Destroyer or????? Part 1

I am a silent reader but now i am going to start my first ff….. And i am not good in english that much so plz forgive any grammatical error….
I know its a very old plot now but i want to write it down…….
I will start my ff after the kidnapping drama…
But here is a small change ragini has bailed laksh out on her own will…
dadi had taken all the property of Maheshwari’s on ragini’s name. And Laskh don’t know that ragini had bailed him out. He is thinking that some member of the family has bailed him out.

So here it goes………
A lady is sitting on a small and a lonely hill and one can say that she is in deep thinking about something….
-Laksh how you can do this with me… I know i have done many bad things…. I know i tried to kill my own sister……..but you never thought that why i was doing this…… Hmm……..Now i know you have only used me as a friend to get to your destination……or your so called love or my dearest sister………….”swara”…….
The truth is that you never considered me as your friend…….for you i was just your’s lover’s sister………
I regret that i have fallen in love with a person like you…….. Who have a very low thinking about love…… A person like you who thinks that love is only dependent on girls outer body………who is only attracted to a girl because of her outer body………..but love is not dependent on these things…………………
Its a feeling to be felt by the heart not by the brain……
Being in love is like loving that person for his/her imperfections……
Because there is not even a single person who is perfect…….

The truth is that we accept the person we love for his imperfections…….
But you thought only girls who are modern, who wears modern clothes,who have modern thinking can only be loved………not girls like me………Laksh you know i also have some dreams of my marriage like every girl has…….but what i got is only betrayal……..i thought the guy who is the reason of my being alive only betrayed me………..the sister who i love more than my life betrayed me by falling in love with the same person whom i love…….or by my only friend who i thought is the only one who needed me……….
‘His dupaate wali dost’
But, i was wrong………..
He was just using me for his so called revenge………..
But now enough is enough……..
I will not let anyone use me……..ANYMORE
I WILL NOT PLAY ANY GAMES NOW…………
NOW EVERYTHING WILL HAPPEN OPENLY……….
YAA TOH AAR……….YAA PAAR…………
ABH KOI LAKSH NAHI…..
KOI PYAAR NAHI……
KOI MOHABAAT NAHI……
NOW I WILL HAVE ONLY ONE MISSION………
‘DESTROY EVERYTHING WHO COMES IN MY WAY TO DESTROY YOU’………..
MR. MAHESHWARI NOW TYE GAME BEGINS……..
Plzz……..tell if i should continue or not……

31 comments

  1. Fairy

    |Registered Member

    Wowwwwwww!!!!wt a story yaaaar….superb superb superbbb!!!u reallly xplained rags pov very welll!!
    Loved it sooooo muchh!!!now wt”ll rags do???m reallly xcieted for further story πŸ™‚ thnku thnku so much for dis..keeep rockng n stat bleassd dr πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    N one question r u my sissy anonymous πŸ˜› sry for dis weird question…bt if u r my sis anony den wt a pleasant surprise yaaar πŸ™‚ thnx for gttng registered n if u r nt dat den jst ignore dese line hehehhe sry πŸ˜€ ..
    Tc dr πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

  2. Fats

    |Registered Member

    Great start. You penned Ragini’s POV perfectly. It will be interesting to see what’s in store for Laksh in this ‘game’. Do continue writing. Can’t wait to read more πŸ’–

  3. Hemalattha

    |Registered Member

    yes you should continue because it seem interesting.even though your plot so old.good luck for your new ff.congratulations dear.this part really amazing.

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