I DIDN’T WANT TO LOOSE YOU (One shot {TWINJ})~by Fatimaa

Heyya everyone….
Well today i m not with my ff…i m with a os…
I have written an os for the first time…do give it a read….and yeah its a long os….

So here it is….

I DIDN’T WANT TO LOOSE YOU

It was evening……the sun had sat down….and cleared the sky for the stars and moon to appear….the city of chandigarh is shown….
A police station is shown….inside there were many constables standing……there was a big table at the end of the room…on the table there was a name plate kept…..on which it was written..”INSPECTOR KUNJ SARNA”.
On the chair a handsome man in his mid twenties was sitting…he had a fair complexion…well trimmed and set hairs…deep brown eyes which showed pain and only pain..he had flexed muscles and a well maintained physique…
Inspector kunj sarna..is one of the most strict and harsh inspector general known till now…he just favoured justice and all the goons and bad people were scared till death of him…
He was sitting on his chair and was going through a file…and then a lady constable entered the station with a girl….
The girl was in a miserable state..she was heavily drunk..and constantly blabbering…
Kunj: whats the matter..
Constable: sir this girl was drinking and driving and then she crashed with a stall and created a big scene…
Kunj saw that girl….she was wearing a red frock till her knees…her eyes…deep hazel orbs..which seemed like an ocean..her soft and glossy lips..she was trembling in her high heels….she was none other than twinkle…
Kunj ordered the constable to take her aside and not to put her behind the bars( he himself dosent knows why he said dat)and told the constable to call her guardian…
The constable made twinkle sit aside on a bench and gave her lemonade…then the constable went to call twinkle’s any friend or family…
While kunj was observing twinkle quitely….she was doing cute antiques…she was playing with her hairs and sitting with a cute pout…
Kunj smiled seeing her…( he was too shocked himself that he…kunj sarna…nd smile…it was like a miracle) kunj came out of his thoughts listening to the constable…
Constable: sir i’ve called on the last dialed number from the girls phone…her friend mahi is coming to take her..and sir the girl’s name is twinkle..
Kunj: okay…u can go..

After a while mahi came to the police station and went to kunj…she saw twinkle sitting aside half consciously…
Mahi: excuse me sir..i m mahi..twinkle’s friend…
Kunj: oh..miss mahi..well ur friend was drinking and driving and she also did an accident…this all acts are against the laws thats why she landed here..
Mahi: i m soo srry sir…but she is a very nice girl…this is the first time she has done a mistake like this..plzz sir let her go…i promise she wud nt reapeat this..
Kunj: okay fine u can take her but i dont want this to happen next time or else she will b in the jail..
Mahi: yess sir..thank u soo much..
All the constable’s and others in the police station were shocked as kunj left the girl soo easily..kunj himself was confused at his acts…
Mahi went to twinkle and held her by her arm….
Twinkle: mahi…haha..its tickling yaar..haha…leave me…haha
Mahi: twinkle plzz stop this…come with me we r going home…
But twinkle was getting too stubborn and mahi was failing miserably to take her…
Kunj saw this and as the lady constable had gone so he himself went to help mahi…
Kunj went near them and then held twinkle from one side and told mahi to hold her from other side…as kunj touched her..he felt an unknown feeling..
Kunj and mahi took twinkle outside and then made her sit in the car…
Mahi thanked kunj and then she went with twinkle…

After sometime mahi reached their house and she took twinkle inside the house as she had already slept..
Mahi and twinkle both were besties from childhood..they were neighbours and after their school completed they both came from amritsar to chandigarh..for higher studies…their families had bought a house for both the girls in chandigarh…so they stayed here…
Mahi layed twinkle on her bed and then she thought to herself dat why did twinkle do this act…..
By thinking this mahi retired to sleep…

It was morning and twinkle woke up….mahi came to her and gave her a what was that look….
Twinkle sighed and gave a sheepish smile to mahi and then said something to mahi which was muted….
This day also twinkle became drank and landed in the police station and kunj today also let her go….
This continued for a week…in this week twinkle had slapped a constable, she had also puked on kunj’s uniform, she also broke one of the window panes of the station…but each and everytime kunj had left twinkle….

Now it was a limit so kunj himself went to the area where twinkle everyday creates a scene…
Kunj was standing over a distance watching everything….
Just then he saw a car arrived with a full speed and crashed a stall….and then came twinkle with a beer bottle in her hand and started fighting….
Kunj came there and held her hand tightly and made her sit in his car and drove of to his home…twinkke was acting drunk but as soon as she saw dat kunj brought her to his home she started screaming and asking dat why was he taking her to his house…
Kunj reached his house and dragged twinkle with him inside the house…and dashed her on the sofa…and stood before her with his arms crossed against his chest…
Kunj: are u going to speak up or should i do something else…
Twinkle: waa..wwwaa..whatt dd….do u wanna know..
Kunj: the reason of ur this acting….why r u doing this all thing from past days…and i clearly know that u have been acting like a drunkard each and everyday…am i right miss twinkle..
Twinkle: (realized herself and again started acting drunk)wat rrr uu s..ss.saying kunj…cant u see i m drunk…she spoke taking a sip from her beer bottle..
Kunj: ohh is it soo..lemme see then…saying this he snatched the beer bottle from her hand and took a sip from it….and it tasted like apple juice…
Twinkle closed her eyes and stood there scared…
Kunj: soo miss twinkle…r u going to speak now..or should i bring more apple juice for u…
Twinkle: ok fine…then listen…the truth is that…I LOVE U MR. KUNJ SARNA…
Kunj: what…what the blo*dy hell r u speaking twinkle..
Twinkle: yess its true..i love u…the day i saw u in that mall i had fallen for u…that day when u saved that child from the kidnappers in the mall…i had fallen for u..for ur bravery…for ur everything….and this is the reason i have been doing this all things from last one week….i everyday think that u will put me in the lockup…but u everyday leave…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚..she spoke with a pout..
Kunj smiled at her statement but again came back to his angry mode…
Kunj: twinkle…r u mad…how can u think this…look i m telling u for the first and last time…stop doing ur blo*dy acts..and remove the thought of loving me from yr mind…this cant happen…plzz just leave all this and move on..
Twinkle: kunj how can u say that…i love u kunj…and i will always love you…she spoke with tears gushing from her eyes…..
Kunj stood there motionless nd didnt uttered a wrd..
Twinkle: kunj speak something…plzz kunj speak up god damn it…
Still kunj stayed the same…
Twinkle: fine then..
Saying this she took the gun from his side and placed it on her head and said..
Twinkle: i will end my life here itself…if u r not there then i dnt want this life…
Kunj: twinkle plzz..dont b mad…leave it…plzz twinkle the gun is loaded..plzz give it to me…
Twinkle: i will leave it but only if u will tell me ur reason for ur denail….coz i know u love me too kunj…but something is stopping…plzz tell me the reason…
Kunj: ok twinkle i will tell u the reason..but plzz give me the gun..
Twinkle left the gun and gave it to kunj..
Kunj then held her hand and took her to a room..it was a dark room…he switched on the lights and twinkle ws shocked to see the scene infront of her eyes…her eyes welled up and tears started to flow…
The whole room was covered with pics of kunj with a girl…some were cozy…in some pics kunj was hugging her..it seemed they loved each other immensely..
Kunj: she is neha(sanaya irani) my love my life…my wife…we both lovedd each other immensely…she was my life…we loved each other since college and then we told our families and then we married…life was going soo smooth and easy….one day neha told me dat she wants to give me something and then she handed me a paper and it was the biggest gift of my life…we were going to become parents…neha was pregnant…i was soo happy …all were really happy about the news…but one day when neha went to doctor for her checkup…while returning her car broke..she came outside and someone from back came and stabbed her back….sh..shhe..wwaa…ww…was stabbed…3 ti..mmes at her back….after that i got a call from her number and someone told me about the whole scene…the world seemed stoped for me..i rushed to the hospital where neha was taken….she was taken to the icu….doctors were trying their best but..i guess god wanted to take my neha and he did so…neha didnt survive the operation…as she was 4 months pregnant and the case was vry critical…
I…iii ll..lo..ss..lost my neha…my baby…i lost them twinkle….but this was not it….after a few mins i got a call that my house was set on fire and..i rushed there and there i saw my whole family burning into ashes infront of my eyes….and i was not able to save them….
That was the worst day of my life…i lost my everything…each and every person of my life…i didnt had anyone to speak…anyone with whom i can share my pain…i was soo lonely…
After that i decided to know about the person behind this….and i came to cahndigarh from amritsar….i was successful in finding the person…he was the brother of one boy whom i arrested and he was sentenced to jail…his brother had came to take revenge from me…i catched them all but still one is left and i will catch him soon…this is the reason twinkle…i dont want anything to happen to u…if u will come in my life..than u will loose ur life and i dont want anthing to happen to u…saying this kunj sat on his knees and cried his heart out..
Twinke was crying endlessly…she sat beside him and hugged him….he too hugged her back…both were crying in each other’s embrace…after somtime…twinkle broke the hug andcupped kunj’s face…
Twinkle: how can u say this kunj…that if i will come in ur life then i wud loose my life…no kunj..u r wrong…if u r with me then i have no fear of anything…i feel safe..secured when u r with me…plzz kunj dont do this to me…to u…plzz
Kunj: but twink..

He was stopped by twinkle who smashed her lips on his…kunj was shocked but then gave in…they both were kissing each other like there was no tommorrow…the kiss was getting more wild with each increasing second…he was sucking her upper lip and she was sucking his lower lip..finally after 10 mins they broke the kiss…both were breathing heavily…but the kiss had already created a heated effect between the both…they looked at each other intensely..with love filled eyes…(read at ur own risk)
kunj again kissed her this time with more passion and more wildness..both were nibbling on each other’s lips…kunj was carresing her back and twinkle’s hands were ruffling the soft hairlocks of kunj…they broke off the kiss…and kunj picked her up in his arms and took her to his room…he entered his room and placed her on the bed and then he came on top of her…he again kissed her and now his hands went inside twinkle’s top and were tracing her curves…he then opened the zip of her top and slided it down without breaking the kiss…twinkle flipped their position and said”my turn”..to which kunj chuckeled and then twinkle removed his shirt and started kissing him on his chest and carresing…kunj again flipped her and he kissed her neck giving love bites…and giving sloppy wet kisses all over her neck…he removed all her clothes and then undressed himself too and then made love to her……

The next morning the sun rays felt on the two love birds sleeping in each others embrace….
Twinkle woke up and remembered their last night and blushed…kunj woke up and saw her blushing and kissed her cheek…
Kunj: twinkle yesterday’s night was the best night of my life….
Twinkle: it was indeed the best night for me too kunj…i love u…i really do..
Kunj: i love u too twinkle…from the first time wen i saw u at police station i had fallen for u…
Twinkle: then y were u denying me..huh??
Kunj: coz I DIDN’T WANT TO LOOSE YOU TWINKLE….like i lost my family..promise me you wont leave me…
Twinkle: i promise kunj..i will always stay with you..i ll always love u…if god also asks me to come to him..i will fight with him too and come back to you…
Kunj: i love you soo much…
Twinkle: i love u too…and then kunj kissed her…
And they both lived together ever after….

πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄πŸ”΄

Finally i finished….i hope u enjoyed the super long os…..
Plzz drop ur comments plzz….negative positive but plzz share ur views…
Love u all❀❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

44 comments

  1. Viratian_wattoholic

    Viratian_wattoholic

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    Omg..this was spellbound os loved their romance ufff..how can u write so amazing api..nd ut was emotional too..i loved it too much..try to post more stories..
    All my luv to u..
    Biee

  2. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Hey doll,
    Awesome amazing fabulous fantastic excellent outstanding mind blowing superb is yrr…..I just loved it to CORE….Twinj part were amazing….Drunk tw..She slaped constable and broke Window..Hahaha…It was soooooooooo funny…
    KUNJ past was emotional yrr…..Twinj confession was sooooooooo lovely….And romance part was sizzling hot yrr….
    Ye is na Jiju ko padhana hmari Tarah wo v Teri writing skills k fan hoo jayenge…..hehe
    Post soon
    Love you 😍😍😍
    Muaaaaahhh 😘😘😘😘
    Keep smiling

  3. Presha

    Presha

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    Du u were so cuteeieee when u were 4…..
    Back to the os ….
    Its splended u made me spee hless spellboun…
    Omg wat a marvellous price of writting…
    Just loved it…
    Too good…
    Love u…
    Post ur ff soon…
    πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’‹β€β€πŸ’‹πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ˜²

  4. Ramya

    Ramya

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    It’s awesome amazing Superb fatima
    Mera hamesha seek wish thaki I want go see kunj in police dress
    N bcoz of u mai usse imagine kar payi
    N I’m damn sure he is so stunning in my imagination
    Superb lovely

    Love u keep smiling

  5. SidMin

    SidMin

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    Aww … just loved it …. the os was a mixture of romance .. Love… and emotions …
    Love you keep writing ❀

  6. Twinjfan.tamanna

    Twinjfan.tamanna

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    Awww cutie! Yaar too cute pic(dp) I just wanna kiss her cheeks! And the os my god so unique idea! Just loved it to the core! Beautifully written! Emotional one but romance hawtt!😍😍 love you so much

    With love,
    Urs Tamanna

  7. akanksha

    Hey Fatima, its very nice….the story was very unique nd fresh….it jst touched mu heart.loved it to the core…..

  8. Sneha

    Heyy fatima…
    It was a unique spellbound os..
    It was written astoundingly…
    A perfect mix of emotions…romance…and fun…
    It was superbbb..
    Do write more….
    Lots of love..

  9. Anayaali

    Awesome story…..
    Emotions r described beautifully….hot…
    Luvd it to the core….
    And sorry for late cmnt….
    Api exams r over now i will try to cmnt first in ur every post….
    And best of luck for u exams…
    Luv u soooo much….
    Look i said u r superb writer and with this os u proved me right…

  10. Cp

    Apnee yeh kaisa Os likh daala …….jeete ji humkoooo oooo. maar daala,,maar daala hooooo maar daalaaπŸ’•πŸ˜πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘πŸ’₯πŸ’₯maar daallaaaaaa……oooooo πŸ˜€fantabulous os …just loved it😳😳byeeeπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  11. Purvi128

    Purvi128

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    Hey jaan….
    Sorry for the late comment…
    But the os was awesomely amazing.., i just can’t put it in words what i m feeling ryt now after reading the os…
    Ohhh goddd… itna awesome.., ufff …. their emotions were perfectly described…
    When Twinkle told him the reason of her acting I was laughing like an idiot.,, uff koi pyaar me itna bhi pagal hosakta hai…. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Well emotinal bhi bht tha… or suchi kahun toh romance toh … maar dala yarrr 😍😍😍😍 that was awesome..,
    Kya likha tu ne 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    Chal ab apna ff jaldi post ker…
    Love u πŸ’žπŸ’ž

  12. Twinj

    Twinj

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    Hey fama di
    That was just awesome amazing mindblowing…
    mind ka fuse he udha dala…just loved it….
    Romantic bhi tha….EMOTIONS WERE DESCRIBED PERFECTLY…
    Love it to the core…god di…u write so welll…
    Do post ur ff very soon…coz I really love u n ur writing…can’t wait…
    Sorry for the late cmt…

    Loads of love
    Twinj

  13. Mia12

    Mia12

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    Hey meri fattu,,
    Meri janeman sorry 4 late cmnt..πŸ˜”πŸ˜”..
    Kya likha hai tune matlab jhakkkaaasss,,πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹..
    Just Marvelous.. Fantastic.. Wonderful os.😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
    I just love it to the core..β€πŸ’™β€πŸ’™β€πŸ’™β€πŸ’™β€πŸ’™β€πŸ’™β€πŸ’™β€..
    And their romance was just Amazinggggg,,😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍..
    Or likhna ok m waiting 4 more,,πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›..
    Loads of love you,,πŸ˜˜πŸ’žβ€πŸ’žβ€πŸ’žπŸ˜˜

  14. Nisha

    Bangaram first of all iam sry for commenting late plzzz forgive me dear
    But OS was awesome fantabulous I loved it to the core
    Love u. Bangaram
    Bye

  15. Aashiya

    Aashiya

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    Oh my god , oh my god……..lag gae 440 volt is os se tere…….This was damn freaking great gummie bear….seriously mujhe 440 volt lag gae……what an amazing os….everything was just up to mark….twinkle’s talli acting was supperrbbbbbb…….loved it to d core…….ab to really m gonna have a gr8 Ni8. …….m just spellbound….mujhe samajh nai aa raha kya bolu…..how do you write so well….huh….hamesha mujhe 440 volts kya 10000 volts ke jhatke de dete ho aap……
    Love you d mostttttttt
    -ur chotu babyyy

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