Devakshi…an OS

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Hey guys …! I’m here again with an OS..!
Thank you everyone…!! Fa the awesome reviews fa my previous attempt…!!
Well, I’m dedicating this OS to our birthday queen Anshita…!!
Hope u will read it dear…!!

Happy Birthday ..!?❤
A girl of 23 is seen walking down the streets at night. It was almost 10 at night. Its a cold night where the moon pops out hiding behind the clouds. It lits the whole world with bright light. As the girl was heading to a nearby bus depot, she saw a man of around 25-27 walking to her to the same depot she thought. The man was not alone, they were a gang of 4. The girl started to panic. She was waiting fa a cab or an auto to come up with soon as she can’t bear any non sense from those. The gang of four started to approach her and scoff at her. She was irritated …, but kept quiet. One man in the gang stood fa the girl. He asked his mates to keep quiet.
Man1: Guys! This is unfair to mock a girl like this.
Man2: Hey dude! C’mon its juz fa fun.

Man3: Haan yes we r not going to do anything to her.
Man1: But this is not done. We men were stronger only to protect women, we should be a shield fa them. Instead u people…
Man4: u r crct buddy..! We shouldn’t have done that.
The girl was relieved after the man spoke. She felt that this society is not juz mean but also helpful.

All three guys apologised the girl to which she gave a death glare.
The man offered to accompany them as it was very late and there would be no use of waiting near a depot to get a cab. The girl gave a “what” look. She couldn’t take this. She denied. But the man insisted.
Man1: U don’t want to worry. We will not give any kind of torture to u. Is anyone coming to pick u up? Or a cab…!?
Girl: ~she thought fa few seconds~ Haan yeah.! My friend …my friend will come here to pick me up. She lied
Man1: No prob! U can wait in my home. Its juz a few metres away. U can ask ur frnd to pick u up there. Is it OK..!?

Girl POV.

“Oh my god.! Who will I call now. I called him but he said that he has some work at his office and he couldn’t come. When I asked him again he juz reprimanded. He shouted at me too. And how could I again ask him. He would really mess up with me. I knw him. He would juz shout. God. Y is this man not leaving me. He is so reluctant. Does he want me to come to his house. Oh I don’t knw who is he. Why is he accompanying me. Oh, its really disgusting. How could I go alone with him. Why is these cab not arriving at night.!”
Man1: Hey hello.! U don’t want to worry. My mom and my sisters are there at my home. U will not be alone there.

Girl pov

Oh thank god. But how could I go from there. I couldn’t ask fa a help to him. Bcas he is already doing so many. I couldn’t ask him to drop me at home. Can I call Ele.( Yes, the girl is revealed to be sona.)
Yeah that’s crct, I would call her. As he is saying, this is not a safe place to stay at night fa longing fa a cab.
Sona: OK well, then I would call to my sis. She would come and pick me up.
Man1: It sis?? But u said that u have already informed ur frnd to pick u..!?
Sona: oh gosh caught..! Wo…that …
Man: No problem Ms..

Sona: Sonakshi Bose.
Man: Ms Sonakshi. O could understand. So can we.
Sona: Yeah sure.
Sona calls Ele and asked her pick her up from the XYZ place to which Elena agreed.
Elena: Why is she asking me to pick her up from XYZ place. Her hospital was also situated far from there. But why..!? But how could I go alone there. Yeah I’ll call him. He would come to pick her up.

Sona went with those guys to the man’s home.
Asha: Elena ! Why didn’t sona haven’t come yet..!?
Elena: ~narrates what sona said~.. Mashi I would call jiju to accompany me to pick her up. He would come bcas I can’t go alone at this night.
An lady: Haan haan Elena.. Call him, he should come along. Its not safe fa u to go alone
Asha: Haan ji u was right.

While sona reached the man’s home. An lady around 50 greeted her first and asked abt sona to her son. The whole narration takes place.
Sona became like a neighbour to them. The man’s mom sister had talked to her in such a way that the knw each other since years.
Juz then Elena called sona.
Elena: Hello sona where is the address.? We couldn’t find it.?
Sona: We..!??
Elena: Haan.. Jiju accompanied me.. I couldn’t be alone na so.
Sona: ur jiju.? Don’t lie Ele.

Elena: Hey why I should I. As soon as I asked him he rushed.
Sona: I won’t believe.
Ele: oho…sona stop it stuff and say the address.
Sona: Well, take a……
While sona says the address to them, they reached the home.
Sona: Come inside.
Ele: Where r u ? Come out.
Sona: Juz come in idiot.
Ele comes in with her jiju.
A man of 27 looking handsome with his white shirt and a blazer and a black pant looks smart in his attire. He voiced…”sona”
Sona turned her face and introduced Elena to everyone. The Man1 forwarded his hand to Elena saying..
Man1: Ritvik..
Elena: Elena
While Ritvik saw the man with ele..

Sona: Haan Ritvik he is..Dev..! My fiancé.
( Yes the man sona mentioned in her POV was none other than Dev, her fiancé)
Ritvik: Oh Ms Sonakshi…u r engaged..!?

Sona: Yeah..! ( a bit irritated)
The next day was nearing ….and sona felt asleep. Dev was almost trying his best to talk to sona while she refused.
It was exactly 12 when Dev’s phone e beeped aloud. Everyone looks towards him while he took the phone and smiles seeing the phone screen.
Elena: Jiju what happen ..!? Why are u smiling..!?
All were confused including Ele and sona.
Dev kept his phone in his pocket and looks towards sona lovingly.
H sat on his knees while everyone shocked. He sat on his knees to sona
Dev: ~still in his loving position~ Happy Birthday my love.!

Sona was taken back.
She had never thought that Dev would wish her on her bday though strangers (according to dev)were around them. Ritvik was happy to learn that its sona’s bday today.
Sona: POV – oh yes its my bday …!! And it was already a next day.
Dev still in his position.

Dev: “I knw I don’t always show it,
But u r the beat thing that
Ever happened to me.
Let’s make ur bday a very
Special celebration, it should be.
And I’ll remind u of juz
How much u mean to me
I love you.
Happy birthday my love.”

Saying so dev was still in his eyes while all others there stood dumbstruck seeing dev’s immense love to his fiancé including sona.
Sona had a tears in her eyes which is unknown to her.
Dev stood up wiped her tears and asks fa a apologoy fa shouting at her the day before he was in urgent work.

Sona who couldn’tsay anything juz hugged him tightly and said that
Sona: I love u too, Dev
Dev’s face had lit up smiling .
They part ways
Sona bends down to get blessings from Ritvik’s mother.
Ritvik’s mom: humesha kush rho beta
Sona then bids adieu to ritvik and his family inviting them fa her bday party and assuring them to be in contact.
Sona, Dev, Elena were back to sona’s house

All the way in travel sona’ s gaze towards Dev didn’t shift and it was not juz.
She juz stared at Dev and Dev who noticed this juz kept quiet.
They reached Bose mansion.
While sona opened the door, there shouts everyone.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY SONAKSHI..!

When lights turned on, she could see her whole family, Her ma, baba, Dada, grandmother. And not only them even her sasural was also present there. Ishwari, mamaji, Mamiji her cute SIL. Everyone …sh couldn’t do anything but give them all a tight family hug.

Here completes the OS.

Hope u guys liked this.
Pls give it views guys. Cmnt in the not NOx below…
Lovu u all…!!
As I said before, I’m dedicating this to Anshita as its her bday today..!!
Happy birthday ANSHITA..!
HAPPY THRIEVING THIRTEEN…!!
Enjoy ur day…!!
Love
Heshine..!

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29 Comments
  1. Eeshi

    Amazing
    And happy b’day Anshita (don’t worry this time its me Eeshita)
    And if I’m not wrong Anshita has turned 12 yrs

    1. Heshine

      Thank you so much Eeshi..!???

    2. AnShIta

      Thank you soooo much Eeshita di!!!?????
      And yes, I’ve turned 12?

  2. Rakshita

    Hiii heshine. Awesome ne cute is!!!

    1. Heshine

      Thank you Rakshita..!!??

  3. I like it, keep doing the good work

    1. Heshine

      Thank you Ugaso…!?

  4. Rockzzzzzz

    First of all….HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANSHITA?????????????????????????
    Mind blowing OS…keep posting.
    lots and lots of love???????

    1. Heshine

      Thank you Pari…!!????

    2. AnShIta

      Thank you sooooo much Pari di!!!???????

  5. Priya12

    Belated happy birthday wishes anshita….sry…and the heshine di …os was serbb..

    1. Heshine

      Thank you Priya…!????

    2. AnShIta

      Thank you soooo much Priya di!!?????

  6. Happy Birthday. Nice os.

    1. Heshine

      Thank you Princess..!???

  7. Aarti32

    Happy birthday AnShIta..God bless our bday girl..
    N coming to d OS..It was fabulous..plzz write more like dis..
    But I won’t b able to comment till April..Coz I hv xams in March..Plus it’s my 12th boards so I’ll hv to start preparing from now onwards..So plzz always count my comment..Coz I’ll make sure I read your posts..N I’m sure I’ll luv those..

    1. Heshine

      Hey Aarti…!! Thank you so much dear…!?????will surely come up with another os asap…!!
      And yeah..!! Do ur xams well…!! And I’ll be overwhelmed to know that u like the episodes…!!
      Cmnting doesn’t matter.
      I know how our boards be…!..!! I’m gonna face it next year..!?but do well…!! Don’t take any tension..!! All the very best..!! ?????
      Thanks again once again

      1. Aarti32

        Thanx yaar..

    2. AnShIta

      Thank you sooooo much Aaru di!!!??????

  8. Darshini

    Wow…it’s just amazing dear!!!lovd it to the core…
    And belated happy birthday anshitha-b’day baby…????

    1. Heshine

      Thank you Darshini…!????

    2. AnShIta

      Thank you soooo much Darshini di!!!???????

  9. Heshine, it’s was awesome and marvellous…. Short, sweet, cute and of course stupendous due to your writing style…
    Hey anshi…. Happy Birthday dear…. A lot of blessings from my side… Enjoy yourself…
    Love for you both,
    ?❤❤

    1. Heshine

      Thank you so much…! Maleeha…!?????

    2. AnShIta

      Thank you sooooo much Maleeha di!! Love you loads and tons!?????????

  10. AnShIta

    Hey Heshine di!
    Firstly, thank you soooooooo much for this wonderful OS! Like, especially for me? Wow. I seriously loved the story and way you wrote it. It was all completely majestic! The way you described each and every thing and scripted the dialogues was, no doubt, fabulous! I seriously loved this story to the core and I simply can’t end thanking you for this one!
    Once again, thank you soooooooooooooo much!??????????
    Love you loads,
    Anshita<333

    1. Heshine

      Hey Anshita…! Sorry fa the late reply dear…!! Actually I forgot to look through the msg…!!
      And yeah…! Its fa u…!!
      Thank you so much dear…!!
      ????

      Love…love…

  11. Niki645

    Amazing Heshine di!!!! Loved it!!!

    It was so sweet????

    1. Heshine

      Thank you so much Niki…!???❤❤

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