Dhoor hokar bhi hum pas hai Part-4 (Omkara meets his daughter.Sahil’s surprise visit.)

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Hi i am Sakash.Love u all.Thanks for ur comments.Keep commenting if u like my
FF.A warm welcome to my FF Friends.
Thanks for ur comments & support.
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See Friends i post kid photos in my activity part.
Crazy girls,Hannah(Hi Hannah.Welcome to my FF dear.),Anshi(Thank u dear.I will show anshi in her style dear a mix of shivika shade.Dear i post all kids photos in my activity part.See.),Lauren(Thank u dear.I am happy. So u like Tadi Part.),Charitha (Thank u cherry.If u like name ok or else ignore it.),Gayathri(Thank u dear.I am happy u like ansh.),Adhya(Hi dear. Welcome to my FF.Thank u dear.Yes he is protective for his siblings.),Niriha (Thank u dear.From first i want to ask u 1 question r u  anushka & prabhas Fan right!) Ashwinee (Thank u dear. Actually malohtra is shankar malohtra.His whole family dies in accident.Mahi is his best friend.Shankar malohtra made mahi as maheshwar malohtra,anika,gauri,sahil& gauri’s maa as malohtra’s.He gave Malohtra’s identity to all of them.That’s the reason,when shivay asked ansh’s name.He replied as Shivansh malohtra.I think now ur doubt clearify. Reply me.),Sandiya(Thank u dear.This is my imaginative story not upcoming episodes.),UF(Thank u dear.)Nikki(Thank
u nikki dear.)Aadhar(Thank u dear.But sorry for stealing ur script dear.I am just
joking dear.),Sashi(I missed u dear.Thank

u for comparing ur bhaiya with moon🌙
I am happy u liked ansh & shivay’s tadi meeting.Soon i will bring anshi’s meeting with shivay.),Ashwa(No more words to pen chotae.Thanks for ur love.Love u too.),Sagithya(Thank u dear.),Madhuani
(Thank u dear.Yes ansh is Jr.shivay for
outer world & sweet billu for his family.),
Alekhika20(Thank u dear.),Bani(Thank u
bani dear.Yes he is shivay’s carbon copy.),

Mrunal(Hi Mrunal dear.Welcome to my FF.Thank u dear.),Neha(Thank u dear.) & Aashi(Thank u dear.It’s twist)…………………
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The story starts,
After park’s visit,All went to their respective mansions or homes.
Malohtra mansion :
Fine morning,
Shankar : Gauri call my princess gaurika.
Gauri : Irika beta papa is calling u.Come
down dear.

Irika : Coming maa.
Shankar : Come on my princess.
Irika : Papa u called me.
Shankar : Yes princess.Did u forget about
ur painting class.
Irika : Sorry papa.I think it’s from tommorrow.I miss anshi,ansh bhaiyya & om bhaiya.
Shankar : Aww, my princess.The class is only for 2 hours.After that u will return
home na dear & u can play with ansh, anshi & om.
He is busy artist.My friend requested him a lot for u.After lot of requests he accepted to teach u.Come on,let’s go.

Irika : Ok papa.But i will bid bye to anshi,
ansh bhaiyya & om bhaiyya & i will come back.Just 5 minutes papa.
Shankar : Ok dear go but come fast.
Ansh : Irika no need of it.We all come down for u.
Irika : Thank u bhaiyya.Bye anshi,ansh & om bhaiyya.
Ansh : Wait a second irika,chotti maa bring kheer!
Gauri : Ansh beta.Take this kheer,it’s ready.
Ansh : Thank u chotti maa.First u & chotti

papa feed her.After words we all feed her.
Gauri : No first anika di & mahi bhaiya will feed her.
Anika/Mahi : Mera rajkumari aajao.
Irika goes to anika & mahi & hugs them.
Anika & mahi feeds kheer to her.
Irika : Actually i don’t like sweets,badi maa
& papa after eating from ur hands i am feeling it’s tasty.
Anika & mahi smiles.Anika says Badmaash.Irika laughs & all other laughs.
Then Gauri & Shankar feeds her & kiss her on her forehead.She too kiss both of
them on their cheeks.

Gauri : Irika beta listen to ur sir carefully.
Don’t get fear to ask doubts,ask him requestingly if u get any doubt.ok.
Irika : Yes maa.I love u.
Gauri : I love u too beta.
Ansh feed kheer & gifted her a paint brushes package.
Anshi & om feed kheer & gifted her water colours & sketches package.
Irika’s happiness have no limits.All shares hug.
Irika : Thank u so much ansh bhaiyya, anshi & om bhaiyya.U r my world’s
best sister & brothers.
Ansh,Anshi& om : No need to thank iri.
We all love u.Ansh says one for all.Anshi & om says all for irika says one.All together says “One for all,All for one”.
Seeing their bonding all r happy.
All bid bye & went to their respective works.

Gaurika’s entry to Omkara’s Gallery :
Actually shankar’s friend drop her, introduce her to omkara & went off.
Omkara’s eyes become wet unknowingly. When he saw his daughter for 1st time. (She looks like omkara.I send her image please comment me.U all like her.)
Omkara : Hello Gaurika.I am Omkara.(In his mind this name reminds me gauri again.)
Gaurika : Hai sir.
Omkara : No need to call me sir.Call me om.
Gaurika : Hello Om.Now u can also call me
irika.
Omkara : It sounds good & om calls irika.Irika says now it sounds good.
Gaurika & om laughs together.
After a long time a smile appear on his face.He is so happy with irika.
Omkara : From tommorrow i will teach u.
Will u come with me to my home.

Irika : Yay…..Yippie…..Yay.Thank u.
Omkara : Ur welcome dear.
Malohtra mansion :
Sahil entry to malohtra mansion :
Sahil change his look&come as pizza boy
to malohtra’s mansion.He knocks door.

Anika opens the door & says who r u?
Sahil : Mam u ordered pizza.
Anika,no one ordered pizza.U can go now.
Sahil touches anika’s hand & says i came here to stay with u not to go.
Anika shocked & screams gauri.
Gauri brings mirchi & comes as jhansi ki
rani.
Anika & Gauri already knows he was sahil.
Because his wig moved aside.They want to fear him.

Sahil seeing mirchi & says no anika di &
gauri di.He remove his wig & says i am ur
Sahil.
Anika & Gauri smiles & gives hi-fi to each other.
Sahil run to kitchen and drinks water.
Aniri comes from behind & pinch sahil ears.
Sahil smiles & hug both of them & says i
miss u.
All eyes becomes wet.
Anri says we missed our small sahil.Now he grew up big.
Sahil says i am always small to u di.

They smiles.
Anri feed him his favorite dishes all eyes becomes wet & send him to freshened.
He freshened & comes out.He asked anri
about kids.
Anri said him that they all went out for playing.

Precap : Omkara’s daughter entry to oberoi mansion!Sahil surprise all kids.

Give ur valuable comments friends.Tell
me how looks gaurika friends?
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22 Comments
  1. Sakash.

    Hi i am sakash.Love u all friends.I post my update attaching with girl image.That girl
    image none other than gaurika.
    I post all child images in my activity.Please
    see it give ur likes & comments.
    Please comment me.Did u like gaurika.

  2. Ashwinee

    Bhai you are just awesome in writing😘😘. I asked you only one question and you gave full introduction😁. Thank you for such a looooong intro.😊 hope doubts of many got cleared 😆.

  3. Shraddha-DBO

    Gaurika is too cut.Really felt sorry for Om , he doesn’t know it’s his daughter.
    Really waiting for a beautiful reunion

  4. Superb yaar I loved it but please next part soon I can’t wait

  5. Sagithya

    Awesome yaar…loved her…. Excited for the next part… post it soon

  6. awesome
    I was waiting
    update soon

  7. Awesome epi dr…..

  8. Niriha

    Awesome update bro….Gaurika is so cute
    Waiting for next part

  9. Lauren

    Fantastic yaar….loved it….post nxt soooooooon

  10. Everybody call me cherry yaar
    Update is awesome

  11. Shreyanvi

    Gaurika is soooòo cute😍😍😘😘….
    Awesome episode bhai…..liked it fully….post nxt part soon…

  12. Madhuani

    It’s amazing…
    All kids are adorable n Cute.
    Update next soon.

  13. Superb👌update bhaiyya.Kids r amazing.
    Gaurika is beautiful & just like omkara.
    Love ur creation of kids.I saw ur post.
    Ur best writer bhai.Because u give reply
    to all questions bhai.Ur patience is amazing.

  14. Cheeks

    its awesome bro

  15. Cheeks

    its awesome bro loved it

  16. Cheeks

    its awesome bro loved itwant some more post soon

  17. Gayathri.visu

    Hiii bro. In prev ff, already u called me as gayu right! Then why now u r calling me gayathri? Don’t u consider me as ur sissy????
    Awosome part bro!!!! Loved it….. Eagerly waiting for next part bro……

    1. Gayathri.visu

      By the way Gaurika is sooo cute…….

  18. Alekhika20

    Fabulous update

  19. Mrunal

    awesome update…
    just loved siblings bonding…
    waiting for shivika & gaurika meet

  20. Neha-17

    Awesome and Amazing!

  21. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear… I love irika…. Sahil expression is awesome….

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