Recap: Ishwari tries hard to collect money but fails. Sonakshi pays the rest of money. Ishwari sees it and tells dev about it. Sonakshi reaches Ishwari mansion and Dev confront her.
Link of previous episode: Episode 9
Here is the 10th episode and the SUPRISE you all were waiting for π π π
Enjoy !!!
ISHWARI MANSION
Dev(teary): wo sapna tha tumharaβ¦tumhare clinic ke liye tumne wo collect kiye theβ¦..(it was your dreamβ¦you were collecting them for your clinicβ¦.)
Dev moves from there a few steps aheadβ¦.
Dev: aaj bhi yaad hai mujhe kitni khush thi tum(I still remember how happy you were)β¦.aur aaj kuch bhi nhi(and today nothing left)β¦tum soch sakti ho mujhe kitna bura lag rha hai(can you think how bad I am feeling)β¦.uss sapne ke tutna ki wajah mein hun(I am the reason of it)β¦
Sonakshi nods no in tearsβ¦she moves towards dev and was to put her hand on his shoulder but then she realizes the surroundings and stops her handβ¦Things change so vigorouslyβ¦they were togetherβ¦they are togetherβ¦.they will remain togetherβ¦.inseperable but yet sepratedβ¦.for Dev, Sonakshi was important and so as her dream wasβ¦.
Sonakshi: aise kuch bhi nhi(its nothing like that)β¦.haan ! wo zaruri hai par(yes! it was important butβ¦.)
Dev turns and holds her againβ¦
Dev: par kya(but what)β¦
Sonakshi gets confidence when she sees Dev is in so much painβ¦.And he needs her Surrounding go to hell !
Sonakshi: aapse zyada nhi(not more than you)
Dev and Sonakshi both looks into each otherβs eyesβ¦.
In this whole thing there were two people who were really confused Nikki and Riaβ¦.
Sonakshi: kuch bhi aapse zyada zaruri nhi(nothing is more important than you)β¦.kuch bhi nhi(nothing)β¦.paise kya(what money)β¦.mein khud bhi nhi !!(evenβ¦I am not important than you)
Dev was teary but all happy in heart that he found such a great companion !!
Sonakshi and Dev comes out of their world. Surrounding came from hell
Sonakshi composes herself and moves to door to leave.Dev again realizes that he might love her more than his breaths but there is always a barrier his mother who he donβt want to hurt and thus didnβt tried to stop Sonakshiβ¦hold her even more tightlyβ¦tell her she is not anything or something for himβ¦she is everything for him !
Everyone turns from there to move to their roomsβ¦
Ishwari on the other hand after seeing all the scene was not sad or fuming in possessiveness but all calmβ¦As if she too wanted thisβ¦ahem ! ahem !
Dev: Maaβ¦
Ishwari: hain beta(yes son)β¦!
Dev: main janta hun(I know that)β¦. apko iss bare mein baat karna pasand nhi(you donβt like talking about this)β¦. Par(but)β¦..
He takes deep breaths as if it was hard to speak even a single word.
Dev: jiss din(the day)β¦.Ms boseβ¦Sonakshi iss ghar se gyi thi(sonakshi left this house)β¦.apko laga tha ki(you thought that)β¦..wo mere saath sirf isliye hai kyunki mere pass paisa hai(she is with me only because I have money)β¦.
Ishwari lowers down her head as she was guilty for that.
Dev: aaj usne uss paise ko chodd diya mere saath ke liye(today she left that money to be with me)β¦.mein janta hun ki aap mera bura nhi chahogi(I know that you will not think bad for me)β¦.par maa (but mom) !
Ishwari moves to her room. Dev feels as if he said a lot and feels apologetic. Dev too turns.
Ishwari turns back.
Ishwari: sun teri koi zarauri meeting na ho toh(listen!if you donβt have any important meeting)β¦.kal chale kya nutritionβ¦mera matlab hai Sonakshi ke ghar !(can we go to nutritionβ¦I mean Sonakshiβs house tomorrow !!)
Dev: maa (shocked)
Ishwari: kya hua(what happened)β¦..shaadi nhi karni !!!(you donβt want to get married)
Dev laughs in tears and hugs her so tightly !!! Ishwari to careses him
Ishwari: teri khushi mein hi meri khushi hai ! (my happiness lies in your happiness)
Dev and Ishwari both smilesβ¦.
Ishwari: ab khda khda kya dekh rhaβ¦ja rok le Sonakshi koβ¦.(why are you standingβ¦go run and stop Sonakshiβ¦.)
Dev runs happily.
NIKKIβS BEDROOM,
Nikki: koi mujhe btayegaβ¦jo humne abhi abhi dekha yeh kaunsi movie ka trailer thaβ¦.(will anybody tell meβ¦.what we just saw was trailer of which movie)
Neha: Devakshiβ¦.Dev & Sonakshiβ¦..kyun ! short forms sirf tuhi bna sakti hai(what!… only you can make short forms)β¦.
Ria: Di ! apko pta tha(you knew it)β¦.
Neha: Thoda ! Thoda ! ( Bit of it !)
Nikki: mujhe toh bilkul bhi idea nhi tha(I had no idea)β¦.I mean Dev bhai and Loveβ¦.
Ria: Hain ! dekha nhi Bhai aur Sona Di (yes! Didnβt you saw Bhai & Sona di)β¦
Nikki and Neha (shouts): Di nhi Bha-bhi !
And all three of them laughs
Ria: they were both so compassionate about each otherβ¦
Nikki, Ria and Neha all happily talks about the whole thing
HOSPITAL LOBBY,
Sonakshi is walking towards her cabin.
Dev comes running from behind shouting Sonakshi. She turns, he was about to skid but she holds him. He was taking deep breath as if he came all the way running.
Dev smiles like teenager going to propose his girlfriend.Sonakshi looks at him in confused manner.Nidhi, Divya and few other people from staff were also there.
Dev: Tumse baat karni haiβ¦(I want to talk to you)
Sonakshi nods in yes
Dev(in his mind): jab pehli baar kaha tha tab bhi itna nervous nhi thaβ¦.dev apni hi girlfriend hai propose kar dalβ¦.(I wasnβt so nervous when I said it for the first timeβ¦dev she is your girlfriendβ¦just propose her)
Sonakshi: Kya huaβ¦..I think tabiyat thik nhiβ¦(what happenedβ¦..i think you are not wellβ¦.)
Dev: No ! I donβt know β¦how to say
Sonakshi: whatβ¦.
Dev: Bose surname doesnβt suit youβ¦.
Sonakshi: to kya karunβ¦.surname change kar lunβ¦.(what should I doβ¦.change my surname)
Dev: Yes ! change it to Dixit β¦.what say !
Sonakshi: aisa kaise ho sakta haiβ¦(how will it happen)
Sonakshi had no ideaβ¦whatβs going on in his mindβ¦.
Dev: Mujhse shaadi karkeβ¦(marry meβ¦.)
Sonakshi: parβ¦(butβ¦.)
And she realizes what he just saidβ¦.
Sonakshi stares him or should I say looks at him with shocked wide eyesβ¦
Sonakshi: you are proposing meβ¦β¦aise koi karta haiβ¦(did anyone do it like this)
Dev moves to hold her hands as if the surrounding just doesnβt matter !! Why this damn surrounding even exits !!
Dev: mujhe nhi pta kaise karte haiβ¦pehli baar kar rha hunβ¦.log roses ke saath karte hai ya orchid ke saathβ¦. pta nhiβ¦..hospital ki jagah candle night dinner pe kehte hainβ¦kness pe kehte hain ki kya karte haiβ¦.kuch nhi ptaβ¦I know only one thingβ¦.jab tum saath hoti ho tohβ¦sunflower is roseβ¦.black is red β¦.every normal moment is memorableβ¦.I want to spend my whole life like thisβ¦holding your hands and looking at youβ¦.Will you allow me..?
(I donβt know how to do it…. doing it for the first timeβ¦. I donβt know how people do it with roses or orchidsβ¦. say it at candle light dinner or at hospitalβ¦. say it at you knees or what to doβ¦. donβt know anythingβ¦ I know only one thingβ¦.. when you are with meβ¦. sunflower is roseβ¦.black is red β¦.every normal moment is memorableβ¦.I want to spend my whole life like thisβ¦holding your hands and looking at youβ¦.Will you allow me..?)
Sonakshi: abhi bhi btana padega(still I have to tell you)
Dev nods cutely !
Sonakshi: Yessβ¦!!!!!!!!
Dev and Sonakshi hugs β¦The first hug till yet that will not break into leaving each other aloneβ¦but to promise we will remain always togetherβ¦.
Divya and Nidhi moves towards themβ¦
Divya: ab mera kya hogaβ¦! (what will happen to me now)
Dev: Sorry ! I am hooked for life and beyondβ¦..
Dev and Sonakshi looks into each otherβs eyes happilyβ¦.
ISHWARIβS ROOM,
Radharani: Jiji yeh kya kiya apneβ¦.uss bengalan !(what you didβ¦that bengalan )
Ishwari: Bhabhi ! bengalan nhiβ¦.Sonakshiβ¦.hone wali bahu hai meriβ¦.(not bengalanβ¦Sonakshiβ¦.she is my would be daughter in law)
Radharani: kaisi baat kar rhi hai aap bhiβ¦(what are you sayingβ¦)
Ishwari: Bhabhi ! meine jo galtiyan ki hai who sudharna chahti hunβ¦(I am just rectifying my past wrong deeds)
Radharani moves to leaveβ¦
Ishwari: Dev bta rha tha aapka ghar ban gya haiβ¦..toh mein bhaiya se baat karun ya aapβ¦(dev told me your house is constructedβ¦.should I talk to bhaiya or you willβ¦)
Radhrani leaves fumingly with fast stepsβ¦
Ishwari was definitely not happy with what she did but she found it necessary to keep her house at peace !!
DEVAKSHI,
Dev and Sonakshi are sitting at his carβs bonnet. Sonakshiβs head on his shoulder and her hand around his armsβ¦.Not even a mere a word was exchangedβ¦and actually what was the requirementβ¦.. when heart speaks so muchβ¦words from mouth become noise.
It was all a dream for themβ¦..and so as for us
Dev: mein thak gya hun Sonakshi akele chalte-chalteβ¦.raaston par kho jaungaβ¦.darta hunβ¦.(I am tired Sonakshi of walking aloneβ¦.I fear of getting lost in roadsβ¦.)
Sonakshi: ab koi darr nhi haiβ¦. koi akela nhiβ¦(there is no fear nowβ¦no one is alone..)
She moves her hand from shoulder to wrist and then into his hands.
Dev kisses on her forehead. And she smiles.
Sonakshi: maa- baba se kab baat karni haiβ¦(when will we talk to my mom-dad)
Dev: jab tum chahoβ¦.i mean tumhe karni haiβ¦(whenever you wantβ¦I mean you will talkβ¦)
Sonakshi: Dev !!!!
Dev: just imagineβ¦.kaise kahunga unse ki unki beti se pyar karta hun(how will I say to them that I love their daughter)β¦..
Sonakshi: jaise meine kaha tha auntyji seβ¦(in the same way I said it to auntyjii)
Dev: Sonakshi !!….
Sonakshi: Tum karo baatβ¦.warnaβ¦β¦mein shaadi nhi karungi !(you talk to themβ¦β¦.otherwiseβ¦I wonβt marry !!)
Dev: Arrey ! parβ¦. (Butβ¦.)
Sonakshi: Choice is yours!
Precap: Dev reaches Sonakshiβs place to talk. Nikki and Ria enjoys knowing Devakshiβs moments
Hey everyone ! so this was the surpriseβ¦.hope I kicked your expectations in full swing !
Ok guys ! here I have something newβ¦.From now onward we are going to have a great journey of Devakshiβs togethernessβ¦.
So till now(including episode 1 to 10) which conversation/scene you loved tell me through our favorite Mr.Comment Box.
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And Donβt forget to tell me how much you loved this episode !
65 Comments
Nice nice… Really much much better than current track..
Thanks Ria !…but original will always remain original π
Hey the creative writing is always original… I wish serial writer get some inspiration from this ff
Awwww…. Thank you dear !
Awww,,, ! Thankq dear π
Woooo hooooo dev’s proposal too good……just love your writing. .
Thanks esme !! π π
just love it love it love ummmmah ia m so happy for devakshi
Thankq soooo much… !
Nshika i love u sooooo much such a awesome episode dear
Hey its Anshika !
And thankq sooooooo much for loving π π
Hi i m silent reader but today u r fabulous……. wese to roj he ache hote hai lekin aaj……..such khu to original show se jayada mujhe aapke update kaintzar rehta hai………u r just awsome dear keep it up…
I am glad that my writng made you comment….
THANK YOU SO SO SO MUCH !!! Stay Tuned and Keep commenting π
Arey waahh yaarrrr…. !!!
Very nice…
Aisa kuch current track mein bhi ho jaaye to achha hoga..
But truely saying..this surprise was out of the world…
Thankq sooooo much Shalini…..Obviously ff are somthing we wish to see in real….i too hope it happens π π
wow yea that was a good surprise i was guessing something else
but its too good srsly i wait for your ff more than written updates of krpkab
but whatever
my fav conversation was when dev goes to meet sona before his accident and proposal.
and update soon .
and dont stop writting
Thanks Azzuu….And also for telling your fav. scene…..
Hope stands well on you expectation of surprise π π
Too good….. After reading fully I can’t believe I am reading fan fiction….devakshi in ishwari mansion and dev proposal too good…….great episode…..
Thank You soooo sooo much…Your affection for this keeps me working hard
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Awesome episode…..I love it..proposal was very very nicee and lovely…
tHANKS Anu π
Falling short of words???????
Hehehhe…Thanks for the complimenting π π
From now on I am not going to put short comments so.. Coming to the episode.. This one was epic!! Just loved it as Sonakshi broke her FD just for Dev, her love, her life.. I love the way you describe each and every scene..and Dev’s proposal was so unique just like Devakshi’s story is! Sunflower becomes rose, black becomes red!! This was an awww moment! I can definitely say that this is one of the best ff’s that I have ever read! Now I’m eagerly waiting for the next update! And I just hate this gkb!! Loved Ishwari today… Post the next one soon okay? And thank you for complimenting my writing.. And one question, which standard you are in? Don’t forget to post it soon…
Thankq sooo soooo much….I too want to do very long reply but my dictionary fails in giving me adjectives to say thank you….Yah ! next will be here very soon…And as you asked my standard…dear i am going to enter medical school MBBS…..do i seem to be very old?
Mee too was missing ur lomg comments dr….I used to love to rd ur comment
Just one word…AWESOME…. U r seriously fantastic writer yaar..!!!
Thankq so much Shivi !
I may fall out of words to tell about ur imagination… Coz ur damn good.. ND I won’t get tired sayin this again and again that writers should do get ur ff for the upcoming track…i don’t know how u think all this.. Its actually matching Dev’s character…1st he says Sona that he doesn’t know to confess love but does it In a best way.. ND now proposal.. Changing the surname to Mrs.Dixit..? Dreamy.. I dint xpect such proposal.. But if anyone is proposed in this way.. Who would say no.. That to his mad lover Sona..?? Ur too good.. ? .. Keep writing in the same way..????? Ur imagination itself is a SURPRISE for us..?
Thankq soooo much…I can’t express you how eager I be always after posting episode to know your reactions ! π π
Ur writings totally totally deserves it.
Tooo goooood
Thanks !
Hey ur asking about which scene I liked the most… I don’t know whether ul believe when I say this.. When ever I feel down.. I jus think about ur update .. It can b any moment… I mean I really smile like an idiot alone jus thinking about all their scenes.. Be it their love for each other,their understanding,sacrifice,jus everything… I really really love ur updates… Till date 10 updates…and I love all ten.. I always feel like copying ur story and save it in my mobile.. So that I can open ND see whenever I want..??
I believe you from bottom of my hearts…..You know what i feel like taking snapshots of your comments and show off with them…. ! π π
Really.. Well thanks… But ur story itself s this gud that we can’t resist ourselves from doin it.. ND yeah.. If u can.. Will u mail me the completed episodes updates.. Il share my mail I’d..if ur ok with it…
Wow awesome this ff jst amazing good keep it up?? keeping writing till devakshi not get old??lol
Heheheh…yah i will keep writing tell i get old ! π
Thanks
super storyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1.Really better than the current trackkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!1
Thanks Namitha π
Yehh My guess was right?….
U nailed it dear…. What a proposal ?.. Mindblowing… I cant express my happiness… Jumping like mad?…. Very very excited for upcoming episodes… Starting of this episode was emotional?…. ???????
All the conversations in your ff r superb so all r my fav ?….
U rocked today ????
Thankq soooooooo much Bhoomi…
Don’t jump over the bed…it will break π π
hahaha ??… U r a MBBS student ?… Then u r my di ?
Oh ma pleasure!…u r in which standard ?
I m in 11th onlyβΊ
Arrey! Beta!!!!!!!!….
Amazing!!!!!
Thankq Zakiyah !
Such a good ff……when dev asked did u break ur fd….dat whole convo was soon cute..
Thanks Ria…and for mentioning your fav. scene also
Nice
Thanks !
Just waoooooooooo!!!?????
Seriously I have no words to express my happiness…?
Proposing part was awesome sunflower is rose..black is….this terrific lines…
Really yaar u wrote so well….love u..
Hope same aisa current track me v dikhaya jaye…kaash krpkab Ki writter v tum hi hotii….
ND finally GKB ka ghar ban gya ar ish ne unhe Jane ko kaha….now everything will be happy…
Ohhh hoo!!! Last scene k baare me to kehna bhul hi gyi….awwww how cutley dev says— Mai kaise kahunga unse Ki Mai aapki beti se pyar Karta Hu…???βΊ?????????
Hhehehehheheh…..I was blushing…smiling…and all giggling while reading your comment…and my mother was looking confused at me…considering me mad !….everyone do !….
But Thanks you ! π π
ohh!! waooo..
Aisa hi kuch same hota hai mere sath while m readind ur episodes…. nd wehenever sees devakshi..
hahahhah… Hum ek thalli ke chatte-batte hain !
Guys happy ? wale surprise ? k liye …n devakshi k iss moment k liye party to banti haii….
Soo come lets doo party…
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Now m soo tired but still a big smile on face??….good night devakshi..
tHANKQ SOOO much…Priya !…..I don’t have such a great typing pad ! But please understand my emotions π
yaaa dear off course.. i can understand nd feel it…
thankq for understanding !
Nice epi
Thanks π π
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
are going to continue or this is the end
no no, erika this is not the end…
11th part is allready posted..
It will continue !…..