DESTINY MADE US FORTUNATE – SWASAN SS (Part 8)

thank you so much simin, yaz, uma, maha, sheeryu,shan, choco, soju, s,ani,vyshu, smriti and tani 
for ur comments and uma how was your exams????

no proof reading…

morning :
swasan were descending the staircase silently (may be silence before a storm). suji and rp were having their breakfast. swara went towards her fav place in the dining table, sans knew she would get angry if someone sits in her place. But what to do, sans likes to irritate swara and it was his mission too.
swara pulled her chair to sit but another hand pulled it. swara looked at sanskar hand and he grabbed the chair from her. both were putting so much force, to pull and win the throne..
swara – leave my chair sans.
sans- today I will sit you move aside.
swara – I can’t it’s my fav place.
sans- daily your only sitting right, one day I will sit.
swara – papa see him, morning itself he started his fight.
rp – leave her beta.
sans – are you school girl to complain elders, can’t you handle your problems yourself???
swara – I know what to do… she smiled at him..
sans – what she is upto??? thinking deeply……..(poor fellow)
swara – he sans and she spit n his hand.. ( like action)
sans – ahhhhhh disgusting, she spit on me and he ran towards kitchen to wash his hands.
swara – was happy, she sat in her fav place and had her breakfast.
sans – oh god !!!! you cheated me, made my enemy strong. No ladoos for you  
swara – was laughing and teasing him like showing her tongue and made weird faces….
sans – was fuming in anger .

for change suji made jamun in their breakfast and she kept two bowls for them. rp and suji left them alone..
sans – saw the table only one spoon was there, he got idea… he slowly took the spoon and bent down under table licked the spoon nicely with his saliva and placed them on the plate like it was before( try with your siblings)
swara –was unaware of his plan.

After eating both took their jamun bowls and were searching for spoon.
swara – saw the plate and it had only one spoon so she went to grab them before sans.
sans – to execute his plan, he too acted like grabbing them.
swara – with sudden pull grabbed the spoon and started eating jamun. she was laughing at sans because she won this time too (innocent swara)
sans – was showing sad face to swara but inside his soul was dancing for peppy song… his mission was accomplished.
swasan left to their room.
sans – swara can we got out???
swara – what happen suddenly to you thief????
sans – just for change.
swara – office?????
sans – I will take leave.
swara – ok then I’m ready.
swasan got ready and were ready to enjoy their day …
swara – sans where are we going??
sans – secret…..
swasan arrived their destination.
swara – omg cycling park.

sans –both can have race swara it would be fun.
swara – sanskar no……. I wont come.
sans – why are you afraid becoz you would lose.
swara – was feeling embarrassed because she doesn’t know cycling.
sans – hello madam what happen??
swara – I don’t know to ride cycle sanskar.
sans – what biggest shock in my life ( monologue – take my revenge here).
swara – was standing silently.
sans – it’s not big deal swara, I will teach you.
swara – really !!!!!!!! ok I’m ready.
sans – wow rat is falling in its trap.
swara – what??

sans – come I will teach you, sans booked two cycles and he taught swara by holding her front and back side of cycle. swara first sit straight hold the handle tightly have them in your control. keep your one feet down and another feet on pedal , once you give force on pedal, cycle will move and keep your another feet on another pedal and start your ride, come on do it now. he was teaching her slowly..
swara – was shaking the handle and her hips were doing dance steps..
sans – ahh swara be confident and when you feel like you’r gonna fall, press the brake. ok come start your ride.
swara – was doing it slowly and sans was helping her.
both were riding it perfectly but sans brain (culprit) hinted him about revenge and he left the hold and made swara to ride the cycle alone.
swara – was riding perfectly but after she saw that sans was not back of her , she felt afraid and shook her handle and was in the verge of falling.
But someone came running and helped her in balancing.

Swara – opened her eyes and to her relief she did not fall down and the unknown person called her out.
unknown person – excuse me!!!!
swara – thanks for saving me..
unknown – pleasure is mine candy..
swara – candy ah??
unknown – yup candy .. are you riding cycle – first time??
swara – yes spicy, my husband was teaching me but he left me in middle.
unknown- you gave me heart stroke, you got married at this young age.
swara – yup spicy.
unknown – ok come I will teach you to ride cycle. his body was close to swara and was teaching her with patience ( note – he is good at heart not bad eye guy)

sans pov :
my brain provoked me and I left her alone so I could enjoy her suffering but god who is that irritating idiot helping my swara. And she is too talking with him normally ????? hate that fellow..
pov ends…

sans – moved towards their place. hey swara who is this?
unknown – before asking about me??? who are you man??
swara – hey spicy he is my husband and sans he is my trainer.
unknown- candy is he your husband?????
sans – candy and spicy???? god I can’t hear their names??
sans – thank you mr. I will teach my wife, you may leave.
unknown – its k mr. I will teach my candy.
like this both were fighting and swara learned herself and started riding the cycle on her own..
swara – tring tring…… enough guys come lets have race…
sans and spicy were shocked….
trio had race and swara won the race…. (may be its her luck or they want her to win)
spicy – hugged and congratulated candy and bid bye to them..
swara – bye spicy meet you soon…….
sans – was burning in jealousy…..
swasan reached their house had their dinner and slept…..
sans – sleep was far away, he was disturbed by mr.spicy and his talks..( poor sans )

45 comments

  1. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Naviii… !!!! my exams r on my head.. n m laughing like anything…
    1st Mahaa. n now u n urs SS… huaaahh haaa haaa haaaaa !!!!
    mom will surely through me out of house.. huhhh !!!
    Love it dear.. thnk u…
    BDW can i ask u a question?hmmmm!!! what r u doing in study?*curious

    • Navi

      |Author

      HAHAHHA kakali…. if ur mom throws you out, come to my house ur always welcomed..
      and then dont worry if you come to my house i will give u food and we cn party.. bt ur studying 12th so nly lil freedom….
      between i have completed my post graduate in biology and jobless now…
      thnk u for ur comment in btwn ur studies 😀

      • Kakali

        |Registered Member

        i dont need food Navi… i want only chocolates… tones of chocolates…huaahh haaa haaa haaaa.. partyyyy !!!! waaaaaa !!! lets party lets party !!! in my dream…huhhhh !!!!*hole in my fate…

  2. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Wow loved it navi…. Candy and spicy were awesome…. And the spoon and saliva awesome…. I did many times to my bro…. But havent done like sanskar…. I just act like spitting saliva…. Superb navi…. 😃😍

  3. Maha016

    |Registered Member

    akka could u tell me who is mr.spicy ? and akka u know what i love racing and i m the cycling champion in our school and swara is like me yippeee and ya nan seekaramave swasan-a ennoda raceku kopilamnu nenaikaren akka nenga enna nenaikarenga and coming to the epi it was awesome and tooo funny and that to the saliva one mind blowing akka keep going and keep smiling

    • Navi

      |Author

      therla maha yaru mr.spicy nu…. i was thinking bt yarum strike aagala so i made him unknown.. aprm sure swasan will join u in cycle race..
      awesome bcz ur cycle racing champion….. wow love it..
      thnk u for ur comment maha sis 😀

  4. Abdul hafiz (Uma)

    Awww,my Tom and Jerry swasan love them.. Candy and spicy, nice name…
    Hehe, sanky baba is feeling jealous, I think love is in the air….Excellent chappy dear… Loved it…keep it up.. Waiting for nxt..About my exams,bohot acchi hui hein…I think I will get 87% marks*finger crossed..
    Take care
    Keep smiling😊

  5. Simin

    |Registered Member

    Superb dear
    Sanskar licking spoon and swara having that ewww
    Spicy and candy were amazing
    Sanskar jealous ahem ahem
    Kuch to hua hai kuch ho gaya hai
    I am smiling like an idiot

  6. Mica

    |Registered Member

    waaa.. candy and spicy…jealous in the air babe!
    uughh that saliva just yuck!!
    Naviii.. update soon..or i’ll call your friend to torture you

  7. Nive..

    |Registered Member

    awww… sanky baba is jealous… super chapie… yuck sanky what u did… u r such a kid… eeeee… navi u and my bro are same to same in that saliva… afterall avan un katchi achea… avan mattum pasama kudutha na vangavea mattean… hmm… unakku cycling theriuma..?

    • Navi

      |Author

      Nive dr… yup he is my bro right.. aprm na panuven sanski and swara panuradhu. Semma fun nive.. adhn secret namaku mattum dhn theriyum and avungaluku theriyadhu.. i hv done this many time for my sis..
      cycling – maradhuten..
      all d above techniques en thambi enaku kathu kuduthan aprm two days la na cycling kattukiten.. lucky to hv him as bro.. enga dad ku dhn bayam ipa poi kathukittu na kela vilundhuruven…
      na cycle otta elarum aachuriyama pathanga… aww semma feeling nive..
      school like 4 th ku aprm cycle oturadhu matren.. nw agn in fire…

      • Nive..

        |Registered Member

        yeah.. yeah… he is ur bro… adhu ella yen thambi tha pannuvean… na avan kita yedhachum pass panna solli ketta, first avan ella fingers um lick pannitu apruma ipo venumanu ketpan 😬😬
        enakku kuda yen first younger bro tha techniques la solli thandha…☺☺

  8. chanu

    awwwww
    soo cute epi dr!
    lv it as always
    sry 4 late cmnt.

    awww rly my swasan r kiddos.
    sankys j face is cute!

    keep writing
    be happy always

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