The Devil’s Child Part 3

Hey guyzz I m back with the devil’s child…..first toh sorry for late update….. I know you people were eagerly waiting…..so as I promised last time that next one will be long so here I m with this long update….. Do read and let me know how was it…..
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Arjun was chanting his prayers to please the lord of darkness….. The evil Devil himself….
Arjun,”I did everything you commanded Father…..you wanted to demolish the church….. I got it done…..now reward me by your appearance……I will be obliged if you do so……the king of darkness consider this prayers of your faithful follower…..I have been waiting for this moment since months give me my joy…..appear infront of your son father….
Just after a matter of seconds…..the trees started ruffling as if trembling in fear……animals started sobbing soundly……sky itself was terrified……birds started warning each other about the visit of unholy DEVIL…… There came a
Disastrous storm in that jungle but the only person who was not scared was the devil’s child…..he was rather enjoying his precious moment…..his face had that evil grin displaying his unholiness…..
Arjun….all the life present in this jungle……you all are a bunch of cowards…..face the might of my father…..
Sky became black with no stars….moon hiding behind clouds…..there was no ray of light….no ray of positivity……all atmosphere was filled by all evil negative powers who were happy to have their king….
Just then there came a feather which found it’s place comfortably on arjun’s palm
He caressed it with his rough fingers and blew air to it….
It went floating in the air and rested on the hard ground….
Black smoke evolved from it and there stood the DEVIL ready to greet his son….
His face covered by black cloak…he never showed his face to anyone not even arjun….his long black nails filled with poison…..his appearance was all black just like his soul….
Arjun walked to him and took him in a tight embrace…… anyone can die after hugging the devil’s child but this was DEVIL himself…… who was more evil than the word itself…
Devil carassed arjun’s hair to give him a encouragement for his evil deeds….
Devil…..arjun my beloved son…..you never fail me…..but you have a long way to go…..now answer me why you let people escape from the church before demolishing it…..those who worship God deserve to die…..I have told you many times stop pitying them but you don’t budge…..what you think I don’t know what you are thinking……arjun let me remind you that I can read your thoughts….

Arjun got on his knees…..
Arjun…..forgive me if I have hurt you father…… I didn’t mean to…..I just thought what z the need to kill them now…..
Devil….when you started thinking arjun?I thought you follow my commands but I guess m wrong……well everything has its own price even my forgiveness does…..now bear the pain……he smirked….
Arjun felt a unbearable pain inside him……he started wailing urging his father to stop…..but devil was ruthless…..he had no pity even for his own son….
Arjun crawled on the hard ground completely drained…… It was indeed a severe punishment…
Devil was fair with all of his followers…… He never forgive without punishment……this punishment was essential for arjun because although he was devil’s blood……he also had human blood in his veins……this means heart and emotions……Devil had kept him away from all these since birth but blood never fails to act according to the genes…..this was the fear devil was living with…… He feared that arjun might mend his evil ways someday…..arjun had immense love for his father this was the reason his conscience never pricked him…..
Devil……you have to make yourself worthy of my forgiveness arjun….
Arjun heaved a sign of relief as the pain stopped…..
He got up and folded his hands……I will do anything you say……If you want to give me more pain then please do so……take away my powers but please don’t talk rudely to me….
Devil…..Do you promise that you will do as I say….
Arjun in a pleading tone…..you just command father……my life z yours….
Devil with a evil grin……kill your family….

Guyzz arjun was staying with his family….no one was aware about his real form except one old lady who had exchanged devil’s child in the hospital itself….. arjun never felt anything for anyone but he had mastered all arts of fake behavior……. he never responded his sisters love but he loved them secretly……cared for them…..even he himself was not aware of this……but the DEVIL knew arjun inside and out…..he was aware of the fact that arjun loved his sisters and they were his weakness which was needed to get rid off….
Arjun……They are innocent father….they are atheist…… Why them?
Devil smirked…… When you started questioning me son?I thought you follow me blindly…..one day you have to kill them so why not now….
Arjun……I know I have to kill them but this z too much early father….
Devil…..fine don’t do it…..I won’t show you my face again then don’t cry infront of me….
Arjun…..father I can’t stay without seeing your face…….you are my lord…..I will do what you want me to do…..but don’t talk about leaving me….
Devil…..son in our world there z no place for emotions…. Get this clear…
Arjun…..I don’t love anyone except you father….. They are just my family for namesake…..you are my world my everything….
Devil POV……I know you love me the most but I can read your heart…..as long as you are not aware of having one…..I don’t have to fear anything…..
Devil…..arjun my son….I m happy that there no one as important as me in your life…..now go and complete your task…..
Arjun glanced at his father one last time and stormed in his inhuman speed….
The jungle became normal again after two evil powers dispersed…

So guyzzz this z it…..hope you like it…..plz plz plz do comment and give me suggestions

PRECAP…….. Arjun following the deadly command…… Devil has thought something more evil….

32 comments

  1. Rg

    Oh dear is arjun going to kill his family? I feel real bad … Supriya pls don’t make arjun do tat… Oh dear… Pls … When is rads entry? I can barely wait.

    • Supriya

      Thanks Rg…..well abt arjun killing his fmly dan I have not decided anything yet…..loads of love?

      • Supriya

        Dear this z abt abt the devil’s child arjun and god’s child radhika…..their love story which z impossible but yet they will fight for their love…..arjun z like a harsh,cold moon yet Radhika the sun will tame his darkness….. Hope u got the idea…..loads of love

  2. Wat arjun going to kill his own family….n one point arjun is half devil he has soft corner fr thr family…ohhh suppu darling luv u fr ds update

  3. ammu

    6h supriya ..dis devil is really devil.n arjun going to kill his famly!dats so cruel.bt i awe ur creativity..really awesome dear..pls update asap..

    • Supriya

      Thx ammu dear?abt arjun killing fmly dan I hav not decided anything yet……thanx thrilled by ur appreciation….. Loads of love?

  4. Gauri

    OMG! Supriya….start writing thrillers you will be successful….pls dont make him kill his family…and when is Radhika entering the story…next time update this one 1st….pls its a humble request 🙂 love you loads 🙂 keep rocking 🙂

    • Supriya

      Di that’s a huge compliment…… m on the moon r8 now…..abt rads entry I have to plan it…..will try to update asap….I never refuse u…..loads of love tc????

  5. Gianna

    Awesome Supriya u got me glued to this one u write really well pls post the next one soon and when is Radz making her entry. Tc

  6. Is it a next part of paradise lost….devil Lucifer….yuck….he also wanted to corrupt n kill god’s new creation human race…no radhika…when will half devil become normal….

  7. Shree

    No no no.. He’s not going to kill them…. That devil dad!! Crush him… Argh… Loved it dear.. You’re amazing in this.

    Love you ??

  8. rasha

    Its really amazing dear.eagerly waiting for next paet.make meet our devil and angel as soon as possible.really loved it.great.keep it up dear.and update continously.take care.

  9. Very nice jaanu….this devil father too much devil… I don’t thinks arjun going to kill his family….he has half good heart person…even he love his sisters…the devil force him do this deeds…..I loved this chapter…when is angel entry…precap interesting..waiting for next one…love u loads …tc…when is next update..

  10. feby

    shall i tell u one bitter thing…i didnt like tis….i dont want him to b sooo harsh tat he kills his family…tats not good….such negativity i hate…. plz

    • Supriya

      Feby darling…..this plot z a fight bwt good nd evil….I hav introduced evil after some updates gud will be introduced…..dear this z a totally different story but don’t worry gud will win in the end…..anyways srry if u find it too much negative but it z the need of the story r8 now…..loads of love…

  11. aastha

    hey cutie pie………I liked the way you way described the entry of devil…….so arjun has a loving heart…………….plzz I dont want him to kill his sisters…..that’s too harsh and evil,,,,,,,,love u……….TC……….

    • Supriya

      My assthu…..arjun z a half human nd half devil all his emotions will be introduced wen rads enters the scene……u know this story I had in my mind before love you forever but I thought it will be flop…..will update soon….loads of love…..muaaaaahhhhhh……tc????

  12. Roma

    Awesome supriya. ..wowwww just loved it. ..I’m desperately waiting for rads…n ardhika love story. …love you loads

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