DESTINY MADE US FORTUNATE – SWASAN SS (Part 14) (LAST PART)

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swasan grand reception held at maheswari house …
suji – arrey bhaiya keep that flower there..
ram – kaka see the lights, check them.
shomi – swara get ready fast, guests might be arriving soon.
shekar – sanskar beta enough of sleeping, get ready..
suji and rp – sanskar kumbhakarna at least today get up soon.
sans – my ears are paining ,I will be down at 10.30 sharp.
10.30 am, guests started arriving swasan descended the stairs with graceful walk and smile on their face.
swasan were waiting for their lovely readers , slowly every one showed up…
All were present, but they were waiting for important person..
Readers – whom are you waiting????
Swasan – she is our spl.guest.
Readers – Who she might be??? (Thinking deeply)
Swasan – there she is !!!!!!!
Readers – were shocked..
swasan – welcome navi…
Navi – gave warm smile to all..(what to do self praise, don’t scold me friends)
so, for what we are waiting, let’s start the party…
shan , choco, maha, yaz, mirna along with swara were dancing for darling dambakku …..darling dambakku….. darling dambaku…. kuda..kuda..kuda…..
They were dancing and teasing sanskar…

Another side kakali, mica, simin, uma, chanu, rabi along with sanskar were dancing for adhaaru adhaaru … udhaaru udhaaru kattadha udhaaru… elamea enimea naaladhan nadakum, pataasu summavey koluthama vedikama….
So like this all were dancing…….

Next they planned to play game,
They had long rope, and divided into groups..
Swara team – febi, mariyajap,anu,s,prakirti and Sammy.
Sanskar team – anninya,vb, shreeyu,vyshu,soujanya and riyanjali.
Both the teams were ready for playing the game..
Swara team on one side of rope and sanskar team on other side of rope and they started pulling the rope each side… come draggg…. this side …. no this side… like this they were struggling and finally Sanskar team won…
But Sanskar cheated the game – he gave wink and flying kiss in between and our sweeetu swara got shy and she left the rope….
Swara – sanskar this in not fair..
Sans – everything is fair in love and war devil..
Swara – oh is it??
Sans – yup….
swara – picked the chair and started hitting sanskar with it…
sans – someone save me….

Now all started supporting swara and sanskar was sad since no one helped him..
sanskar – he heard corus voice we will help u .. he turned back and saw his friends khushboo,krystle,lakshmi,sana nehal,sahana,moumita, anu and tanya. thank god you arrived at right time, save me from this devil.
friends – haa , friend in need friend in deed….. they were moving towards swara with angry face…
sans – see my army…
swara – is it?? next minute his friends gang hugged swara and joined her team….
sans – ahhh poor meee… all are betrayers….

sanskar got plan ,he picked all the gulabu jamuns, ice – cream and other savories
kept on the table and started throwing them on swara..
Swara and her friends did same with sanskar…
After 1 hour of war, parents arrived and shocked to see the scenario…
They shouted sanskar…. swara………
Entire hall was standing like satue…..
Parents scolded them and as a punishment they were commanded to clean the entire hall…
Poor friends ( readers), swara and sankar cleaned the house .
It was tiring day reader friends bid them bye and wished them happy married life….

Night:
One person was sitting on the bed with nervousness and due to tension, that person was playing with fingers…
Another person entered the room like don and gave wide smile to the person sitting on the bed.
The Person sitting on bed was shy and moved towards the window ….
The don – went near the person who was standing near window, made the person look her face..
The person sitting on bed was sanskar and the girl who was behaving like don is swara :p
swara – hey thief, why are you blushing like a girl???
sans –bending his head down and was drawing patterns on the floor with his toe finger…(shy face)
swara – look my face she cupped his face..
sans – lowering his eyes down and gave small smile..
swara – she pulled him by collar left her hot breath on his face.
sans – devil im very new to this…
swara – am I going to class every day??
sans – with shock face..
swara – she was draw patterns on his face using pointing finger…
sans – hey devil enough of this drama and he pulled swara close to him by holding her waist tightly..
swara – sanskar leave me…
sans – why should I leave you??
swara – oi thief I will call mom..
Sans – is it?? call her…
Swara – maa… maaa…only action but no voice..
Sans – swara were has your vocal gone??
Swara – felt shy and hugged him tightly….
Sans – was happy as he got his love and gonna start his life afresh…( monologue)
Sans – I want to say you something swara .
Swara – tell..
Sans – I was praying to god daily that I should meet you once again in my life and lead a cheer filled life , like my hope I met you again… thank god, he heard my prayers and DESTINY MADE US FORTUNNATE by uniting us this time..
I LOVE YOU SWARA… YOU’R LIKE MY BREATHE AND I WILL PROTECT YOU ALWAYS…
Swara – I LOVE U INFINITY SANKAR…… she gave a million dollar smile…
Sanskar slowly kept his forehead on hers and both were smiling like idiot…..

Their lips were so close that each other breathe fell on other lips…. both muttered I love you and it was their FIRST KISS….. :-* :-* :-* :-*
Ok ok… close your eyes now…. good night….. cover with sheets…..
Morning :
It was like other day, swasan started their fight and now suji and RP never came in between for support, because when they interfere, swasan join in one team and rag them..
swara and sankar remained as thief and devil forever and ever……

………………………………THE END……………………….

I would like to thank each person who was encouraging me from day 1 and silent reader’s tooo….
Here after I won’t disturb u……….
Take care….
Bye friends…..

55 comments

  1. SNY

    |Registered Member

    Superb epi …..
    Summa therikka vittutinga akka…….
    Ungala ini rmba miz pannuven akka…..
    Plz come back wid another swasan ff ……..

  2. Rabia

    |Registered Member

    Wah wahh naviii 👏👏👏👏 awesome u showed tug of war u known i remembered tug of war in our school between whole boys of school and whole girla of the school and im leading that war 😆😆😆😆 and we wonnnn and i was laughing whilw pulling Ooo God it was really a fun and by writing this u gave a flashback of my school thankuuuu 😍😍😍 awesome epi and awesome end 😙😙

  3. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Naviii,,, just a small request plzz come back soon with a new one… be here with us…
    Thnk u..
    *no comment for chappy coz m soo shy girl u know…*blushing hard n hiding under badsheet… ;-*

  4. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Theri baby….. Loved it…. Very nice…. Semaya iruku….. Superb…. Come back with another ff dr….. 😃

  5. Vyshu10

    |Registered Member

    hahhaha….hillarious ep…awesome. Yayy….our team won in tough of war….Shy sanky…ROFL. Difficult to imagine him drawing patterns with toe…haha. Come back soon with another ff plz

    • Navi

      |Author

      give me treat as u won the tough of war…. 😀 😀
      thnk u so much vyshu, u hav been supporting me from day 1…. 😀

  6. Mica

    |Registered Member

    Naviiiiiii… self praising is rudeeee!!!1*beat Navi with wafer choco stick
    goosshh what is that ? aweddimg party become kindergarten ? *bang my head
    i didn’t join as i’m the mature one.
    and the don Swara..damn! you again fool me 😀 😀
    come back soon with other story.. love you

    • Navi

      |Author

      awwww thnk u for chocostick and wafers mica dr… i love them.. i knw u have one eye on me since im beautiful…. IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUU tooo..
      ahem ahem r u mature girl??? seee u dp???
      will try to come bck and as always we can talk in our friends ff…

  7. Abdul hafiz(Uma)

    Superrrr ending dear….loved it… Thank you once again for adding me…Hehehe, I agree with mica,she is right😉😉.. Micuuu, well said dear😘😘..

    Now coming to you, I will miss you and your ff dear… Plz come back with another ff if possible… Till then take care, bye bye.. A tight hug for you..Love you loads..muaaah😘😘😘😙😙

    • Navi

      |Author

      hahhhaha uma dr 🙂 😀 :D…. i will miss u too… but no worries wanna contact me, u cn leave a comment in nive ff, i will roaming there.. she is my back up…
      miss uuuu so muchhhhh uma dr, tc, all the best for ur furture…
      ******huggssss and kiessss*****

  8. chanu

    Wow!!!!
    It ws sooo nice awesome cute lvly epi dr!!

    Heee heee yaa self parsing is rly nt gd!! 😉 😉 😉 lols..
    heee heee thank u vry much 4 adding me in ur ff..
    im soo soo sooo soooo hpy..
    u knw y??? Cz I dance with my sanky.. awwww nw also im dancing my hpy dance.
    😀
    dis is soo cute 1 dr!!
    Sanky and my swaras fights r soo sweet!!
    I lv it..
    and their wed nyt!!! 😮
    it ws hilarious. Im laughing like a mad..
    lols…
    They r rly dramebazz hai… my sweethearts. 😉 :-*
    I dnt like 2 end dis..
    bt its da perfect ending.
    I rly lv hply ever after stories.
    🙂
    Cm back with another ff..

    keep writing dr
    be happy always
    lv ya
    all the best 4 ur future!!!!!
    ♥♥

    • Navi

      |Author

      awww such a lovely msg…. thnk u loads chanu future doctor… kill as many ppl u want i will help u in solving cases…
      take care,,, study welll…
      all the best for ur future..

      • chanu

        Awww
        u r soo sweet dr.

        Lols….
        Till nw I ddnt think abt killng ppl..
        hee hee
        if I did ill definitely contact u.. 😉 😉
        Then dn tell me u dnt knw me… 😉 😉

        Cm back with other ff drls..

        may all ur wishes cm true dr..
        keep writing
        be happy always
        lv ya
        ♥♥♥♥♥♥

  9. Maha016

    |Registered Member

    akkkkaaaaaa!!!!!!!! first of all really really sry because unmaiyave i m busy with my xams monday my exams goona start so nan konjam prepare pannitu irundhen so adhanala dhan comment panna mudiyala…and akka indha epi thaaru maaru akka superb end and the kick was awesome ooooo akka nan swara kuda dance uffffff superb akka thank u soooooo much akka and i m the witness of their marriage wowwwwww flying in the sky ….thanku akka try to come soon with another stry…..

    and akka i want to give one message to all that for next one week i m going to be offline because of my exams and i swear when my xams get over i ll surely read all ff’s especially kakali di’s “”A DREAM “”

    ok akka take care of urself bye……

    • Navi

      |Author

      adingu… sorry la onnum venam.. i c understand okayyy…..
      olunga padi and exam nalla eludhu.. rock in exams…
      thnk u so much maha thangachi for being with me always… another i wil try…
      tc…
      all best for exams….

    • Kakali

      |Registered Member

      Mahhhaaaa a breath taking hug for u……
      Rock d exam dear…. n give us ur bestest result… okkkkkiiiii !!!!

      i’ll be here for more 15 days… hope can meet u…
      All d best my Sis… God bless u… ;-*

  10. Anniya

    |Registered Member

    Awsm one…
    See I had cmnted in pervious part.
    And you ended it…
    In this ff swasan are really so cute and naughty..
    Comeback with new and more funny ff

  11. Navi

    |Author

    mirna – ipodhan un reply pathen, all the best for ur project, keep rocking.. viva la dhool kelapu.. muduja external la nee solra answer la confuse ayerunum.. ex: kanadhasan ah illa jesudhas..

  12. Nive

    thala idhu romba bongu… nee guest(readers) mattum clean panna vachi irukka, wr is Swasan spl guest (u)… bongu navi… 😏 while reading this my reaction 🙄🙄 namma reception ku ponama ila college ku poi irukkuma😋 Don swara… ha ha ha… lol… summa kalakittinga thala…. loved this ff… it’s soooo cuteeeeeeeee and funny… for this ff😘😘😘 Epilogue..? 😋😋

  13. Nive

    ha ha ha… u’ll be in nive ff… but adhuku ava ff eh update pannanuma… enoda id login panna 10 mins la automatic eh logout agidudhu…. 🙁 🙁 anu kuttiee ku msg panniya… she msgd me… thala I hv one question do reply me… actually I’m missing lucky in SR as well as in my ff… So enoda Previous ff la oru small epi mattum ezhudhulanu irukkean… wat u say… Im confused bz na adhea mudichu nearly 6 r 8 months irukkum… just only one shot from way you are… ena solrea, Yes or No…

    • Navi

      |Author

      Nive na spl.guest la so no cleaning.. hahege…
      aprm u shud write few of swaragini the way u are.. ena doubt idhu?? Do post i wil b waiting.. adhalam elarum nayabagam vatchurupanga.. apudi illanallum, its one shot and thy wud read ur previous creation too.. so orey stone la two mangoes…
      nee epa en msg pathu epa nee post panuva os??
      Epilogue ah?? Na honeymoon spl thaniya oru chapie kudukalam irundhen thn somberi ayeruchu, so cut shrt panitu story muduchuten..
      anu ku msg panen.. ana reply varla.. she is gud and diwali celebrate paniya nu ketta, aprm na s sonen..
      hw ru choco… tc come soon… eli nee mattum reply panala and os r ff r ss post panala una en cat kitta puduchu kuduthuruven..

      • Nive..

        he he he… see na un msg pathutean… Epilogue post pannu thala… my ff..? will try to post anyone today night or tomo…
        navi uk enoda 3 colleagues till nov 10 leave… whenever I was in leave they oly tc.. ipo mothama ena vachu senjutanga.. 🙁 🙁 sema workload… suthuma mudila plus climate change othukala… unmaiyavea eli eh marritean😋😋 ena pathu paava pattu oru mam ena rest edukka sollitu avanga enakku konjam help pannanga… 🙂 🙂

        my nephews and niece are back… today my bro son bday… 🙂 🙂

        suppose na way you’re post panna “DELIVERY” nu title la os eh post pannuvean ok ya… apdi tha nenaikurean…

    • Navi

      |Author

      achachoooo… en choco ku ivalo work load ah… im so sad… pochu inimea una pakkavey mudiyadhu… u wil busy with kids and work 🙁 🙁 🙁
      unn bro son ku birthday wishes….. happie birthday kidoooo.. may god blesss u….
      enadhu delivery nu peru vapiyaaa???? its different.. do post whn u get time…
      come soonn… miss u.. tk choco…

      • Nive..

        |Registered Member

        he he he… adhu different la ila.. normal one tha… unnoda WISH eh solidrean… till nov 10 vara thn I’ll back to normal… nephews la poiachu… today evening tha ponanga 🙁 🙁

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