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Home»Fan Fiction»Devakshi – Break ke Baad #16
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Devakshi – Break ke Baad #16

4nshikaBy 4nshikaAugust 5, 201648 Comments6 Mins Read
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Recap: Engagement preparations are on full swing…Sonakshi’s father is worried as they couldn’t find any suitable venue for engagement. Ishwari is worried as she wants her son’s engagement to be perfect. Dev returns from USA.

Link of previous Episode: Episode 15

HOTEL
Dev: So, shall we order something…
Dude ! you are asking for food. Your love doesn’t need anything after you… Hunger has gone….thirst had flied away…and you think she could order….everything she wanted is just right infront of her eyes……you !
Dev order his and sonakshi’s fav dishes…

Waiter: Sir….what would like to have in drinks…we have wine, mocktails and fruit juices…
Dev: fruit juice…will be allright….she is a doctor….can’t drink wine !
Sonakshi: excuse me ! It is not about I can’t ….Its just that I don’t want to…
Dev: Sonakshi… Its ok ! if you can’t ….
Sonakshi: Dev !!!!…..Ohk get one bottle wine for me…and fruit juice for him…
Dev: I you sure !
Sonakshi: 200%
Dev: Ohk !
Waiter goes with the order !

Dev: So you missed me….?
Sonakshi nods like no…
Dev: yah ! I can see that…big big tears that rolled from your eyes….
Sonakshi(smiles): Those were not because I missed you….but because I love you….getting you in my life is the best thing that ever happened to me….
Dev: Hmm…. May I know the reason of sooo much love..
Sonakshi: Reason?….who loves someone for a reason !
Dev: I mean what you like most about me…
Sonakshi: hmmm………….I don’t know….
Dev: You don’t know !
Sonakshi: Sorry ! But I didn’t noticed ever
Dev left with a sad face ! or actually disappointed one… His girlfriend never noticed…..Crap ! Then who will notice….girl sitting on the other table !….

SONAKSHI’S HOUSE,
Door bell rings….
A big fat tummy comes out from lots of wrapping sheets and gifts…wrapped or unwrapped…and jumps to open the door ! Do I have to tell who is him ?
He opens the door…And Ishwari smiles at him…
Ishwari has reached to Sonakshi’s house to give out some shagun gifts and Dress for Sonakshi…OoOOoOOooo ! Sassu maa ka pyaar !
Saurabh: Namaste Auntyji !
Ishwari : Namaste !
She felt awkward as the house was so untidy
Asha: Mrs. Dixit please come….Aaaye !
Ishwari: Ji ! wo kuch shagun ka saman de na tha….(I just came to give away some gifts)
Asha: Oh okay !
Ishwari: waise tyarri kafi zor shor se chal rhi hain…(Well ! preparations are in full swing..)
Asha: Hain ! waqt bahut kam hai na….(Yah !…Time is very less..)
Ishwari: Ji ! koi madad ho humare layak to zarur btaye…(Yah ! Please tell if need any help from us….)
Saurabh: No ! No ! Aunty….we will be manage everything
And the gift boxes—-Unrapped fell down…..So well managed !
Asha covers up
Asha: Ji ! hain….Bijoy bhi venue dekhne gye hain….1 din hi hai..booking hi nhi mill rahi…(Yah !….Bijoy has gone to book Venue…One day is here….no bookings are available…)
Ishwari: Zarurat hi kya hai ! Humara ghar ha na…..wahan sagai kar lete hain..!(What is the need…our home…we will do engagement at our place)
Asha: Nhi ! Bijoy kuch kar lenge…(No ! Bijoy will do something)
Ishwari: array….kaisi baat kar rhi hain….apna ghar hai phir bhi….tayy rha sagai humare yahan hi hogi !(But !….What are you saying….when we have our home what is the need….so it final engagement will be at our place)

Asha nods unwillingly
On the other hand Ishwari was very happy as things are now under her control…Everything will be perfect

HOTEL
Bottle of wine and fruit juice arrives…. Battle ground is all set !
Dev: Sonakshi ! You don’t need to prove it…..we can order something else…
Sonakshi: Tummi ek dum impossible…..See… !
One bottle down… !
8 Planets, millions of stars and the universe itself rotated in front of her eyes….
Dev puts hand on his head as he knew what is next to go….So he decides not to create a scene in hotel and takes Sonakshi in home…
In car,
Dev ties seat belt to Sonakshi…and sits to drive…
Sonakshi: Hum ! Kahan ja rhe dev baby!! ( Where are we going Dev ! Baby !)
Dev: Baby ?….
Sonakshi: Haww ! Baby toh shaadi ke baad hota hai…..but you are my cute baby ! (Haww ! Babies are born after marriage….but you are my cute baby !)
Sonakshi pulls dev’s cheeks
Dev shocked…Sonakshi rocked !
Dev: meine sunna hai miss bose ! (I have heard Miss. Bose)
Sonakshi: Its…………Sonakshi for you………………Baby !!!!!!!!!
Dev: Stop calling me Baby !…..
Dev just can’t manage his talli girlfriend as she won’t let him drive
Dev takes her out…holds her hands…..Ans as he holds her….she shouts !
Dev: Kya hua…? (What Happened….?)
Sonakshi: Hawt !!!…..you are hotttt…..hehehehee
Sonakshi leaves him walks few steps….you know how…

Sonakshi(full on in mood): Tum mujhse phuchte ho mujhe tumhare bare mein kaunsi baat achi lagti hai…..main tumse kaise kahun mujhe tumhare bare mein kaunsi baat achii nhi lagti….harr cheej mujhe tumhare or jhukne par majboor karti hai….tumhara mere vajood se na hatne wala andaaj…yeh sab mujhe tumhari or kheechta hai…tumhara mere maa-baba ki ijjat karna…. mere liye apne sab chodd dena…..aur aisa kya nhi hai jo mujhe tumse pyar karne ke liye majboor nhi karta…pyaar insaan ko kamjoor karta hai par….tumhara pyaar mujhe himaat deta hai….Par tumhe yeh sab kabhi nhi btaungi ….kab nhi….tum mujhe sangemarmar samjhte ho toh samjhte raho…mein ret(sand) ki diwaar kabhi nhi banugi….mujhe tutne se darr lagta hai…
(You ask me what I like most about…how should I tell you….what I don’t like about you…everything makes me bend towards you…your attitude of sticking on my spirit….everyhting pulls me towards you…the way you respect my parents…the way you leave your everything for me…and what not that doesn’t make me love you…love makes people weak…but your love makes me stronger….but I won’t tell you these things every…you consider me marble I will not become wall of sand…I am afraid of breaking down)
She got faint with her last words and she was about to fell down…Dev runs and holds her on time
Dev: Mein tumhe kabhi tutne nhi dunga ! (I will never let you breakdown)

ENGAGEMENT DAY,
Sonakshi is getting ready in Nikki’s room…And Dev is in his room…
Sonakshi is wearing a Blue color Lehnga with Silver work and pretty diamond necklace on the other side dev is wearing white sherwani with golden work ….
Dev is desperate in his room to Sonakshi…..
Will they be able to meet before engagement.. !

Precap:Dev in Nikki’s room… Ishwari is on door…oops !

Hey people ! after my come back….The reviews are not sooo good but I am working hard…hope my hardwork will shows its color…. Kuch Rang mehnat ke !! heehheheheh..
Drop down your comments !
Tell me how you imagine their engagement ! 

We are 4 episodes away for a 20 !

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    48 Comments

    1. Chithra on August 5, 2016 11:01 pm

      wow…. what a lovely FF… u r rocking anshika…. cute romance….. eagerly waiting for next episode… present it as soon as possible…. way to goooo.

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:35 pm

        Thankq soooo much….And i updated it…will be soon present on the website 🙂

    2. Devakshifan on August 5, 2016 11:05 pm

      Nyc one talli sona ??

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:36 pm

        Thanks !

    3. sarswati suryawanshi on August 5, 2016 11:06 pm

      the lines are from zindagi gulzar hai..

      • 4nshika on August 5, 2016 11:40 pm

        yah….and i am huge fan of them Zarun and Kashaf just thought to capture that over Devkashi…Hope you are not disappointed ?

    4. Aaru on August 5, 2016 11:18 pm

      I think d difference between Dev n Sona’s financial status will create problems..n then misunderstandings will arise..anyways, superb episode..

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:37 pm

        Let’s see how your guesses are going to work….Well ! Thanks for d appreciation

    5. anam on August 5, 2016 11:27 pm

      Its soooo funny

      Dev talli gf said DEV BABY

      Hehehehe
      Pure episode me i cant control my smile
      U r toooo good dear

      • priya9876 on August 6, 2016 12:00 pm

        Mee too ???
        Dev baby???????

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:38 pm

        Thanks…and in next one your smile will turn into laughter….at least i think so…

    6. Varsha on August 5, 2016 11:46 pm

      OMG… Soo much fun… I cud totally imagine sona in drunken state..??.. He he Dev Baby.. ?..and reaction of Dev.. ???.. Baby toh shaadi k baad honge na.. God looked lyk Sona was in a total swing… I really wish I cud see Devakshi in ur mentioned attire.. I mean Sona has never wore a blue lehnga in the show is it.. But I’m sure she LL b Gorgeous as always.. Dev’s Sona.. ?.. And precap.. devakshi again trapped.. Exciting to c wht wil happen.. Ur too good..? As all others say words r less for ur skills..???????

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:40 pm

        Yaar ! day by day you are making me out of words to thank and oblige….Still trying to say Big thank you for supporting this moderate thing sooo much !! 🙂

      • Varsha on August 6, 2016 11:12 pm

        My comment are nothing in front of ur talent.. And yeah this 10 to 12 slot drives me crazy that when Il get to learn ur update.. I’m Waiting even now.. ?

      • 4nshika on August 7, 2016 9:43 pm

        i will upload it earlier from next time 🙂 🙂

    7. Maria on August 5, 2016 11:53 pm

      Haha?? baby!! Loved today’s episode!! Keep going!

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:41 pm

        Thankq sooo much…Maria ! Pleasure to hear it from you 🙂

    8. Manya on August 5, 2016 11:55 pm

      Awesomeeeeeeeeee epi I was imagining the whole the thing and the best part was Sona when she was drunk?and I hope u get ur kuch rang Mehnat ke!!!!

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:43 pm

        Thankq sooooooooo much….Hope i will get them soon as I am starting a new thing ! along with this…. 🙂

    9. Azzuu on August 6, 2016 12:01 am

      Wow yaar again no words
      Talli sona dev handling her
      So sweet
      I feel like ur ff should never dnd

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:44 pm

        Thankq soooo much Azzuu..
        Highly obliged !

    10. Shivi on August 6, 2016 12:43 am

      Ur updates always leave a smile on my face…..Sons talli was quite funny…keep it up

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:46 pm

        Thanks so much…..And your comments make me smile.. ! 🙂

    11. deeptanu on August 6, 2016 8:05 am

      awesomeee!! this is the best episode of ur ff keep it up like this

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:46 pm

        Thankq soo much… !

    12. krish on August 6, 2016 8:19 am

      Nice episode….ishwari happiness of everything under her control irked….and makes many stories of future track…and i also thought omg…ishwari gonna start something new,….and drunken sona is good and funny…. waiting for nxt….

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:47 pm

        Thanks dear !

    13. piya1 on August 6, 2016 9:10 am

      Gud episode…. omg talli sona vry funny
      Loved this epi….. n waiting for next.. keep it up

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 10:56 pm

        You have been following it from last few episodes and its great to see you again
        thank you !

    14. Viji on August 6, 2016 10:44 am

      Lovely episode?

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 11:10 pm

        Thanks

    15. priya9876 on August 6, 2016 11:57 am

      Totally loved this episode Anshika baby…heheh..hehhe???
      Hey anshika, I want to ask – Ishwari select a blue serwani for Dev maa???
      Then y he wear white wid Golden..

      • Varsha on August 6, 2016 1:34 pm

        Hey Priya.. I think u got confused with one more FF(Devankshi everyone’s fav 2nd epi) on devakshi.. Anshika never mentioned about dev s sherwani.. S ther was that Skype convo “santra lagunga” one..but they dint finalize anything for Dev as far as I remember..?.. And I guess Anshika has made a fine choice coz Blue and white combination will look gr8 on the Couple..???

      • priya9876 on August 6, 2016 11:36 pm

        Ohh!! Yes..
        M confused ?
        ND u r right blue n white is perfect ?

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 8:01 pm

        Actually yes ! That ff copied most of the skype convo… ! so i think you are confused with that !

      • priya9876 on August 6, 2016 11:43 pm

        Upps I m sooo!! Sorry anshika n my confusion is clear now…

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 11:52 pm

        It is always ohk ! Check the new episode #17

    16. Bhoomi on August 6, 2016 12:06 pm

      Woww…. Hehehe talli Sona ?….. Superb episode ??…… Waiting for next part??

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 11:17 pm

        tHANKq Ji !

    17. Fatarajo on August 6, 2016 12:28 pm

      Hey i love ur break ke baad a lot too good

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 11:18 pm

        Thankq sooooooo much… ! Hope your love for this never takes a break

    18. Shreyansh on August 6, 2016 3:05 pm

      Nice one…….

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 11:19 pm

        Thanks !

    19. simplesweety1 on August 6, 2016 4:04 pm

      Loved It! Update Soon!

      • 4nshika on August 6, 2016 11:20 pm

        Thankq soo much !

    20. erika on August 7, 2016 7:25 pm

      best as always…………………………… what else should i say i don’t know…………………

      • 4nshika on August 7, 2016 9:44 pm

        Thanks erika…even you commented that too means a lot…

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