The destiny-Never letโ€™s you go away (Naamkaran Avniel fan fiction) episode 7

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Deekshya: Okay let me open my jacket……

Someone from behind: WAIT …

He is none other than Ketan.

ketan

Dayaben: ( confused ) K… Ketan, you ???

Deekshya: Yes mom it bro and U am your dear daughter Deekshya.

Nanno: YOU TWO ??

Deekshya: Yes, it’s us who kidnapped your granddaughter and it is me who killed your daughter.

Dayaben: ( kind of falls down on floor ) Deekshya, Ketan how could you ? I never knew that i gave birth to devils.

Ketan: ( catches Dayavanti ) Mom, you gave all your property to bro and now you are about to give it to Avni and you say we are devils ?

daya is shocked

Dayavanti is shocked.

Nanno: You people did all this for money ? Shame on you.

Deekshya: Oh, oh lady lord we donot need your lectures now. We will kill you three and then we’ll sit in peace forever.

Deekshya takes out a gun.

Nanno carries Avni who is still faint and runs together with Dayavanti. Ketan and Deekshya chase them. They enter inside a jungle. Daya, Nanno and Avni hide behind a bush catching their breathe. Deekshya and Ketan see them and run after them. All of them run but stop in front of a cliff. Nanno and Dayaben look at each other and panic. Deekshya and Ketan smirk. Deekshya goes front to shoot.

Ketan: Wait Deekshya why should we waste our bullets on them when we can kill them without leaving any proofs ?

Deekshya: Wow bro, how can we do that?

Ketan: Just push them down the cliff.

Both of them go towards Dayaben, Nanno and Avni.

Deekshya: (going towards Nanno) Bye bye lecture queen!

She pushes Nanno. She falls down.

Deekshya and Ketan go towards Dayaben, who is scared.

Dayaben: N.. no you can’t kill me..

Ketan: You should have thought about this before transferring your property. You turned your own children into beggars. Sorry mom, we have to kill you.

With tears both of them push her. Dayaben screams and falls down.

Deekshya: Now it’s this Rahu’s turn. If she dies everything will be solved. ( to Avni ) I had lots to talk with you but you have to die as soon as possible.

Both of them catch Avni (who is still faint) and throw her down from the cliff.

———— leap of 11 years ———-

A police station is shown. An ACP enters.

A Sub-inspector: Sir, your wallet dropped in the jeep.

He takes his wallet. Opens it and looks at Avni’s photo. Comissioner is seen and he addresses the officer.

Comissioner: ACP Neil Khanna.

Neil: (With a salute) Yes sir.

Comissioner: I have decided to handover you the Sukoon ghar case.

Neil: Sir, the orphanage run by Neela Parikh?

Comissioner: Yes, they are being troubled by goons and I want you to visit them.

Neil: Yes sir.

Precap: Neil goes to sukoon ghar in off dress and collides with a girl. She beats him badly.

So sorry guys for the late update. i was busy travelling cause i have holidays. Please bear the errors cause this is my 1st FF. And silent readers, don’t forget to give feedbacks. If you want to remove or add any characters after leap, please suggest them and sorry to say Prakash is dead in my FF. Please comment if you want Sweta cause I am in a dilemma about her character.

 

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22 Comments
  1. Continue writing dear……we AvNeil fans are always there for your support……
    Plzzzz update soon and keep up the good work…..
    Good Evening and Take Care๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Deeyaana

      Thank you so much yaar. I once thought about completing it in a single episode because dislikes are continuously growing. But I again gave a second thought about not ending it so soon maybe I may gain more followers if I continue writing!!

  2. Lucie

    Amazing episode dear. I am mentioning clearly. ……. dont worry its not any problems with ur ff. Its with my behaviour I.e. I have a childish behaviour. So its a humble request please dont mind such lines. Ur ff are very good. Keep writing and according to me shweta and bebe both should be there in this ff.

    1. Deeyaana

      Thank you so much Lucie

      1. Lucie

        If possible please add Tina who was avni friend in childhood

    2. Deeyaana

      Ok thank you i have already sent ep 8 for moderation. i will try my best to add her

  3. Nice episode…. Don’t stop writing this… It’s lovely…

    1. Deeyaana

      Thank you Neil

  4. hey nice epi
    continue writing
    waiting on the next update

    1. Deeyaana

      Thanks a lot Ayeesha

  5. Keep on it dear it’s interesting to see their tashan once more๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚

    1. Deeyaana

      Thank you Jaspreet

  6. Priyu

    Awsomee ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ Oh no Avni ,๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ hope all three will return. How rude deekshaya is ! Killed her own mother!! ๐Ÿ˜
    Eagerly waiting for the next part ๐Ÿ˜ Don’t worry ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜ I’m here to read your ff ๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Deeyaana

      Thank you so much Priya ( I wish my keypad had stickers)

  7. Ayesha_malhotra

    Deepshu you are an amazing writer . I hope AvNeilโ€™s meet will be amazing . Keep writing more and more and I liked this episode a lot – Ayesha

    1. Deeyaana

      Thanks a lot Ayesha ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. PRJ

    Finally u updated. Nice episode hmmm. Carry on. Waiting 4 d next episode

    1. Deeyaana

      Thanks a lot for reading and supporting me

  9. Pavithra1616

    U rocked , dear… It is really awesome.. Wow. ! Continue writing.. And pls don’t worry about dislikes and bad comments. OK.. I have got dislikes more than likes in my ff and still I am continuing my ff without much problem.. U should ignore negativness. And u have great skill so keep writing.. Update soon..

    1. Deeyaana

      Thank you so much Pavi

  10. ImRagela

    Hey Deepshu..Awesome yaar..Keep writing..love u ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Deeyaana

      Thank u Reji. Love you too ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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