tickets……

Kunj awkwardly saw at both of them…… Abhi understood every thing in a minute. He hit his head.

Abhi: Excuse me sir…… Can you come with me please? I need to talk to you

Raman and Kunj also went with them. After some time all three of them came with relieved face

( of course Abhi bribed him….. But remember kids bribing is not good ?)

Ishu felt really awkward seeing all these things….. She felt frightened. So she moved from her place and went to sit near a woman…… She didn’t had any problems so ishu stayed with her in all the journey……….

Abhi: Kunj…… U do anything like that again and I swear I will kill you…. It’s a promise

Kunj: Hey that’s not fair….. I just used that money for buying a dress for twinkle…..

Raman: Yes…. But it was my money…. And she is not my girl friend that I should spend on her…..

Kunj made sad face. All through the journey they kept quarrelling with each other……

At Mumbai……

Ishu walked down with butterflies in her stomach….. She was so amazed seeing all the crowd. At that time her phone rang…..

SUBBU: Hi Ishita…… I think you are here….. But I can’t pick you…. I’ll msg u the address…….

Before ishu could say anything he cut the phone……… She felt rather sad.

NO PRECAP

so how was it?…… Loved it? hated it? Let me know through your comments…….

And yes arshi lovers…… Their entry will be in next episodes… So don’t worry and keep supporting….

Credit to: aru

35 comments

  1. Joya

    Yr plz dnt copy the famous marathi serial Dil dosti duniyadari……………
    Plz …………………..

    I really loved 3d……
    Stop it plz .. …….. …………

    • aru

      So sorry if I hurt u dear….. But I have already mentioned in the intro that I am writing ff for DIL DOSTI DUNIYADAARI …….. for this I think I can copy it’s ideas……
      And don’t worry…….. I know that I can’t write as good as the serial but I am just trying it…..
      Again sorry if I hurt u

  2. sally

    it was really good.. i must say though.. imagining kunj to behave like ashu is really hard for me!

  3. woooow dear…. i really luved ur ff aru…. u r such an amazing writer dear…. bt i hav nt watched d original serial so i am really excited for it…. thanks fr d updates dear….
    keep writing..

  4. sweety

    Its soo Confusing aru……….May be the ff is good …I am confused with the matches you have made..

    • sweety

      I mean ……I would love to read it…bt i’m badly confused….Sorry If I’m hurting you

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