Devakshi.. Happily Married (1)

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Here goes the update:

Dev woke up early and is looking lovingly at sonakshi and says…Kitni sundar hai na meri sona.. Har vakt sundar hi lagti hai… Sote hue bhi, ladte hue bhi, gussa hote hue bhi, irritate hote hue bhi, aur sharmate hue to sabse jyaada. Uff mrs. Khargosh i love u till infinity…
Sona opens one eye, giggles and says… Itna hi pyar karte ho mujhse. Main toh aur bhi jyaada karti hun.. Mr. Dev Dixit i love u…. Ummmm…infinity times infinity… hihihihi
Dev makes a tum-kab-uth-gayi wala face and says…Mrs. Dixit i think aap bhool rahi hain ki infinity times infinity bhi infinity hi hota hai .(smirks and sona makes faces).. I know i love you more than u do…kyunki pata hai mera sona na heere se bhi jyaada chamakta hai…
He smiles and sona too …. ( this: i love u more wala thing happens almost daily).. Sonakshi gets up from the bed and wears her sandals… Dev too gets up… Both freshen up… And wait for each other till both are ready…. After this the both get down the stairs holding hands and sona says…. Dev aapko yaad hai naa…kal jo maine aapko kaha??( with questioning eyes)
Dev says… Kya kaha tha i love you.. Vo toh aaj bhi kaha tha na …
Sona says irritatingly… Bhak!!
Dev- you dont!!!( shouts). …????
Neeche se mamji clears his throat… . Devakshi had not noticed every body downstairs … Devakshi embarrased..
Sona says softly …. Maine kab kaha??? Main toh yeh keh rahi thi….ki….
Dev starts giggling
Sona- devvvvvvv!!!!( shouts)
Mamaji neeche se ..- again clears his throat
Devakshi again embarrassed….
Sona- aese thodi naa karte hain…aapko aesa nahi karna chahiye .. Kya bekkar majaak tha… Kuch bhi haan … Kuch bhii? Dev cuts her.. shhhhh
Dev- haan.. Haan yaad hai.. Maa ko bata deta hun aur tina ko bhi …
Sona- Ab isme Tina kya karegi
Dev- tina se jealousy… Ish wifey.. Ishhh… ( sona makes a face)….alright ab muh mat banao… Tina ko toh batana hi padega .. Flight tickets kaun book karega…
Sona- toh phir theek hai( possessively)
Dev( smirks) – possessiveness huh??? I like it

They had reached down by now and sona went inka-kuch-nahi-ho-sakta-wala look ke saath into the kitchen… Dev sits on the chair.. Every body is there for breakfast…and nikki sings aloud * jab tum chaho paas aate ho.. Jab tum chaho door jaate ho.. (( dev looking at her angrily and sona suddenly turns hearing this)).. Chalti hamesha marji tumha* dev cuts her – chal bas kar nikki!!!
Mamji- haan bhai… Bechare dono miya-biwi ko kyun pareshan kar rahe ho..(smirks)…
Riya- Nikki…subah subah achha jaye naa toh poora din achha jata hai.. Agar romance nahi toh bhai ka kyaaaaaaa ( devakshi embarassed)
Ishwari(in the kitchen)- chup karo aap teeno bhi.. (nikki- sorry maa… Riya, mamaji with sorry-wala-look) Har din taang khichte rehte ho….(puts her hand on sona head) …. . Pyar hi toh kar rahe hai.( dev and siona smile)… Bas sabke saamne… Starts laughing… Every body laughs
Dev and sona together- Maa aap bhi!!!!!!
Ishwari ( stops laughing )- toh bata kya keh raha tha tu meri sona se stairs pe????( questioning eyes)
Dev ( straightening himself)- haan voohhh( slowly slowly)
Sona – maa voh mujhe nanaji aur naniji ne ghar bulaya hai … Kaha hai ki jamai ko saath lete aana… I mean Dev ko
Ishwari- toh galat kya hai isme ??? Dev ko toh jaana chahiye.. Dev ne hi mana kiya ho gaa… Devvvvv( comes and twists his ear) kyun nahi jaata…
Dev- arre maine toh kuch nahi kaha…..arre maΓ aaa arre arre!!!!
Sona -(rushing) maa inhone kuch nahi kaha…
Ishwari- ( twists more… Dev- aaaah)kuch nahi kahan… Beta sochna bhi padha tujhe iss baat pe(nikki riya laughing hard)
Sona- mera mmatlab hai ki inhone kaha maa se baat karni padegi
Ishwari leaves suddenly realising what she was she was doing without knowing the reason…
*nikki and riya*
Nikki- pata hai bhabi naa saviour hai.. Maa jab bhi mujhe daat ti hain bhabi aa ke bacha leti hai …
Riya- mujhe bhi …
Hi five…
**dev listens this**
Dev- par pata hai nikki mere case mein bhabi ke karan hi mujhe daat padti hai … Bachana toh bharppayi hoti hai… ( makes a sad face) ** mamaji laughing hard** aap ko bohot hasi aa rahi hai mamaji
Sona- aaaawwweee .. Mera hubby itna cute hai..( brings in fruits and orange juice).makes him drink orange juice ….
Nikki singing aloud ***love is in the airrr***
Ishwari-ek minute nikki …. Baad mein satana inhe*devakshi yeh-kya-tha-wala look*toh jaao nnaaa…puchne ki kya baat hai
Dev- kolkata…
Sona-…..jana hai …
Ishwari-… Toh jaaoo
Sona- thank u … Waise aapme se koi chaalega saath ..kyonki wahan durga puja aane wali hai naa..* dev- nahi only we too wala look** sona- koi nahi jaane wala look*
Nikki and riya- hands straight into the air…
*dev nd sona look horrified to each other **dev- tumhari galti wala look*
Ishwari – nahi .. Bilkul nahi.. College nahi hai kya tum dono ki??
*sona-dekha kaha tha na koi nahi jaane wala look**dev- youre always right wala look*
Nikki- innocently….. – nahi maa uss samay chhutti hai..a bhi abhi exams khatam hue hain naa isliye..
Ishwari- thik hai jaao
*sona- im sooo sorry wala look*
*dev- vishwaas tod diya wala look*
All eaten their breakfast
Dev- making faces- main chalta hun
Touches ishwari’s feet… Says bye to all…. Dev- sonakshi ek baar aana room main-.sona goes
Everybody smile at their gesture…
Sona in the room- sorry sorry sorry sorry sorryyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!
Dev-its okay *still sad puppy face*mujhe kuch chahiye..
Sona- kya??
Dev- points to his cheeks… Ek kiss
Sona- woh toh aese hi mil jaata ..kisses him ….chalo ab jao aap… Yaad rrakhna tickets for 4*smirks*ab toh woh log jaa kar hi rahenge…dev-bye .. Starts leaving
Sona- ek min… Rule tha naa ki saare problems solve kar ke kaam kee liye niklenge… Toh smile
Dev-smiles and says- youre the best mrs.dixit… Bye
Leaves .. Dev

I know ki bohot kam progress hua iss shot mein but i hope u all will like it

Next epi: Sonakshi, nikki, riya packing for going… accompanied by elena and saurabh….. The next episode will be of them packing stuff.. for the upcoming trip..

Hope u ll like the update and encourage me by commenting( good or bad it doesnt matter) like you did before 😊😊😊

30 comments

  1. Caira

    |Author

    I’m sorry all … I just realised that all of you donot know Hindi… next episode will pakka be in complete English … sorry for the problem … but for those who donot know Hindi I would like to tell that in this episode.. I have written that Dev and sonakshi are going together (accompanied by Vikki, Rita,saurabh,elena)to go to Calcutta / Kolkata ( sonakshi’s maternal grandparent’s house)….. and a little bit of their romance…
    P. S. I did not know that the tu page will be so particular about English…😊
    Thanks for reading

  2. Manya

    |Registered Member

    Superbbbbbbbβ€οΈπŸ’˜πŸ’•πŸ’žπŸ’—πŸ’“πŸ’–β£πŸ˜˜πŸ˜
    Post soon😊
    Love loveπŸ’–

  3. Aaru

    |Registered Member

    Mujhe to hindi mein better laga..tum brackets mein English translation likh dena na..but plzz hindi mein likho..kyuki tum jo ek ek look likhti ho na..wo mast hota h..spclly wo vishwas tod diya wala look..lol tha wo..

    • Caira

      |Author

      Thank u aaru di… actually i recieved an email from tu… it said that it was my first post that is why they are publishing( because it was in hindi) from the next time they wont….πŸ˜₯….😊😊
      P. S. I too liked it in hindi…

  4. Erina

    |Registered Member

    Awesome epi dear but plzzz write in hindi also. I truely enjoyed and loved that part when devakshi were talking through their expression nd look , i loved vishvas tod diya vala look nd very sorry vala look.
    With love Erina

  5. VimalSanjana5

    |Registered Member

    Ohho… Better write in a common language English… Its good to the readers satisfaction..
    Write ur next epi in English…
    All the best..

  6. Shaheer

    Wow, what a episode. Hey, will not there be intense romantic scenes of Devakshi. Please please Bharti add them. We all r missing DevAkshi scenes a lot. I think u r a writer with good imagination so, u can do it well!!!!

  7. Shaheer

    No, I posted my comment along with my question at the right place just the name was wrong and I am sorry for that. At least now ans my previous comment irrespective of the name written in it.

    • Caira

      |Author

      Actually….if i write intense romantic scenes tu page will not accept my update and will not post it… so that is why…. im sorry…
      And btw thank you for your comment…. i assure you there will be romantic scenes in the next or next to next updates….

  8. Maleeha

    |Registered Member

    It’s was a superb package…..hilarious…….awesome….and amazing…..πŸ˜˜β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜‚β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ’‹β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ’‹……aur jo looks sath likhe……they were just ……ummmmahhhhhh πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜˜β˜ΊοΈπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ’‹

    • Caira

      |Author

      Thank you sooo much maleeha di…. keep on reading and i hope you will like it ….😊😊😊😊😊.. it is my pleasure that all are liking it ….

  9. fatima

    Yar seriously this is awesome and i love your looks wali language acha English mai bhi aur hindi mai bhi warna feel nahi aata. But anyway i loved it

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