devakshi:partners for life (chapter#15)

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Chapter#15- THR HEARTBREAK..?

The wedding went well..now it was the last night..
Both of dem were restless…n der heart dint wanted to go apart..
Sonakshi was all in dilemma…why she is feeling like dis…??
Why she wanted to pass tym with dev..?
Why she always think of him…??

But noone answer she got..as her own n favourite pyaar gyaan giving sister had left her..
She couldnt call her n diaturb her sweet honeymoon..
She went to d terrace to got some cool air…
Where she finds nikki n riya sitting sadly..
“What happen..?”she ask both..
They both seeing her immediately clung on her..
“Di..v will miss u…!!”both said in unison..
“Hmm..i will miss u too…?”
“No one will misss me..?”dev said standing on the door..
Dey smiled…n sonakshi said..”will miss u too mr.dixit…*her voice lowered*too much”she said n all stand der watching d stars in silent..
“Di…wat about passing tonight at terrace..?”nikki asked excitedly..
“What…?? I mean how we will..?”
“Hmm let me think…?”nikki said wen neha spoke..
“We will make tent..wat say..? It will b fun tooo..!!”
“Yeah..dats great…!”dev said looking at sona..as he badly wanted to spend his tym with her..
“So grab the bedsheets..pillows from ur room..till den i will make sure of other things..!!”dev said n all were about to left..
“U all forgot me..??”yaa dat is our jattu…
“No u can join too” sona spoke n dey all left excited..again leaving a red..red  dev behind..
Pushing d thought beside..dev went n started his work..

In 15 minutes all came with the materials…
They were going to make a open tent..with a bedsheets roof..
Just d support could b of woods..which dev got from smwhere..

Dev n jatin fixed the woods at 4 corners…
Then sonakshi forwarded a bedsheet to them..
“I m thirsty..will b back with sm snacks n water so..sonakshi u help dev” said jattu n left…
Sonakshi paased d sheet to him…n he opened it…sonakshi grabbed the another side..n dey both arranged…
it was done now…nikki jumped on it to which it tremble a bit..
both were opposite..n falll on d terrace floor..looking at eo both burst out laughng..

After fixing the pillows n all..making it cosy…dey all sat..
While jatin was still not back..
Evry1 forget him totally n went in der own masti…
First neha sat…beside her.. Riya..den sonakshi..
Nikki was about to sit..
“Hey..i m sitting der”dev interpret..
“Why..?”
“I said na i m sitting..wo its cold…na..i wanna go inside..so..”.dev said n jumped beside sonakshi…nikki sat beside..
“So..?”sonakshi ask..
“Wat should v do now..!!???”
“Ummm…antakshari..??”
“Great..!!”

All started to play in der own singing world..
First riya sang den neha..den sonakshi..den nikki..not it was turn for dev..
He has to sing from ‘J’

First he think…kept thinking..
“Chalo leave it..u will not get bhai..u dont listen song..??”nikki said..
Wen…

Jaane kab hoton pe.
Dil ne rakhdi dil ki baatein
Samjha nahi ye dil
Isko ham to rahe samjhate..
Mene dekha tuje bhula kar
Har ek tarkeeb laga kar..
Har nushke ko aazma ke…
Par dilse kabhi na utre..
Utre..utre…

Hangover teri yaadon ka
Hangover teri baaton ka
Hangover teri yaadon ka
Hangover teri baaton ka

Dev sang melodiously while dixit sister’s mouth hung in air as how he knew dis song…n he sang evry word right..but the one for whom he has sung..was just busy n lost in his voice..

Sonakshi..!!

She couldnt stop admiring him…all the tym he was looking at her n singing..as he would b dedicating to her atlast having a glint of blushness to hide it..sonakshi..turned toards neha..

“Its ur turn neha ..!”she said as evry1 came out of d shock..
“Ohhhoo..”neha started but..
“Nai di ‘O’ se nahi gaana hai ‘K’ se gaana hai..”sonakshi said..
“Are nai..i was saying..ohhhoo dev when did u learned songs?”neha cleared d cnfusion
“Means..??”sonakshi asked..
“Di..do u think dis akdu busineas man would b watching movies n listening songs…?? If u think den u vr wrong..coz h dont..n v all r ahock dat ho he knew dis..?”
“Ohhh..ek or rang aaya bahar mr.dixit kaa..”sonakshi said as she chuckled..(one more color of mr.dixit came out).

“Tum hi ho iski wajah miss.bose”(u r only d reason behind ms.bose)dev murmured but no1 could listen..

“Ladies n gentleman..!!”jatin came n all’s attwntion went der..
“Ohh jattu tu kaha tha..?”sonakshi asked..
“Usko maaro goli…see wat i brought…!!”he showed kulfies..
Sonakshi shout..
“Love u yaaar..tysm..!”
As she said..dev eyes widened..his anger reached its peak may be dat was only d reason kulfi melt..?..
Neha saw dat..
“Lets eat..or it will b juice..”neha said..
As dey all had it all..while continued der playing masti..
The whole night. There laughs n giggle could b heard..atlast near 5 alll dozed of..
Making a partition of pillows..jattu n dev slept  right side..while girls at left…

The next morning evry1 woke n got busy with d packing..
Dev’s packing was done so he thought to visit sona..
°°
As sona reached her room..she started to do her packing wen jatin came..
“Sona..guess wat..?”
“Wat..?”
“Juhi maan gayi..!!.?”
“Whatttt…? Matlab.. Juhi maan gayi..mera i mean tera matlab juhi is ready to marryu..matlab..juhi loves u too..matlab pkka..??”sona aske excitedly..
(What…? Means..? Juhi is convinced…u man…juhi is ready to marry u…means..juhi loves u tooo…u meann really..?)
She jumped on himm…*dev enter*
“I love u yaaar..muje pata tha tu kar hi lega(i was knowing u would do it)….love u sooo much..!!”(frndly one ok..)
“Love u toooooo…n ye tere bina nahi hota..(dis wasnt possible without u)”jatin said hugging her back..
Listening dis dev heart break into smalll small pieces..
Tears made its way to his cheeks..he run out of d room silently without both coukd notice n locked himself in d room..
He cried…
Punching the wall he looked at the sky outside d balcony..
“Why..why?? Did u did dis to me..? Wat had i done to u..? She was d one whom i have loved dearly..my first love..n last one…but no ..! U  snatch her from me…!!”he fall on d floor n cried..

While on the other hand..while packing jatin n sona planned so much for another marriage..n sona teach him about how to handle wife’s..der shopping stufff..

The tym flied..with the laughing n giggling sonatin(sona & jatin)..n crying dev..
That was tym for der departure..
Taking der luggage…both went to airport withder family..
Whole tym dev dint look at her…he just looked away wen she called..
Dey all dat is dixit girl n sona n jatin..kept talking n laughing..but dev was numb..evrytym he saw both his eyes welled up but he controlled..

Reaching the airport..
There both families need to part der ways according to d flight..
Sonakshi’s families flight was after a hour..while dixit’s flight was at d tym..
Bidding der bye..sonakshi hugged neha..nikki..riya n ofcourse ishwari too..only after touching her feet..ishwari blessed smilingly..
Wen sona was about to meet dev..he turned n walked away..as he couldnt see in her brown orbs..if he would again he woukd melt..n tear would made its way..
As dev turned..sonakshi felt strange..
Her heartache seeing dev going far..
She called out his name
“dev..”
He stopped…without turning…he replied..
“Bye sonakshi..it was nice meeting u”n he left..
Evry1 was nostalgic going apart…so no1 notice..except neha..she thought to talk to dev after dey reach uk…
Bidding der bye..
Dixit disappear in d crowd…

Sonakshi stand der numb…evrythng was stopped for her..
It hurted how dev ignored her..!
But why..?
She dint knew..!!
All she knew was…she cant see him like dat..!!

THE END..

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So how was it.??
Shocked..?.
Again a unexpected turn..!?
Weelll yeah…its imp for d story to move ahead..
Vote n cmnt..!!
Give ur views regarding it..
Hope it was good..!!
Vote n cmnt..
Thanx for d support..

well the story hadnot ended..
But here n for u all it had..n it did…sorry if u dont like or i just waste ur tymm…
Or if u r hirt with dis rude behaviour of mine..
But sorry i cant CONTINUE ANYMORE…
WELL I DONNO IF U KNOW…BUT I TRULY DONT DESERVE ‘1’ CMNT…DO I..?
IF YES..DEN UR WRONG I DONT..
I JUST CANT BELIEVE…WHY DID U ALL PPL DONT SUPPORT..
WEN I JOINED THIS PAGE..I THOUGHT TO MAOE MANY FRNDS AS I DID..WITH THE TWI PAGE..
BUT I WAS WRONG..
THOUGH I MADE MANY..

THAT IS NIKKI..PRI..MANYA..RITI..SAM DI…RICHA DI..EKANI…DRAMQUEEN..N ETC..
But sorry guys i cant continue anymore..
I write dis before i write my tEI ff..
Where i get almost 30+ cmnt….
But i dont think u all deserve it…
Watever..
Thank u too all who supported me..

THIS STORY ISNT ENDED AS U ALL KNOW..N OFC THE TITLE IS NOT JUSTIFIED..BUT THINK IT AS A END ONLY…DEY APART. N END..BAS..
COZ NEXT IS NOT GOING TO B UPLOADED..
I WILL B WRITING DIS ON WATTPAD..U CAN READ DER..BUT I WILL NOT WASTE MY TYM POSTING HERE AGAIN..N GETTING DISAPOINTED..
WELL U KNOW NEXT PART IS ALREADT POSTED OUT DER..BUT WILL NOT POST HERE..
ITS END FOR U ALL..

–THANX TO EACH N EVRY CMNTATORS WHO SUPPORTED ME..–
THANK U SOOO MUCH..
SORRY IF U FELT HURT WITH MY RUDE BEHAVIOUR..
BUT I TRIED TO B CALM AS MUCH AS I CAN..ITS BEEN 5-6 DAYS I UPLOADED LAST..TILL DEN I WAS CALMING MYSELF SO DAT I WOULDNT B RUDE..BUT CANT HOLE ANYMORE..

WELL IF U LIKE MY SINGLE CHAPTER..PLS CMNT…
PLS..PLSSS…
IT TAKES TYM..N HARDWORK TO ENTERTAIN U ALL..
WELL I WOULDNOT FORCE UTHOUGH…
I GET MUCH LOVE N CMNTS FROM OTHER PAGE..N I WOULD LIKE TO B TILL DER..NO MORE HERE..
M LEAVING DIS PAGE..
BUT DONT WRRY..
MANYA..I WOULD B READING URS FOR SURE..N SAM DI’S N RITI DI’S FF I READ ON WATT..SO PROBLEM SOLVED..
BAHBYE..

Loads of love..

-Ammu

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24 Comments
  1. Superb writing
    In love with ur ff
    Don’t stop writing

  2. Ridzzzz

    Hey it was the sad ending but i had njoyed ur story it was nyc

    1. Aamu

      It isnt ended dear..but i had stop posting here

  3. Muthash

    Oh…no… your story has always been so interesting with a very beautiful plot. I have always been waiting till you post the next episode. Pls, do not stop posting here. I request as a sincere reader of your ff. Also, I do not have wattpad. Just like todays episode, your decision is also a HEARTBREAK for us….

    1. Muthash

      I started an account on wattpad….

    2. Aamu

      Thank u so much sear..glad to have a reader like u….
      Sachchi it means alot..
      N sorry for d rude behaviour…
      But i was so sad..with d response n i jad to…
      Well m glad u r kn wattpad..
      Did u find my book out der..if not..
      Go to my username-Aamu031
      N u will get der..or giveme ur username..
      Again thank u..thank u soo much

      1. Muthash

        I found yours there. Btw, my user name Muthash

  4. Ekani

    u know i am very sad after reading ur decision..it hurts it really hurts…but i can understand ur problem…i know how it feel when u get just 1-2 comments for ur ff…but i really wish u to continue with ur ff on TU…& u don’t worry i’m gonna read ur story from”, wattpad…& about the episode it is really very emotional & hurt touching…i can’t see dev in such position…hope u r gonna clear all misunderstandings very soon..love u

    1. Aamu

      Sorry dear to hurt u..buy being a writer u can understand my problem too…
      Spending almost 2-3 hour…we get 1 cmnt..
      It really hurts..welll yeah u can read on wattpad..next chapter is alreadyposted out der..
      Love usoo.uch dear

  5. Akshita

    Gey i dont use wattpad yr????plzz dont stop posting

    1. Aamu

      Sorry akshita..but i cant continue anynore here…..
      It hurts..getting low cmnts…
      Sorrry..
      Welll thank u soo much for supportin my story??

      1. Akshita

        Can you send me link if wattpad?? So that follow the story there??

  6. Plsss don’t end ittt plsss

    1. Aamu

      Sorry dear..but i cant post here anynore…
      It hurts getting no response after hardworking n spending 2-3 hours on one chapter..
      Well u can read on wattpad if uwant to…my id is- Aamu031
      U can find d story in my works

  7. MANSINAIK

    Feeling sad for devakshi
    Nice
    Post asap

    1. Aamu

      Sorry it is not going to cntinue anymore…dint u read d note at d end
      Well thank u for d support

      1. MANSINAIK

        Pls don’t stop posting pls pls ?

  8. What is wattapad
    Hw to find ur f2f there

    1. Aamu

      Its a app dear…
      Little bit same as TU..der u can write n read both about evry couple..n with many category..not only fanfictions..but also others..

      N der u have to search my username- Aamu031
      Den follow me..n u will.get my story inmy profile..

  9. Please don’t stop writing here.please please.????.
    We are sorry for not commenting.
    But please don’t stop writing here .
    Please please ???
    ???
    ?????
    ??
    Please don’t.

  10. DramaQueen1004

    Assalamualaikum di
    Pls hamare liye… Mere liye ye ff end mat kijiye.. pls pls pls
    This epi was really nice
    M really looking forward to read d nextbn thanks for d info dat d next is uploaded in wattpad….
    Love u loads
    Nafia

    1. DramaQueen1004

      Waise I just finished reading d next in wattpad
      I don’t have an account so wasn’t able to comment there
      So I thought to comment here
      I really loved d epi
      Finally Sona realised
      Pls post soon

    2. Aamu

      Tysm…dear …
      I . really happy to have a reader like u…but sorry i cant continue ANYMORE…..
      It hurts again n again..getting such a low response…
      It takes our energy,time both…
      Sorry icant….

      Welll yaaa i will tell u through pm wen i wil post next…u can read…den…like dis only..if u want too..
      Love u soomuch..thank u again??

      1. DramaQueen1004

        Then dats fine
        Actually I don’t check wattpad so if u cud pm me when u will post it would be fine
        Tu or wattpad… Where ever I read.. as long as I can read Ur ff it doesn’t matter

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