DESTINY MADE US MEET , BUT FATE MADE US APART..OUR STORY WAS NOT YET COMPLETE (ishqbaaz ff-part 1)

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Hii guys ..i am back again…I got a story in my mind again..i don’t have much to say about it coz I am waiting to know the reaction of my readers…i really want to know what you expect ..please let me know what are the changes you prefer in my ff…
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Ok let me introduce the characters and background first.
Shivaay is a rich business tycoon…he is very busy in life..he is from the oberoi family..
Anika has lost her parents and is living with her aunt …
Anika is working in a textile shop near her house…and she also does some side business to help her aunty…
Ishana is anika’s best friend in the village ….(anika is much elder than ishana)
Sahil is anika’neighbour pritham’s child…
Other characters are the same…..
So the ff begins here…
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(shivaay is driving his car..)
Shivaay: cant you arrange the meeting tomorrow what was the need to keep it today itself..its really hectic..
He turns the car he is entering the highway..shivaay gets another call..
Shivaay: no more explanation ….i need the files on time or you are fired…understood..
Shivaay has to take a turn at left but due to a lorry blocking his way shivaay takes a right…
Shivaay(to himself):what the wuck ..isnt there anybody to control these people ..how illmannered they are..

Suddenly another lorry blocks his way..shivaay feels something fishy …he takes a diversion and the lorry follows him..shivaay drives faster..he notices that the road is under construction..he stops ..the lorry speeds up to hit the car..shivaay jumps out of the car and rolls down… the lorry crashes his car…
Shivaay is rolling down and suddenly he hits his head on a rock…
Shivaay is unconscious..
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Anika’s village…
A man: don’t know why she is taking much time …cant she do the work a little faster…
A girl wearing beautiful jhumka’s and many bangles comes out …her hair had been little loose in the front and it had fallen over her face covering her eyes…the hair at back was plated loosely…
She had been wearing a beautiful black –magenda lehenga…
Anika:patiala uncle…why are you so impatient…you just came a few minutes back and I had done the stiching fast as I can..still you are complaining…unbelievable…
Uncle: betta…actually I am not angry at you ..its ishu’s marriage proporsal…she is too lazy to do anything ..just dance and dance..and now at the last minute I have to run about..
Anika: uncle…why do you want to get her married so early she is just nineteen..let her study…
Another man: no..its our custom to get girls married early…
Anika gives the dress ..the man takes it from her and goes..anika closes the shop…
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At home sahil is doing something…
Sahil:maa…where is anika dii…we need to dress up now..ishu dii had asked us to come early..
Mother:she has lots of work to do at shop..she will come…now you dress up …
Sahil: I want to go with anika dii..
Anika: haa..i’m here…dress up fast …I’m aldredy ready..
Sahil:ok dii…
Saying this he goes for dressing up…
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The grooms family arrives … the bride meets the groom for first time…
(friends…I really don’t know anything about the these functions that happen during marriage preparation..soo I may get mixed up..so don’t get angry on me…)
The grooms family agrees for the marriage…they are leaving ….
Someone comes running calling Patiala bhai..
Everyone rushes out…
The man: you told us that your son will return soon…we found a man near the bridge..i think its some accident…is it your son.
Another man: it might be his son….who else will come here…and during this time..
(Ishu’s mother is devki..)
Ishu’s mother who hears it comes out…
Devki: my son..my son…I want to see him…

Devki looks at her husband with teary eyes..he has something to say …but keeps himself silent…he agrees to take her …
There at the bridge area…the villagers have taken shivaay to the nearby house..the village dotor arrives…
Ishu and her family arrives…anika is with them..
Ishu: bhai…
Doctor: he is fine.. a small head injury..i think he has lost his memory…Patiala bhai..i am sorry but …

Devki: I got my son back..that’s enough for me..with his mothers love he will heal soon..
Ishu and devki sits near him..
Shivaay opens his eyes..he looks around…
He is trying to speak..
Doctor : betta try to recollect your name…

Shivaay: my name is..is..sh..shi…shiv..
Before he completes devki hugs him..shivaay is not able to remember his full name..
Doctor: patiala bhai I cant believe that ..according to me he has lost his memory..then how could he remember his name…its unbelievable..
Patiala takes the doctor outside..
Patiala: I have something to say to you..being my close friend you have to keep it as a secret life long…

Precap: Patiala reveals a secret…
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How come shivaay is their shiv..who is shiv….your doubts will be cleared after the next part…
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So guys how was it…please do forgive me for all my grammatical mistakes…do comment..please…

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40 Comments
  1. Ayath

    hi cute princess u back with a new ff woo nice intro dear plz continue and am really sorry for not updatind my ff i hope u understood my situation

    1. Cuteprincess

      that’s fine dii..i know you are busy….do write when you are free…missing your ff..
      thanks a lott…

  2. Nansshivika

    Interesting track dear

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks dear…

  3. Ketaki19

    ohh it’s interesting… update soon

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks ketaki ….

  4. Priyanka_22

    Woww awsm n
    Interesting
    Update next part soon dear

    1. Cuteprincess

      sure ..I will apload it as soon as possible..

  5. Akshaya

    Awesome

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks akshaya..

  6. its interesting plz post daily

    1. Cuteprincess

      sure dear…

  7. Nithu

    Hi cuteprincess…its lovely

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks a lott..

  8. Shivu

    Interesting nd full of suspense

    1. Cuteprincess

      happy that u felt it interesting….thanks..

  9. Interesting n unique post soon

    1. Cuteprincess

      have posted the next part…

    2. Cuteprincess

      thanks dear..

  10. Track is interesting dear as usual do continue I will love to comment

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks dii….

  11. Nainaa

    That’s a Awesome one…. loved it so much. It’s very much different from other ff’s so surely I am gonna read every part and I will comment for sure. Keep going.

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks naina..

      1. Nainaa

        Di! Please read my ff and comment your views. Here is the link link
        http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-life-epi-7/

    2. Cuteprincess

      read your ff…have commented dear…

  12. Hi cuteprincesss…..i really loved ur ff…how nice….and variety storyline…plz update 2episode fastlyyy……we are waitingggggg

    1. Cuteprincess

      I have aldready uploaded…

    2. Cuteprincess

      and thanks dear..

  13. Nishi33

    You Rock always…I loved it..<3 <3…

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks dear..

  14. […] I am really sorry my first part wasn’t that good according to me…soo I thought of posting the next part today itself….please do tell me where I should improve or what you don’t like in this…. if you haven’t read the first part do read it….(I am asking you so coz I have uploaded two parts today) Part 1 […]

  15. Tulasi

    Hey princess………..awesummm da….i luvd it…..story is very diff ……really luvd it……

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks a lottt….

  16. Shivika

    Nyc storyline
    Amazing

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks shivika….

  17. Yazhu

    Hey cuteprincess…the storyline looks interesting yaar…waiting for the next epi…nice to see Anika n Ishana as village girls…

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks yazhu…
      yaa they are village girls ..but anika would be a little modern type…

  18. Amazing update and storyline …👌👌👌

    1. Cuteprincess

      thanks dear…

      1. Cuteprincess

        posted next part..

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