The Difficult Love (Twinj) ~ Chapter 10

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In case you missed the previous chapter,

Chapter 9
I was not going to continue with this ff, but it was because of Chiku that I’m posting this one. So this is again a chance for you all, if I dint get much comments now, I will stop it and I’ll not continue even if anyone wants me to!

Kunj’s pov,
“He was saying the truth Kunj!” said Twinkle, “Who was saying the truth? I think this is just the effect of your drink, come on sit inside the car!” I said sternly. “No..No..No.. I wont sit in the car! I want to tell you the truth of my life!” she said in a childish tone. “Okay then tell me what is the truth of your life!” I asked her, “Umm..Nothing” she said and burst out into laughter. I loved her cute antics, “I was just joking! And I fooled you! Yayy!! I fooled you” she said while laughing. I just couldn’t do anything but admire her. She was really a unique girl!

Dhoop paani pe baras jaaye..

Yeh.. Saaye banaaye, mitaaye

Main kahoon, aur tu aa jaaye, behlaaye

Har doori sharmaaye

Tu saath hai, ho din raat hai

Parchhaaiyan batlaaye

When she is normal, she is so quite and shy and now she’s just the opposite! “Kunj!” she screamed. “What happened now?” I asked her again pissed off at her behaviour. “I want to eat ice cream” she said and started crying like a baby. “From where will I get ice cream now? We’ll have it tomorrow okay?” I said trying to convince her. “No..No..No.. I want it now itself” she said and started hitting my chest crying like a baby. This was enough for me!

Tu saath hai, or din raat hai

Saaya sa hai, maahi ve! Maahi ve

Meri har baat mein saath tu hai

Mahi ve, Maahi ve

Mere saare haalaat tu

Maahi ve aye aye aye ye.. O..

Maahi ye aye aye aye ye.. O..

She was just acting childish! She kept on hitting my chest when I held her hands tightly and pulled her towards myself. I felt an unknown pleasure seeing her so closely. We both shared a deep eye lock. I tucked her hair strand behind her ear which was falling on her face as she closed her eyes. “Kunj..” she could barely speak, “Hmm…” I replied, “I want ice cream” and she again started her song “I want ice cream, I want ice cream…” “Stop it!” I screamed, I could see tears flowing through her eyes, did I do wrong by shouting? I quickly wiped her tears and hugged her saying “Okay we will go and have ice cream now!” I said finally making her happy. “Yayy” she squealed in happiness pecking my cheek saying “Kunj, you are the best!” I found myself blushing at her way of expressing happiness.

Haaye sataaye, manaaye, sataaye

Tu.. Rulaaye, hansaaye.. Bhi tu hi

Humsaaye.. Har doori sharmaaye

Tu saath hai, ho din raat hai

Parchhaaiyan batlaaye

Tu saath hai, ho din raat hai
Saaya sa hai, maahi ve, maahi ve

I touched my cheek where she had unknowingly kissed me. Suddenly a loud sound was heard! It was thundering. “Kunj!” she said in a tensed tone and quickly hugged me. I hugged her back feeling relieved to have her. I don’t know why she means so much to me! She really means a lot to me, I realised. I quickly unlocked the car and made her sit inside and ran to the driver’s seat. In no time I started driving the car forgetting about the ice cream. I could hear a soft voice and I turned towards her, she had gone into a peaceful slumber saying “Kunj, ice cream” I smiled as wide as I could seeing her sleeping so peacefully.

Meri sab raaz, kal-aaj, tu hai
Maahi ve, Maahi ve
Meri har udaan ek tu
Maahi ve aye aye aye ye… O..
Maahi ye aye aye aye ye… O..
Maahi ve… Maahi ve…
After parking the car I looked at Twinkle, who was busy in her sleep having a satisfying smile on her face. I guess she might have forgotten the morning incident by now! I just hope so! I picked her up in my arms and entered the house, there was a silence that prevailed. I quickly climbed up to her room and placed her on the bed carefully trying not to disturb her sleep. I removed her sandals and placed it beside the table and pulled the blanket over her. I smiled seeing her sleep peacefully and left the room not before pecking her forehead. “I like you!” I said and rushed out of the room.

I changed my clothes and laid down on the bed pulling my blanket over me remembering all the moments spent with her today. She is really cute! I kept on thinking about her as if I had lost my sleep! There was a big smile on my lips remembering her cute antics. How she was demanding for an ice cream and how he pulled her towards himself, and finally the moment when she kissed me. I tried my best to widen my smile but unfortunately my jaws started paining. I finally pulled over the blanket up to my face trying to sleep.

Next morning, I woke up quite early. I quickly took a bath remembering yesterday’s incidents, and it something struck in my mind. I immediately wore my clothes and stepped into the kitchen, “Kunj.. how come you woke up so early today?” asked mom, “Actually.. you always advice me to get up quickly so I decided to take your advice.” I replied, “Ohh great” mom replied not yet satisfied with my answer. “So why have you come here?” mom asked, “I want to make lime juice for myself” I said lying, “From when did you start having lime juice early in the morning.” She asked me suspiciously, “Maa.. why are you acting like a detective! I just want to have it, there’s no reason for it!” I said pissed off. “But I never asked you the reason!” she said making me all the more mad at her! “Maa..” I said in an irritating tone! “I’m just joking, wait I’ll prepare it for you, you go and sit outside.” She said. “Okay maa, thank you!” I said hugging her.

After a few minutes the juice was ready, I quickly climbed up the stairs and entered into Twinkle’s room without making maa realise what I was upto. I closed the door slowly and saw her eyes trying to open because of the rays of the sun. I quickly kept the glass on the table and kept my hand such that the sun rays were blocked. She slowly raised her hands and placed it on her head wincing in pain. I touched her forehead and was shocked, she was having a high temperature.

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34 Comments
  1. Angel20

    Sorry for the typos,
    *Don’t

  2. I’m commenting on ur ff for d first time please don’t end it.there r many silent readers like me who r eagerly waiting for ur ff.I rarely give comments because I’m very lazy 😉 😉
    please don’t end it dr.its very unique story and ur way of writing is also good

  3. Mia12

    Awwwww such a lovely episode,,???? waiting 4 it so much,,??? but now happy to read it,,☺☺☺ well this just out standing,, twinkle antic was shooo cute,,???? love it very much,,????? plzzz don sad coz of less cmnt,,☺☺
    Post next part soon,,☺☺
    Plzzzzzzzz guy’s do cmnt plzz,, its a humble rqst,,plzz do cmnt,,?????

  4. superb n nice epi
    plzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue

  5. Sohi

    Hey Angel sorry I didn’t comment on your ff
    Honestly telling you in starting I didn’t like it but now iam gaining interest in it
    Plz keep writing
    One more thing on five days or so iam leaving tu so afterwards I would not be able to comment on your ff
    But ya I will return on 14 or 15 March
    Do continue

  6. Chiku

    Woaaaah!!!! Loved it. Lovely. Sooooooo cute????????? finally u posted it?????i am sooo happy. Marvellous.
    Dekh dis continue na karne ka soch. Nahi toh last tym ki taraah comment karungi. Emotional blackmail kar rahi hun?????
    Jaldi post kar ??

  7. Paavu

    Ab maria I gonna beat u I thot ur exms der so u nt pisting srry culdnt cmmnt bt sat doesnt mean I dun read I read alll ots my fav I was waiting fr it and u r liek why u aud ab mujhe na tujhe punishment den ahai and ir pinishment is u gotta pist next o e early and lo g ok I lo e it I couldnt cmmnt cos aftr exms I came ans read all togeder so srry bt u have to wrt hot it and ya sun plss do read my new os pehli nazar mein kaisa jaadu kr dia

  8. Heyy angel it was so cutee
    i am a silent reader of ur ff….
    I love it so muchh…
    Plzzz dont end it plzzzz plzzz plzzz for me…
    I promise u will always comment on ur all episodes..and never let u down…
    But plzz dont stop writing it….
    Plzzz
    Plzzz
    Plzzzz
    Plzzzz
    Plzzzz
    Plzzz
    Plzzzz
    U write so well…
    I love dis ff…
    Keep weiting dear…
    Post soon…
    Love uh

  9. ????? do not stop ittt?? pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee …..
    I always waittta and crave for your ff and you want to stop ittt?? this is not donee………

    And silent readerss please comment….your comments are really encouraging for the writers speciallyy ………..first I also didn’t use to comment but after that I realised that commenting and boosting writers morale is important …,

    Andd this updateee iss AWSOME??????

  10. I am a silent reader and I am commenting because of this scary warning! I really like your ff and would request you to continue it…

  11. Its awesome …dnt end

  12. Hey maria how can u think of ending ur ff u know how much i luve ur ff nd dare u say again huh..i m angry wid u.

    now coming to the episode it was fantastic fabulous dear loved it..
    post soon..
    luv u..
    bye..

  13. Kruti

    Hey maria…the epi was Amazing….loved it

    Nd on ur previous post I found 24comments….Its a good number….y do u think that is less…..Anyways I’ll be waiting for u to post d nxt part

  14. Presha

    Hey maria awesome nd thank u for accepting the request dear this was so cool awesome amazing fantastic loved it to core

  15. Ritzi

    Maria! How can u even think of ending it! No ways on earth u r ending it nd thts final! Come on yaar…we love your ff to the moon ! Nd today’s epi was just ………mashallah! Loving it…now pls update soon

  16. Asna

    Awww such a cute n lovely episode angel yr i like no no no love ur ff very much… plzzz plzzzz plzzz dont end it plzzz u know how will i live without such a beautifull ff ?plzzz ek 15 years ki choti si cute si pyari si( i dont know i m cute or not but my friends used to say that)plzzz i m requesting u plzzz dont end the ff… tum nhi janti ye ff mere liye bahut jaruri h ????plzzz i promise mai 1 nhi 2 comment karoungi aur chahiye h toh aur bhi karoungi but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont end the ff… love u a lot… plzz update next part soon…

  17. SidMinTwiNj

    Hey Maria
    Thank God you posted it… I was waiting for a long time… Lovely epi… Plzzzzzzzz Maria don’t end it… It’s my request…

  18. SidMin

    Hey … Do I mean nothing for you …… Only posting for Chiku means what ….. you can’t post for me ????
    Loved the episode 🙂
    Twinkle was so cute 🙂
    Kunj has started liking Twinkle 🙂
    Love you 🙂 and Post soon and this I want it for me 🙂
    vaise I was angry but now after the episode it is bit okay … but post soon varna …. I will not talk to you 🙂

  19. Hima.S.Akbar

    Ammaaazzziinnggggg!!!!???
    And plz don’t try to end this ff! Plz
    Plz
    Plz
    Plz
    Plz
    Plz
    Plz
    Plz
    I beg u! I just love it ff!.?
    Don’t do it!! Plz!! Love uh!!!

    ??

    1. Mia12

      Ohho madam apna ff kab post karogi tum,? m waiting 4 it jaldhi,,?

      1. Hima.S.Akbar

        jaldi post karoongi madam! and gr8 to know u r waiting for it!

  20. SidMin23

    Maria hope u will not end this and continue to write and love this scene of twinj

  21. Amazing episode Maria Im loving this ff yaar pls continue it don’t end it pls

  22. RUTU.....

    Hey Maria
    Awesome episode dear just loved it and how can you said that you will end it I love your this ff so much please don’t end it
    Love you so much ???

  23. Nice please continue ?
    Waiting on next episode ?
    Update faster please ?

  24. Simiyy

    Hey Maria
    I am happy to see your FF
    Please don’t stop writing
    And don’t be upset
    Post soon
    Loads of love

  25. hawwwwwww 🙁 i always wait for your episodes first of all you wrote the episode so late and now saying that you will not continue plz plz continue the ff 🙂 🙂 🙂 i know you are dissapointed by less comments but some people are silent readers but all wait for your episodes so plz plz 😉 do continue with it 😀

  26. Shalini15

    Awesome amazing mind blowing fabulous superb episode. Loved twinj scene nd twinkle’s childish behaviour ???????? kunj was smiling while blushing hayeeeee just loved it too much.? ?????????? Hope he will love her soon. Well please post next part asap.

    Lots of love ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

  27. dear maria, 🙂 today’s episode was amazing but i m sad becoz the ff which i awaited the most is this one and u r not going 2 continue it but if my words mean 2 u anything then plz continue the ff and complete it. Because of less comments you are hurting those who read your ff with enjoyment and wait 4 your episodes plz plz plZ do continue 🙂 😉 😀

  28. Angel20

    Hey guys,
    Thank you so much for all your comments! I’m really sorry for not replying individually! I have my exams from Thursday so I can’t reply individually. Many silent readers commented, and I’m really very happy? thank you so much again! The next one will be posted tomorrow or maybe tonight. Keep supporting!

    With Love ❤

  29. Purnima.agrawal30

    Awesome amazing fabulous…plzzzzz don’t end it….plzzzzz

  30. Baby

    mariaaa……………i thought u were busy dat is why u were not posting……………
    thanks all thanks to chiku……….my chocopie…….
    yaar was waiting n longing for it……….
    srsly too cute n funny episode……
    awwwwww………loved it
    lods of love☺

  31. Ramya

    Maria
    Plsss plsss plzzzz
    Don’t end IT dear
    Plssssss
    It was amazing awesome superb
    I loved it
    N kunj I falling for twinkle wowww superb
    Love u keep smiling

  32. Aanya_pandey

    That was just soo amazing update dear!!! Loved it

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