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Home»Fan Fiction»a DEVIL falls in LOVE with an ANGEL ..! #TwiNj# FF (Chapter 18)
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a DEVIL falls in LOVE with an ANGEL ..! #TwiNj# FF (Chapter 18)

Purvi128By Purvi128May 18, 201724 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi guyss… many of u were desperate for this ff but I can’t post it regularly… u all know that how many ffs I m writing..! So please try to understand.. I’ll post my all ffs one by one.. okk.!!

Chapter 18 ~
Twinkle was packing the stuff when Kunj came nd back hugs her. She knew its his disgusting husband.
T – ‘Mr. Sarna please leave me!’
K – ‘I won’t nd btw why r u calling me Mr. Sarna?’
T – ‘Actually I forgot you are my boss ryt…? So I won’t call u by ur name instead I’ll call u Mr. Sarna nd btw I don’t want to make my tongue dirty by taking your name!’ He got furious. He twisted her hand on her back. Her back was facing him. She winces in pain.
K – ‘How dare you talk to me like this? Do you know with whom you are talking.’
T – ‘Ahh.. I know… ouch.. I know I m talking to the disgusted person in the world.’ She replied with mych difficulty. His grip on her hand tightens.. he then left her hand and came in front of her. He pressed her jaws tightly. Tears started flowing from her eyes. It pricked it his heart but he being the devil continued hurting her.
K – ‘Twinkle, I m leaving you now, but I will torture you in Thailand where no one would be able to hear your screams. I got peace hurting you!’
He pushed her and she fell down. He left the room. She was crying vigorously. Her hand nd jaw was paining a lot. She looked at her hand on which his finger’s marks were printed. She got up with much difficulty and went towards the mirror. She looked at herself in the mirror. Her tears were dried by now. Not because her pain became less but because she was tired of. Crying isn’t the solution for the problems, she thought. She took a decision. She won’t cry anymore because he would think that she is weak. She thought that she’ll be silent and would bear his tortures thinking it as her fate.
T – ‘Koi faaida nhi ab rone se… wo meri kismat me hai! Sid I miss you!’

Next Scene ~
Twinj and YuKi bid a bye to the family. They sat in the car and left for the airport. As they reached to Twinkle’s house, she saw it and started sobbing. Kunj heard her sobbing and felt bad but the devil inside him didn’t let him feel her pain. Yuvi stopped the car at Taneja Mansion. Twinkle looked at him with a questioning face.
Y – ‘Aesy kya dekh rahi hai. Go meet ur parents!’
T – ‘No, I won’t.’ She said with a trembling voice.
Chinki – ‘But why?’
T – ‘Becuz I don’t want to hurt them.’
Y – ‘Wo khush hongay tujhe dekh kar.’
T – ‘Nhi Yuvi tum nhi jaante Maa or Papa ko!’
Kunj – ‘Mahi se nhi milogi?’ She looked at him with much pain in her eyes.
T – (thinks) ‘Kyun tum hamesha mujhe ye sochne per majboor ker dety ho ke tum ek bure insaan nhi ho, bs shayad kuch wajah hai. Tum me achai hai shayad burai se bhi zyada! Twinkle, kya soch rahi hai. He is the reason for hr condition for the distance of you with ur parents. He is the VILLAIN.’
Y – ‘Haan jao Twinkle!’
T – ‘Me Mahi se subah mil li thi!’
C – ‘Aesy nhi sunegi tu!’
Chinki took her out of the car forcefully and took her inside. She was about to enter the house when she reminisces Rt saying to her.
Rt – ‘Iss ghar ki dahleez paar ker ke jaa rahi ho, wapis kabhi qadam mat rakhna!’
She back offs nd Chinki looked at her surprised.
T – ‘No chinki, papa told me not to cross this doorstep, nd i can’t deny to their orders.’
C – ‘Twinkle chal to!’
Leela shouted.
L – ‘Ek qadam aagay mat barhana!’

Twinkle looked at her with glassy eyes.
T – ‘Maaaaaa!’ She spoke with the pain in her voice and it shaked Leela!
L – ‘Don’t call me Maa!’
T – ‘Maa, can’t you trust your daughter! You used to say that ke me hamesha apni beti per vishwaas kero gi halaat jesy bhi hun.’
Leela had tears in her eyes.
L – ‘Chinki isy yahan se le jaa! Warna iske papa ne dekh liya to pata nhi kya hoga!’
T – ‘Me ne tujhse kaha tha na Chinki me Maa ki aankhon me aansu nhi dekh sakti isi liye yahan aane ka mana ker rahi thi.’
Chinki had tears.
C – ‘Aunty ap achaa nhi kar rahi! Apki Twinkle ek aesa precious gem hai jo kisi kisi ko milta hai, wo hamesha apni khushi ke uper apki khushi rakhti hai! Aesi betiyaan har kisi ki kismat me nhi hoti!’
They left from there nd sat in the car. Yuvi nd Kunj didn’t spoke anything!’
Screen freezes…!!

Precap: Twinkle taking contraceptive pills!

***
Sorry for the short update! ‘BAY KHUDI’ ff will be posted today only!
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    24 Comments

    1. Nisha on May 18, 2017 8:36 pm

      Awesome episode Purvi
      Loved it

    2. Sohi on May 18, 2017 8:50 pm

      Episode was very painful
      My eyes turned glassy when twinkle and chinki went to taneja mansion
      Hope everything will become alright soon
      Do continue
      Bye

    3. Nrk on May 18, 2017 8:58 pm

      Yes we r very desperate for ur ff.but its ok.i can understand.
      Anyways nice epi.is tw pregnant. is it gonna affect her health.oh gosh ??
      When u get time post next epi dr?

    4. Presha on May 18, 2017 9:28 pm

      Hey butter cup…
      Awesome…
      Just loved it…
      Felt bad for twinkle…
      Love u…
      Post soon…

    5. SidMin23 on May 18, 2017 9:59 pm

      ? kunj have two side good and bad hope good side will win over this devil side felt bad for twinkle hope she will be okay in coming episode as this devil Sarna will not leave her. Wish soon twinj got to know about miss understanding and short out everything.

    6. parulkashyap on May 18, 2017 10:53 pm

      i just lvd ur ff plz dont make twinkle abla naari let her fight 4 him from him

    7. Franciee on May 18, 2017 11:13 pm

      This is the best ff among all your other ffs. Please complete this ff first and then you can continue with the others. Please. It’s a request.

    8. Ayesha on May 18, 2017 11:30 pm

      thank God
      finally you have posted
      my cutie pie purvi
      my cup cake
      You know na I was eagerly
      waiting for it
      but you have delayed
      anyway it was superb
      awesome fabulous
      fantastic outstanding
      marvellous too good
      and you are a real
      author and a great
      writer please post
      the next episode as
      soon as possible
      pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
      lots of love
      love you soooooo much.?

    9. Kiya on May 19, 2017 12:21 am

      Awesome episode plz post soon ❤️❤️❤️

    10. Purnima.agrawal30 on May 19, 2017 1:24 am

      AMAZING fabulous emotional too…feeling bad for twinkle

    11. Twinj on May 19, 2017 3:40 am

      Hey bhootni
      Tu intna ache se sab describe karti hae ki story may gushe chali jati hu….hawww kunj twinkle ko kitna torture karta hae par pir vhi ush may thodi si toh pyaar baki hae…par ushka devil ushe samajh ne he nai deta….par koi nai Twinkle ushke pyaar ko bahar laker ahyegi….loved the epi….precap…twinkle taking contraceptives….is she pregnant….obviously…..hope for the best….post the next part asap aur bay khudi bhi jaldi post kariyo….bhootni it’s a request aab aur intazaar nai ho raha…

    12. Priya23 on May 19, 2017 3:46 am

      .
      .
      Ohhoooo my vanilla,,???
      Whattttttt a episode,,?????
      Everything was shown perfectly,,???????????
      Out standing,,???
      Awesome,,???
      Fabulous,,???
      Marvelous,,???
      And what not,,???
      Felt bad 4 twinkle very much,,????
      But muje or dekhni hai kunj ki emotional or devil side,,??????
      Hayeee tune to marhidala kunj ki devilness se bapreh,,??????
      Haye ye leela bhi na accha nahi kia twinkle ki sath very bad,,?????
      Now m eagerly impatiently desperately waiting,,?????
      Plsssssss jaldhi next update kar can’t wait 4 long,,????
      Sorry 4 short comment,,???
      But pura ekdin bad TU open karke tera hi ff padh rai hun sabse pehle or rat ki ab 4:20 baje hai so need to sleep,?????
      LOAD’S OF LOVE MY VANILLA,,❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤

    13. padu on May 19, 2017 9:36 am

      I am hell desperate for you ff wanting to see our heros duel side

    14. Sameera on May 19, 2017 10:49 am

      Haayeeee sooooo feeling so bad for twinkle bechari ????….kunj huh amazing episode yaar do cont soon ?…

    15. Anchali on May 19, 2017 11:07 am

      Hey purvi I was waiting for tis ff of urs and now I have finally read it. It was awesome.can’t wait to see kunj’s actions in Thailand.plsss post the next part asap

    16. Ramya on May 19, 2017 12:01 pm

      Purvi
      Awesome
      Amazing superb
      Feeling bad for twinkle
      Post soon
      Love u keep smiling

    17. sia on May 19, 2017 1:13 pm

      purvi yaar plss jaldi post karo na mujhe aise ff jisme kunj has a grey shade awsm lagte but sabhi writterrs aise ff late post kar rahe tum toh jaldi karo na

    18. Fatimaa. on May 19, 2017 7:34 pm

      Heyyy jaaaaaannnnn…
      This one was indeed amazing…
      I loved it to core….
      Felt very bad fr twinkle……jab kunj ko pata chalega na ki twinkle hi jas hai to uske to tote hi udd jane hai??????
      Hmm ab jaldi post kariyo…
      Lots nd lots of love jaannnn…????????????????????????????????????

    19. Ritzi on May 19, 2017 10:01 pm

      Haaayeee….kya epi diya hai…just tooooooooooooo good….fan ho gyi ho Teri…autograph dediyo….future mei kab tu badi writer ban gyi hogi…tab tym nhi milega???

      • Purvi128 on May 19, 2017 11:11 pm

        Ohhh goshh.. I m flying high in the air reading ur comment.. Bss ker dy itna acha nhi likhtii . autograph and mee.. Or badi writer.. Kya joke tha… And wesy bhi mujhe achaa to tu likh leti hai ritzuuu..

    20. Ayesha on May 19, 2017 11:59 pm

      please post the next episode as soon as possible pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
      I am eagerly waiting for it
      and I am hell desperate for it
      please jaldi karo
      pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

    21. Ayesha on May 20, 2017 12:01 am

      please post the next episode as soon as possible pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
      I am eagerly waiting for it
      and I am hell desperate for it
      please jaldi karo
      pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
      and ritzee di is right
      you will definitely become a great writer

    22. baby on May 20, 2017 10:59 pm

      ohhhhh god puru…….♥
      yrr m missing u wen ll u b free….. 🙂
      srsly ritzi sahi khe rhi hai dude autograph dedio kahin fir tu mujhe bhool gyi toh….. 😛
      love u sooooooooo mch behan…..♥♥♥
      schi schhiii schiii……loved it……..
      sooo emotional soooo lovely jst crying…..♥
      loved it…..♥
      love u soooo mch…….♥♥♥♥♥

    23. baby on May 20, 2017 10:59 pm

      post nxt asap plssss babu…..♥

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