This Is Dhaani Kaur Signing Off!! Epi:-10

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Decision making ?

Dhaani takes out the camera ? and starts to record.. Do u knw wat happnd today?? My rhythms of heart beats increases when Viplav holds me… Ya.. Saach mein.. Otherwise have a look…

FB starts..
Vidha are working.. Viplav says so these are the selected pics.. Na!! Dhaani nods.. Viplav take the selected pics.. And starts to print the pics… Dhaani looks at Viplav.. Viplav is busy in printing.. Viplav says ee… ? Papers khatham hogaya.. Dhani kuch A4 sheets dena.. (Ee.. Papers gt finished.. Dhaani give me some A4 sheets..)Dhaani is lost in Viplav.. Viplav move towards Dhaani and says kya hua kahaan hogayi ho.. Kahin mere khusurathi main toh nahi ..(Whr have u been lost?? Em.. Nit in my beauty na!!)Dhaani laughs ? and says tum khubsurath… (U beautiful)And says I’m nt lost any where.. She hears pi-pi sound from Printer and understands that it is not having A-4 sheets.. Dhaani says u asked me A-4 sheets na.. Wait and takes a stool.. And climb on it.. She tries harder to take the file ? of A-4 sheets which is kept in top section of cupboard.. She uppers her feet ? and balances her full weight on her ? fingers on her leg.. And was abt to take bt just then she falls down… Viplav runs ? and holds her… White A-4 sheet paper ? from the file ? fall down.. All A -4 sheets get separated and falls down… Scene freezes.. .. Dhaani In Viplav’s hands.. White A-4 sheet..
Ishq ishq..
Ishq ishq..

Mere Ishq Ka Rang Safed Hai Yaara
Ishq Ka Rang Safed

Main Hi Nahin Jag Bole
Main Hi Nahin Jag Bole
Kahe Kita Kahe Ve

Ishq Ka Rang Safed Hai Yaara
Ishq Ka Rang Safed

Scene unfreezes.. Sound from printer brings back to senses.. Vidha collects all the A-4 sheets and put it in the printer.. Dhaani says Viplav,Can I tell u something.. Viplav nods.. Dhanai says I think time has come to reveal abt our relationship ? to our respective families ? Viplav says yeah,even I too thought abt it…

Scene shifts to Dhaani’s house…

Arshi.. Aditya(Dhaani’s dad)Dulaari.. Are sitting in front of the dinning table.. For break fast.. Dulari says better u call ? now!! Otherwise.. By today Dhaani’s job will come to an end.. Tomorrow is her b’day.. And will bring her here… So.. Aditya nods… Shambu asks Arshi to bring his mobile.. Arshi goes and brings mobile.. He calls shambu.. Shambu takes the call ? Good morning wishes Aditya.. Ah.. Gud mrng!! Says shambu.. Wat dng?? My frnd!! Asks Shambu.. Having food ? and u?? Asks Aditya.. Same here.. Says Shambu.. Thy have a small general talk.. Aditya says yaar, i called for a personal talk.. Shambu says wat happnd?? U can tell me anything!! I’m always thr for u!! Aditya says.. Not that.. I called for a proposal.. Shambu says Proposal.. In a confused ? manner.. Ah,I was thinking ? if u don’t mind Can we think Viplav for Dhaani??? Shambu says.. Ah.. Tats all.. We are happy to welcome Dhaani as our bahu and we had already accepted her as bahu.. Kanak looks at Shambu and smiles.. Shambu says we were gng to ask the same thing to night!! Bt mrng u called us.. Always u come first.. In everything.. Look even here u first accepted Viplav.. Kanak laughs ? hearing? that.. Aditya says.. So wat u guyss first accepted our Daughter as ur bahu.. And laughs ? Hearing that Dulaari and arshi smiles.. Arshi runs ? and go to kitchen and distribute sweets and dances ? Arshi thinks from this time I can call ? viplav as jiju.. Oh.. Wat a handsome.. Wat a smile ? Di.. Kithni lucky hai.. And smiles.. Dulaari says wat r u thinking ? and giving a cute smile ? uh?? Nothing and runs ? to her room ad dances.. Shambu says then mail? the horoscope of Viplav.. I’ll mail ? Dhaani’s too.. Hope it gt matched up.. Then u’ll become sasur.. And smiles..
Fb ends…

Scene shifts to Dhaani…
Soo my need of cmng to Mumbai has came to an end by today.. She becomes sad? My dream has completed.. Bt wat abt my life.. Mumbai fulfilled my dreams… Bt Will Mumbai complete me.. By giving me Viplav..?

Fb starts…

Scene shifts to Dhaani and Viplav…
Dhaani says today is my last day in this company.. Tomorrow evening I’ll leave to Pune along with my parents after b’day celebration.. Viplav says then during b’day celebration I’ll reveal Dhaani says we will Viplav put his hands on Dhaani’s shoulder and says.. Ahh,baba we will reveal abt our relationship ? to our parents… Dhaani hugs Viplav…
Fb ends…

Scene shifts to Dhaani..

Ya.. Tomorrow is my b’day.. Tomorrow Arshi.. Papa and mama.. Will be cmng.. And we will celebrate ? my b’day.. Hope this b’day will present me my love ❤ Will present me the boy ? or Viplav… For whom I born for…

Fb starts…

Scene shifts to Shambu-Aditya..
Shambu calls Aditya and says check the mail ? I’ve snd it.. Arshi.. Shouts Aditya.. Kya hua papa??? Check my mailbox ✉ And see whether shambu uncle’s mail have came or not.. Arshi checks the mail and says yes u have gt the mail.. Aditya says yes,I’ve gt.. Today noon itself I’ll go and ask the pandit ji.. If it’s matching thn taking a good date we can conduct engagement ? na.. Shambu nods.. Arshi says papa.. Ask Shambu uncle whether he gt ur mail.. Shambu says yes.. I gt.. Aditya says wat u gt.. He replies Mail ? aditya asks hw u came to knw my nxt question!! He replies heard Arshi’s sound.. Okay!! Then will call u in noon to give a happy news.. Shambu says hope so.. And disconnects the call ?

Scene shifts to Dhaani…
During noon.. I was shocked ? do u knw y?? Because I was given a big surprise ?

Scene shift to Vidha (Company ?)

Someone knocks on the door.. Viplav releases Dhaani from his arms..? Aish( a staff of that company)Comes in with thr hands back. Followed by Meghana,Maria,Sujie and louella(All r the company staff)Vidha looks at each other and share a confused ? look.. Viplav looks at Louella and through some gestures tell her to give that.. Everyone presents a gift to Dhaani.. Dhaani says no need of all these.. There is a need… Says someone from back… Everyone looks back..
Nimisha makes her entry.. And says when boss says to handover the gifts ? to Dhaani.. We obey it.. Dhaani looks at Viplav.. Ah.. It was Viplav’s own idea and viplav’s selection these gift ? soo if didn’t liked any of the gift then you have to scold viplav and nt us.. Everyone laughs ?? Dhaani gives a cute ? punch to Viplav and hugs him and says Thankss ? Viplav says my pleasure ? Dhaani thankss All those who gifted her..

Scene shifts to Shambu..

Shambu is sitting on a sofa.. Praying ? camera ? moves to right.. Pandit ji is looking the horoscope… Arshi is standing fingers
? crossed.. Dulaari is peeping into the horoscope…

Scene shifts to Dhaani…
She takes the camera and captures her bed ? her bed is filled with gifts.. ??? She again keep the camera ? on stand and says.. Do u I’ll open these gifts at 12:00? My b’day will come within 3hrs..? Viplav comes from behind and says only 10hrs left after that our relationship will be disclosed in front of the families ? Dhaani says u’ll be thinking ? hw Viplav here na.. Viplav pushes Dhaani and says.. This is the first b’day of Dhaani with me.. With a boy friend so.. I should make it special na.. Viplav look at Dhaani.. Dhaani says Viplav evn if parents agree to our relation.. Wat abt horoscope… Will it match.. Thy share a worried look..

FB starts
(It’s noon…)
Scene shift to Aditya..
Kanak gets very happy and says tell this to Dulaari too.. Aditya calls ? shambu.. Shambu looks at the mobile and happily says Adi ka phone hai.. Arshi ithna khush math ho javo.. Don’t play dance ? on sofa… Shambu attends the call… Both to together says badayi ho… Aditya says Soo now we are nt just friends bt we are gng to become in laws.. Shambu says hope Viplav loves? Dhaani and she too Loves? Viplav… Ya.. Answers Aditya.. Tomorrow we will come to Mumbai.. To take her back.. Shambu says then we will come to ur flat with cake ? we can keep a cake ? cutting at the same time disclose this matter to our children.. Good idea says Aditya.. Dulaari takes the phone ? from Aditya and Kanka takes the phone ? from Shambu.. Thy bath talk to each other…

Scene shifts to Dhaani…
okay then it’s time to say.. Wat??? Viplav says This is.. Dhaani kaur says Dhaani.. Viplav says Signing off!!!

Clock struck 12:00Viplav wishes her happy b’day ?? and throws ???? Glitters papers and.. All.. Dhaani thankss him.. Viplav says now open one by one.. Viplav goes and sleeps on bed.. Dhaani opens each gift ? viplav looks at the exciting Dhaani who is busy in uncovering the gifts…
Ishq Ishq……
Ishq Ishq…….

Mere Ishq Ka Rang Safed Hai Yaara
Ishq Ka Rang Safed
Mere Ishq Ka Rang Safed Hai Yaara
Ishq Ka Rang Safed

Main Hi Nahin Jag Bole
Main Hi Nahin Jag Bole
Kahe Kita Kahe Ve

Ishq Ka Rang Safed Hai Yaara
Ishq Ka Rang Safed

Dhaani hugs Viplav and thankss him for all the gifts… Viplav looks at the watch and say now let me go.. It’s too late.. Dhaani says then sleep ? here itself.. Viplav says no.. If ur parents ? come tomorrow morning ? then.. No I’m leaving.. And shuts the door ? and leaves.. Dhaani runs to varanda and looks down.. And waits For Viplav.. Viplav reaches the parking area and looks up.. And sees Dhaani.. Viplav gestures go and sleep.. Dhaani nods waves a good bye ? and leaves..
Dhaani is lost in Viplav’s dream.. Viplav is driving the car ? bt lost in Dhaani’s dream..

Tenu itna main pyaar karaan
Ek pal vich sau baar karaan
Tu jaave je mainu chhad ke
Maut da intezaar karaan

Ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake (x2)

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan
Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi

Kuch bhi nahi hai ye jahaan
Tu hai toh hai isme zindagi
Ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan
Ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri

Ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin
Na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley
Main tujhko kitna chahti hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Tere liye duniya chhod di hai
Tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
Main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
Ye tu kabhi soch na sake

Viplav reaches Tripathi Mansion and opens the door with spare keys ? He sees Kanak staring at him.. He looks at Kanak.. And loom at watch… Kanak asks him whr were u?? He answers Dhaani.. Dhaani wrk.. Aa.. Dhaani have to complete her wrks so.. Shambu comes and says For that Dhaani completed her wrks and submitted to me.. Viplav looks Down.. Kanka says now leave Dhaani for few months.. After that she is gng to be with u evn for ur 8 births.. Viplav looks up in an exciting manner and looks at Kanak.. Kanak says ah!! Ur alliance has been fixed with Dhaani.. Viplav says really and hugs Kanak and shambu and dances ? Viplav runs to his room and shuts the door in excitement and dances in front of the mirror..

So hw was today’s episode.. Loved it uh?? Hope this epi was nt much confusing ? one..

Happy that Vidhaani horoscope gt matched?

Hws the family ? reactions.. Isn’t that been a natural reaction..

Btw This Journey with dhaani kaur will come to an end with the next epi.. Hope I was able to bring those nostalgic memories of mieshal.. Adorably..

Keep reading because now only one epi is waiting for u..?

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49 Comments
  1. Maha_Aijaz

    Swetha it’s too long so I will read it tomorrow but I have read the last line u are finishing this fiction too.. That’s not fair yaar 🙁 Naraz hun mai..
    I will comment about the episode tomorrow .. OK

    1. Shanitics

      Don’t b katti with me.. I’m srry.. Tats the stry.. Bt will surely try and cme wth anothr cute ff…?

  2. Renuverma

    Shweta very sweet n long episode. Enjoyed it ?

    1. Shanitics

      Thanksa Renu di..?

    2. Shanitics

      Happy that though it was long u enjoyed it to extend..?

  3. Renuverma

    Loved the scene of viplav hoding dhani nnpapers fslling n background music?

  4. Renuverma

    Good to know that dhani’s parents wanted to fix her alliance with viplav n viplavs parents too wanted this?????

    1. Shanitics

      Made fr ech othr hai.. ?

  5. Renuverma

    It was great to see dear freinds of TU GIVING gifts to dhani ??

    1. Shanitics

      It was my gift to frnds..?

  6. Renuverma

    It was real embarrassing for viplav when he said he was working with dhani n shambhu said that she has already completed n submitted to him ?

    1. Shanitics

      Pyar mein todha embarrassing toh bantha hai..?

  7. Renuverma

    Loked yr dialogue leave dhani for few months then she wud be for u gor 8 birthd.

  8. Renuverma

    Like the way of yr presenting by frequent scene shifts n flashbacks ?

    1. Shanitics

      ?? happy that u loved that dia..

  9. Renuverma

    Sad to know that u r ending.

  10. Areeb

    Swetha Swetha!!! Fabulous episode!! ? That gift presenting idea of Viplav. ? Or is horoscope ny to meri jaan hi nikal di thi almost. Till in the end it came as positive else I was thinking that new twist will come! Shukar. Pheww. ?? Kt told Viplav ..Oops i thought they’ll be getting aware of the alliance at the party itself. Chalo koe nahi. ? But you are ending this one too. ? But please, try soon to come up with new.. maybe with a short story? Pliss Pliss! I don’t want to miss your simple and much relatable writing isley new story likhna start krden. ?

    1. Shanitics

      Thankss Areeb di ?

    2. Shanitics

      Aacha hua horoscope ne aapki full jan nahi nikali..?

    3. Shanitics

      The new twist is the ff is gng to nd?

    4. Shanitics

      Ya.. 1st I thought the same.. Bt want to prsnt something no1 usually thinks sooo..?

    5. Shanitics

      Will try to cme up with an anothr new ff.. Bt scope is low..?

  11. Aiswarya

    See the it was a mind blowing episode

    1. Shanitics

      Thankss Aish..?

  12. Aiswarya

    Their horoscope matched i’m sooo happy

  13. Aiswarya

    Yipeeee I became a staff of viplav’s offfice now I can see him daily n wish him n can talk to him????

    1. Shanitics

      ??? ya u can talk to him always…

  14. Aiswarya

    I like the way u are presenting this ff I have never read a ff like this???

    1. Shanitics

      Tat means I’ve succeeded in giving a unique ff.. Hope it was good ?

  15. Aiswarya

    Next episode is the last episode ???I’m soooooooo sad

    1. Shanitics

      Me too sad ? in posting the last part…?

  16. Aiswarya

    I was enjoying ur ff very much ur ffs used to help me to get rid of my loneliness ??

    1. Aiswarya

      come back with another ff

      1. Shanitics

        Ya.. Will try my bst..?

    2. Shanitics

      Happy that I could hlp u indirectly in gttnd rid of ur loneliness…

  17. Maha_Aijaz

    Swetha it was fantastico.. Viplav’s idea of presenting gifts was so adorable, thank God that horoscope matched.. dhani 1st bday with her boyfriend has become memorable? just loved that part.. unknowingly their mom and dad were making vidhani work easy.. viplav’s reaction on kt words was a cute one.. so the next one will be the last one.. that’s not fair yaar u are finishing both fictions together that means our 2 fictions of ikrs are decreasing? I would request u to please come back with the new story as I have told u already that I love writing which is so simple.. Post the next one soon as really excited to read the last episode

    1. Shanitics

      Thankss maha di..?

    2. Shanitics

      Happy that u njoyed Dhaani’s 1st b’day wth bf..?

    3. Shanitics

      Parents always hlp thr children let it b any mattr..?

      NOTE ? APPLICABLE TO STRY ONLY..?

    4. Shanitics

      Yeah.. Nxt epi is last episode ?

    5. Shanitics

      Happy tat this simplicity is been enjoyed by all..

    6. Shanitics

      Will certainly try to cme up with an another ff if brain gave me a gud plot ?

  18. Angel20

    Nice one☺

    1. Shanitics

      Thanksss Maria ?

  19. Angel20

    But pls don’t end it yaar!?

  20. Shanitics

    ??? have to end one or other day na..

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