The destiny-Never let’s you go away (Naamkaran Avniel fan fiction) episode 5

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AVNI AND NANNO GO TO CANTEEN. DEEKSHYA ENTERS THE CABIN WHERE ASHA IS KEPT. SHE STARTS TO TALK WITH ASHA.
Deekshya: Asha, dear Asha. Why did not you die even after I bumped you with my car. Now again I have to take the problem to KILL YOU. If you donot die, how can we take all the property which mom is about to transfer in your name, tell me. Now slowly, let’s remove your oxygen mask and be ready to SUFFOCATE my dear.
DEEKSHYA REMOVES ASHA’S OXUGEN MASK. ASHA SUFFOCATES. SHE TRIES A LOT TO SAVE HERSELF BUT TAKES HER FINAL BREATHE AND DIES.
DEEKSHYA PUTS BACK THE OXYGEN MASK AND THEN RUNS OUT FROM THE ROOM.
SHE HITS WITH AVNI ON THE MAIN DOOR OF THE HOSPITAL. AVNI TURNS BUT BECOMES UNABLE TO RECOGNIZE HER FACE AS HER FACE WAS COVERED BY A SCARF.
NANNO AND AVNI REACH ASHA’S ROOM BUT SEE THAT THE MONITOR IS NOT INDICATING HEARTBEATS.
NANNO CALLS THE DOCTOR. THE DOCTOR CHECKS HER AND SAYS SHE IS NO MORE.
NANNO BREAKS DOWN AND FALLS ON THE FLOOR. AVNI GETS FLASHBACK OF HAPPY MOMENTS WITH HER MOM.

Avni: MAMMA……
NANNO AND AVNI, BOTH CRY A LOT.
NANNO CALLS DAYAVANTI AND INFORMS HER THAT ASHA IS DEAD. DAYAVANTI, KETAN, DEEKSHYA AND NEELA ( ASHA’S BEST FRIEND ) COME THERE. DAYAVANTI TRIES TO CONSOLE AVNI.
Dayavanti: Don’t cry dear, your grandma is here. She loves you a lot your Nanno and Neela aunt are also here. Don’t cry my baby.
Avni: (sobbing) Grandma…..
Deekshya: MOM…
Dayavanti: All this is because of Deekshya…
Ketan: Mom, don’t blame her she has not done anything. That was just an accident.
A NURSE COMES THERE.
Nurse: Could you please be silent? This is a hospital. And your patient’s death is a normal one so no need of post mortem. You can take the body for funerals.
THEY GO HOME. NEIL RUNS THERE BUT GETS SCARED BY LOOKING AT ASHA’S DEAD BODY.
Neil: Av… Av.. Avni!! What happened??
AVNI HUGS NEIL AND CRIES.
Neil: Avni, don’t cry everything will be fine. No no don’t cry. You are a brave girl na!!
Avni: (sobbing) Y.. Yes.
Neil: Now please, don’t cry we have to bid farewell to Asha aunt.
( AT THE FUNERAL )
AVNI CRIES A LOT. NANNO ALSO HAS A TEARY EYES. DAYAVANTI TRIES TO COMFORT AVNI. AFTER FUNERAL EVERYONE GOES AWAY BUT NANNO AND AVNI STAY. BOTH OF THEM CRY A LOT.
NIGHT AT AVNI’S HOUSE.
AVNI IS AT BED, SOBBING. NANNO AND DAYA BEN ARE TALKING OUTSIDE.
( MORNING )
NANNO TAKES A GLASS OF MILK IN AVNI’S ROOM. SHE GETS INSIDE AND IS SHOCKED. AVNI IS NOWHERE TO BE SEEN. SHE SEARCHES AVNI ALL AROUND BUT DOESNOT GET HER. THEN SHE CALLS DAYAVANTI.
Nnanno: Hello, Daya ji, Avni, Avni is nowhere to be seen. I think she is KIDNAPPED.
Precap: Dayavanti and Nanno search Avni.
SORRY GUYS FOR THE LATE UPDATE BECAUSE MY LAPTOP WAS DAMAGED. SO SORRY FOR THIS INCONVINIENCE. AND HOPING FOR YOUR LIKES AND FEEDBACK.

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16 Comments
  1. Priyu

    Awsomee 😍😍 Where did this Avni disappear ! Maybe she had gone out to calm her mind. Asha died 😭😭😭 She can’t die so soon !!! Hope that hospital has CCTV footage so they can catch the real culprit 😩 Poor Avni.. 😩 Feeling sad for her 😩😩 Hospital people are so careless that they allow outsiders to enter in patiens rooms 😑😑😑
    Update ASAP 😍 Keep Writing 😘 Good luck 😘

    1. Deeyaana

      Thank u Priya, oh don’t cry wait for next update. πŸ˜‰ :$

  2. Nice but little bore sry ha i just wait love story of AvNeil

    1. Deeyaana

      No worries, leap is coming soon.

  3. Nice update but little bore sry ha actually i m just waiting love story of AvNeil. Once again sry

    1. Deeyaana

      I’m also waiting to post that… πŸ˜‰

  4. ImRagela

    Oh no Where Avni had gone??!! 😭😭😭😭….Felt really upset for Asha’s death πŸ˜₯πŸ˜₯..Hope everything gets fine 😊😊..love u lots 😍😘😘

    1. Deeyaana

      I love u more… πŸ˜‰

  5. Nice and sad episode…

    1. Deeyaana

      Awe.. Thanks Neil

  6. And thanks for that scarf – wala idea πŸ˜πŸ˜…πŸ˜€

    1. Deeyaana

      I also want to throw that stupid Kayesha in gutter.

  7. ItsmePrabha

    Amazing update Deepshu..Will be waiting for the next..

    1. Deeyaana

      thank u dii next is being typed πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰

  8. Ayesha_malhotra

    Loved it deepshu . Deeksha killed Avni’s mom . Very good episode . Keep writing more and more – Ayesha

    1. Deeyaana

      Thank you Ayesha

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