Dil Bole Oberoi (Entry 1) #On air serials #competition

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WHEREVER YOU GO MY HEART WILL FOLLOW…..

“Finally….I m back….” Om thinks n smiles. Om says,”Shivaay….rudra.”He hugs both of them.” How r u both?” Om asks. Shivaay says,”We r fine hw r u…”Rudra asks,”Was Delhi better that Mumbai?” Om says,”Ya sort of.” He searches for someone. Rudra says,”O she is waiting for u at home.” Om says,” I didn’t even asked abt it then why r u even talking abt gauri?” Rudra says,” But your eyes told everything to me O.”Om says,”Shivaay yaar…”Shivaay says,”Rudra come nw”.They leave.

Om is sleeping on his car seat. Suddenly someone throws water on him.”O god!”Om shouts n wakes up. Gauri says,”Hi om.”Om says,”Gauri are you mad..”Gauri says,”Come inside the house na..or if you have planned to have a permanent stay here then I will leave.”Om says,”Fine enough of drama..I’m coming.”

Om eats a spoonful of biryani n says,” O! Lovely who made this?”Janvi replies,”Om…Gauri made it.”Om spots the water which he was drinking. Everyone fake coughs. Om says,”Okay enough…enough..”He leaves from the dining table. All laugh at him. Gauri follows Om.

Om is looking at stars n is thinking about something. Gauri says,” O lord…Om come out of your world n spend some time with me yaar..”Om says,” You remember this place?”Gauri says,” Yep…this is the same place where everything had started.”Om says,”Come let’s sit here.”They both sit on the grass field. Om says,”You know that day I really thought that you loved someone..”Gauri laughs. She closes her eyes n remembers all those moments.

“This is really not at all possible…you really love someone,”Om exclaimed.” Of course Om I do love someone,”Gauri shouted at Om with equal anger.”Om says,”Fine….fine…I just wanna know who is it?”Gauri says;”Why are you even bothered about this so much…Who are you to me?”Om says,”I m your friend, Gauri n I have the right to know about it.”Gauri says,”Om you know what…you are at times so very confusing….sometimes we’re friends,sometimes we’re more than friends n sometimes I’m just a stranger to you…” Om shouts,”O really when I treated you as a stranger? Will you kindly explain?” Gauri says,”Of course I will definitely explain you…can you tell me when you came to know that you have a secret admirer that too that idiotic Riddhima…Why didn’t you came up to me? Like atleast for one time we could have chatted..”Om says,”At that time Gauri we were in college…n you know that we were so immature at that time n moreover I felt like….I felt like…just leave it.”Gauri says,” Let’s just leave it. Let’s end this. Our friendship has no value. Only I have to share my problems with you…but you why would you even share them with me…just forget it Om.”Om says,”How can you say like that Gauri? I have always approached you when mom n dad used to fight….when shivaay used to get angry on me…but it’s just this single thing I haven’t shared with you. I know I should had but understand Gauri.”Gauri says,”Why only everytime I have to understand even you should do it sometimes…you always hide things from me. When Riddhima betrayed you I knew how much it had affected you. You could have come to me na. Did I have ever said you no for this.”Om says,”I was not at all affected by Riddhima Gauri…then why should I tell you?”Gauri says,”Oh really you weren’t upset about it…then why did you again started injecting drugs into your body. You know that day when you fainted I was so worried for you.”
Om says,”I know about that Gauri. Can we just not end this topic here itself.” Gauri says,”I am leaving this topic n ending our friendship too…If you don’t have an answer to my question…then even I don’t have for yours….I am leaving you….this city…everything…I am going back to Delhi.”She left saying so. Om was crying remembering all those moments which had happen just before. He was heartbroken when he saw Gauri going back to home. Om felt weak in his knees n then he sat on his knees with a thud. Om started thinking,’ Why didn’t I answered her…everyone in the family knows that I m in love with Gauri since childhood. Even I felt she feels the same about me. But know….Gauri I won’t let my feelings come between your happiness.’ He got up. He wiped his tears n sat in his car n he drove off. Rudra who saw Om coming from the door asked,”O where were you this whole morning. You know what Gauri di is going back to Delhi that too this night itself. Please convince her na to not leave us.” Om who couldn’t control it anymore hugged Rudra tightly n cried. Rudra caressing his hair asked him continuously,” O what has happened answer me.”But there was no reply from Om’s side. On the other side Gauri was crying. Shivaay came near her n sat next to her. Gauri says,”I can’t do this Shivaay bhaiya…”Shivaay says,”You have to do it Gauri…we have to make om accept his feelings towards you. He loves you n he will definitely accept this before you. I know my brother very well. He doesn’t share his feelings with anyone. But when you came into Om’s life he started expressing his emotions n Gauri you are the perfect life partner for Om. Tonight om has to accept his feelings. N he will do it definitely. Just do as I told you.” He left the place with his signature step.

Om was sitting along with rudra n was saying a shayari to him:
“Aankhon mein aa jaate hai aasu…
Lekin labon pe hasi lani padti hai….
Yeh ishq bhi kya cheez hai yaaro…
Jis se karte hai usi se chupaani padti hai….”

Rudra says,”O aap…are you okay.” Om says,”I am okay let’s go n bid bye to Gauri. Come.”He leaves the place along with Rudra. Gauri hugs rudra n says,”Take care of yourself rudy.” She sees Om n without saying any word to him, she leaves the place. She is about to sit in the car when Om shouts,”Gauri…” He runs towards her. He hugs her n says,”Please don’t go Gauri…please don’t go….”Gauri says,”Why shouldn’t I go Om? Do you have reason for me with which I can stop here.” Om mustering enough courage in himself said,” Gauri I love you….I really love you….I can’t let you go….” Gauri hugs Om n cries. She says,” Duffer why didn’t you tell me earlier.” Om says,” You are loving someone so I didn’t wanted my feelings to act as a barrier between your love….so..” Shivaay n Rudra are very much. Shivaay says,”Gauri I told you this plan will work.” Gauri smiles. Om says,”What plan? N before that whom do you love Gauri?” Gauri says,”You only stupid. We did all this to make you realize n accept your feelings.” Om runs behind Gauri after knowing the truth. Shivaay says,”Rudra come let’s go…let love birds enjoy their time.” They both leave. Om n Gauri after being tired lie on the grass field. Gauri held Om’s hand n then she said,”Om I know you are commitment phobic because of Riddhima. I know it will take time. You take your own time okay. I will not force you.” Om smiled n replied,”You know me so well na Gauri…anyways come we will watch stars..n thank you so much for this.”Gauri says,”I won’t trouble you for anything n I won’t crib about anything…all I want to say is…I’ll never ask you to bring the stars for me, but I would love to sit n watch them with you. All I want with me is just you.” Om smiled at her. He hugged Gauri. Om then replied,”Even I want just you…just you..”

Om shakes Gauri.” Where are you lost?” Gauri says,”Nothing.” Om says,”Gauri actually…..I know you have your dreams about marriage like every girl does…so I just wanted to say that….okay I m not yet ready for a marriage I need sometime but I ensure you the girl with whom I will marry will be you.” Gauri says,”Duffer how many times I have to tell you. Don’t worry will do it when you will feel right…okay…so calm down chill…all I want know is just to be with you. Tomorrow you will leave for Delhi n you will take my heart again to that city. Let it be with me for sometime.” Om says,”Even my heart was left here only.” Gauri says,”Acha…toh iska reason kya hai?” Om says,”Cause wherever you go Gauri my heart will follow you.”They both smile.

Love is isn’t about just making yourself happy n engaged with…it is a flower which requires care n patience….once you give it…it will bloom to form one of the most prettiest thing…

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21 Comments
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