Do Dil Bandhe Ek Dori Se By Fenu (Ishkara & Kaira ) (Shivika & Rumya) – Chapter-01

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Hello Friends !! This is Fenil who gave you some moths back intro of “We Are Family” Sorry to say that I forgot that story in exams (hahahah) .

So New story new hope. Main focus will be on Ishkara will try to give sweet moments and bonding between all pair .
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Udaipur , Rajasthan

Fresh Morning

Location : Family Court

We can see two innocent soul which is too small peacefully sleeping in their Grand Mother Jhanvi & Pinky.

And we can also heard some points from one brilliant lawyer who was attending divorce case for her client and another lawyer about to do argument but his client stop and told him to let divorce happened and two pair of eyes was watching him emotionally.

“I Omkara Singh Oberoi want this divorce” said by Omkara peacefully with teary eyes.

“I Ishana Omkara Singh Oberoi also want this divorce” said by Ishana while sobbing lightly and close her eyes.

While Jhanvi-Tej ,Pinky-Shakti, Anika-Shivaay , Soumya- Rudra looks on sadly towards Ishkara Opsss !! Sorry now they are no more Ishkara.

Ishkara signed on Divorce paper and judge declares “DIVORCE WAS Done”

Within a Small second of time two innocent souls started crying loudly like they get to know that their Parents are not together after hearing their crying Ishana and Omkara runs to them and picks up their childs from their Dadi respectively and trying hard to stop them.

Meanwhile one pair runs out of court and sits in car and go they are our Soumya and Rudra. They are crying because their love story started during Ishkara wedding and now that marriage broke before their eyes.

Time Skips,

Locatin :Oberoi Villa

All are returned from court and goes inside but Ishana was standing at entrance and whole Grahpravesh moments running before her eyes.

“Ishana beta come , why are u standing there ? “ asked by Pinky.

“ I will not come inside until Om goes from home” Said by Ishana .

All are shocked hearing this statement .

Omkara come outside like obedient husband or should I say person .

“Ishu , After two days Rudra’s birthday so pls can I stay here for two days ?” asked by Omkara to her Ex-Wife.

At that time Rudra and Soumya also came outside from Rudra’s room after consoling each other and lil smile came on his face after hearing his lovely O.

Ishana looked at her naughty BIL while Rudra’s eyes asking permission from his bhabhi . Ishana smiles and give permission and all went inside.

Location : Rudra’s Room

“I will not marry you Sumo !!” said by Rudy to Sumo.

“I know you will say this one day after seeing all those incident ,clashes and fights between Big B and Bhabhi. So I m ready for this decision” Sumo said .

“ Are you both gone mad ?” asked by Ishana who was just entering Rudra’s room.

Ishana explain Rumya and make them change their decision . they share emotional hug. This was watching by Omkara and ishana’s eyes face omkara eyes.
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PRECAP : Rudra’s birthday celebration !!
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Guys hope u all will support this story , this story came in my mind when I was studying my accounts chapter : Merger , Amalgamation and Demerger of Companies.

Fenu here !!

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65 Comments
  1. y did they seprate?
    plz explain their past in flashback
    update soon

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Dear !!
      Past will revealed soon !!

  2. AIHA19

    loved it.waiting for next episode.

    1. Fenil

      Thanks !!

  3. good start bhai so emotional haan and ur memory is toooooooo sharp u left one ff only ehehehhaah nice bhai u r very emotioanl writer

    1. AIHA19

      bhaiya is emotional.he is always joking.

      1. Fenil

        hehehhe !!

    2. Fenil

      Thanks Kidding girl.
      yes memory…kya bolu mein ?hehehheh
      Emotional are kuch bhi likh sakta hun

  4. Nikita_jai29

    It is nice one dear

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Dear !!

  5. Thedreamsoul

    Hey Fenil bhaiya , it’s amazing and interesting . It’s so sad to see them getting apart and it was very emotional one .
    I’m looking forward to read it and waiting for Rudra’s birthday .
    Well why is Om leaving his house ? Since it is his home . I didn’t understand just asked . Update asap , eagerly waiting for the next part .

    1. Fenil

      Thanks a lot !!
      Glad that u liked it.
      All answer will u get with story progress

  6. Sumitha

    Nyc one I want shivika also plzzzzz. ……eagerly waiting for the next

    1. Fenil

      Thanks !!
      Yaa sure

  7. Madhuag

    Oh no…why ishkara got divorce…yaar fenil plz jaldi se unhe unite kardo…bytheway nice story line…pakka I will follow this

    1. Fenil

      Thanks !!
      Arey abhi toh satrt kiya hain mil bhi jayenge woh

  8. AMkideewani

    Superb Bhaiya, I really love it?

    1. Fenil

      Thank u so much

  9. ManyaPV5

    Bhaiya rulaoge kya. Itna emotional koi likhta hai? Aur mere Shivika ko to side actor kar diya aapne, no prob I will manage. But itne bhulakkad ho aap aaj pata chala ff hi bhul gaye waah!! kya memory hai mein galat nahi keh rahi thi ab aap deemaag ka operation karwao TU ke saare member 10-10 rupees jama karke aapka ilaaj karwa denge don’t worry 10 laakh to shayad ikhatta ho jayenge.

    1. Fenil

      Thanks !!
      very funny hnnn
      Aap Mahan Ho Manya Devi

      1. ManyaPV5

        I am born mahan.

    1. Fenil

      thanks Disha Diii

  10. Alekhika20

    Loved the update

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Dear

  11. Aashi26

    Loved it bhaiyya…..it was quite emotional and interesting…hope to see the next part soon and I am a bit angry with u coz u didn’t replied to my request of being ur little sis….just joking…but pretty please reply me about that….

    1. Fenil

      Thank u
      I think i replied u about that !!

  12. Manasvi

    Bhaiya, it seems interesting..
    I guess I will have to read your books so that I can also get some idea ;p
    Do send me the links..

    1. Fenil

      Thanks manasvi Dii
      yaa sure read or ask ideas

      1. Manasvi

        Bhaiyu, stop calling me diii..!!
        plzzz..!!

  13. NICE AWESOME EMOTIONAL INTERESTING SUPERB???

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Dear
      Glad that u liked it

  14. Ruby_MarNy

    Interesting start..

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Dear

  15. Bhai, who calls you fenu? (May be my future bhabhi ?????)it is cute. I like the way you explain your thoughts. It’s awesome. And the most I like in your FF is your grammar… It’s perfect..it’s great.. I love perfect Grammer..it has made your FF neat and clean. But truely I don’t watch Ishqbaaz or DBO, it’s ok. You have presented scenes very nicely , clearly and neatly.. i have more to say. But will say later.. ok.. keep writing Bhai.. you’ll have a great future..
    Your sister,
    Priyaa

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Priyu
      Glad that u loved it .
      My whole family and Society call me FENU
      here also u came and your BHabhi ?????????

  16. Aarti32

    Kya start h bhai!! Emotional Tha but pyara bhi Tha

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Aru !!

  17. fenu bhaiya I thought u are naughty didn’t expect at all that u will write a emotional ff but u forgot an ff your memory is tooo sharp ???? just kidding.n rumya n Ishana bonding is too good but no Shivika screens in this epi but it’s k that u are concentrating on ishkara but shivika is my favourite but I think Om must have done something wrong or some misunderstanding I am intrested to know the past I hope my bhaiii(shivaay bhai) won’t cry in this pen because in all ff they make my bhai cry???? n ishkara n their I am excited to read it.its sooooo good mera emoty(emotional n naughty) bhaiya emoty bhaiya fenu bhaiya

    1. Fenil

      Thank u so much Rufi
      Glad that u love it
      Everyone telling me the same that how can i write emotional ?hehehhe
      Emoty !!! Great name
      I will not made him cry

  18. Yashu24

    Bhai it was awesome + interesting I will love to read next parts as the starting was awesome then how good the next parts will be ??
    Keep writing like this
    Take care
    Keep smiling

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Micky Dear !!
      Glad that u love it
      No force oky !!

  19. Soumya85

    It was awesome and emotional bhaiya
    Aur aapka memory ka to kya kehna??maine aapko bola tha mujhe story bata dijiye jab aap name ka suggestions puch rahe the dekho abhi aap bhul hi gaye agar bata diya hota to kitna acha hota ? aur aapko yeh idea accounts ka chapter padhte hue aya wah ??????very good oggy bhaiya??
    Waiting for next chapter and ek question isme kaira kaha h??

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Ghost !!
      Yaa u said it …now i m really feel crazy !! heheh
      yaa accounts…..
      Kaira will come

  20. Looks interesting so far
    Good job fenil bro
    keep going
    post the next chapter soon and do inform me about it
    thanks
    love u

    1. Fenil

      Thank u so much Sophie Dii
      Yaa i will send u link

  21. Ankita27

    Interesting..

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Dear !!

  22. Interesting … Emotional oggy bhaiya
    Aapkko ye idea accounts ka chapter pad ke aaya…wah great??

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Vanisha Devi
      Ha yrr in that chpter also we seprate two companies hehehhehe

  23. omg , such an emotional episode . in the first epi itself ishkara got seperated . first of all thanks a lot for a ishkara story , awesome start . happy that ishana is staying for rudra , pls unite them soon

    1. Fenil

      Thanks a lot.
      Glad that u liked it

  24. Orchid

    Yeh kaya yaar. Story ki start mein hi separation not fair. But koi nehi separation se hi twist hoga. Btw awesome concept and i totally loved it. Post asap.??☺☺

    1. Fenil

      Thanks
      Glad that u liked it.

  25. IME

    Intresting!!
    I loved it bhai
    post asap
    And accounts ke chap se idea itna boring tha kya chappy??
    Post soon
    Love you
    take care
    byee

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Ishu .

  26. N.M

    great start bhaiya , mujhe nahi pata tha ki boys bhi emotional ff likhte hai, I just loved ot ,post next as soon as possible!!!

    1. Fenil

      Thanks N.M
      Glad that u liked it.

  27. Lasyashree.10

    Wow!!! Awesome chapter fenu!!! Very emotional!! And ha meri om ko kya karke rakha…??? Mein om ke ankonme aasu dekh nahi paathi!! ??????

    I hope Sab teek hein!!!

    Anyways loved it to the core!!! And to the moon… looking forward for next chapter!!!
    Love you!! No sorry I hate you now!!

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Dii
      Glad that u loved it.
      pls don’t hate me BFF

  28. Mahisha

    It’s awesome bhai

  29. Mahisha

    It’s awesome bhai
    ????

    1. Fenil

      Thanks Mahi
      Glad that u liked it

  30. AditiB

    Bhaiii…..m total paagal hu….mne toh yeh already padh liya h…hehehe….late comment kr rhi hu…ssoorrryyy???….it’s veryyyy ggooddd….I like it….a lot….??? jaldi jaldi update krna aap okay?????……nahi toh….????

    1. Fenil

      ohhh
      oky but mein roz 2-4 lines likhta hun !! heheheh

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