Devakshi OS#happy DEVAKSHI#happy family

Hi guys!!ayushi is back!!but with an OS for u all?!!its a happy wala OS!!i hope u all like it!!
Do comment plzzz
So 3……2……..choo
Devakshi are happily married!!there is no PWR,chikchikoy,GKB and Vicky!!
It was a bright morning!!the sunrays fall on a beautiful couple!!ofc that’s DEVAKSHI??!!who are peacefully sleeping in each other’s embrace(Subah Ho gyi hai mamu Uth jaao??)Sona wakes up first!!
Sona’s PoV

Awww!!!!mr obhodro looks so cute while sleeping just like a cute puppy!!but jab uthega toh…………..puppy se doggy ban jaayega!!but whatever I love him!!?Afterall he is hot,dashing,cute,tall,dark,handsome and most importantly he is mine!!only mine??(le le maze beta PWR jo nhi hai mere OS mein?) but when i look at the wall clock??I get shocked!!!
Sona:Dev get up!!get up!!sona Tumi ekdum boka!!itna kaise so Sakti hai Tu!!(get up Dev)
Dev:Kya Hua??eathquake aa gya Kya??(what happened!!earthquake or something)
Sona:nhi lekin agar tum bed se nhi uthe toh Zarur aa jaayega!!chalo Jaldi!!! (Not until now but if u don’t then it will surely come)
Sona:main bathroom jaa Rahi hoon!!meri coffee ready rakhna!!(I am going to the washroom!!make my coffee)
Dev:Aaj toh tumhari turn thi Na?? (Wasn’t it ur turn??)
(Dev and Sona had made a rule for working!!they worked alternatively!!one day Dev!!one day Sonakshi)
Sona’s PoV
Iss yaad tha(he remembered)??
Dev:ABCD bolne Ko nhi kaha!!it is ur turn!! Now go and prepare the breakfast for me!! (I haven’t told u to say ABCD!!i am going and u prepare breakfast for me)
Sona:Dev plzzzz!! Plzzzz!!plzzz!!plzzzzz!!plzzzz!!plzzzzz!!plzzzzz!plzzzz!plzz!plzzz!plzzzzzzzzzz

Dev:ok fine!!but interest lagega?? (Interest)
Sona:ok fine!!i am going!!
After some time Sona came out and went to the kitchen!!
Sona:done Dev??
Dev:yes madam!!here’s ur coffee and here’s ur breakfast!!
Sona:Thanku!!(sips coffee) yeh toh achi nhi hai!!(it’s not good)
Dev becomes sad!!
Sona:bahut achi hai!!now go for shower!! (It’s very good)
Dev:but pehle interest!! (But the interest first)
Sona:kaisa interest???(which one?)
Dev:kaam karne ka?? (For the work)
Sona:bolo Kya Chahiye??(what do I want)
Dev points towards his lips!! An leans over her!! But Sona runs away
Dev:Sona!!cheating!!this is not done yaar
Sona:I have not said no!!but pehle jaao shower lo aur brush Karo!!
Dev:ok fine!!! But Meri kiss ready rakhna!! Main yoon Gaya aur yoon aaya
Sona:but brush ache se Karna!!

Dev:ji mere aaka aur koi hukum!!
Sona:abhi ke liye itna hi Gulaam ??
Dev goes for the shower and comes down!!but he doesn’t find Sona there instead he finds a note!!
Dear patidev,
Main kaha tha brush ache se Karna magar ek ghanta lagane Ko nhi kaha tha!!main mere appointments ke liye late Ho Chuki hoon!!sorry!!raat Ko milenge toh jitna interest lagana ha laga Lena!!?(I told u to brush properly not to stay for an hour in the washroom!!i am already late for my appointments!!i am going now!!but u can take how much interest u want at night)
Ur dearest wifey!!
Dev:not fair Mrs Dixit!!apko yeh interest bahut mehnga padega!!
Dev goes to office!!and has back to back meetings!!whereas Sona had back to back appointments!!
Lunch break!!dev calls Sona
Sona:hello patidev!!
Sona:ab tak naaraz Ho!!
Sona:tumhari hi toh galti thi!!
Sona:ek toh galti upar se……….upar se………
Sona:chalo tum bole toh Sahi!!!

Dev:miss khargosh aapko yeh interest bahut mehnga padega!!
Sona:oho!!toh Aisa plan hai Apka!!
Dev:ji Haan !!!aisa hi plan hai!!
Sona;:ok bye!!
Sona reaches home!! She expected it to be decorated and all(tum Sab ne bhi socha tha Na?)but no decorations!!no lights!!
Sona:obhodro Dixit!!
Dev:aap mere baare mein kuch keh Rahi thi!! (U were saying something about me)
Sona:nhi main apne pati ke baare mein keh Rahi thi!!apko pata hai ekdum obhodro!!(no I was talking about my hubby!!obhodro)
Dev:acha!!main obhodro hoon (ohh!so i am obhodro)
Sona:Maine apke baare mein kab kaha!!main toh apne pati ki baat Kar Rahi thi!! (When was I talking about u!!it was for my hubby)
And they start running here and there!! Dev finally catches her!!takes her to the bed and closes the door(aankhein band karne ki zarurat nhi Darwaza band Ho gya Hai??)
In the morning!!dev wakes up and kisses Sona’s forehead
Dev:good morning!!
Sona:good morning!!
Dev: I love u!!
Sona:I love u more!!
After six years
A girl comes running to Dev
G:papa!!see no!!golu is fighting with me!!
Just then a boy comes running!!

B:papa she is lying!! I am not fighting with her
G:LIAR!!LIAR!!PANTS on fire!!
B:mere pant pe Fire nhi hai Matlab main liar nhi hoon (I don’t have fire on my pant that means I am not the liar)
Just then Sona comes
Sona:Kya Hua??soha!!golu!! Don’t fight with each other!! I r brother and sister no!!(so DEVAKSHI were blessed with twins Soha and Golu)
Dev:sorry bolo (say sorry)
Golu:it’s okay!!
Soha:papa yeh sorry nhi Bol raha!! (He is not saying sorry)
Soha:it’s okay!!
Dev:hug Karo!! (Hug each other)
They hug each other and Dev too beds and hugs them!!
Sona:Mujhe bhool gye!! (U forgot me)
Sona:abhi Aayi (coming)
And at last a cute family hug???
Kaisa tha guys!!???
I hope u all enjoyed it!! Plzzz Do comment??
Ache ache comments plzzz?
Will post the ff soon
Love u all

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  1. Richa144

    Too cute.. I wish yeh such hota

    1. Manya

      Thanks Richa?

  2. Priya12

    Luved it ayushi…superbbb
    Short and sweet os dr..
    Perfect family…
    Pls come back with another os like this…
    And when is ur scl?..4 me april 6…only 3 days more…leave is gng so fastly..not enough 4 me..

    1. Manya

      Thanks Priya??
      Will try to come up with another one
      My result is on 6th and school from 10th but tuitions from today?

  3. Loving os. Super.

    1. Manya


  4. Nikkita0194

    Ayu amazing cho chweet cho cute family
    Chota that PR pyara tha kuki Sab happy hai n mai bhi hu
    But iske bad no post soon tumhare tuition s shuru ho rahe hai na
    For bhi post soon

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot Niks??
      It’s okay yaar Mera mind refresh Ho jaayega likh Kar??
      Will post the the ff soon

  5. Sooooo cuteee….lovely….??
    Cute happy family….naa jaane serial mein kab hoga aisa…??
    Wahan toh jhand machi hui hai..devakshi ki life ki…??
    But loved this os..????
    Love love…?

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot Vaishali?
      Haan pata nhi kab hoga Aisa??
      Love love?

  6. Rj12

    Awwwwww Chweet Chweet happy family

    1. Manya

      Thanks Ritika??
      And ff 15th part pe pahunch Chuka hai!!padhlo and where’s ur ff??

      1. Rj12

        Stuck in traffic jam ?

  7. Akshita

    Awwwww such a cute one ayushi☺?

    1. Manya

      Thanks Akshita?

      1. Akshita

        Abh khush maine dp lgali vaise i am also a big RK fan??

    2. Manya

      Hi5??and yeah I told u ur dp is awesome??

      1. Akshita


  8. Niki645

    So cute!!! I loved this sweet OS!???

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot niki??

  9. Lizaa


    1. Manya

      Thanks Lizaa??

  10. Aarti32

    Sooooooooooooooooooooo cute??
    I’m gonna use your liar liar dialogue in my new ff..If u allow me ?

    1. Manya

      Ofc Di puchne ki koi zarurat nhi hai??aur bhi koi Karna Ho toh Bina puche bhi Kar sakte Ho?
      Thanks Di?

      1. Aarti32

        Aww..thank u Mannu ??

  11. Fuggysona

    hey wow sooo superbna
    i really enjoyed it
    hope it is true…
    then the best happiness is only this…
    well done ayushi
    and thank u for this sweet os…

    1. Manya

      Thanks thanks thanks❤️❤️❤️

  12. Nice

    1. Manya


  13. Riti1107

    Too cute❤

    1. Manya

      Thanks riti❤️

  14. ShrutiP

    Awesome ayushi…???

    1. Manya

      Thanks Shruti??

  15. Heshine

    Sorry for the delay Ayushi…!! This one was such cute….awesome….wonderful…..amazing…..os……loved it dear..!!????❤❤❤haha…their rules and dev’s interest was epic..pls do com up with more is like this…!! Love u dear…!!❤❤????

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot❤️❤️?
      Will surely try to come up with other such things??

  16. It was tooo cute ayushi?
    Kash ye sach hotaaa??
    Keep writing.. ??

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot angrita??
      I write an ff too!!ae dil Hai mushkil!!if u get time to read it ??

  17. Shaani

    Aaw.ww… This is sooo cute story yaar… Evry nice.. Loved it .. Great work..

    1. Manya

      Thanku so much??
      I will pm u if u put up any other OS
      And yeah I write an ff too ae dil hai mushkil u can read it if u want

  18. Rekhadhir

    Nice story kash ye sach main hota???

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot??I too wish yeh sach mein hota??

  19. Swarna494

    Manya ,very nice one.. U’ve written this in a way as the charm of devakshi will never fade…

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot Swarna???
      I have written one more oh it’s ur bday!!do read If u want??

  20. Sriya

    It is soooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet cute fabulous this line is for you from my fav song -“only you could set my heart on fire” if you listened love me like you do by ellie goulding then you would know the whole song.
    Love you!!
    Thank you!>3 for telling me i’m going to read the other ones also in one go. Luckily there was no one except devakshi sona and golu!!

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot❤️❤️
      No probs Sriya?
      Love u more?

  21. Muthash

    So cute…..:)

    1. Manya

      Thanks a lot❤️

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