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DevAkshi: Partners for Life (CHAPTER #5)

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(A/N:i m reallly sorry for d late update..i was busy..hope dis will b enough for d late post…enjoy..😊
Hope u like it..)

CHAPTER:5 -GROWING BOND..πŸ’•

DevAkshi after a long drive landed from airport to sona’s palace…i mean bose palace..yaa dey hav a house in thailand as dey visit here frequently…
Dey met der respective family…n sona leave to her rooom which is fixed on 2 floor…at d corner…sona whenever she cm here…she stay in dat rooom as no-one can disturb her in her work…yah..! Sona work during vacations also….dev,also as a working man was given room.beside sona only…
It was 1 when dey reach der…after having lunch all retired to der own roooms…as dey hav no work…d marriage rituals were starting after 5 days…so dey hav a lone time…
Sona,in her room instead of resting after a long flight…work as she had to make a chart fo naina(orphanage gurl who got accident) as dr.instructed to…so she was busy in dat..n dev was having a bit work which was left..n den he had not much work…as per his mothers order he was not allowed to work more ….
Nearly 5’o clock..
Dev had finishes his work so he left to where evry1 was…youngsters were in elena’s rooom n alll d oldies were in bijoy n asha’s roomm…
So dev went to elena’s room…where he dont find sona..on asking he got to know dat she,as always would b working…so he left to her room..to get her…on insist of elena…as dey wanna go out to enjoy as dey had tym…

Dev knock at her door…
“Yes,cm in…”came sona’s reply…
Dev went in..
“Mr.dixit..u here..? Anywork..?”sona askes standin up from her table..
“First thing…its Dev for u…n second..cant i cm to meeet my frnd without reason”he replied giving her a cheesy smile to which she smiled..
“Ok dev…nah..!u can cm whenever u want to meet ur frnd..πŸ˜‰..without any reason..!”she said..
“Haan..! I know but i had cm with a reason…now..”he said while she look at him..
“Actually i thought dat i m d only one who work n his family is irritated with dis behaviour…but in dis also i have a partner..”dev said while sona just chuckle..
“Come-on sonakshi..dis is ur sister’s wedding place..n u cant work here…i had also dropped d plan of working dis tymm…we alll should enjoy..as v all will b busy after 3-4 days..n most imp..we…”dev said trying to convince..
“Ey..! I m not gonna work…its js i hav to make a chart for naina…which is almost done…now i hav to send rakesh through mail…den alll free….n den v can surely enjoy..juzt wait a min”
“Hmm…haash”he sigh a releif..
After 5 minutes both leave for elena’s room…to make a plan to where to go…
N after a lot of thinking comcluded to go to beach…
So dey alll went to get ready…
All girls dat is riya,elena,nikki,sona n neha wore same outfit…which dey bought after d engagement..

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Dev was mesmerized with d beautyqueen..alll girls were wearing same but his eyes was only on sona…but sooon he recovered..with elena’s voice..
“Sona..i had took ur camera for video…i wanna capture evry moment before my marriage…”she said excitedly..
“Aww…di i was going to tell only to u…n i had took my camera tooo for picture clicking…u will take videos n i’ll take picture…yay…perfect”nikki jumped in excitement…
“Oo ms.perfect…wait…dats not ur camera dats dev bhai’s camera…”riya corrected while nikki shows her toungue…all laugh at der cute antincs
N
Dey all leave for d beach by 7….
Elders were going to see some halll for d rituals so youngsters only went der…
Dey reach at d beach..it was already getting dark…

D view was amazing…making it perfect,very few peoples were der as it was getting dark…

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Near d beach der was long coconut n date trees…😍  which makeΒ  d view pleasurable

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Sona,riya,niki,neha n elena…run to d water n start playing with eo…making each other alll wet…n throughing clay balls at each other…as kids do…soon vickey also joined after fixing d video camera to capture der moments…..but dev was standing der only admiring dem…oh correction..!!..he was admiring sona..ofcourse unknowingly…
He was looking at her antics…n d smalll girl in her…she is stilll a kid..n cute too..he thought…but came out of his trance wen he noticed sona holding him n pulling him to d water…
“Hey….wait…pls wait…i cant go..”he said..
“Oh c’mon dev…if u dont wanna get wet n play..den y did u accept to cm here…? N u have to join us…”she said sternly
“Sona…i cant..”he said trying to convince her..
“No….pls u hav to cm…dont u want to hav a beautiful smile on d couple…(signig towards elena…n vicky who was making sad faces..)..plsh..na..”she said pouting..
“But…i”before he could say..
“Pls…dont u count me as a friend…??…pls na…!its ur frnds first request…pls”sona said n make a sad face..
“Okay..i m cming..”dev said relucantly…as he know dat he remembered his childhood memory..
Dat is…once dey were on a beach(dixits family)…alll kids..dat is only dev,neha,n vicky…niki n riya were not there..dey played in watrr..n d very second day…dev had caught high fever…it lasted for 3-4 days…so he was restrictes from den to get wet for sm personal diseases from der family doctor…
Dats y he was not accepting..he trued to say to sona but she dint let him to do so…so he went der…neha was shocked as she knew dat..n vicky was busy with his fiancee
Niki was clicking picture n video was already started..
Den d real fun begin…

Vicky n elena were in der own world n far from dem…to spend sm.lone tym…
Neha,riya,niki,sona n dev were playing jz like dat..
Wen niki suddenly throw a clay ball on dev..
He got shock n den smirk evilly…
He take another n throw on nikki but nikki is nikki…she bent and it landed on sona who was behind her…nikki laughs…n sona’s eyes wide open..
“Tumi…..wait i’ll show u”sona shouted n throw on him…
Der d clay fight begin…
Neha got retired..n landed on d island soil…
Nikki n riya got busy in der selfies…
N elena n vicky was already not der..
“I m alll muddy now…bcoz of u..”sona said irritated..
“Oh…dat was not my fault…it was of nikki..”he defend himself..
“Watever..now help me “sona said pouring d water on her to get out of d muddy avtaar…
“Hmm..wait..”he said n smike mischeviously..
He throw water on her like playing…
She got shocked…

“Aooowww…i said to helpme not to do dis…mr.dixit..now wait”she said
N throw on him…she throws n throw n move towards him so dat he go more water…
Dev was jz laughing at her reaction till now…which she gave wen he throw..
She moves towards him..when he holds her both hands…n pull…so dat she cant throw more..
“Now ms.bose….how will u throw..”he said huskily in her ears…
Her breath hitched n his heart skipped a beat..as dey got more close….
But der moment got disturbed wen nikki capture d pic…
Dey felt embarass…n part away..
“Wah…bhai…dis was shocking..! But amazing..u stopped sona di by holding her hands…wah..”nikki shouted excitedly…devakshi clean demself…n dey notice d tym…dat was 9 already..
“I m not hungry…”sona said as dey said to hav dinner..
“I m also not..”
“I m having sm snacks…it’ll work..”
“N i m having sm colddrink”
Alls said…

N dey plan to not to go any restaurant fo dinner…so dey decided to hav sm light snacks n colddrink…which neha n elena had brough…
Dey landed on d mattres which dey had bought n decided to play Truth n dare….
N d game begin…
First it landed on vicky…n neha…had to give him
“So truth or dare..bhai..?”neha ask mischeviously..
“I m men…n i can do anything…ofcourse dare…”vicky said overconfidently…
“Propose elena bhabi”she replied abruptly to whicj vicky got shock n gulped..but accepted….
He propose elena..n dey both blush
Now again…d bottle was spinned..n it landed to dev n nikki had to ask..
“Truth or dare bhai..?”she asked..
“Truth…i dont trust u all…with dare”he said n chuckle left through sona’s mouth to whicv wink her..
“Wat is love for u?”she ask..after winking to riya..
“Wat..?”dev go shock n he hitched..
“Yaa…u dont share dis things with us na..! N i think its ur age to get marry…so v will hav to find na..!”nikki said while sona laugh..
“Seriously…? He dont share d things like dis..?”sona asked..
“Nah..di..he is a secretive boy…infacti m shocked y he played in water as he never do dis..!”riya said eying him….while dev eye sona..
“Ok..back to truth..calo bhai tell me wat is love for u… N which type og girl u want”
“Okay..but i’ll tell in shortΒ  “dev said..
N dey complied him
“Hmm..love is something different for me…very special..it is a beautiful feeling..n ofcourse i want to love someone..very deeply…n i love d girl who loves me n my heart…not my status n money…she would love my evry actions..i want a frnd in her..n hooe i get her sooon”dev gave his thoughts…making sm eye contact with sona…in btwn…neha saw it..n understand she smiles…
Again it was spinned…

It landed on riya n sona had to tell her..
“Truth or dare..??”son asked…
“Umm….truth..?..nah wait dare…”she said excitedly…
“Can i give her..?pls..”dev said…while sona think n den agree…
“No bhai…i m taking truth…i very wellknow wat u will giv for dare..”riya said…
“Nah..! Not possible…u chose darw..”dev said smirking buy den sona said dat let it b..
Den game continues…
Aftrr smtym it lnded on sona..n she chose dare…
It was neha’s turn to gave her..
“Hug n kiss any men from here…dev or vicky…”
Sona shocked n vicky stand up with dev…both were in line..first dev den vicky..
Both were nervous..dat is devakshi…not ofcourse vicky…
Sona went towards dem…she was nervous…she stopped at dev..she wannto hug him but she cant..n its bad…she brushes her thoughts callimg it naughty n hug vicky n before she can kiss him on cheeks..
“Dare over”neha shouted..
She was jz checking..she saw nervous sonakshi…n saw dat she wanna hug dev but its oppose her culture n she cant jz do it…he had met her today only…neha had always liked sona..n seeing devakshi like dis she was sure dat sonakshi would b a perfect girl for dev….d words dev said about love…dat was like jst it was said for her dat is sonakshi she smiled n thought to do smthng…
N den alll gang left for d place as it was already late….
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So how was it..?
Hope u guys liked it..!
I m sorry for late uodate..it is going to cmplt a week tomorrow…sorry i was really busy…
Sorry again..
Hope dis epi’s devakshi scenes was enough n length was enough tooo…
I m really busy..i’ll surely try to post enxt one sooon…

Precap:care…πŸ’•..??of whom…?? Guesss…n lemme know toooπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰

Here is d link to previos chapters

http://www.tellyupdates.com/devakshi-partners-life-character-sketch/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/devakshi-partners-life-chapter-1/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/devakshi-partners-life-chapter-2/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/devakshi-partners-life-chapter-3/

http://www.tellyupdates.com/devakshi-partners-life-chapter-4/

Hope u liked dis alll…
Pls cmnts guys..it jz need 1-2 minutes…pls…only a word..?

N ya m really sorry for cmntng on all ur ff so late…but m tryin my level best yo read n cmnt….m really very busy..again sorry for late posting…
I will post next soooon….may b sunday..? Or monday…? Or tuesday..!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Pkka till tuesday i’ll post it..
So giv me ur views n oppinion below…😘
Love u alllll…
N could u alll pls telllme ur birthdates…nah..! Its not imp…but i jz need to know n years too so i can know who r elder dan me n who r not..!?
Js getting a friendly atmosphere..πŸ˜‰
Love yaaπŸ’—πŸ’•

21 Comments
  1. ShrutiP

    Hey aamu…Was waiting for your ff from a long time…
    Dev has started falling for Sona and Sona also wants to hug Dev…
    Everything was perfect just perfect…
    Loved it to the core..
    Abhi zyada wait math karvana …
    Post soon…
    Love you😊😊😊
    Shruti(30-9-2000)

    1. ShrutiP

      Hey Aamu …
      Abhi Comments mein padha meine ki tum admitted ho…dhyan rakho apna…
      Take good care of yourself…
      Love you…
      😊😊😊

      1. Aamu

        Yup yaaaar….
        Aaj hi admit kiya……
        2-3 din m discharge ho jaunggi….den i’ll try to post n sorrry i even cant read any ff….as i m not able to write dis is also Aamu’s sissy….
        So sorrry from her…😊
        N thanx…glad u likd it ..

      2. ShrutiP

        It’s OK ….baaki sabki chinta chodo…kyuki sabse zyada important health hain…isliye apna khayal rakhna..Aur agar discharge ho jao to bata Dena…
        Take care….
        Love you loads…😊😊😊

  2. awesome postsoon
    care of dev due high fever form playing in water sona care for him

  3. DramaQueen1004

    Hi aamu
    This epi was just fab…
    Devakshi scenes were really cute…
    My bday is on April 10 2003
    So im in ninth
    I think u r elder than me
    btw how old r u?

    1. DramaQueen1004

      Yay!!! Im d first commentor!

  4. Sgatik

    Lovely episode. Pls post soon.

  5. Rekhadhir

    nice…post soon…

  6. Priya12

    What is this yaar…itni late …I missed u and ur ff a lot…
    I was searching for u in tu as well as in wattpad too..
    The epi was amazing…splendid…
    I luved it…
    Devakshi chit chat…aww
    And truth or dare game part…superbbb
    Dev got drenched in water 4 sona…even he didn’t worry about becming ill…wow..
    I didn’t find it as a long..I found it as a small epi…what 2 do…
    I don’t want 2 end reading this epi…but u ended it…
    And ur saying that ur gng 2 post on Tuesday
    This is not fair dr…
    Pls post atleast Tuesday
    Plss post asap…I m eagerly waiting 4 it..
    My bday..12 10 2002…
    When is urs dr?.

  7. Nehal

    Hi aamu the episode was so amazing I am waiting for the next part and yeah my bday is on 27march2001

  8. Richa144

    Dev is going to be sick. N Sona will take care of him..(Feb 1992)

  9. Darshana

    Hey the episode was awesome…
    the way u described the scenes was πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ…
    i really love it..but ya pls post by Tuesday…don’t delay!..its hard to wait😊😁
    my birthday is on17th Feb and i am born on2002..so am i younger than u?..i guess so!πŸ˜‰
    love u😘

  10. Akshita

    Woowwww
    I was soo happy when the name of your ff flashed….indeed loved it to coreπŸ’–πŸ˜
    plzzz post jldi krna is week mae
    Nd yes I am 18 years old
    my birthday is on 4th Nov, 1998
    I’ll be turning 19 this year 😊

    1. Aamu

      Thanx akshita…
      I will try coz m i got sick…dr. Told to get admitted…
      So i dont think i would b able to post sooon..
      But i’ll surely try…
      N guess wat ..my bday is 3 november…bu i was born in 2001…
      So should i calll u di???
      Love yaaa

      1. hey that’s my elder sis birthday. but she was born on 1993. get well soon. sab aajkaal kuch jaida bimaar hai. take care of yourself.
        love u
        😍😘😍

      2. Akshita

        Yeah he ammu you can call me Dii 😊

  11. awesome. everything is just perfectπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
    post soon. and my birthday is on 20th July 2002

  12. Riti1107

    Aamu u r writing an ff !!!
    (assuming u r the same Aamu who comments on & off on my ff)
    I was looking at this ff from quite some time & was thinking of reading it someday
    Finally I did it today
    & Maza aa gaya

    I increased the population of the world on world’s population day I.e. 11th July in 1999
    (Such a dramatic answer of mine) πŸ˜‹πŸ˜‹

    1. Aamu

      Ya..m d same one…
      Glad u liked it..!😊…
      Hehe…u r elder dam me…dan should i call u di..??
      I cried for d first tym on ,3 november 2001πŸ˜‰

  13. V.V.harshita

    Awesome plzs post soon…and srry fr late comment

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