The Devil’s Child Part 5

Hey lovely people sorry for late update…..hope you enjoy this one……let me know your reviews…. Till then love you all and once again extremely sorry for the long wait…..

Arjun roamed in the dense…dark…jungle…. He was upset about the deadly sin he will have to commit to prove his loyalty towards his father…..yes he loved his sisters but he never showed them his love because he was dangerous for them…..his thirst for blood made him a monster….the mere sight of blood made him do inhuman things…… he regretted this cursed life many times but it was all in vain…..he will never get rescued from this cursed life……..when he glanced at the couples enjoying their happy married life he would feel a void in his heart which craved for something which he was not aware what was it…..he will never get wrinkles….his bones won’t turn weak…..his glowing face will never lose its youth till eternity this pained him that he will always stay a dark soul….this was all he felt in his human heart but he was controlled by the ruthless devil who could not only read but also control arjun’s thoughts…..the moment devil realized that arjun’s emotions are coming in his way he would emotionally blackmail him or give him severe punishments which tore arjun apart……

As he glanced at the moon absorbing its beauty….he tried to calm himself….. Today he was rejuvenated but still he felt a incurable pain inside him…..he never failed to show his silent love for his sisters….. he had killed the guy who misbehaved with them but he never accepted this fact because if he did….he would pay the price by any severe pain but his sisters would pay the price by their lives…..as his heart broke into pieces his eyes shedding blood tears in anticipation….they were not only tears but all the memories with his sisters streaming down his cheeks giving him a heartache…… he was lost in his thoughts when he heard a cry for help…..

He marched in to the direction from where the pleading for help was coming….. He landed near the cliff where he saw a girl who was holding to the rock of the cliff…she was about to fall down to her death when he grabbed her hand and pulled her up and balanced her on his body in such a way as if she weighted nothing….he protected her in his arms to avoid getting her hurt….as he clutched her more closer….he heard his heart beating faster when her hand accidentally went on his chest…..her single touch awoke a sensation in his body….she detached her body from his and his world stopped for a moment when he saw her face…..her angelic face…..her brown innocent eyes filled with tears of fright….. Her lips beautiful than the rose petals…..her glowing ivory skin was a treat to watch……as she opened her mouth to say thank you….he kept a finger on her lips to silence her…..he touched his forehead to hers and whispered in a husky tone…..”beautiful girls like you should not roam in this dark jungle at this inappropriate hour of night.”….he detached his head from hers to glance at her bleeding ankle…..he felt a a pull towards her….he could make out that she was dead scared….. Don’t worry…. you are safe….I won’t let anything happen to you…..she nodded after getting his assurance…… he lifted her in his arms effortlessly….. he felt as if the world has become right….. he took slow and steady steps clutching her protectively in his arms…..when he realized she slept in his arms he stormed in his inhuman speed to reach his mansion…..

Precap….. Losing heart to her…..distracted from the plan…..finding the beauty…..confronted by the devil…

32 comments

  1. Rg

    Wow supriya arjun has met his match. Yippie. This is beautiful. Arjun isn’t completely evil. But this is fantastic.. I can’t wait for their confrontation… This was a short one but an unexpected pleasant rapturous surprise… Finally d expected moment has come. Can u pls update this one soon. Also all d other ffs of yours. Pls … Missing all ur ffs.

    • Supriya.

      Thanks Rg?will try to update soon actually I have to update my other ff to…..loads of love and a big hug for u?

  2. Supi dear today rads came…hope she will change Arjun…no devil today…oh what a relief…if it was in my control I would have torture that devil till the eternity…argh…post next one spoon…

  3. aastha

    Suppu its amazing, superb and all the good words in the dictionary….though I’m sure they couldn’t describe this story more beautifully……poor Arjun…I loved reading his love for his sisters……so his face will never ever lose its glow……that’s nice….but I felt pity for him…..whenever good thoughts started forming ad filling his mind the devil always plucked it away…………….finally our heroin entered the show……….loved their first meeting………….oh the way Arjun lifted her up and held her close to him….the way his heartbeat increased when her hands accidentally touched his chest……the way his world stopped when he looked at her angelic face, her soft brown eyes, her ivory skin, her lips which was more beautiful than rose petals….my heart too stopped…….his dialogue omg was superb !!!!! and the last part when Arjun stormed to HIS mansion…….my dear sissy you stole my heart……………..love u a lot………………TC…………………

    • Supriya.

      Thanks my assthu darling?m happy dat u loved it…..well I wish I could express my gratitude for this comment in someother word instead of thank you…..but dear m speechless…..love you dear…..omg I stole ur heart don’t worry I will keep it safe….. will try to update asap….loads of love and million hugs for u?

  4. Gauri

    Supriya darling πŸ™‚ I love you πŸ™‚ this was a fantastic update….finally the angle is here and the devil lost his heart …wow wow wow…love it… I all happy now πŸ™‚ love you

    • Supriya.

      Thanks di….omg u r thrilling fan of this devil’s child that makes me happy to the moon….loads of love…..will try to update asap…..love you dear…..take care of your health sweetie…..

  5. OMG suppu dr finally devil met his angel dt too as a rescuer grt……d line he spoked beautiful girl shld nt roam n dark forest was grt u proved even devil has heart though he is nt complete devil…….im really happy beauty enter n devil’s life to change him……luv ds stry & epi dr…….luv a lot tc

    • Supriya.

      Thanks my gayu for this lovely comment….. I can make out u loved everything abt this update…..m happy dat u r enjoying it…..will try to update asap…..love you….tc?

  6. Radhika has finally enter now the devil won’t be able to control Arjun.

    Awesome episode, eagerly waiting for this update and for your other fan fiction. πŸ™‚

    • Supriya.

      Thanks Brin dear for ur amazing support…..will update other ff too abt this one I will try to update asap…..loads of love

  7. Finally rads came πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ really loved d meeting πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ πŸ˜€ loved it πŸ˜€ love u πŸ˜€

  8. shreetija

    Supriya darling such a romantic update …to aapke hi ho sakte hai ..but suppu dear pls update love you forever….pls iam waiting:-) πŸ™‚

    • Supriya.

      Thanks darling?i love ur name…..will update love u forever soon….loads of love….tc

  9. deeva

    Such a beautiful intro of our heroine…. the way his heart respond to her touch was amazing…… dear u r fabulous…. love u so much……… egearly waiting for next….. take care love……

  10. feby

    woh…..atlast smthng positive in this…lol….felt good….. nice one…now it will b good one…but dont make him to kill his sisters….. tat will b sooo drastic…..

  11. Wow Priya…. Amazing yaar…finally our agel entry hogai….ab aayega maza….superb dear…pls update soon next one ..love u lot …tc..

  12. Roma

    Wowwww supriyaaaaa…..muaaaaahhhhhh. . Finally God’s child rads came .. .th e narration of arjun’s heart termoil n his feelings was incredible. ..rads beauty n n arjun’s rxn after seeing her was really superbbbb. …can’t wait for the next episode. ..plzzzz post sooon. …love you loads. . Muaaaaahhhhhh

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