THE DIARIES – OUR LIFE SAVIOURS SHOT 4 OUT OF 4

Hey guys! It’s me Anshita back with the fourth and final shot of THE DIARIES – OUR LIFE SAVIOURS. As I’d informed you all earlier, that the original version I’d written got deleted, I’ve added a bit to this one to make it a bit longer as it’s the last and final shot and I really look forward on getting a bright smile on your gorgeous facesπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ It definitely won’t be that long but I just hope it worth a read😬😬😬
So here we go…

Shravan and Suman stood shocked and stared at each other.

Shravan: (angrily) You! You were trying to steal my diary, huh? What do you think of yourself?

Suman: Oh c’mon Shravan! It was you who was trying to steal my diary so please ‘hands off’!

Shravan: Have you lost it? That diary belongs to my love. True love. And you thought you’d be able to steal it?

Suman: I’m pretty sure now that you certainly have lost it. My diary is the one which reveals all the secret of my true soulmate and you were trying to peek in them, weren’t you?

Shravan: Oh please! Out of a million people on land, you think I’d steal something from you? What do you even have worth stealing?

Suman: Uhhh! As if you would go and steal Ambani’s stuff or hack his bank account! Look at yourself, can’t even take care of your own so called ‘diary-belonging-to-true-love’ and then blaming me for it, huh? You think it’s really funny? But for your kind information, I don’t find it funny at all!

Shravan: You know what Sumo, you consider yourself to be great. Sumo the great.

Suman: Oye Lambu! You might be very tall but it’s all of no use if you don’t know how to talk to people with respect! Wonder why God sent you on earth! I guess to either hack Ambani’s bank account or to irritate me!

Shravan: Trust me, I’d rather hack Ambani’s bank account than irritating you!

Suman: Ya, ya. As if I’d leave all those zillions of dollars and run to you just for the sake of teasing you!

Both Shravan and Suman: Argggggh!

Shravan: Sumo!

Suman: Lambu!

Both Shravan and Suman: Wait, what????!

Suman: How dare you call me Sumo, huh? Lambu, if you do not know, then let me tell you that I have a proper name. Suman Tiwari. Or atleast Suman. Actually, you should be calling me ‘Respected Suman Tiwari’, however, I forgive you and give you the permission to just call me Suman. Nothing more and nothing less. Get it? (smirks)

Shravan: First of all, you just called me Lambu and you want be to call you by your proper name? Impossible! Besides, even I have a proper full name if you hadn’t known earlier. Shravan Malhotra. And I grant you the permission to call me Shravan. Nothing more and nothing less.

Suman: Arghhh! You just replaced my name with your name and nearly said the same thing!

Shravan: Haaawww! Looks like someone’s getting mad! Sumo, Sumo, Sumo, Sumo! How’s that then? (smirks)

Suman: Lambu, Lambu, Lambu! I think mines better (smirks back).

Shravan: (irritated) Ahhhhhh! Hate You

Suman: (getting mad) As if I love you!

Shravan picked up one diary in frustration and the moment he opened the first page of the diary, he stood still. Suman was confused by his behaviour but didn’t give a damn and picked up the other diary. The moment she opened it, she stood still as well. Both of their faces became as pale as possible. They dropped the diaries in shock.

Yes, they’d picked up their own diaries this time. They’d realised that the person whom the were madly in love with and even now, had been in front of them all this while. Would it be the same if the names had been mentioned on the respective diaries? Maybe not. In this case, they both had fallen for each other, well aware of each other’s flaws, unaware of each other’s name, looks or title. All they knew was that they were deeply in love with writer of the diary who was now right in front of them. Tears started flowing from both Suman’s and Shravan’s eyes. Thick tears indeed.

Suman: (trying her best to gather up words) Sh..Shra…Shravan…

Shravan: (he too tried to stop crying) S…Su..Suma..Suman…

And that was it. None of the two could manage another word and they quickly ran to each other and fell into each other’s embrace. How wonderful it felt for the two of them! It seemed as if this was all they wanted from their lives. Their tears weren’t of sorrow bit of happiness

Shravan: (still hugging her) I’m so sorry Suman. But trust me, I love you. A lot and a lot.

Suman: (continuing their hug) No Shravan! No need to apologise. It was my mistake as well. Besides, it’s Sumo for you! I love you too Lambu!

Shravan: Yeah, Sumo the wrestler! Isn’t is wonderful? (lets go of Suman and looks into her eyes)

Suman: Shravu!!!

Shravan: Atleast not this one!!!

Shravan and Suman soon informed their family members that they’d finally found their true soulmates and to their delight, both the families were satisfied with the choice made by the kids and approved of their relationship. To Suman’s surprise, her Mamaji apologised for all their bitter relations in the past and asked if they could start it all over again. He promised her that he’d treat her as their own daughter to which Suman gleefully agreed.

Life was all set then for the two. They both were one. Their families were one. Shravan’s family was getting yet one more addition while Suman’s family was building up again. Most importantly, the two dear best buddies, Suman and Shalini were going to live under the same roof, together yet once again.

Fate had been grateful to Shalini. It’d been kind to Aryan. It definitely was a support and guide for Shravan. But most importantly, it had simply been wonderful for our dear Suman who’d now happily turned Sumo. Despite the dismissal of her parents, bitter relations with relatives in the past, all her other worries and troubles and of course, the tough time she had to go through to find her true love, Shravan, life had been amazing to her. Actually, she’d been amazing in life all this while. She had her own tactics for all its games.

It was the marriage day today. In fact, a double marriage. Shalini and Aryan on one hand and Suman and Shravan on the other. Life was perfect for all the four now. And they hoped it’d continue the same and it sure did!

‘I love recalling those golden days, don’t you Shravan?’ Asked our dear Suman. It’d been 2 years since their marriage now.
‘Yes, of course. Especially the day when the biggest secret of our lives was disclosed,’ replied Shravan.

‘Those diaries truly were our life saviours,’ said Suman with tears of happiness flowing from her eyes.
‘Sumo,’ Shravan came to her side and wiped off her tears, ‘you’re a wrestler and I’ve not seen wrestler crying except for when they win.’
‘And I have won, Shravan. I’ve won from all those who opposed. I won from the tough times of life to get you. What victory could possibly be greater than that for me?’
‘Same pinch!’

The two looked into each other’s eyes and smile. And continued to do so for the ret of their lives.
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So how was it??? I nearly rewrite the whole thing! My hands are terrible aching nowπŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜…Hope you liked it! Do comment😊😊😊
With love,
Anshita😘😘😘😘😘

26 comments

  1. Ria

    |Registered Member

    Hey Anshita,
    Well, thus was worth reading. I didn’t even have the time to comment because of Durga Puja. I just loaded them somehow and went out.

    Anyways, I loved the entire series. Hope you come back with another one and please let me know.

    Loads of love.πŸ’–

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooo much Ria di!!!
      I’m truly delighted to see your comment☺️☺️☺️
      Besides, no problem if you hadn’t comment☺️ I’m glad you read the series☺️☺️☺️
      I will definitely try to come up with another series in future and I hope you all shower your love on me there as well☺️☺️😌😌😌
      Loads and tons of love!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

  2. Maria

    |Registered Member

    This was again magnificent! The way they were fighting and then they realize they have found their soulmates was awww moment! Loved it very much! I appreciate your efforts for rewriting it.☺ thank you so much for this story! Loved it very much!β€πŸ‘Œβ€πŸ’•

  3. AnShIta

    |Author

    Thnx a loooottttt Maria di!!!
    I’m so happy to see your lovely response on the last shot☺️☺️☺️
    I would like to thank you for your kind words and of course, for appreciating my efforts☺️☺️☺️
    This is what true makes me feel the urge to write for you all😊😊😊
    Although you shouldn’t be thanking me, I shall be taking this thank you as it’s the last one I’m going to be receiving for EDKV currently☺️☺️😌😌
    Once again, thank you sooo much for your heart touching words😊😊😊😌😌☺️☺️
    Love you loads and loads!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

  4. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Hey anshu…!
    Sweety it was amazingggggg…
    U managed it beautifully…!
    They were fighting nd suddenly d bomb fell….πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
    Loved it…
    I would live to c u back wid another story…
    All d best for ur exams nd results…!
    Be back soon…
    Love u loads…
    Take care..!
    😊😊😊😊

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey WS!
      Thank you so much for your remarkable words😊😊😊
      Well yes, it sure did feel like a bomb to both of themπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
      I’m extremely delighted to hear that you enjoyed the series and I myself would love to be back😊
      I’ll be missing you all a lotπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜”πŸ˜”
      Thank you for all your kind words for both my exams and four shot. Really appreciated your comments☺️☺️☺️
      Love you loads and loads and hope to see you soon again!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
      Take care!

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooo much for your lovely comment dear😊😊😊
      I too will ever missing all the lovely people out here!
      Take care!😊😊😊

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Vedika di!
      Thank you sooo much for your lovely comment😊😊😊
      I’ll definitely try my best to be back soon!
      Till then, I’ll miss all of you guysπŸ˜”πŸ˜”
      Love ya and TC 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooooo much dear!!!
      I did the really have much time to write much. Therefore, came up with those short oneπŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Šβ˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈ
      I’ll try my best to be back as soon as possible!
      Love ya and TC!😘😘😘😘😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

  5. sona

    Anshi..
    It was fab..dear…😍😍😍😍
    Its quite pleasant…
    So..sweet yaar…
    Thanks for giving this 4 shot…
    And one more thing…u thought us that how can diaries help us in our lifes..isn’t it?πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Well Congo for completing this few shot..
    πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Sona di!!
      Thank you sooooo much fro your lovely remark😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍
      No need to thank me di! The pleasure is all mine😊😊😊
      Yes, diaries sure can be really very helpful in such cases😝😝😝
      Love you and TC!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

  6. AnShIta

    |Author

    To my dear readers and supporters:
    My journey so far with EDKV sure has been short, but it has been incredible😊😊😊
    I found many friends out here and of course, a lovely audience☺️☺️
    As per to all your requests, I’ll try my best to be back soon with something else😊
    It might take time since I’ve currently gotten my exams. However, my break will be starting from the 26th. Hopefully, if any idea hits my mind till then, I’ll be back. Or Seles don’t worry, a bit more time and I’ll come up with something or the other for sure!
    I’d like to thank each one of you who had read my article and has commented as well. It was all due to your kind words I could continue so far.
    I promise to be back soon!😊😊😊😊☺️☺️☺️😌😌
    Love you all veryyyyyyy veryyyyyyyy veryyyyyy muchπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’
    Take care to all EDKVians!!!☺️☺️☺️☺️
    Hope you all will remember me till the next time I’m back with something!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

  7. Zainab

    This was just so perfect man!!
    I loved it more than the words can explain. It was so amazing. Your storyline was so unique. All the dialogues were so wonderfully written. You described each and every scene so beautifully that I can’t even explain that.
    Please be back soon. Best of luck for your exams. Take care. Loads of love 😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooooo much Zainab di!!!
      Your comment means a lot to me😊😊
      All that you’ve say in the comment has touched my heart and make it melt☺️☺️☺️☺️
      I’m so glad to see that you enjoyed each and every scene thoroughly and had no complaints. Although even if you had any, I wouldn’t mindπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
      I’ll definitely try to be back as soon as possible. All your lovely comments made me feel the urge to write since the past few days..
      Thank you soooo much for all that you’ve said so far. Your warm wishes for my exams and heart melting words for my ff have all made me think my efforts were worth a try☺️☺️☺️
      Love you loads and loads and take care di!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

  8. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    hey anshita !!!!! these all 4 shots were just beyond awesomeness … u hv done a grrrrreat job …
    sorry for not commenting before .. i was reading it whenever u update it bt was unable to comment due to network problm … bt now greatfully m able to comment .. u r amazing girl … keep the good work up ..
    Take care ..
    Lotzzzz of love ..

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you soooooo much di!!
      I’m truly overwhelmed seeing your kind words☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ They’ve truly made my heart melt😊😊😊
      No problem that you hadn’t commented earlier☺️ In fact, I’m happy to see your commenting on the last shot as it gives me an idea of how well it’d all gone☺️☺️☺️
      Once again, thank you sooooo much for your kind words😊😊
      Love you loads and loads and take care!😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

  9. AnShIta

    |Author

    Dear readers and supporters:
    I know that you all want me to be back at the soonest. However, it’ll take time before I can be backπŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
    Therefore, I’ve decided that I’ll comment on as many ffs as I can. And, if all can do me a small little favour, do read my ff on KRPKAB called ME, YOU AND PASSION if you’d be interested in following me and my works until I return back. I agree that you mightn’t be much aware of the story but my story is a bit different from the rest and I’ve provided a proper introduction of it and if you could possibly give it a try once, I’d be grateful to each one of you☺️☺️☺️
    Maria di and Ria di from here follow my ff and I hope you too give it a try😊😊😊😊😊
    I’ve even written this OS which I hope, can be viewed by all of you and hopefully, you’ll like it😊😊
    Once again, thank you for your constant support so far☺️☺️☺️😍😍😍
    Love you all!πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

  10. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Hi Anshu dear….Sry again for a late comment. Turning into my common routine for that apologising. Anyways I’ll jump into the topic coz I have a lot to tell. U were a new member and ur journey with us haven’t been that long but look! All of our chemistry goes on so well. U r a part of this family nd obv of those sweet members. These shots were brilliant. I loved how u showed parallelism. Like wow!!! Beyond words. U portrayed their background nd character in small words meaning huge. Great job. Pls come back soon with more creative ideas. I’m eagerly waiting to read more by u. Till we encounter again, have a great time. Take care
    loads of love nd blessings
    -Aru

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Aru!
      Thank you soooooo much for your kind words dear☺️☺️☺️☺️
      I’m so happy to see that you enjoyed each and every words along with its description ☺️☺️☺️
      I’ll definitely try my best to be back at the soonest😊😊
      Till then, take care and love you loads!πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

  11. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Anshu…
    hope u dnt mind me calling u Anshu…
    Sorry … As m commenting very late…
    Ur FS was Super se upar…
    Storyline was awsum…
    u nailed it girl…
    all n all it was amazing… I loved it…
    take care…
    keep posting more stuff like this…
    Lots of Love
    Ruchi…

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooooo much Ruchi di!!!
      Thank you sooo much for those valuable words if yours😍😍😍😍😍
      I’ll try my best to be back soon!😊😊
      Love you!πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈπŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

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