My devil epi 1

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Hey guys thanks for liking n giving me coments i am trying to write in New way there will be many mistake soo sorry n plzzz give me your opinion how to do in Better way plzzz…

I know this epi is not up to mark but plzz forgive me…Hope u like…

Soo lets start…this ff will be mostly written in swasan pov…

A girl were sitting in a corner hugging herself thigtly n Covering herself with sheet…her clothes were lying on floor Torn she was crying badly without making any noise beacuse she has fear that the devil wake up again..will snatched her dignity from her again she heard some sound n looked up her eyes were red duet continusly crying tears were fowlling down from her nonstop she had beautiful big eyes but her eyes lost the Spark which she had a day before her lips were Blue duet to bitten Mark n badly sucked by someone or by a devil not only on her lips also on her neck there was Bitte Mark which was very deep…she looked  towards bed there was a man sleeping in his Shorts seeing his movement she hugged herself thigtly n was remembering how her life from heaven turn into hell..

Girl pov…

Life is so strange na one Day u feel u are in heaven but in next Moment u feel u are in hell but my life was beautiful I only had happiness in my life till yesterday…I swara gododia was the princess of my parents my brothers I got everything which I wished but never thought that my life will turn like that…yesterday I was going to Engage with my best friend sahil gupta he was only my best friend I never had any Kind of feeling for him but my parents wanted me to marry him as soon as possibel…when I will turn 18 dont know why I felt they are sceard of something…I try to asked them but they denied so couldnt ask more but I know they feared of something or of someone…that why I accepted to marry sahil yesterday was my engament I was happy why not i was getting married to my best friend who understood me very well..but my god couldnt see me happy thats why He made my life hell…I wished I had agreed to mom n never went to parlour for getting ready I wished..

Flashback

Swara pov..

I was waiting for my friends to make me ready for my engament but my friend Nisha who is make up artist couldnt come so we are going to her parlour…

Pia: swara Come lets go

I heard my friends saying we were about to leave when my mom stopped me..

Ma: swara where are u going

Me: Ma we are going to parlour

Ma:but shona

Pia:anty plzz today is her engament plzz

Its very hard to convice ma but somehow Pia coviced her she is my best friend cum sister After convicing ma we left to parlour but adarsh bhei also came with us it was Order from ma to take bhei or else we cant go…
I was wearing Red lengha choli n my friends were making me ready..bhei already left as he Got a important call after getting ready we were waiting for bhei when Pia forgot her phone in parlour so she left I was only waiting for bhei when suddenly a van came infront me n pulled me in I was about to shout but they spray something on me duet that I was uncoussion…

When I Got up I had very badly headach it was like my head will blast I was feeling very disy I dont whats happening…I saw someone entring in room first I couldnt but then I saw him i dont know who he is but i felt i saw him somewhere He was looking very hot n handsome but seeing his eyes i was sceard there was some Kind of rage in anger which was making me sceard…

I was looking at him dont know when he came near held my hair n pulled me..

Me: ahhhh who are u

Man: (smirk) u forgott me

Me: (confuse pain) ahh I dont know who u are plzzz leave me

Man: nah not so fast my dear its just starting n dont worry soon u will get to know who I am

I was confuse He knows me but I dont he pulling my hair it was hurting badly tears were fowlling down but he didnt showed me any marcy…

I was crying bitterly and struggling to get out of his Grip but he held me strongly and start  kissing me madly…
I was feeling disgusting his touch was making me feel more disgusting..

Me: (crying and begging) plzzz leave me today is my engemant plzzz

Man: hahahaha what engemant (cupped my face roughly while crassing my cheek) sweetheart u are mine n will be always mine n today I will make u mine

Me: (I was shocked no I cant let this happen I was begging but he) no plzz leave me plzz

Man: (smirk) not now Baby but After sometime let me enjoy you first

Me: plzz noo.. ( couldnt complete when he placed his rough lips on my soft lips biting sucking badly..)

I was strugling pushing him to get out of his Grip but no use he pinned me to Wall and Broke my bangle duet broken bangle it made cut in my wrist.it was paining like hell i never got soo much pain but today i come to know about the word pain….i was crying in pain but he didnt showed any marcy on me he was eating me my skin like animal…

Soon He pushed me on bed and came top of me and start kissing my neck and was roaming his hand on my  body touching everywhere…

I was feeling soo digusting I wished I could died but no even god didnt showed any marcy on me…my wrist were bleeding n i was feeling dizy dont what happend but I was uncoussion…..

Flashback ends…

Dont know what happend after that with me but I am sure that I lost my everything after waking up I found myself in his shirt n he above me…my body was hurting badly n i was thinking my about my parents I pushed him wrap sheet on myself I was trying to stand but my body was paining like hell somehow I stood n sat in corner crying m hearth out n thinking my parents…

To be continue….

And trust me reader I will Post trust me tomorrow hope so

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54 Comments
  1. Rosey

    wow rabia finally you postted
    and sanskaar is such a devil its so much intense

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  2. Ammu

    Its superb rabia

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  3. U made me wait for so long..finally u updated…plzz don’t disappear again..loved the chappy?

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks n sorry but dont worry now I wont disappear

  4. Plzzzzz update soon i hv a doupt ws she going to be engaged to sahil update soon will be waiting plzźzzźzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cmnt

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear yap she was going to Engaged

  5. Deeksha gupta

    Awsm …

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  6. Simin

    Waah
    First chappy and the devil is ruling

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear n my devil will always rule

  7. Mahavir

    rabiiii dear….it was awesome u know…it was hilarious i know the man is our sanky only…ok post next soon…i ll be waiting for ur update…..love u dear….tc…

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear yap he is only sanky

  8. So bad sanky….poor Swara…
    Bt Amazing part….. Waiting for nxt

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  9. Outstanding

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  10. Awesome start… try to post soon next part

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  11. Chinna

    Superb

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  12. Rabia

    taubaaa rabiaaa itnii devilnesss 😀

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks rabia but its just starting n u found so devilness but what about other epi han

    2. Rabia

      Allah bhala karay maira mujh jaisi baby eyes wali kaa ?????????????

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  13. Arshaanya

    Poor swara feeling so bad for her

    1. Rabia0032

      After knowing sanky past u will feel bad for him more ?

  14. Soujanya

    Awesome

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  15. It’s awesome

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  16. Finally….I’m waiting for next epi…awsm..

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  17. Semran

    It’s awesome. Please continue soon.

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  18. SwaSanFan.Goldie

    Omg. ..such an awsum story…read the Prologue..Intro n Part 1 in One Go..its jst Awsum.oved it..Soo much of suspense wid each Perosn having a Bitter Past..interesting..Lovely story..Plzz Rabia Continue soon..cnt wait n plzz.keep msging me ur bew parts coz its tough to find ur ff as thr r mny ffs wid same bame as urs ..so plz.jst msg me ur ff part link wenever ur update da nxt part..hope its fine wid U ..Continue soon..cnt wait

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear sooo much n yes I will send u the links dont worry

      1. SwaSanFan.Goldie

        Continue soon..cnt wait

  19. SNY

    Awesome dr….
    Nxt one soon..

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  20. interesting…!!

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  21. Simi

    Awesome

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear

  22. Sathya

    Rabia dear….i am just blinking at Sanky’s activity. But the first epi itself is a blast yar. I am pity on Swara now. Pls post next one and this is Masterblaster for the start.

    1. Rabia0032

      Thanks dear soo much ?

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