THE DIARIES – OUR LIFE SAVIOURS SHOT 1 OUT OF 4

THE DIARIES- OUR LIFE SAVIOURS SHOT 1

Greetings to all! I’m Anshita, a new member in the magnificent EDKV community.
Much to all ShraMan fans’ displeasure, the serial had telecasted its last episode on 7th October 2016. Despite the short time it’d been on screen, it made its place in people’s heart that cannot be erased for a long time.
But we all must remember that we chose to follow EDKV and will continue doing so. Therefore, I’m here with four shots dedicated to all Β EDKV fans.

‘Come on Suman! We still have a lot of shopping pending!’
‘Are baba, are baba! Hold on, I’m coming!’
Just then a beautiful girl enters the room with her hair let out open. Her beauty not only showed on her face but also in her voice, the simplicity yet gave a melodious sound. On one shoulder, she carried a simple brown purse not too big, not too small. Her big eyes, pink lips and straight nose made everyone who saw her fall for her. She truly was a natural beauty. She’d walk about without any makeup put on for she believed that true beauty lies within.
‘Gawd Suman! Where had you been?’
‘Are Shamila, why do you over-worry yourself? There’s still a month left to your wedding and the way you’re behaving makes it look like it’s only a day away! Cool yourself down. Let go of all that worry and frustration (hands her a glass of water).
‘Hey bhagwan, if this girl wasn’t here, to mera kya hota?’ (Oh god, if this girl wasn’t here, what would I do then?) as she passes a smile to her friend.Β 
Suman was the only one Shamila had and Shamila was the only one whom Suman had. More than besties, they were like to sisters. No matter what the situation was, they never let go off each other’s hand and that was the best thing about their relationship.
A small tear dropped out of Shamila’s eyes as she thanked Suman for always being here for her no matter what. In order to control the situation, Suman smiled and let out a sweet laugh and said,
‘Now look, you were the one who had been yelling at me since the past 15 minutes to be quick and now, it’s me who’ll have to start yelling at you! Chalo chalo, be quick now. Besides, I bet you wouldn’t want to spoil your mascara with those tears of yours.’
‘Oh yah! I nearly forgot about that! (back in her jolly tone) Oye Sumo, zaraa dekh na kahin smudge to nahin hua? (Sumo, just check out if it hasn’t gotten smudged, has it?)
‘Are baba nahin. Kuch nahin hua. (No, nothing wrong with it) Aryan is lucky to get a life partner like you for you’re so beautiful,’ as she passes a reassuring smile to Shamila.
‘Ab dekh Sumo, tu hi time waste kar rahi hai! Ab chal!’ ( Now see Sumo, you’re the ones who’s wasting time! Let’s go now!) as she goes out giggling to herself. Suman places a diray, her diary, in her purse and runs out calling for Shamila.

‘Bhaiya jaldi karo! Hum late ho rahe hai!’ (Be quick bro! We’re getting late!)
‘Haa bas chal chote’ (Yah, let’s leave dear)
Running down the stairs came 6.4 feet handsome hunk with blue eyes. He was all dressed in black which made him look even more stunning. His hair all combed to the back and his million dollar smile made him look marvellous.
‘Aap bhi na bhaiya. Ab chalo!’ (Come on bro, let’s leave now)
‘Your command is my order sir,’ as the two brothers leave together laughing and giggling.
Shravan and Aryan were brothers. They lived in a small, but joyful and lively house with their parents, Ram and Kamini. The four of them were contended, however, wanted to extend their family. Shravan was more of a less expressive one and immediately refused when his parents spoke about marriage to him. His parents took his point into consideration that he would only marry if he and his partner came closer by fate and not by people. On the other hand, Arya was more of the talkative and lively guy. He’d been dating a girl, Shamila since quite some time and the two of them finally thought of speaking about their relationship infront of Aryan’s parents. To their delight as well as surprise, Aryan’s parents were highly impressed by Shamila and whole-heartedly accepted Shamila as a going-to-be member of their family. Shamila had none to seek permission from. However, she did ask Suman once if she was comfortable with the decision of hers but Suman was even more excited than Shamila, as a result. Suman said that she would manage the house herself and in return, Shamila promised her that she’d pass by often. Thankfully, Aryan’s parents had no objection towards this. Now the marriage was to be held after four weeks.

Suman and Shamila had been roaming around the mall since he past four hours, without any success. Suman was highly exhausted and her legs were terribly paining
. However, she said nothing just to make sure that those tears don’t drop out of Shamila’s eyes again. Suman had always been the more practical, bold and stronger one. Shamila often lacked of confidence and was sensitive at times.
On the other side of the mall, unknown of the fact that Suman and Shamila were in the same mall, Shravan and Aryan had been running all around. Honestly, both of them were tired but Shravan was the only one who was showing it. Aryan was a bit too interested in shopping clothes for himself and Shamila that he hardly gave any notice to his tiredness.
It was high time now and Suman could hardly manage a step forward. She couldn’t resist resting and therefore told Shamila that she’d sit on the bench for a while and she could go and explore more shops. Shamila protested that she’d sit along with Suman but finally agreed to go. Suman sat on a bench close by and let out a heavy sigh that was a prove of her tiredness. She opened her purse and took her diary out and began writing in it. Besides Shamila, this diary was her closest friend. She’d been writing in it ever since she was at the age of 9 after the dismissal of her parents in a car crash. The biggest of her secrets, which were unknown by Shamila as well, we’re know by this dear diary of hers. She’d carry it along wherever she went and made sure nobody got to know about it. Surprisingly, this diary was even hidden from Shamila.
Shravan as well was exhausted now and finally the thought of resting became irresistible for him. He told Aryan that he’d rest for some time while he could continue with his exploration. Unknowingly, Shravan sat on the other side of the same bench Suman was siting. He took kid shoulder bag off and rummaged through it in great hurry. Finally, his expression became cooler and calmer and he set out a sigh of relief. He took out a diary and started writing in it with keen interest. Despite having parents and a happy family, Shravan was most attached to this diary. Alike Suman, it was his greatest and closest friend and nobody (including Aryan) was aware of this.Β 

Both Suman and Shravan were unknown of the fact that they were sitting near each other and were busy jotting down stuff into their diaries. Exhausted of writing, the two of them kept their respective diaries behind them and stretched their arms wide in refreshment. In a hurry to leave, Suman quickly picked up a diary and left. Shravan too, after a minute or two picked the diary left and went off to find Aryan. Surprisingly, the entire time they’d been together went unnoticed by them and they didn’t have the slightest idea how these couple of minutes of relaxation would change their lives.

Precap: Suman and Shravan are terrified at what lays infront of their eyes.

17 comments

  1. WeirdSister

    |Registered Member

    Hey anshu..
    Hope u don’t mind me calling u that..?
    Now…coming to d story…
    I think their diaries got exchanged.. I think so…!
    D chp was nice…
    Well thought plot…
    Eagerly waiting..
    Post soon..
    Love u..
    😊😊😊😊😊

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey WeirdSister!
      Thnx a lot for your comment. This is my first ever article on EDKV and I’m surprised at the response I’ve gotten😊😊
      Either Anshi (that’s my actual nickname) or Anshu would do πŸ™‚
      I currently have my exams going on, however, since I’ve already written all the four shots, I’ll be posting one per day☺️☺️☺️
      Loads of love😘😘😘😘

  2. Zainab

    Hi Anshita. Zainab here. You wrote so amazingly beautiful that I’m speechless right now. I loved this part a lot. Post the next one soon please.
    Much love 😘
    P.S let’s introduce ourselves though.
    I’m 17 and from Pakistan. In alevels final year. What about you?

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hi Zainab di! (if you don’t mind me calling you that)
      Thanks a lot for your remarkable comment!😊😊😊
      I’m truly overwhelmed by the response I’ve received here☺️
      I’ll be submitting the second part later in the day πŸ™‚
      I’m 12 and live in India. I’m currently in 6th grade πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚
      Nice to know you!
      Love 😘😘😘

      • Zainab

        I really don’t mind it. In fact I love it whenever someone calls me di. It feels so good.
        Wow you are 12 and such an amazing writer. Masha Allah.
        Take care sweetie 😘

      • AnShIta

        |Author

        I’d really like to thank you for your precious comment😊😊😊😊😊
        And I’d definitely love to call you di!
        Love you😘😘😘😘😘

  3. sona

    Hey anshit..
    Thanks for writing thus..
    It was so nice..and I enjoyed it..
    May shravan dream will come true..
    Its what fate..which is writing his story as he wants😊😊😊
    And mostly..
    Ramini..here..
    Loll..
    πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Sona di!
      Glad you liked it!😊😊😊
      You don’t have to thank me, instead I should be the one who should be thanking you all for your lovely commentsπŸ™‚πŸ™‚β˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈ
      I’ll do whatever it takes to fulfil his wish😊😍😍
      I thot of taking the two together as one. Thus, created Ramini😁😁😁
      Love you😘😘😘😘😘

  4. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Hiiii Ashita…Welcome to our small family. Can I call u Ashu if u don’t mind? Btw I’m Ariana, but u can call me Aru ignoring my age, class nd all formalities.
    Now coming to the shot, it was soooooooooo nice. U described their situations nd position so well. I’m eager to read ur nxt part. Having a hugeeeee gut that their dairies got exchanged. Idk Just hope the time flys nd u post sooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn.
    take care dear
    stay blessed nd loved <3
    -Aru

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Hey Aru! Vaise, I shud be calling you di but if you want be to not call you by that, no problem 😊😊😊
      I’ve submitted the next post…hope it gets uploaded soon😁😁
      Thanks for appreciating my work😊😊😍😍😍
      Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooo much Deotima di!
      The second shot has been uploaded..do have a look at it and plzzz do commentπŸ˜¬πŸ˜¬πŸ˜€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‰
      Loads of love😘😘😘😘😘

    • AnShIta

      |Author

      Thank you sooo much Maria di!
      I’d really like to thank you for supporting me for my KRPKAB ff and as well as for this four shot😊😊😊
      I can’t express my happiness seeing how impressed you are with my writing 😊😊
      Hope I can continue to do so!
      Hope u enjoy the next part!
      With love😘😘😘

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