DHOOR MATH JAAO – SWASAN FF (Episode 6) swasan bonding..

Namaste friends !! Neera is back with next episode…. but friends am really feeling bad….. am getting very low comments… pls encourage me by ur comments…. if u r not interested… ll try to end this ff…
Recap : swara’s first day in her final year…. 3 guys misbehaving with her n one guy is saving her…

The episode starts with swara n d the person going away from each other…
Swara to herself… tat guy s really awesome… i donno… i feel some connection with him…. i feel like i know him very well… do i really know him ?? No swara u dont know him…. infact u are seeing him for 1st time… u r a big mad swara… y did u tell ur name as shona ? U know na oly maa baaba n chikku call u shona…. oly these three have the right to call u shona n no one else…ufff swara day by day u r becoming mad…she came back to her senses listening to a voice…
Oh hello madam ji… do u have any idea wt s going on in d college.. ?? Everyone were called for meeting n u are late as usual…
Swara : yeah pooja i know i know… u know na ? Always tat god targets me n today also… (she narrates d whole incident )
Pooja : omg swara !! This much happened ?? Tell me who r those guys.. ll kick their a*s….
Swara : chill pooja… nothing happened… SoFu saved me na… u know wt ? He s really really cute n sweet… d way he asked sorry…!! The way he respect girls… he s awesome….
Pooja : SoFu huh ??? :p lol nickname n all huh ? ok ok !!! Tell me… was he really looking dashy ?? Wt s his real name ???
Swara : shut up pooja ! i was.. i was just saying he looked cute tats it… n haan i donno his name n all… y should i ? (With attitude)
Pooja : arre haan haan… y should u ?? Oly i should know his name… !! :p if u see him next time just ask his name on my behalf ok ??
Swara : wa wa why ?? U should not know his name… r u mad pooja ? U don’t even know him… u don’t even know who s he… (cutting her)
Pooja : so wt swara ?? I donno him… but i can know him now na 😉 who knows may be he s my dream boyy… :p
Swara : (felt angry hearing this) shut up pooja… dont utter a single word further …
Pooja : omg swara !! U too have emotions ?? Aa aa i mean… seriously yaar ! I have never seen u getting angry… for the first time u r getting angry means.. there s something fishy… bol bol… who is he ? U like him na ? U r jealous na…???
Tat was all for swara… she was shocked hearing d word jealous… tats wen she realised wt was she doing….. she felt really embarrassed for behaving like tat…
Swara : no no pooja.. dont take me wrong…. sorry yaar… n yeah… am not jealous n all…
Pooja : come on swara accept it… i have never seen u praising any guy in d college… in fact i donno from wen d topper girl started looking at guys ! But am happy for u swara….
Swara : arre pooja…. don’t blabber something re… u leave me….u know about my family na ?? Do u think they accept all these bakwaas ?
Pooja : come on swara… dont even say they r ur family… stop calling them ur family…they r cruel people… all they want s money money n oly money…. n tat b***c priya… she leaves no chance for insulting u… but wt u do is simply support them… i feel bad for u swara…. pls have some emotions…. pls oppress them… Dont be silent swara…
Swara : pooja my silence is respect for them… i dont wanna disrespect them… after my maa n baba… they were the one who took care of me… they gave me shelter….protected me… they gave me a family..

Pooja : bas swara…they r taking ur respect as cowardness…n wt did u say ?? They gave u shelter ?? Dammit u… its ur home.. they themselves r seeking shelter from u n who r they to give u shelter ?? N lol they protected u ?? They protected themselves with your money….they gave a family for u ??? I guess they were d one who snatched ur family !!… they should have done tat… n y not ? They r capable of doing tat when they actually tried killing u !!!
Spalshhh… dont even dare to talk about my family pooja…. if u talk further u ll get another slap from me….u dont have any rights to comment on my family… u r just my friend…they r my family n they r everything to me… ok??? No matter whether they consider me as part of their family… but i always think them as my family… u donno how much they matter to me…. i love them all… no matter whether they love me back…. i hope one day they ll understand me n give me d love….(crying)
Pooja : (with a choked voice) i seriously pity u swara… u dont have ur own brain n u dont even listen to others….wt r u gonna gain being a topper without sensing wts happening around u…seriously swara… i donno who is gonna protect u from ur family… am feeling very bad for u not for ur slap… afterall am used to it… n i dont mind getting it in future… no matter wt it is my duty to make u realise tat no one s worse than ur family… they tried killing u swara… y dont u understand ???
Swara : bas pooja… u have talked a lot…. how many times should i tell u not to talk about my family…they din try to kill me… it was all a accident… tat day my leg twisted n i fell down..
Pooja : then wt about break failure in d car???
Swara : it was just…the car was old n had to be serviced…
Pooja : okay ! Then wt about tat poisoned milk ???
Swara : t.a.t w.a.s…(searching for words)
Pooja : don’t search for words swara… there r oly 26 alphabets… how much ever u search u not gonna get it… n u know d reason behind it…
Swara : stop it pooja… i cant hear anything against my family.. wt ever they have done to me s all cauz of misunderstanding… one day they ll love me…. but now we r getting late for class… so lets leave…(she leaves)

Pooja (to herself) jaa swara jaa….. ll see for how many days u r going to suffer…. ll not let u suffer in tat hell…. i know d way to get u out from there….(smiles hopefully)(she too leaves)
The scene shifts to a bus stop… a bus is arriving n a girl is getting down from the bus… she looks here n there…. she seems to be new to d place… she sees a board there… Chennai city welcomes u… she smiles seeing it…. she took d foto n looked at it hopefully n left d bus stop…
Here College gets over…. they were given a project to be submitted after two days…. so swara decided to go to pooja’s house…. she called GM n informed d servant…
(Note guys… i forgot to mention about pooja in d character sketch of swara… pooja is swara’s college friend… she was with swara from her grade 9…. they r very close to each other…. swara never shares her pain… but being her bestiee pooja somehow knows each n every detail about swara…. u can assume shesha from naagin serial to be pooja…)
Swara n pooja were involved in project so much tat they forgot to see d time….it was around 10…. swara realised it n started to her home…
Swara : omg pooja… see d time… its 10… i have to leave now…. its too late…. we ll continue d project tomo re…
Pooja : exactly swara… u r rite baby… its already 10 so u can stay here 😉 its not safe for u to go alone in d nite…
Swara : arre pooja ! Just a walk of 20 mins re…. ll tc np…chill !!! U know na? About my family… they ll make it a big issue…. so am leaving… u tc….. byeee…
Soon swara left after convincing pooja…. she was all lost in today’s incident… when she tot about SoFu a curve formed at her lips…she was feeling relaxed n happy for first time in these years…. suddenly she noticed someone in d road kicking d tires of d car…

The man : oh shit ! My tiers… !!! Again puncture ! Wt am i going to do now ????(keeping a funny face)
Swara saw this n busted out into laughter…the man heard it n turned towards swara… he was surprised to see her… to see his ABI…
The person : hey ABI… u here ? At this time ??
Swara : oho SoFu…its me oly ! By the way (seriously with care) y r u kicking d tires… it would pain…
The person was overwhelmed at d care but realised wt she actually meant…
Swara : see wt did d tires do… it would pain d tires… so dont kick :p
The person : haha very funny shona… am dieing here n u r laughing at me huh ? By the way wt r u doing here at this time ? This area s not safe at all…
Swara : am going back to my home from friend’s house… actually gotta submit a project…
The person : achcha achcha… tc ! By the way where s ur home ??
Swara : hello mr ! Dont take advantage… y should i tell u ??
The person : offo…!! This girl is really mad… hey miss i tot tat it would be risky for u to go alone n i can accompany u !!
Swara : no need for tat mr… i know to tc of myself… u first think how ll u reach ur home…(with attitude)
The person : oh hello miss attitude.. i know tat… my house is near by… 10 mins of walk… i tot u would be afraid going alone… so asked…!!
Swara : i dont need ur help mr ! ll take a leave SoFu..byeee…
She took 4 steps n suddenly shouted seeing 2 dogs staring at her…..
Chu chu… go ho…chu… mummy… dogsss….
She again came back to him… the person was laughing at her…
The person : miss.shona just now u told u ll take care of everything.. wt happ ? Not even 4 steps… u r shouting (imitating) mummy dogss savee meee…
Swara : shut up mr ! Without helping me u r laughing at me… (pouting)
The person melted seeing her…. n he felt some connection towards her… he felt very happy being with her…
The person : okay baba sorry (holding his ears)… chal lets go… u r getting late….
Swara smiled at him n they both started walking….both were silently walking… the person was irked n broke d silence…
So shona ? Talk something na… its boring… say something about u…. ur hobbies… ur interest..
Swara : hmmm i don’t disclose these things to strangers…..
The person actually felt bad hearing d word stranger…. but soon his lips formed a curve listening to her….
Swara : u saved me twice… so ll tell u about me… but before tat one important thing has to be done….
The person : wts tat ???
Swara : 😀 ur name !!

The person : lol ! Am SANSKAR…. my friends call me hero 😉
Swara : sanskar ?? Wt kind of name is this ?? Its very different…
Sanskar : like urs :p
Swara : but ll call u SoFu oly !!
Sanskar : okay then ll call u ABI :p
Swara : arre i was kidding !! Okay now ( in serious tone ) we have to do another important thing…
Sanskar : ab kya hai yaar ??
Swara : declaration 😀 friendship declaration…
Sanskar : lol friendship declaration ??? Wt s tat ???
Swara : there r certain rules in friendship… if we have to be friends we have to declare tat we ll follow these rules..
Sanskar : (laughing at her childishness) seriously shona ! Rules????
Swara : yeah hero… there r 5 golden rules… (1) no sorry n no tq in friendship (2) no pranks between us but we can team up n prank others (3) no formalities between us n we should not hide things from each other (4) we have to respect each other n should not give up our friendship (5)we should not doubt our friendship at any point of time…….
If we break any of the rules… we owe something to the other…
If u r okay with it… we ll declare our friendship…
Sanskar was stunned listening to d rules…. he felt something different….
Sanskar : haha shona !! U r very different yaar… i have never seen a person like u…. u r unique…. anyway ! I SANSKAR (AKA) YOUR SOFU 😉 IS DECLARING MY FRIENDSHIP WITH SHONA… (forwards his hand)

Swara : I SHONA DECLARE MY FRIENDSHIP WITH 😉 SANSKAR SOFU HERO :p (shakes her hand with his)
(Nee parth vizhigal starting music from 3 plays at d bg)
Sanskar : seriously shona ! U r mad !!
Swara : mad’s friend must be a mad na… so wt to do.??
Sanskar : (without realising) yeah y.e.a.h… (realised) wt did u say ??
Swara : seriously sanskar… u r a duffer…!! Haha lol…
Sanskar was mesmerized seeing her laugh… her laugh was tickling his ears…. the best feeling ever…
Suddenly their eyes fell on a girl (seemed to be mad) whose clothes were torn n was lying on d road…sanskar immediately went n covered her with his blazer….
Swara : wt r u doing sanskar ?? She seems to be mad… i see her daily in this road…. she ll be shouting n talking to herself…. dont go near her…
Sanskar : no shona… see her…her dress is torn… she looks like a young girl… she doesn’t even know the consequences… there s no safety for her…. there s nothing wrong in helping people…. u said u see her daily but have u ever tot to help her ?? being a girl u should understand it shona…
Swara : am really sorry sanskar… i never knew such things… hereafter ll follow this…
Sanskar : arre shona… its ok ! I din mean it to get a sorry from u ! Just help someone who s n need… by the way u broke the first rule :p so u owe me !!
Swara: uff sanskar …… i totally forgot tat yaar…! Achcha baba…. tell me wt do u want…
They both resumed walking…..
Sanskar : ummm…. number… ur phone number 😉
Swara : woow such a easy task huh… here take my number….96******34
Sanskar : hello madam ji as this was d first time i gave u a simple task…. don’t think ll give u simple tasks every time… :p
Swara : don’t forget tat u r talking to shona…. shona can make impossible things as possible…. bla bla bla bla… (she was talking endlessly)
All sanskar did was to admire her beauty… her expressions…. her laugh…. her eyes…. her attitide…
Sanskar : arre arre bas shona… now u gonna tell me how ur parents r managing u at home…. u seem to be quite… but when u start talking u prove us wrong… (imitating her) shona can make impossible things possible (with same level of attitude)…
listening to d word parents she became emotional…it was clearly seen in her eyes… suddenly sanskar noticed this n was shocked seeing her weeping silently…
Sanskar : shona… wt happ dear ??? Y r u crying ?? Did i ask anything wrong ?? Sorry yaar ! Was just teasing u…
Swara : no sanky ! Actually… ummm… i dont have parents… they actually left me when i was 4.. after tat i started living with my chacha ji..
Sanskar felt her pain…n cursed himself for hurting her…
Sanskar : sorry shona… am really sorry… i never meant to hurt u… its my mistake oly !! Sorry yaar…
Swara : its not ur mistake sanky… its my mistake…. am d bad luck of my family…. because of me my parents r not alive…
Sanskar was stunned…

Sanskar : dont talk like mad shona… how can u be d reason of ur parents death…??? Tat too u were oly 4 at tat time…
Swara : no sanskar…. tats d truth…. my dad was a businessman… he was successful until i was born… after my birth he continuously suffered losses… at my 4th birthday mom n dad committed suicide…. its my bad luck sanskar… its only because of me..(she was crying bitterly)
Sanskar without wasting a second hugged her tightly n consoled her(friendly hug)
Sanskar : shhh shona…. dont utter a single word against my friend…. my friend my shona is d best in d world…
Swara felt protective in his hug n hugged him back n cried her heart out…. after a while she realises wt she was doing n jerked… he too realised n apologised her… both felt embarrassed… to lighten d situation swara : my hero ! U broke d first rule.. so u owe me !! :p
Sanskar understood n happily accepted d task…
Sanskar : okay my dear !! Say wt should i do… (bowing in front of her)
Swara : dairy milk !!! I want dairy milk !!!!
Sanskar : seriously shona ?? Is dairy milk enough ???
Swara : yeah sanky dairy milk is my first love (she said this excitedly)
Sanskar : haha shona ! U r mad n making me mad…!! But i really feel good talking to u !!
Swara : hahha sanky !! Even am feeling very good after talking to u… i never tot tat i would easily get attached to a person whom i just met…u r worth it sanky !
Sanskar : worth ??
Swara : yeah sanky !! U r awesome ! I owe u a lot throughout my life… u were d one to save me from them… i don’t even know wt would have happened if u were not there… thank god !!
Sanskar : shhhh shona…. past is past… don’t think about it… but pls be careful next time… if any of those bastards misbehave with u pls call me immediately… dont hesitate…
Swara : (overwhelmed at his concern) sure sanky !!! Ll tc… n yeah… we reached my home… ll meet u tomo… byeee… gunnit  
Sanskar : oho shona… its been a very good time being with u…. have a good sleep dear… n vaise ur house looks very big n awesome…. i guess u r from a rich family…. !!! Then y r u coming by walk…

Swara was stunned at d question… she din know wt to say… she smiled fakely n covered…
Swara : oh yeah sanky.. u r rite… am from a rich family… but i love walking yaar… n u know walking is good for health 😉
Sanskar : u r impossible shona… anyhow its getting late n maa will be waiting for me… see u soon … byeee gunnit !
Soon they both left for their house…. they turned n looked at each other n smiled… they both felt a pain of separation..
Thalli pogadhe song from achcham enbadhu madamayada plays
The screen freezes with smiling face of swara n sanskar…

Precap : priya insulting swara… n ragini towards her mission…

How was the episode guys ?????Ur comments means a lot to me… if its not up to ur expectation pls lemme know it…

29 comments

      • Kritika

        |Registered Member

        My novel! I’m writing it very slowly Dr! + my ff is also pending! That’s why! But not started the first chappy of novel yet! Will post a status on Feb when I will start! ??

  1. navi

    Neeru dont worry abt comments yaar..many are silent dr.. few only comment.. dnt worry… enaku unoda ff piduchuruku. Its superb….do continue.. atleast for those who are commenting neeru… today it ws superb long awesome chapieee… swasan frienship blossom ws superb…

    • Neera

      |Author

      Tysm navi 🙂 🙂 idhu madhri encouragement kadaikumbodhu romba sandhoshama iruku 🙂 surely ll continue dear 🙂 🙂

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