DESTINY MADE US FORTUNATE – SWASAN SS (Part 10)

awwwwww thank you so much for your love friends, after seeing your comments my eyes started its shower as a result I have catch cold… haaahufff…………hauuuuuhufff (cough)
ok lemme start……
Daily swasan used to fight on one thing ie to watch tv, though they have tv in their hall both never had interest in watching them in hall. They want to watch it in their room. It was their routine to fight daily sometimes neighborhood would complain to suji or rp to reduce their noise.

Today same thing happened, swasan had their evening snack and was ready to catch the throne.
ready 1, 2, 3………………. they were running like tom and jerry and suji yelled at their act.
swasan took the remote at same time, fight started and ended with rolling down in the floor holding each other’s hair.
sans – saitan ki bachi give me the remote.
swara – god ki bacha give me the remote.
both were rolling and they started their WWE, but it was disturbed by hissssssssssssss sound.
san – devil did you hear the sound??
swara – don’t change the topic thief.
sans – I swear I heard hissing sound.
swara – in your dreams, pagal give me the remote.
Again they heard hissss sound.
suji – swara beta come down your papa is calling (phone)
swara – ha mom, she kicked sans back and threw the remote on him.
sans – better luck next time baby (wide smile+ wink)…
swara – went down.
sans – was watching tv seriously, but he could hear the hissing sound. He was searching for the sound, but could not find them.

After 10 minutes he could hear the hiss sound below his leg, he bend down and was shocked to see snake in his room and pulled his leg above and shouted maaaa………………. devil………………… papa……………………………..
suji – now what he wants??? shouting like mad.
swara and rp – another drama…
again sans shouted swaraaaaaaaa……. maaaaaaaaaaaaa………..
suji – she took broom stick and left to his room for beating him..
swara and rp – haha hifi next is our turn we can go with slippers…
sans – was standing above his bed and sweating…
suji – sanskarr……. she entered the room with broom like beating..
sans – maaa… save me snake is there below the table.
suji – what!!!!! with sudden jerk she jumped on the bed. now it was her turn, rp………………….. swara betiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…………………………………………….
swara and rp – what happen to her?? did sans change her???
swara took a long stick and RP came with slipper. both entered swasan room like james bond 007 ( tan.. tan.. tan….. tantandei……………… bgm)
what happen????
sans and suji – snake…………………………………………………….
Rp – ahhh………. god save me, he too climbed on the bed.
swara – it’s impossible , with help of stick she smacked the snake’s head (margaya….)
(snake mind voice – rabba main toh mar gaya oi………..)(sung by emerging artist – KAKALI :p)
trio – was shocked to see jansi rani swara….

suji and rp – jansi swara ki jai… swara ki jai……..
sans – was astonished by her braveness.
swara – later played with dead snake showing them in front of sans face.
sans – was running inside the room like rat and begged swara to throw the snake away.
swara – was laughing at him later left to dispose the snake..
It was night four had their dinner and left to sleep.
sans – was hearing hisssssss sound again, he was searching for the sound but could not see the snake.
but suddenly anaconda pumped over him and spitting on him like fire..
sans – who are you?? what do you want??
snake – snakeeeeeeeeee babu (naga – king)…….. it’s me.. lollolllllul…(sticking out its tongue)
sans – why are you trying to kill me????
snake – because you killed my lover.
sans –even snake has lover, pity me I don’t ??? (wt about swara then??)
snake – it’s your fate, not mine. so get ready I’m going to kill u…..
sans – wait I did not kill your lover, this devil swara only killed your lover, so take revenge on her.
snake – if I kill you then she will know the pain, when our loved one is no more in this world.
sans – you have logic in your point, but she doesn’t love me, what will you do now??( happy face)
snake – thinking……… it’s ok I will kill you…
sans – noo…..
snake – got up kept his face close to sanskar face, tongue was dancing in the air and its fangs were ready to peck him, we can easily observe the poison emerging from the tip of snake’s fang….. tisssssssssssssssssssh…………………………..( double peck)

sans- ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh……………………………….. he rolled on his bed….
another sound maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa………………………………..(inside the room)
sans – who is calling maa…. so soon I reached heaven.
swara – stupid sanskarr……..
sans – opened his eyes and glanced the room it was his dream….. swara why are you lying on the floor, I did not give you punishment you can sleep on the bed.
swara – rot in hell, you will die in my hands.. pick me up.
sans – picked her in bridal style and placed on the bed.
swara – hey buffalo, donkey, monkey, irritating idiot and all bad words in world is for you.
sans – swara neruppu la sutta ariidum, verupula sutta aaradhu….( scars got from fire accident can heal soon, but scars made due to hatred won’t heal ever)

swara – sanskar in this situation what’s the need for this dialogue??
sans – hehehheheehehhahahahahahahahhaahha……….
swara – why did you push me from the bed thief??
sans – got bad dream devil.
swara – what dream??
sans – was staring at the ceiling..
swara – oh flash back ah… soon she too joined him…
sans – dramatically explained his dream to swara.
swara – was holding her stomach and laughing hearing his dream..
sans – stop laughing!!! is my dream joke for you???
swara – controlled her laugh and started to tease him, sanskar I have heard snakes will take revenge so be careful..
sans – mata rani, shut your fowl mouth.
swara – it’s true sanskar, it will take vengeance.
sans – swara vengeance is big thing.. I’m scared and he slept hugging swara.
swara – too slept hugging him..
Amazing day starts……..
swara went to meet her parents and sans was searching for swara…
sans – was trying to call her but her phone was not reachable( frustrated).
sans phone was buzzing……
sans – with tension and anger hello….

other side(os) – heloo….
sans – helooooooooooooooo
os – hellllllooooooooooooooooooooooooo….
sans – stupid lucky what happen now? any help…
lucky – nothing dude, why are you frustrated???
sans – nothing this devil is not picking my call.
lucky – woah…woahhhh love is in the air…
sans – whose love??
lucky – your’s
sans – stupid nothing like that.
lucky – ok tell me dude when you are in love and while thinking about her,
1. Automatically lights will burn ie turn on.
2. you can hear bell sounds.
3. cold breeze gushing over your face.
sans – was waiting for these signals.
lucky – did you feel these signs??
sans – sad face no dude….
lucky – how you will get??? pagal these things are shown in films they are fake… just close your eyes, feel your heart beat and try to feel the emotions lying deep inside the arteries and veins.
sans – was trying to figure them , he could hear a girl voice, giggling sound and her beautiful smile, but face was blur. he got engulfed in finding her and was silent on the phone.
lucky – dude…………..
sans – yup, I was trying to see her face lucky it was blur.
lucky – I will help you, he was thinking deeply….. ha got it, may be dhanya!!!!!!
sans – while talking about angel why are you bringing devil??(don’t bash me friends, sorry)
lucky – may be deepika padukone??
sans – wait wait I will see and tell you…
suji – sanskar……
sans – lucky mom is calling me I will figure out her face and tell you.
lucky – ok dude bye, tc..
sans – bye dude tc…
day went off, and it was night….
swara – slept.
sans – was tossing on the bed, whenever he was closing his eyes he could get flashes of the girl but blur face and her giggles… several hours later he saw the girl’s face…
sans – sat with thud on his bed, his heart was jumping like jelly… he was laughing like manic, yes I found my love, found her……. he turned to other side of bed and found his love – sleeping beauty <3 <3 <3 he was happy to core and kissed her on her forehead then cheeks and slept with heartful smile.

so how was the chapie??????
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64 comments

    • Navi

      |Author

      wait i will sprinkle water… now get up hw ru feeling??
      btwn i love the jealousy track in SR..
      Thank u so much mica…. 😀

  1. Nive..

    |Registered Member

    ha ha ha… naviiiiiiiiiiiii…😘 Indha tu pg open panradhuku munnadi enoda mood 😡😡 but after reading ur ff na 😂😂 nandrigal pala… 😀 😀 finally sanskar found his love… ☺☺

      • Navi

        |Author

        adingu avan sethan.. inaiku porapoi saava poran.. how dare he?? he din ask u sorry too.. and hws ur hand nw dr??? tc..
        adingu olunga ff or ss update panu.. lla unaku sooniyam vatchruven 🙂 😀

    • Navi

      |Author

      Hey choco in not cry babe like u.. and y ws ur mood off.. unga boss ah?? Hmm nu sollu , thookiduvom… who dared to brk ur heart ie mood i will break their face.. keka aalu ilanu nenachutu irukangala?? Ena pathi therla.. tell d prsn to b careful… ok…. and my choco no nandri all..
      do read anu msg below dis page…
      wr is ur ff?? Ss ??

      • Nive..

        oh apo thala unga kanla kuda mazhaia.. 😉 adhuva oru idiot mongoose bike la pogum podhu yen right hand la idichutan… 🙁 🙁 thirumbi patthutu sorry kuda ketkala… 😡 andha helmet mandai eh nxt tym patha kandippa summa vida mattean… 😡😡 uk yesterday oru auto kuda turn pannum podhu kai la idichuduchu… but mistake is mine… nothing to worry summa lite eh vali avlo tha… why everyone having problem in my right hand… deeply thinking 🤔🤔 ff and ss eh varum ana varadhu😜😜

      • Nive..

        |Registered Member

        ha ha ha… thala no tension leave it.. lite eh Pain avlo tha… avan sorry ketkala adha enakku kovam…
        ahhh… thala nee oru sooniyakari eh😱😱😱👹 hifi nanum tha😜😜 so un sooniyam ena onnum pannadhu…☺☺ na enoda ff or as update panna mattean sollala… actually I mean to say not now adha varum varadhu nu sonna… ☺☺ today will try to update anyone.. ok…

    • Navi

      |Author

      Hifi for sooniyakari… yup i knw black magic.. ok wil b waiting fr ur ff.. thn see my msg in part 11 btwn it has becm a cimment instead of reply.. sorry

  2. SNY

    |Registered Member

    Akka u are truly awsm writer……..
    And keep writing lyk this……..
    😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉 tc..

  3. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    Naviiiii !!!!! hissssss !!!! fussss !!!! fissssss !!! i want SWASAN kissssss !!! if u don’t update soon next one soon i’ll give u thissss(pimpom ball in my hand)..*spliting d coffee i was having..
    . waaaa !!! love it dear.. It’s Lolllll…huuuaahh haahuuhahahah…mad mad mad Navi..
    Thnk u dear.. ;-*

  4. Abdul hafiz (Uma)

    Oh God, I am going ROFL😂😂😂… What a chappy… Loved it to the core💗💗💜💝…Finally, sanky realized his love for swara, yapiee👏👏👏…keep it up dear… Waiting for nxt…
    Take care
    Keep smiling😊

  5. Mirna

    |Registered Member

    Lol conversation with snake Paaaa 😛 anda effect and that dialogue nerypula sutta semaa ji kalakal dhan ponga 🙂

  6. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Awesome navi….. Loved it a lot…. Very very nice….. Very funny and dhanya i loved it a lot…. I accept she is a devil…. I dont like her….. Superb navi

  7. chanu

    Wow navi
    its awesome part…
    love it..

    yipeeeeeeee..
    My sanku realise his lv…
    yaaay yaaaay..
    im dancing my happy dance…
    jingala laaa jingalaaa laaa…
    😉 😉
    Heee heee
    sanke and sankys convo is mind blowing.
    And swara!!! She is a murdered a snake. 😮
    poor snake.. 😉 😉 😛 snakes pov is nice..
    im laughing like a mad….
    And sanlak convo is hilarious.

    Keep writing
    be happy always
    lV ya
    ♥♥♥l

  8. Kakali

    |Registered Member

    waaaa!!! how can i forgot about Dhanya !!!! huhhh !!! Dhanyabaad for spoiling my mood by her name.. never ever use it Navi..wherever i hear her name its kinda itching secession i feel in my whole hand… huhhhhh !!! as a result a tight fist.. n next time u”ll b d terget.. *i need chocolate …

    • Simin

      |Registered Member

      Honestly i feel jealous whenever i hear dhanya’s name or see her pic with varun
      It irks me but what can we do destiny played game with us hai na kaku

      • Kakali

        |Registered Member

        Yeahh!! Simmu.. but i have learned to live with all this .. huhhhh chocolate is d best way to forget about her.. soo munch choco as much as u can… it’s my mantra..
        Destiny is a big player..n we all r puppet..seee myy senty talks..ufff!!! What’s wrong with me..need Ganga jal

    • Navi

      |Author

      Hey kakali… hugs from me.. i too hate dat girl.. same pinch… give me chocolates… ok partner cn will torture her.. im ready with knife bomb acid harsh words… wt to do we bt stupid sans married dat donkey..im hrtbrkn..
      but read sans reply to lucky u will feel lovly… awww…

      • Kakali

        |Registered Member

        Yooo Navi m also ready with itching powder,, tarantula,, bitter ground juice,, pimpom ball,, coconut,, mock stick… ohhhh God…*RIP…
        huhuhuhu…

    • Shrinjal

      |Registered Member

      Kakali…Our fate is not good dear😭😭😭
      My handsome…Prince 😍😍😍 is married to duffer, idiot Dhanya! !!!😭

  9. KrsytleS

    |Registered Member

    Fabulous Dr …

    Sanke wala scene was nice … sanky dreams it’s very funny ….

    Wooowwww……Sanky realise his love for swara …

    Waiting for next part……

  10. Shrinjal

    I’m a silent reader but I loved it:-)
    Its really awesome..

    I can’t promise to comment regularly but I really love it.:-)

  11. Anu_M

    Hey navi… I am too upset 😭 because I am not able to keep in contact with you all. Some days before I updated my software.. the new iOS but unfortunately it’s not supporting tu completely. I am not able to see any messages or send messages when I login. I received your message but it’s not opening so hereby I’ll talk to you all from here only. When you post your next chapter, please tell me and also inform nive. She also messaged me.. too 😭 upset. Tu need to do something soon. I need one more favour from you navi. By the username “loveuu”, someone has messaged me many times. I think they may be one of my friend who wanna contact me. Please message her and tell my problem. She may think I am ignoring her or something. I hope you see this message. Reply soon!! 😶

    • Navi

      |Author

      Ok dr… no prbz… we cn have our chat here. … whn comment box hear y fear.. lov u tc… and ya tmrw i figure out loveeuu and leave dat prsn a msg..
      btwn hw ru??? Missing u so much..

    • Nive..

      anu kuttiee… dont wry… it may be bz of ur browser… bz i too had same prob few days back.. u may try some other browser…. dnt be upset… as navi said we’ll chat here… ☺☺

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  13. Navi

    |Author

    I hope one day u wud see my msg and nive’s.
    happy diwali dr.. have wash pray god skype parents and enjoy d day.. may b its difficult to celebrate in london…
    anyways leave it…
    my prayers are dhr for u always.. tc dr..

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