My devil epi 5

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Hey guys thankyou liking n giving coment…n plzz After reading story read my note also plzz Its important for me to know u all opinion….soo without wasting time lets start….

……………MY DEVIL…………

Sanskar made swara sit forcefully in the car n start driving to his farmhouse…she was crying bitterly n cursing her fate on seeing her condition somewhere in hearth sanskar felt bad but soon his anger n revenge controled his heart….thinking about past Moment he start driving more fastly making swara more sceard n pleading to him to drive slowly….

Sw: (sceard) sanskar ji plzzz drive Slow (hearing her pleading voice sanskar gave more speed to scare her like hell) sanskar ji plzzz aram se chalai plzzz…

Swara plead him whole way to farmhouse to drive Slow but he didnt gave any dam heed to her word….

Soon they reached farmhouse he took swara out of the car n start walking in the house n she was begging to leave her…

Sw: (begging) sanskar ji plzzz me let me go I wana go home plzzz sanskar ji

But no her pleading didnt Effekt him little he was heartless for he was a DEVIL for her he behaved with her like animal never showing any maercy on her…soon they went inside the house n sanskar took hr to his room making his servant shocked…They were looking at him like they saw an alien…

S1: (shocked) ramu am I dreaming sanskar Baba with a GIRL

ramu: (more shocked) Haan kamla even I am thinking the Same

Kam: as far I saw Baba he never gave any heed to a Girl how many Girls try to lure him but he never showed any intress

Ram: even I was thinking the Same beacuse sanskar Baba is not like that I must say this Girl might be special to him

Kam: maybe but seeing that girl I dont think they love eachother

While the servant were shocked seeing sanskar with a Girl on the other hand sanskar took swara to his room…n pushed her down making swara scream in pain and he closed door making her sceard….he went near n held chin made her look into his eyes which filled with anger + hatered….

San: (anger) before 1 day u were going to suciede n today u want me to leave u….

Sw:….

San: answer me damit

Sw: (sceard) wo wo..sanskar ji i wo

San: shut up I am telling u 1st n last timeย  dont u dare to talk with ur parents or try to run away or else I will make ur n ur parents life hell did u get it…

Saying this he placed his rough lips on her soft lips biting n sucking them making her gapsed in pain tears were fowlling down from her beautiful eyes she was trying to pull back herself from kiss but he was leaning more n more on her soon he on top of her while she laid on floor…After breaking kiss he Begun to kiss her neck leaving his theet Mark behind…he once again try to kiss her lips but was disturb by phone call seeing id Nr he Got up n looked at swara while smirking n went out closing the door…

Swara was still lying on the floor n closed her eyes and took long breath being relief….
After sometime she got up and went near window looking outside at the moon….
Tears were still fowlling down from her eyes nonstop๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข

Rondiyan akhiyaan na akhiyaan Saundiyan akhiyaan
Rondiyan akhiyaan na akhiyaan Saundiyan akhiyaan

Eyes are crying
They are not sleeping

She closed her eyes remembering her parents n their love…how was their life before sanskar entring n before her life from heaven became now hell beacuse of this devil….
Reason behind his devilness still she dont know…

Ve akhiyaan nu jog lagge sajna
Ve akhiyaan nu jog lagge sajna
Ve akhiyaan nu rog lagge sajna

Beloved, eyes are under a spell (not sure)

Then she remembered how sanskar entered in his life on her engament day….

Rondiyan akhiyaan na akhiyaan Saundiyan akhiyaan

Abhi hain kuchh naye naye se gham Abhi hain kuchh dil mein umeedein kam
Abhi hain kuchh naye naye se gham Abhi hain kuchh dil mein umeedein kam

The grief is fresh
There are still some hopes in the heart

His devilness which took everything how He kissed her madly…
How hard he bited on her lips necks….
How He left his bited Mark on her neck n lip which were turned into blue….
Still when she touched her lips hurt her alot…

Abhi hai kuchh ghuta ghuta sa dum Abhi hai kuchh ghuta ghuta sa dum

It is a bit usffocating as of now

The nightmare she had after that incident….

Dheere dheere kam hogi udaasi Dheere dheere
Dheere dheere kam hogi udaasi Dheere dheere

The sadness shall pass slowly

How she try to forget that incident but still that incident is in heart somewhere deep down…

Abhi to dil ke zakhm naye hain Chhoone se dukhte hain
Abhi to ankhein bhari hain
Dekhein aansu kab rukte hain

The wounds of heart are still fresh They ache when touched
The eyes are still filled with tears
Let us see, when the tears stop

When she try to kill herself how He saved her n made her sign on marrige document….
His rough romance in car….
The wounds who were about to heal with her parents love caring are now fresh again with his devilness…

Abhi to dil ke zakhm naye hain Chhoone se dukhte hain
Abhi to ankhein bhari hain
Dekhein aansu kab rukte hain

Abhi to ankhein bhari hain
Dekhein aansu kab rukte hain

Abhi hai kuchh sehma sehma mann Abhi hai koi khud se hi anban
Abhi hai kahin dil mein koi chubhan Abhi hai kahin dil mein koi chubhan

The heart is still a bit sad The fight with self is still going on Something is pricking in the heart as of now

How he warned her about making her parents life hell because of her….
And his shameless act infront of her parents kissing her openly infront of them making them helpless and guilty for not saving her from this devil…

Dheere dheere kam hogi udaasi Dheere dheere
Dheere dheere kam hogi udaasi Dheere dheere

Laggiyan naina diyan jhadhiyan vairne Laggiyan ne
Laggiyan naina diyan jhadhiyan vairne
Laggiyan ne

Eyes are crying a lot, my enemy

She opened which were still duet crying continusly…
Tears didnt stop making her heart cry more n more….

Lutte gaye chaah saare
Ho gayian thagiyan ne
Lutte gaye chaah saare
Ho gayian thagiyan ne

My all desires have been stolen
I have been duped

How she wished like every normal girl how to be her life…
How wished her husband should treat her like princess the way her parents n siblings treat….

Laggiyan naina diyan jhadhiyan vairne Laggiyan ne

Ishq ne kheli ankh micholi
Dil ko bada sataya
Koi dawa dua bhi na lagi
Aisa rog lagaya

Love has played hide and seek
It has tormented my heart a lot
It has given me a disease
Which can not be cured by medicine or prayer

She thought maybe sahil is the person with whom she can live happily but he also showed his true color…When the time came to Show his love but he dispointed her…even their friendship…

Ishq ne kheli ankh micholi
Dil ko bada sataya
Koi dawa dua bhi na lagi
Aisa rog lagaya
Koi dawa dua bhi na lagi
Aisa rog lagaya

Karein jo kabhi shikwa shikayat hum To badhte hain kuchh aur bhi gham Ke ankhein chhalki hain chham chham
Ke ankhein chhalki hain chham chham

If I ever complain,
My grief increases even more
And my eyes spill more tears

Now she have no one except that devil who told her to stay away from her family…or else he will make them suffer beacuse of her if she try to do anything…..
She touched her lips neck which were still bleeding n paining like hell…

Dheere dheere kam hogi udaasi Dheere dheere
Dheere dheere kam hogi udaasi Dheere dheere

The sadness shall pass slowly

Thinking all that she sat near Balkony door leaned her head back closing her eyes…soon the sleep took over…

Precap: sanskar New shade….

NOTE

this is very important note guys read it n answer my question are u guys liking this story or not n i need ur guys opinion beacuse one of reader coment on my last epi n she told me her opinion that i am making swara like puppet n Now a days no girl
can tolerate this n i made her family helpless…

So I am giving my opinion to u all even u guys give me ur opinion…

According to me still Girls are being used as Puppet dear sometime their parents or her inlaws used them like tissue paper for their deaire…if they can fulfill their desire the Girls have to bear their torture n everything which can destroye their life hell…
Even I am girl I have good or I can say beutiful life with my parents but guys not every Girl can have beutiful life…beacuse some parents think their Girls as burden…
N coming to my story its just a story dont get too much involve….

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31 Comments
  1. plzz Chand dp of ur ff we thought it’s raglak ff and waste time in reading it

    1. Kakali

      Ohhh Nikkyyyy dear… u wasted ur time… awwwww u find d story soo interesting… rit… absolutely… that’s y u read it till d end … sooo sweet of u… but now m seriously thinking how can i waste my time giving u reply… lioe seriously.. !!! ๐Ÿ˜ž

      1. Rabia0032

        Hahah kakali I r Amazing and my dear nikky thanks for wasting Ur time by reading this story…and yeah not only by reading but also by giving coment u wasted ur time

      2. Arshaanya

        Hahahah kakali wat a reply…
        Nikky ur acc is not even rgstrd n on each n evry ff of swasan u comment like dis…
        U dun ve any right to say like dis to any writr… jus once write some story dan talk
        Go get a life girl

  2. Fab episode

  3. Aliya123

    Noooo…..your story is nt interesting……….. It’s sooo interesting…. Yes u r making swara a puppet…. BT I think it’s a part of the story…. NW swara is a puppet BT …..I m sure one day she will become strong and ask her all answers from them…. ..๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

    About girls being burden…..yes it is also a bitter truth of society BT …..time is changing NW…………….about the story….I have read it’s previous parts……so I can say story is going nice….๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear n yeah swara will be Strong but slowly slowly

  4. Shinchan1205

    It was so sad….swara is suffering for her parents deeds…..

  5. Akankshanna

    Awesome…….. Agree with ur pov..

  6. awesome.. rabia change ur dp its showing raglak in ur dp change it to swasan..
    1st i thought its nt urs its raglak ff but saw the name in end it urs.. dp is confusing

    1. Rabia0032

      Ok dear I will

  7. hey mavo pls give link of previous episode of my devil…in google another ff is shown…

  8. Astra

    the story is awesome as always dear… plz update soon….and jaldi revel why sanky is doing so?? he a devilish side, but by words of ramu kaka it’s clear he is actually a good man. so..what’s that reason..?? update soon plz….

  9. I personally think that your story is amazing and I love reading it I think you need to make the decisions you self as it is your ff but if you really want an option I think you should just carry on the way your going but that’s up to you

  10. I personally think that your story is amazing and I love reading it I think you need to make the decisions you self as it is your ff but if you really want an option I think you should just carry on the way your going but that’s up to you .

  11. Awsome story but pls change dp cz i only read swasan ffs. Whn i saw this dp i thought that its raglak ff with same name. I just opened it by mistake then i got to know that its next part of swasan ff. Dont confuse us by dp.

  12. It was really awesome yaar… Just loved it … And change your dp .. There is also a raglak ff with same name.. Actually I tho7ght this ff was that and by mistake read it and find it is yours.. Plzzz try to change becoz many swasan fans including me not reading any raglak ff

    1. Mica

      waaa… we are trully family :D, but sometime DP is TU’s fault…

  13. SwaSanFan.Goldie

    Awsum…loved it..poor swara…I want sanskaar to realize his mistakes n regret to da most bt haa at last want SwaSam union too ..ryt nw wanna see more devilness in Sanskaar ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. .continue soon plzz cmt wait

  14. It’a Amazing…..
    Plz continue…
    Don’t stp ….

  15. Kakali

    Loved it Rabia.. ITs awesome .. i love this Devil Sanskar soooooo much.. fir now m in love with this helpless n poor Swara… but haa when her time will start to punish Sanskar.. then i want a bold Swara as same as she is helpless now… !!! SAME..
    Thnk u.. ;-*

  16. Mica

    well Rabia, just pouring your fabulous idea….

  17. Awesome..
    there is a raglak ff with same name..so dat is d main problm..I would suggest u to add swasan ff with ur title..

  18. Sanswa

    Amazing rabiyaaaa darloo..๐Ÿ˜€….u write seriously fabulous…๐Ÿ˜Š

  19. Arshaanya

    Dere is one raglak ff on same name n i thought its dat bt thought to open it coz sometymz TU do mistakes lyk dis ๐Ÿ˜›
    Thankgod i opnd it…
    Loved it rabia
    Will not say swara is a puppet here… dis is kind f revenge story… n ur story demands dis so v r fune wid dis as v knw things wil chnge later…

  20. Niku

    Nice…..n ur story is also correct from my pov. As u write swara parents done some sins with sanskar or may be with his family n they know now it’s payback time ….bcz on that time swara parents r powerful from him n now sanskar is more powerful that’s why swara parents cannot do anything to save their daughter…..n coming to swara she don’t know anything what is happening around her she needs time which sanskar is not giving her that’s why she is in this condition n behaving like a weak girl n more she doesn’t know the past things too….
    So d ongoing is gud from my side….

  21. Swarna01

    According to storyline swara’s character is perfect. I love dis part. Infact i read ur all most every ff, os n ss bt never give u cmnt. Ha ha ha so bad joke. Sry. Bt now onwards i will give u cmnt. Sure. N don wala ss upld karna kal saturday hai n u told us u will upld in saturday n sunday.

  22. awesome ur are going in the right track and i love ur story continue soon

  23. Mahavir

    didiii…wait lemme breath first…whohooooo di it was such an awesome episode…ok that means my devil is a gentleman…he is not like what he is showing….wowwwww i m sure soon swara will fall in love with my devil….love u dii…..

  24. Mumpi

    superb epi… egar to know d reason f devilness ns waiting for sanskaar’s different shades.

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