a DEVIL falls in LOVE with an ANGEL ..! #TwiNj# FF (Chapter 1)

Heloooooooo … friends ….. sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry … maaf ker do choti si bachhi ko … actually na mere ghr pe guests aaye huay thay stay kerny .. toh I was very busy … or phir I am not well … itna fever horaha hai … phir bhi likh rahi hun for u all …. Maaf ker dena bachi ko … chalo no more bak bak epi le lo …

Array array wait karo itni bhi kya jaldi hai … thank you all who commented on the intro .. I was very happy that u liked the plot …I was overwhelmed .. literally .., I was having tears …. (khushi ke aansou .. u knw)
Now 1 more thing … dimagh khaa rahi hun na sb ka .. per kya karun 1 baat batani hai …. Hamari Twinkle na …. Jasmin .. she is coming in a new serial DIL SE DIL TAK …. I saw the promo … she is looking breath taking gorgeous in the promo … and she is playing the role of bar dancer … I don’t know if this news is right that she is playing bar dancer … I heard it .. so just telling you about her role …
Bht bakwaas ker li me ne .. chalo ab epi le lo ….

Chapter 1 –

A beautiful melodious voice is heard … coming from a university … let’s go inside …
There was a crowded hall and on the stage a gorgeous girl is singing … She was wearing blue jeans and black shirt … She was looking stunning …
Yaara…
Manzilein ruswaa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye ley jaaye
Itni si ilteja
Tu meri zamanat hai
Ye meri amanat hai aaa…
Mujhko irade de
Kasmeim de,vaade de
Meri duaon ke ishaaron ko sahare de
Dil ko thikane de
Naye bahane de
Khaabon ki barishon ko
Mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar aadayen
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigahen
Sunn raha hai na tu
Ro rahi hun mein
Sunn raha hai na tu
Kyun ro rahi hun mein (×2)
Waqt bhi thehra hai
Kese kyun ye hua
Kash tu aise aaye
Jese koi dua
Tu rooh ki rahat hai
Tu meri ibadat hai aaa…
Apne karam ki kar aadayen
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigahen
Sunn raha hai na tu
Ro rahi hun mein
Sunn raha hai na tu
Kyun ro rahi hun mein (×2)
The girl thinks “I wish tum jaldi wapis aajao … I miss you so much … whenever i sing any song .. it just remids me of you .. plss come back .. i wil solve all the misunderstandings between us … My friend..”
She clears her tears ..
She finished the song … Everyone hooted “Twinkle .. Twinkle “ She is revealed to be Twinkle ۔
After that many of the boys and girls sings different songs …
The host comes on stage …
H: “Today’s competition was very hard …. So now wait for the results ..As you all know that the owner of the famous music company of Thailand is here .. so whoever wins this competition … he or she will go to Thailand and the company will release an album of them … so let’s see who will be the lucky person .. so Mr.Yuvraj Sarna … we r waiting for the result ?”
Y: “Just give me 10 min ..”
H: “Okk”

TWINKLE’S POV
We all were waiting for the result …. I was so afraid … what will happen?? What if my dream will not fulfill …? No no twinkle what r u thinking … u will be the winner … Babaji … plss
End pov
H – “I would like to call Mr.Yuvraj Sarna and Mr.Kunj Sarna on stage … please welcome ..”
They both comes on stage .. Kunj was looking hot as usual …
K – “So the winner is ………..”
Pause …
Twinkle closes her eyes and prays to babaji …
Uv – “Twinkle Taneja …”
She opens her eyes in disbelief …. It was like she was seeing a dream … She was very delighted …
The clapping was heard …
She climbs on the stage …
Kunj’s pov
Omg … she is so hot … so s*xy …. isy to thailand jaana padega … or else how will she be my bedmate …. she is so s*xy … but there is some innocence on her face .. ohh kunj what r u thinking … she will only be a one night stand for u .. (smirks) but my friend … where r u … u wanted to be a singer na … and i also want that … plss comeback ..u always said that singing is your passion …
Pov ends
Uv gives her trophy ..
Twinkle shakes hand with Uv and then Kunj …
As her kunj’s hand touched … they felt an electric current passes through their body … they both quickly left eo hands …
K – (thinks) What was that …? I felt an unknown connection with her … like we have met before .. or we have spent many days with eo … it was the same current when i shake hands with my Jasmin .. my friend .. my love … but she left me ..
T – (thinks) What was that …? I felt an unknown connection with him .. like we have met before .. or we know eo very well .. why is it like that .. it was the same feeling when i first met with my Sid .. my friend .. my love … but he left me coz of a misunderstanding …

Uv – “Twinkle u wanna say something ….?”
T – “I just want to say thank you .. thank you so much … I am glad that I am going to Thailand … and i will become a singer … to become a singer was my wish since childhood … my childhood friend also want me to become a singer ..
This shocked Kunj ..
She continued – And now i am going to become a singer but he is not with me … Singing is my Passion and I sing from my heart … Thankyou .”
This shocked Kunj even more …
The words .. childhood friend and singing is my passion .. were roaming in his mind … He puts a full stop on his thoughts and comes down from the stage …
Twinkle moves towards her special room in the uni ….
She was crying the whole way …
T – Sid .. where r u ..,? Plss come back ..I miss u so much …. I miss u every passing year … i miss you every passing month .. I miss you every passing week … I miss you every passing night … I miss you every passing day … I miss you every passing hour … I miss you every passing minute … I miss you every passing second … I miss you every passing millisecond …. tum nhi jaante kitna miss kerti hun tumhein . … tum kyun gaye mujhe chod ke … bs 1 bar … 1 bar mil jao na … sb theek ker dun gi …. Sid .. bht miss kerti hun mein tumhe …
She cries holding her trophy .. …. and fell down on her knees …She kissed her heart shaped locket which was having two pics .of her childhood …. Sid’s and hers …
“ Yeh locket hum dono ne 1 dosre ko diya tha … or me ne tum se ye vaada bhi kiya tha ke kabhi bhi chaahe kuch bhi hojaye …. apni aakhri saans tak isy apny pass rakhun gi .. or abhi tak hai mere pass … even after 8 long years …”
She hides it from her hairs …
On the other side … kunj comes down from the stage … his eyes were searching someone … someone who he felt was very close to him …. someone whom he loved all the days and nights … and most importantly .. someone who had now become his lust … someone whom he found s*xy hot appealing … someone with whom he wanted to spend a night .. or we say the whole life …
K – (thinks) Kunj Sarna .. what happened to you ..? What is this … why r u searching for her … No .. no .. I am not searching for her … i was toh .. searching for jasmin .. maybe kahin mil jaaye … me jan gaya hun sb .. jasmin was innocent … I miss you so much meri jaan …
He kissed his locket in which there were two pics of his childhood .. Jasmin’s and his …
“Jasmin .. i promised u na that i will keep this locket with me till my last breath .. and i am fulfilling this only … this will be always with me till my last breath .. tum nhi to kya hua .. tumhare sath bitaye un lamhon ki yaadein to mere pass hain na … jin ke saahare me apnj poori zindagi guzar dun ga … mgr tumhari jagah koi nhi ley sakta … or me kisi ko lene bhi nhii dunga …” He hides it under his coat …

Uv – “Kunj … what happened .., u r looking tensed ..”
K – “ No .. nothing … I was having a headache … now its okay ..”
Uv – “Bro .. take care of urself .. and yaa plss tell Twinkle that she has to go with us to Thailand after 3 days … “
K – “ Umm okaay …”
He walked away from their and reached in the hall … There Twinkle was coming out of her room busy with her phone …. Kunj also doesn’t see her …
The collides with eo …Before she fell down … Kunj holds her from her waist …
They share an eyelock …

tere saamne aa jaane se
ye dil mera dhaRka hai
ye ghalti nahi hai teri
kusoor nazar ka hai

because of your coming in front of me,
my heart has beaten (fast),
it’s not your mistake,
but my sight’s fault.

jis baat ka tujhko Dar hai
wo karke dikha doonga…

the thing you are afraid of,
I’ll do that…

aise na mujhe tum dekho
seene se laga loonga
tumko main chura loonga tumse
dil mein chhupa loonga

don’t look at me like that,
or I’ll embrace you..
I’ll steal you from yourself,
and hide you in my heart.

tumse pehle, tumsa koi
humne nahi dekha
tumhe dekhte hi mar jaayenge
ye nahi tha socha

Before you, I’ve not seen
anyone like you…
I’d not thought I’ll be dead
as soon as I saw you…

baahon mein teri, meri
ye raat Thehar jaaye
tujh mein hi kahin pe meri
subaha bhi guzar jaaye

I wish my night passes
in your arms,
and in you only somewhere,
even my morning passes.

jis baat ka tujhko Dar hai
wo kar ke dikha dunga…

aise na mujhe tum dekho
seene se laga loong
tumko main chura loonga tumse
dil mein chhupa loonga

dil mein chhupa loonga…

They both composes themselves …
T – “ I am sorry…..”
K- “No .. its ok …”
She leaves from there ..
Kunj has a evil smirk on his face …
“ Baby … u r going to be mine soon…. Just wait for the day when u’ll be alone in Thailand ….. u r so s*xy and i will never allow anyone to touch u…. Agr kisi ki bhi himmat hui na tujhe haath lagany ki … usska haath tod dunga …”
He smirks evilly …
On the other side Twinkle was very happy that she is going to become a singer …
“Toh babaji . Finally aj ap ne itny saalon baad bhi meri or Sid ki pray sun li na . Thank u soo much babaji … when maa papa mahi and chinki will know about this۔ they will be very happy..”
Episode ends on Twinkle’s happy face and Kunj’s smirking face…
So guys enough … or zyada nhi likh sakti … fever horaha hai naa … or haa zyada comments dena to meri tabyat bhi jaldi thk hogi…..
Kuch bhool rahin hun …. haan precap .. chahiye kya …?
Chalo le lo..
Precap:- Twinkle’s family moments..and Kunj’s lust increasing

Remember 1 thing ….
More comments and dhair saari support= next part jaldi milega….
Any confusions or doubts .. do tell me …
To know what will happen ahead
Stay tuned with “TELLY UPDATES @ A DEVIL falls in LOVE with an ANGEL”
BYE

LOADS OF LOVE 💘💘💘😙😙😙😙😙😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤

29 comments

  1. SidMin

    SidMin

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    Loved it 🙂
    Too good 🙂
    Twinkle is so innocent and Kunj ….. well anyways end I hope Kunj sudhar jayega 🙂
    Take care ha …. Get well soon 🙂
    Love You 🙂

  2. Sohi

    Sohi

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    The episode was too good and fab
    And ya I had also seen the promo of jasmin’s new show dil se dil tak it was really awesome
    She was looking beautiful
    Waiting for the next update do continue

  3. SidMin23

    SidMin23

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    Overall nice and I think somehow twinj separate locket will match soon in Thailand and waiting for their moment and I want to see what this lust kunj will do to get twinkle

  4. SidMinTwiNj

    SidMinTwiNj

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    Oh God cutie kitna bak bak karti hai tu… Thak ni jati huh… Aur haan what u heard about Jas is true her next show is dil se dil tak which is remake of chori chori chupke chupke and she is playing role of preeti zinda that is bar dancer… I too saw the promo and she is looking breath taking in it but I wont be watching it as I dont like Jas playing a role of bar dancer…

    Now coming to epi its amazingly amazing… Loved it to the core… Do continue and post next soon and ur other ff too…

    Take care of ur health…
    Love you cutie 😘😘

  5. SidVee_Yashvee

    SidVee_Yashvee

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    Wow amazing start.. really loved it.. will kunj get Twinkle in Thailand or will he get to know about twinkle being Jasmin?? Waiting to know this ans.. eagerly waiting for the next ❤.. and dear, do take care of your health 🙂 get well soon 💞

    • Purvi128

      Purvi128

      |Author

      Thank you so much Yahsvee …. u’ll get to know the answers .. but u have to wait for that .. there r so many twists and turns ahead …

  6. Angel20

    Angel20

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    Hey Purvi,
    It was really amazing! I just loved it! Waiting for their past to unfold!! It was really very awesome! Post the next one soon!!

    With Love❤

  7. Priya23

    Mery Jjjjaaaannnnn mery jhalli sry 4 late cmnt ….. gussha naii hai na tu mujhse ….. ok ab gussa mat karna ….. coz I love you …..
    Now Thanks to u madam finally tune post kiya m waiting 4 it yarr….
    And apki tariff mein mai kya kahu
    madam apto meri jaan ho meri shan ho….he he ….. Coz apki writing ke to ham diwane hai ….. U rule my heart with ur writing jannn …….
    And epi to super se v upar wala tha ….. Kunj and twinkle was childhood friend and lover that’s good ….. But why kunj land up in womanizer.. ?? if he Love’s twinkle seens child age ….. And his lusty eye’s in twinkle and oh god how will twinj react to know the truth and how will be twinkle react when she will know that kunj is his sid and he is a womanizer….. Oh god so many suspense sirf tu hi dur kar sakti hay..he he ….. Well ab jaldhi next part post kardena ….. And apki previous ff bhi post karna madam coz I missed it …..
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    Ur truly My jann ….. my vanilla ..he he.. Coz I love vanilla ice-cream more then chocolate ….. Stay happy and keep smiling ….. I love you my cold coffee, my vanilla, and my jhalli ….. Muaahh …..

    • Purvi128

      Purvi128

      |Author

      Meri jaaannnnnnn … me or tujh se gussa … impossible yrr …. tu soch bhi kesy sakti hai … me bilkul gussa nhi hun … no problem agr tu ne late comment kiya … per kia to na … i was relaxed kyun ki mujhe pata tha .. tu comment zaroor kary gi … me bilkul gussa nhi … coz I love you too … jhalliiii …
      U knw what .. i was blushing while reading ur comment .. yrr u always make me feel special … always …. sorry tujhe wait kerwany ke liye .. per kya karun .. busy thi ….
      Yrr ur comments made my day … jhalliiiii …. or yrr i also love vanilla ice cream more than chocolate … same … same … or cold coffee to meri jaan haiii …
      Dosre ff ka kuch nhi keh sakti cuz i am busy … don’t have tym … phir bhi i’ll try to post as soon as possible … hope tujhe koi problem na ho …
      Afterall tu meri jhalli .. meri jaan … meri sis … meri frnd … meri janeman … meri dharkan … mery jigar ka tukda … meri har cheez hai tu …. love u sooooo much jaanu ….😍😙😙😙😙
      Muaaaaahhhh …..
      Aur haan reply padh le na .. to mujhe reply zaroor keriyo … or agr nhii kiya na …… to ……..

      I will love you more and more … but phir bhi reply keryio cuz tere liye mera pyaar kabhi kam nhii hoga … love you jhalli

      • Priya23

        My jaannn, my jhalli, ur my everything my sissi ….. Now m crying yarrr…. itna pyarrrr,,,, ajtak mujhse kisine istarah baat naii kiya….
        Now M considered me as a really very lucky girl coz i to have like sissi like you….. And dubara sry bola toh dekhlio ….. Now m also love u more and more….
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        And agar death bhi hamari samne agayi na tab bhi mai Teri ff mai cmnt jarur karungi samjhi jhalli ….
        And tu bolegi or mai reply na karu aisa kabhi ho sakta hei kya meri jaann …..and koi baat naii agar tujhe late hua ff post karna mai coz mai meri Jan ke liye life time wait karungi…. But i love this ff to the core but dont wry par tujhse jeyada naii..he he…
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        OK my vanilla, my sissi, my jhalli take care of urself fever hay na meri jann ko and mdcn time pe lena OK…..
        I love you sooooo much meri jann…. Muaaaaaahhh…..!!!!!!

  8. Twinjfan.tamanna

    Twinjfan.tamanna

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    hey jaan,
    kya haal hai fir? ur comment made me so happy but I m really bad at long comments…
    today’s epi was beautifully written… the concept… I loved it… sorry for not commenting previously but I loved the intro too… kunj womanizer can’t wait for next chapter

    and if u don’t mind can u give me ur email address through tu private message… I m not able to message you through tu private message..

    with love,
    Urs shona

    • Purvi128

      Purvi128

      |Author

      Hi shona …. yrr first of all no sorry .. haan …. u r my shona and i don’t want any sorry from my shona …cuz i love u ….
      I am glad that u liked the chapter & intro too ….
      Why would i mind giving u my email address haan …. apne ap ko meri shona bhi bolti hai or phir itna formal hoti hai … kyun ….
      Love u loads …. shona ❤❤❤❤😙😙

  9. Ramya

    Ramya

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    Purvi
    Superb awesome amazing beautiful episode loved it I’m so excited fr precap
    Loads of love keep smiling

  10. Baby

    Baby

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    hayeeeeeeee 😀
    purvi dear shooooooooooooooo cute episode sidmin hmmmmm
    cant w8 for more……..
    n take care naa♥☺☺♥
    lovely episode toooo emotional srsly m crying ryt now u will believe me ryt☺hahaa ofoco mein bhi naa well did u smile a bit 😀
    take care naa get well soon n post nxt too soon☺

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